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Unit1
Festivals and Celebrations Experience
Writing
Learning objectives:
1
Figure out the structure and language features of a festival and celebration experience.
2
Treasure the colourful national cultures and cultivate the cultural awareness.
3
Write and polish your own festival and celebration experience.
Warming-up
&Tomb-sweeping Day
Qingming Festival
on April 4 or April 5
sweep the tomb
burn joss paper/visit the cemetery
Warming-up
the Dragon Boat Festival
the Mid- Autumn Festival
the Lantern Festival
the lunar New Year
Warming-up
Hi,Li Hua! I’m Jack. I heard that Chinese Spring Festival had just passed, so I want to know how did you celebrate your Spring Festival.
假如你是李华，请根据下面五幅图画写一篇短文向你的笔友Jack分享你和家人庆祝春节的经历。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：春晚 the Spring Festival Gala；除夕夜 the Lunar New Year Eve
Pre-writing
Step1 审题谋篇
明确体裁话题
确定时态人称
布局文章架构
记叙文，分享和家人庆祝春节的经历
一般过去时为主，第一，第三人称
首段：表明态度与写信目的
中段：年夜饭、看春晚、放鞭炮、吃饺子、大拜年
尾端：表达祝愿
Step2 词汇再现
年夜饭
看春晚
放鞭炮
吃饺子
大拜年
family reunion dinner
set off
taste/have/eat dumplings
pay a New Year call
have/enjoy
the Spring Festival Gala
watch
fireworks
Step3 完成句子
Para1:表明态度和写信目的
1. Glad to hear from you. Now I’m writing to tell you
很高兴收到你的来信。现在我写信告诉你一些关于春节的经历。
how I celebrated my lunar New Year.
/ something about my New Year experiences.
Step3 完成句子
Para2:（时间顺序）年夜饭、看春晚、放鞭炮、吃饺子、大拜年
1. 我们聚集在一起，吃了一顿丰富的晚餐。
We all gathered around and had a big dinner.
2. 然后，春节联欢晚会开始了。
Then the Spring Festival Gala began.
Step3 完成句子
3. 据报道，春晚相当精彩。
It was reported that the Spring Festival Gala was wonderful.
/The Spring Festival Gala was reported to be wonderful.
4. 许多明星都在舞台上露面(turn up)，他们给我们带来了如此多的乐趣(pleasure)。
Many stars turned up on the stage and brought so much pleasure to us.
5. 我们被吸引并且欣赏他们的表演。
We were all attracted by them and enjoyed their performances.
We were all drowned in admiring their performances.
Step3 完成句子
6.午夜时分，我们燃放鞭炮庆祝新年的到来。
8.黎明时，我们盛装打扮，挨家挨户地拜年。
At dawn, we all dressed up and visited our relatives and friends.
______________________________________________________________________________
At the midnight, we set off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year.
7.然后一家人围在一起吃饺子。
____________________________________________
Then my family gathered together and ate dumplings.
_______________________________________________________________________
Step3 完成句子
Para3:表达祝愿
1. We all hope we will have good luck in the following new year. 新年交好运。
2. We are all looking forward to realizing all our dreams. 新年圆梦。
3. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Step4 句式升级
(1). We all gathered around and had a big meal.
______________________________________ (现在分词短语做伴随状语)
(2). Then the Spring Festival Gala began.
______________________________________ (全部倒装句)
We all gathered around having a big dinner.
Then began the Spring Festival Gala.
(3). It was reported that the Spring Festival Gala was wonderful.
__________________________________________________ (用as引导的非限制性定语从句)
As was reported, the Spring Festival Gala was wonderful.
Step4 句式升级
(4). Many stars turned up on the stage and brought so much pleasure to us.
____________________________________________________________________________ (现在分词短语做伴随状语)
Many stars turned up on the stage, bringing so much pleasure to us.
(5). We were all attracted by them and enjoy their performances. 同上
_________________________________________________
We were all attracted by them, enjoying their performances.
（so...that...)
Many stars turned up on the stage, bringing so much pleasure to us that we were all attracted by them, enjoying their performances.
Step4 句式升级
(6). At the midnight, we set off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year.
(7). Then my family gathered together and ate dumplings.
_________________________________________________________________________ (添加表示情感的副词修饰动作)
__________________________________________________ _______________________(短语优先，使用短语替代单词)
________________________________________________________________________________(with的复合结构)
With the coming of the midnight, we set off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year.
(8). At dawn, we all dressed up and visited our relatives and friends.
At dawn, we all dressed up and paid a visit to our relatives and friends door to door.
Then my family gathered together and ate dumplings happily/cheerfully.
Step5 妙笔成篇
Dear Jack
Glad to hear from you. I’m writing to tell you something about my New Year experience.
First, on the Lunar New Year Eve, we all gathered around having a big dinner. Then followed the Spring Festival Gala. As was reported, the Spring Festival Gala was really a hit. Many stars turned up on the stage, bringing us so much pleasure that we were all drowned in admiring their performances. The midnight saw us setting off the fireworks to celebrate the beginning of a new year. Then we ate dumplings happily. At dawn, we all dressed up and paid a visit door to door.
We do hope we will have a good luck in the following new year and we also do look forward to realizing all our dreams.
　　假定你是李华， 你的外国网友蒂姆(Tim)对中国的春节很好奇， 写信向你询问一些春节的习俗。请你给他写一封回信， 内容包括：
　　1．春节的时间；
　　2．中国人庆祝春节的方式；
　　3．欢迎他来中国过春节。
　　注意：1.词数80左右；
　　2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
While-writing
One possible version：
Dear Tim，
　　From your last letter, I know you are interested in the Spring Festival in China. Now let me tell you something about it.
　　The Spring Festival falls on the first day of the Chinese lunar calendar. On lunar New Year's Eve, each family gathers together and has a big meal. Children are the happiest because they can have delicious food and get lucky money from their parents and grandparents.
　　In a word, the Spring Festival is a joyous and meaningful festival. I'd like to invite you to join us to enjoy the festival.
　　Best wishes!
　　Yours,
Li Hua
Post-writing
Exchange drafts. Assess each other’s work according to the checklist.
Have I spelt all the words correctly
Have I used correct punctuation(标点符号)
Have I used correct tense(时态)
Are there any fragments(成分残缺) in my sentence structure
Can I improve some of the diction(选词) used
Are the subjects in my essay varied(多变的)
Have I used some linking words(连接词) to make my essay coherent
Homework
Polish and revise your draft by yourself!
THANK YOU

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