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Welcome Unit
Reading for Writing
人教版2019必修第一册
By the end of this class, we will be able to
1
master some words and expressions about writing a profile, especially the expressions about personality and learning styles.
2
appreciate the sample profiles and fetch important information about Ann and Thando.
3
figure out and summarize the structures and language features of the profile.
4
be capable of writing a student profile with concise language and clear structure.
Lead-in
How will you introduce yourself to others to
leave a deep impression(留下深刻的印象)
Grade
年级
Name
姓名
Favourite subject最喜欢的科目
School学校
Personality
性格
Dream梦想
Age年龄
Hobbies
爱好
How will you introduce yourself(介绍自己) to
others to leave a deep impression(留下深刻的印象)
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A student profile provides information about a student, and the information can be presented and used in different ways.
Student Profile
Brainstorming
What is “a student profile”
Pre-writing
Read the student profiles in silence and
choose the correct answers.
Task 1
1.Which can best describe Ann
A. Honest and sincere B. Kind and brave
C. Active and curious D. Funny and clever
2.What does “You’ll never see me without a book or a pen” mean
A. You’ll see me with a book and a pen.
B. You’ll find that I often lose a book or a pen.
C. You’ll see me when you find a book or a pen.
D. I never like to take a book or a pen.
Name,age,
grade,school
Personality
Favourite subject
Learning style
Hobbies
Future plans and dreams
1. What do Ann and Thando talk about in
their student profiles
Task 2
Task 2
2. Fill in the form with the information
from the student profiles.
Name,age,
grade,school
Personality
Favourite
subject
Learning
style
Hobbies
Future plans
and dreams
You’ll never ... a pen.If
I’m not in ... lab.
Ann Wells,15
Grade 10
Lakeside
High School
active,
curious
physics
ask
questions,
learn best
by doing
dancing,
skating,
reading
short
stories
to
become
an
engineer
Name,age,
grade,school
Personality
Favourite
subject
Learning
style
Hobbies
Future plans
and dreams
Thando
Gowon,16,
Grade 10,
South Hill
High School
look good,
think fast,
play hard
computer science
reading and writing
play computer games
to start his own IT company
confident
personality
Task 4 Brainstorming
Please think of some words to describe one’s personality.
warm-hearted
Brainstorm :
Words to express personality(性格)
warm-hearted
outgoing
easy-going
curious
honest
creative
friendly
humorous
attractive
generous
confident
energetic
active
helpful
hard-working
写作探究
the structure of a student profile.
段尾 未来计划及梦想
段首 个人基本情况：姓名、年龄、
年级、学校、出生及外貌等
段中 个人特点：性格、喜爱科目、
学习风格、爱好特长、课外活动及成
就等
学
生
简
介
Writing tips
How to describe name, age, grade and school
1. My name is+姓名：我是...
2. I come from+国家：我来自
3. I'm a Grade+年级student at+学校：我是一名...学校的几年级的学生
4. I’m +数字 years old ：我...岁
Writing tips
What are your learning styles (学习风格）
1. I often ask questions, but learn best by doing.
我经常提问，但通过实践学习效果最好。
2. I keep a learning diary every day in order to improve writing.
我每天都写学习日记，为了提高写作水平（in order to为了，improve提高)
3.I prefer to listen to the teacher and take notes.
我更喜欢听老师讲课并做笔记（prefer to更喜欢，listen to听，take notes做笔记）
Writing tips
What are your favorite subject
Chinese语文, maths数学, English英语, politics政治, history历史, geography地理, physics物理, biology生物, chemistry化学, music音乐,
art美术, P.E.体育, IT信息技术
My favourite subject is +科目 我最喜欢的科目是...
I am good at+n/ving:我擅长……
e.g.I am good at English, so my favourite subject is English
我擅长英语，所以我最喜欢的科目是英语
Writing tips
What are your hobbies爱好
dancing跳舞, skating滑冰, singing唱歌, swimming游泳
read(ing) short stories阅读短篇小说
爱好1(ing) and 爱好2(ing) are my hobbies:...和...是我的爱好
e.g. Dancing and skating are my hobbies
跳舞和滑冰是我的爱好。
Writing tips
How to describe your future plans and dreams未来计划和梦想
teacher教师, writer作家, scientist科学家, pilot飞行员, doctor医生,
computer programmer计算机程序员, dancer舞者, policeman警察
I plan to become a/an+职业 in the future:我计划将来成为一名+职业
e.g.I plan to become a designer in the future:我计划将来成为一名
I wish my dream will come true.我希望我能梦想成真
同步练习
假定你是李华，正要报名参加“21世纪杯
全国英语演讲比赛”(21st Century cup National English Speaking Competition)，需要提交一份英文自我简介参加初赛。请写一份个人简介，
内容包括：
1. 个人基本情况；
2. 兴趣爱好及特长；
3. 格言及梦想。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Get your draft back. Revise and polish（修改，润色） your own student profile.
How to polish your writing
技巧一：巧用过渡词汇
过渡词，就是表示先后顺序的first，second，last...；表示因果关系的due to, because of, therefore, as a result…；表示分述关系的what’s more, furthermore, besides, in addition等。 可有效规范我们的行文逻辑。
英语和汉语表达方式不同，行文中要尽量避免生硬拗口的中式化表达，如，I very like English和I live city center等。因此，要学会及时检查、修正语法错误, 尽量做到地道化表达
技巧二：避免中式表达
交替使用简单句和从句，即可以凸显句型的多样性，也能使文章显得更加流畅和完整。
技巧三：简单句与从句并用
参考范文
Hello, everyone. This is Contestant No.10. My name is Li Hua, a 16-year-old boy born in Shenzhen, Guangdong who is now a Grade 10 student at Shenzhen Senior High school. Not only am I optimistic and easy-going, but I am warm-hearted and always ready to help others.
I study varieties of subjects at school, among which I like English best. In fact, I’m especially good at English speaking and listening, having won the first prize in the city English speech competition. All my friends say I am as busy as a bee because I’m either studying or spending time keeping my hobbies like dancing, doing sports and travelling.
I have a dream that one day I can be a speaker, spreading good ideas and fascinating Chinese culture.
That’s all. Thank you! I'm looking forward to your support.
Thank You !
Reading for Writing
人教版2019必修第一册

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