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道歉信
高考英语应用文
目录
01
写作技巧
02
常用表达与句型练习
03
范文赏析与万能模板
04
试题探究与实战训练
文体概述：
道歉信是因自身不当行为给对方添了麻烦、造成损失后，即刻致歉的信件；或是因难承所托，向对方表达歉意的信函。
题目类型：
①道歉时，活动已经结束，未能参与活动（没去）
②道歉时，活动还未开始，无法参与活动（去不了）
③道歉时，造成他人损失，弄丢、损坏物品等
01写作技巧
具体写作结构如下：
01写作技巧
1. 篇头——开篇表意, 请求帮助
①I am writing to apologize/say sorry for...
我写这封信是为……道歉。
②I am really sorry but I have no choice but to...我真的很抱歉，但我别无选择，只能……
③I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did，but please believe I had no intention to...
对于我说的话/做的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非故意要……
02【常用表达】
2. 篇中——解释原因
①The reason why I fail to...is that...
我未能……的原因是……
②I am not able to...due to the fact that...
我不能……是由于……
③It’s because of...that I...
正是因为……我才……
④What is a pity is that I couldn’t...in this case.
遗憾的是，在这种情况下我无法……
02【常用表达】
2. 篇中——请求谅解，提出补
⑤I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.
我真心希望你能理解我的处境，并接受我的道歉。
⑥Anyhow，I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for...Will you be available this Sunday morning
无论如何，我真诚地希望我们可以为……再定一个时间。请问你这个星期天上午有空吗？
⑦To make up for it，I am wondering whether it is convenient for you to...
为了弥补这一点，我想知道你是否方便……
02【常用表达】
3. 结尾——再次道歉
①Once again，I’m sorry for any inconvenience I caused.对于我造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。
②I apologize again for any inconvenience or trouble caused by me/my carelessness.I promise that such a thing will never happen again.
再次为我/我的粗心带来的不便或麻烦表示歉意，我承诺这样的事情不会再发生。
③I would be grateful if you could understand my situation and forgive me.Anticipating your prompt reply.
如果您能理解我的处境并原谅我，我将不胜感激。期待您的及时回复。
02【常用表达】
1.非常抱歉，下周五我无法以主持人的身份出席“戏剧之夜”活动。
I am truly sorry for _____________________________________________
_______________.
2.我必须参加我的家庭聚会。遗憾的是，这样一来我就无法参加您的讲座了。
I have to attend my family gathering._______________________________
______________________.
02【句型练习】
not being able to attend the “Drama Night” as the host next Friday
It's a pity that I can’t attend your lecture in this case
02【句型练习】
3.为了弥补(之前的情况)，我想知道你下周六晚上是否方便一起吃个饭。
To make up for it，I am wondering _______________________________
________________ next Saturday evening.
4.我真心希望你能理解我的处境，并接受我的道歉。
__________________________________________ and accept my apology.
5.如果还有其他我能为这次活动提供帮助或支持的地方，我非常乐意尽我所能提供协助。
_____________________________________________________，I would be more than willing to assist in any way I can.
whether/if it is convenient for you to meet for dinner
I sincerely hope you can understand my situation
If there is anything else I can do to help or support the event
(2021·北京)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
03【范文赏析】
Dear Jim，
I hope this email finds you well.I’m writing to express my sincere apologies for not being able to join you this weekend [1]as planned.(表达歉意)
Unfortunately，I’ve encountered an unexpected family matter due to my grandfather falling ill，which requires my immediate presence at home.I hope you can understand the situation.(说明原因，请求谅解) As an [2]alternative，I suggest that we [3]reschedule our outing to the following weekend（提出建议）.This way，I’ll be able to [4]fulfill my commitments and ensure we have a more enjoyable time together without any [5]distractions.
[1]省略结构　[2]n.可供选择的事物，替代物　[3]vt.重新安排　[4]履行我的承诺　[5]n.使人分心的事物
03【范文赏析】
I value our friendship and would really appreciate your understanding.Looking forward to your response，and once again，I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.(再次道歉，希望得到谅解)
Yours，
Li Hua
03【范文赏析】
04【万能模板】
Dear XXX，
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to convey my sincere apologies to you for not doing sth .(表达歉意)
The reason why I wasn’t/won't be available at that time is that+从句. I sincerely hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology.(说明原因，请求谅解) To make up for it, I suggest that we reschedule sth to the following weekend（提出建议）. If that time is convenient for you, please let me know.
I would be grateful if you could understand my situation and forgive me. Anticipating your prompt reply.(再次道歉)
Yours，
Li Hua
04【试题探究】
假定你是李华，你和外教Mr. Smith约好明天下午去参观市博物馆，但因临时要参加一场重要的班级会议，无法赴约。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.提出改进建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Step 1: 审题布局
要素 内容分析
文体 电子邮件（注意格式）
人称 第一人称（I）为主，第二人称（you）为辅
时态 一般现在时、一般将来时
要点 P1. 表达歉意+道歉是由（写信目的）
P2. 解释原因（简洁合理）+承认责任+补救措施/建议
P3. 再次道歉+请求谅解
语气 诚恳、礼貌、表达歉意
要点1: 一般表达：I’m sorry I can’t go with you tomorrow.
①高分词汇升级表达: I would like to________________________________________for not being able to keep our appointment tomorrow.
②高分词汇升级表达: ________________________________________
_________________________________________
Step 2: 巧饰亮点-表达歉意
express my sincere/heartfelt apologies
Please accept my profound apologies for
my absence from visiting the City Museum .
要点2: 一般表达：I have to attend a class meeting.
①非限制定语从句:I have been informed that __________________________________ _________________________________________________________.
②高级词汇:__________________，I am required to___________________________.
要点3: 一般表达：Can we go another day
①升级表达（使用虚拟语气或条件句):I was wondering if___________________
for you to reschedule the visit to next weekend.
②虚拟语气:__________________，I would like to suggest that we___________________________until next Saturday.
It would be convenient
Step 2: 巧饰亮点-解释原因,提出弥补
which makes it impossible for me to be there on time
I have to attend a class meeting,
Unfortunately
attend a vital class meeting
(should) postpone
To make up for it
Dear Mr. Smith,
　　I am writing to express my sincere apologies for not being able to accompany you to the City Museum tomorrow afternoon.
Something unexpected has happened. I have been informed that I have to attend a class meeting, which makes it impossible for me to be there on time. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me.To make up for it,I would like to suggest that we (should) postpone until next Saturday.If that time is convenient for you, please let me know.
Once again, I apologize for the inconvenience I caused. Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Step 3: 衔接成篇
假定你是李华，外教Mr Chuck发现你的作文完全由AI生成，判为不及格。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.承认错误；
2.做出许诺；
3.补救措施。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
04【实战训练】
Dear Mr. Chuck，
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Mr Chuck，
I am writing to sincerely apologize for submitting an AI-generated essay.I deeply regret my dishonest act，which is a violation of academic integrity.I take full responsibility for my actions and fully understand the seriousness of this mistake.
The reason why I resorted to using AI was that I was afraid that I couldn’t complete the essay well on my own.However，I now realize that this was a wrong way to deal with the problem.I promise that this will never happen again.From now on，I will dedicate myself to all assignments
with genuine effort and originality.I value the learning process and will ensure that my work reflects my own thoughts and abilities.To make up for this，I would like to rewrite the essay entirely on my own and submit it to you by the end of this week.
I sincerely hope that you can continue to guide and supervise me in the future.Thank you for your understanding and patience.
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
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