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高考英语应用文
建议信
01
写作技巧
02
常用表达与句型练习
03
范文赏析与万能模板
04
试题探究与实战训练
目录
文体概述：
建议信是针对特定问题展开分析，并提出看法与建议，旨在让对方接纳自身想法、解决相关问题。它既可以写给个人，为其遭遇的具体问题提供见解；也可以写给某组织或机构，就优化服务等事项建言献策。写建议信需以提出合理、有说服力的建议或忠告为明确目的，做到简明扼要、态度恳切礼貌。
题目类型：
Ⅰ写回信：朋友写信询问，帮助他解决问题
Ⅱ写信出去：①外教要做某事，提出看法与建议
②某机构组织举办活动，写出具体建议
01写作技巧
具体写作结构如下：
01写作技巧
1. 篇头——开篇表意, 说明目的
①I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice on/express my views concerning...
我写信就如何……给你一些建议/忠告/表达我关于……的看法。
②You have asked for my advice on...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
关于……你向我征求意见，在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。
③I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
我很高兴收到你就……征求我的建议的来信。
④With regard to the problem you mentioned in your last letter，my suggestions are as follows.
关于你上一封信中提到的问题，我的建议如下。
02【常用表达】
2. 篇中——表达建议，说明原因
①As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/As for me/From my point of view，it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。
②The reasons for my recommendation are as follows.
我如此建议的原因如下。
③It would be highly advisable to do，for...
强烈建议您…，因为…
④Another practical approach is to do,which will enable you to do...
另一个使用的方法是…,这将使你能够…
02【常用表达】
3. 结尾——望采纳，盼回复
①I firmly believe that by taking these suggestions, you will have a more engaging and interactive classroom environment. It will enhance our learning experience and provide us with valuable opportunities to practice our English skills.
我坚信, 通过采纳这些建议, 你将拥有一个更具吸引力和互动性的课堂环境。它将增强我们的学习经验, 并为我们提供宝贵的机会来练习我们的英语技能。
②I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚地希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的, 请告诉我。
③I will be more than happy/delighted to see your improvements in this regard.
若能看到你在这一方面取得进步，我将不胜欣喜。
02【常用表达】
02【句型练习】
根据汉语提示补全句子
1.I am writing to ____________________________________________(给你一些建议) on how to call on more people to participate in marine protection.
2.You have asked for my advice on how to protect traditional cultural heritage with digital technology and I will _____________________________________(尽力提出一些有用的建议) here.
3.____________________________________________________(关于你在上一封信中提到的问题) about how to solve privacy risks brought by technological development，_____________________________(我的建议如下).
give you some suggestions/offer you some advice
try to make some useful suggestions
With regard to the problem you mentioned in your last letter
my suggestions are as follows
4.________________________________________________________________(在我看来)，it would be wise to launch community sports activities regularly to encourage people to take physical exercise.
5.I hope you will ______________________________________________________
________(认真考虑我的建议) on preventing overfishing in coastal areas and make some changes.
02【句型练习】
As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/As for me/From my point of view
take my advice into account/consideration/take my advice
seriously
(2024·北京)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1.建议投稿内容；
2.就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
03【范文赏析】
Dear Jim，
I am glad to learn that you are scheduled to [1]contribute to the Asia Today column of your school newspaper on the 75th anniversary of the founding of the People’s Republic of China.With regard to the subject you mentioned in your letter，my suggestions are as follows.(点明写信目的)
Firstly，I would like to suggest that you focus on China’s [2]poverty alleviation achievement.This is because it’s a great accomplishment that has [3]lifted hundreds of millions of people out of poverty，setting a good example for the world.
[1]为……投稿　 [2]扶贫成就
03【范文赏析】
Secondly，it would be better if you could introduce China’s high-speed rail development.As far as I am concerned，[4]not only does it show China’s advanced technology but it also [5]brings great convenience to people’s lives.Finally，you can mention China’s achievements in [6]space exploration，like the Tianwen-1 mission，which reflects China’s powerful scientific strength.(提出建议并说明理由)
I hope you will find these suggestions useful.Looking forward to reading your article！(希望采纳建议并表达愿望)
　[3]让数亿人摆脱了贫困　[4]not only...位于句首的倒装句　[5]给……带去极大的便利　[6]太空探索
Yours，
Li Hua
03【范文赏析】
03【万能模板】
Dear XXX，
I hope this letter finds you well. I’m Lihua, who is XX. Knowing that sth is scheduled to do sth, I am dropping these lines to extend my opinions and offer some suggestions.(交代缘由+写信目的)
First and foremost，I would like to suggest that +从句,which will make it easier for sb to do sth. In addition, considering doing sth is of great benefit, contributing to...... .Ultimately, It’s highly recommended that +从句，only in this way, can sth make remarkable progress in sth.(建议+原因)
In a nutshell, I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into account.Looking forward to your early reply.（望采纳+盼回复）
(2023· 新高考Ⅰ卷)
　　假定你是李华, 外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组, 让大家课后练习口语, 你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件, 内容包括:
　　1. 说明问题;
　　2. 提出建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
04【试题探究】
要素 内容分析
文体 建议信
人称 第一人称
时态 一般现在时
要点 P1. 交代写作背景+表明写信目的
P2. 随机分组的弊端1&2+我的口语分组建议1&2
P3. 望采纳，盼回复
Step 1: 审题布局
要点1: 首先, 随机配对的学生可能会导致小组内的语言能力不平衡。
__________________________________________________________________________________.
这可能会阻碍学生的进步, 因为更先进的人可能会主导谈话, 给其他学生留下很少的进步空间。(增加细节)
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the
Step 2: 表达建议，说明原因
groups
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced ones may dominate
the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.
要点2: 如果与一个他们相处不好或沟通有困难的人配对, 学生可能会感到不舒服或缺乏动力。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
要点3: 我的建议是根据学生的语言能力来分组, 或者让学生自己选择合作伙伴。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
要点4: 大家一起练习和提高英语口语就会更舒服。
__________________________________________________________________________________________
Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone
Step 2: 表达建议，说明原因
who they don’t get along well with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let
students choose their own partners.
Everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken
English together.
Dear Ryan,
　　I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I don’t think it’s a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
　　To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced ones may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along well with or have difficulty communicating with.
Step 3: 衔接成篇
　　My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. Everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
　　Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Step 3: 衔接成篇
(2025·浙江台州一模)
你所在的国际学校拟在教室门口安装一款多功能智慧屏，现向学生征集建议。假定你是李华，请你给负责人Mr Hall写一封英文邮件，内容包括：
1.建议开发的功能；
2.说明理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
04【实战训练】
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
Dear Mr. Hall，
I’m Li Hua from Class 3，Grade 3. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
04【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Hall，
I’m Li Hua from Class 3，Grade 3.I am really excited about the upcoming installation of a multifunctional smart screen at the entrance to our classroom and would like to share a couple of suggestions.
Firstly，an interactive message board would be a valuable addition.It will streamline communication by allowing us to post important announcements and reminders，thus fostering a more connected and engaged community.
04【参考范文】
Secondly，it’s better to update the daily menus of the student canteen with clear ingredient labels and nutritional details，which would empower us to make more informed and healthier dietary choices.Finally，it is advisable to add a homework reminder function.We can check pending assignments easily before entering the classroom，which reduces the chance of forgetting homework.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions and I do hope this project will work well soon.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
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