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课件44张PPT。Polish your composition没文化的人：哎呀我去,你看那个太阳太好看了！有文化的人：落霞与孤鹜齐飞，秋水共长天一色没文化的人：我的天啊！上个山太难了！
有文化的人：噫吁嚱，危乎高哉！
蜀道之难，难于上青天！
我喜欢这个剪纸，它非常漂亮。
没文化： I like the paper-cutting. It is beautiful.稍有文化： I am fond of the paper-cutting.
It is attractive.
知识青年： The paper-cutting which I’m
fascinated by is gorgeous.
高考英语作文评分标准1. 完全完成试题规定的内容2 覆盖所有内容要点3. 应用较多语法结构和词汇4. 使用较复杂结构或 较高级词汇;具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第五档作文(21-25分)6.完全达到预期写作目的
Polish your composition本溪市第一中学高三英语组 邵欣
2. 丰富的句式3. 恰当的连接词1. 运用高级词汇与短语华丽变身三原则1. 运用高级词汇与短语华丽变身三原则之一Advanced words/phrases1. The paper- cutting is good. 2. These activities are interesting.3. I will thank you if you accept my invitation.4. To take this opportunity is helpful.5. I want your reply. 1. The paper- cutting is good. wonderful; fantastic; amazing; splendid;excellent…2. These activities are interesting.amusing; entertaining;3. I will thank you if you accept my invitation.I would appreciate it if ….
I am grateful if…
I will show my gratitude if….4. To take this opportunity is helpful.To take this opportunity is of help.
To take this opportunity is beneficial. 5. I want your reply. look forward to
be keen to/on
be longing for
2. 丰富的句式华丽变身三原则之一
There is nothing I couldn't give you.
There is nothing I would deny you.
Nothing will change my love.

Open your heart to me. Advanced sentence patterns
强调句
定语从句
名词性从句
With 复合结构…
被动句
双重否定句
非谓语动词
倒装句
状语从句1. Study hard, and you will succeed. Study hard, or you won’t succeed. 2. Time passed by quickly, and I improved a lot.
As the time passed by quickly, I improved a lot.

With the time passing by, I improved a lot. 3. Our English teacher will give us an open class in a very cold classroom. An open class will be given in a very cold classroom by our English teacher.
We will be given an open class in a very cold classroom by our English teacher.4. Everything is possible. Nothing is impossible. 5. There will be lots of interesting activities. From these activities you will have a clearer picture of China.There will be lots of interesting activities, from which you will have a clearer picture of China.6. To his surprise, the English teacher with no make-up looks like a ghost.a. What surprised the boy is that the English teacher with no make-up looks like a ghost.
b. It is surprising that the English teacher with no make-up looks like a ghost.7. The girl is standing there. I know her. I know the girl standing there.
8. My brother is brave and intelligent. So I admire him very much.
My brother is brave and intelligent. That’s why I admire him very much.
9. You like Chinese culture most. a. It is Chinese culture that you like most.
b. It is you who like Chinese culture most.10. Because I know that you like Chinese culture most, I’m writing to invite you. Knowing that you like Chinese culture most, I’m writing to invite you.
11. We will not only have some shows, but also some activities. Not only will we have some shows, but also some activities.
Brainstorming
一句多译： 他是昨天来的。3. 恰当的连接词华丽变身三原则之一表文章顺序：
first of all; to start with; first and foremost; firstly, secondly… in the end;
表并列补充：
what’s more; besides; moreover; in addition; not only…but also…表转折关系:
but; however; while;
表因果关系：
because; so; thus; therefore; as a result;
for; since
表总结关系:
in short; briefly speaking; in a word; in conclusion; generally speaking;
表条件关系:
if; unless; as long as; on condition that
in addition; therefore; although; as soon as;
for; on one hand, on the other hand;
on condition that; what’s worse; before; when;1. He must be ill, _______ he is absent today.
2. I shared the cost of the gas with my friends .___________, I saved $80.
3.Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. ___________ , it may make us fat.
ThereforeWhat’s worse for 4. Xiao Ming was walking in the street ___________ he heard someone crying for help.
5. ___________he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.
As soon as when in addition; therefore; although; as soon as;
for; on one hand, on the other hand;
on condition that; what’s worse; before; when;in addition; therefore; although; as soon as;
for; on one hand, on the other hand;
on condition that; what’s worse; before; when;6. It was not long _______ the police came .
7. There will be a paper-cutting exhibition. ___________ ,there will be lots of activities.
8. Nothing is impossible _______________ you try.before on condition that In additionin addition; therefore; although; as soon as;
for; on one hand, on the other hand;
on condition that; what’s worse; before; when;9. __________ he is poor, she loves him.
10. _____________, the sharing bicycle is convenient. _____________, it is environmentally-friendly.Although On one handOn the other handPractice2017年全国卷II高考英语作文 某学生作文
Our school will hold a?Chinese paper-cutting exhibition. Because I know that you like Chinese traditional culture most. I’m writing to invite you to the exhibition. ?
The exhibition will be held in the museum. It will last for only one day. We will not only display works, but also we will have a good set of paper-cutting. There will be lots of interesting activities. From these activities you will have a clearer picture of China.
I will thank you for accepting my invitation. I will wait for your reply.secret


Word phrase sentence
Conjunction adds significance
Add a little confidence
You will make a difference.Homework Polish the composition of the weekly test.
Thank you!

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