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课件218张PPT。 中考英语（山东专用）专题二十一　书面表达A组　 2015—2019年山东中考题组Writing 1(2019青岛)
　　人生中有很多第一次:第一次学游泳;第一次跟家人外出旅行;第一次做家务;第一次赢得比赛;第一次……。请根据提示,就你的第一次……写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1.第一次……的整个过程;
2.你的感受。
要求:
1.词数:80—100(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time??? ?
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[写作要点]
1.本文为夹叙夹议文,介绍第一次做某事的经历用一般过去时,谈感受时用一般现在时。本文主要使用第一人称。
2.叙述过程完整,避免语法错误,注意时态转换。
[参考范文]
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I won the English com-petition.
When I was a child, I was not good at English and I hated English class, so that I often lost my thought when I was learning English. However, my warm-hearted English teacher always encouraged me to study harder. Be-sides, she also taught me some ways of learning English, such as talking with native speakers, writing as often as possible and listening to English songs and so on. From then on, with her help and my efforts, I started to be in-terested in English and learn English actively in my class.Finally, I entered the English competition and won the first prize.
When you have trouble in studying subjects or something else, do not give up. I believe you will find the way to solve problems successfully. Only in this way can we achieve our dreams.
That's all! Thank you!
精彩语句
1.精美词汇:be good at擅长;so that 因此;encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事;as...as possible 尽可能……;from then on 从那以后
2.出彩结构:Only in this way can we achieve our dreams.(倒装句)Writing 2(2019东营)
Sunday Mail青少年专栏开展“对身边的人说一句话”主题征文活动,这句话或许是对父母的一句“我爱你”,或许是对老师、同学的一句“谢谢你”,或许是对身边人的一句“对不起”等。请将“I want to say　　????”补充完整,并以此为题写一篇英语短文,如:I want to say thank you等。谈谈你想说那句话的原因以及发生在那句话背后的故事,并说说你的感受。
要求:
1.认真审题,把握要点;
2.行文连贯,条理清晰,不得出现真实学校、姓名等信息;
3.100词左右。
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[写作要点]
1.本题为半命题作文,首先应该把题目补充完整,再根据题目进行写作。
2.需要交代想说那句话的原因和其背后的故事,用一般过去时。谈感受用一般现在时。注意动词形式的变化。
[参考范文]
I want to say thank you
I want to say thank you to my dear mother. She not only cares about my life, but always helps me out.
Once I argued with my best friend Lucy, because she always pointed out my shortcomings. My mother talked with me and advised me to think about her words. I did so and found what Lucy said was helpful to me.With my mother's help, I didn't lose my best friend and learned how to deal with problems with friends.
She does all that she can do for me. No matter what will happen in the future, I will love her forever.精彩语句
1.精美词汇:not only...but... 不但……而且……;point out one's shortcomings 指出某人的不足;with one's help 在某人的帮助下
2.出彩结构:①I did so and found what Lucy said was helpful to me.(found之后为省略that的宾语从句,从句中what引导主语从句)
②She does all that she can do for me.(that引导定语从句)Writing 3(2019烟台)
假设你是某英语报社的编辑Rina,收到Li Wei 同学的来信,诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼,并向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei回信。
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要求:1.须包括所有要点提示并适当补充,语句通顺、意思连贯;2.词数:100左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇:laugh at; care about; high-fat food; the more..., the healthier...
Dear Li Wei,
I‘ve received your letter and I can understand you. ? ??? ?? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?
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Yours,
Rina答案
[写作要点]
1.这是一封信,注意书信格式。
2.这封信的主题为提建议。时态用一般现在时,人称用第二人称。
3.必须包括所有要点提示,并且每一要点至少有一条补充建议。
[参考范文]
Dear Li Wei,
I've received your letter and I can understand you.You must feel bad when being laughed at by your classmates because of your obesity. Here is my advice for you.
Firstly, there is no need to care about how others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident, as it will help you have the courage to face and overcome your diffculities.
Secondly, try to eat healthily—keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A bal-anced diet is very important for losing weight.Thirdly, I strongly advise you to exercise more often. You'd better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. The more you exercise, the healthier you'll be.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Rina
精彩语句
1.精美词汇:laugh at 嘲笑;keep away from 远离;advise sb. to do sth. 建议某人做某事
2.出彩结构:You must feel bad when being laughed at by your classmates because of your obesity.(when引导时间状语从句)Writing 4(2019枣庄)
Write a review(评论)of the following story of about 120 words. The review has to include the following points.(阅读下面的故事,请根据下面的提示,写出一篇约120词的评论)。
1.The title of your review.(你的评论的标题。)
2.Your ideas, examples and the reasons for unhappiness and happiness in the story.(关于故事中幸福和不幸福的观点,并举例说明。)
3.Your ideas of happiness, examples for happiness in your daily life.(你在日常生活中关于幸福的观点,并举例说明。)
4.Your conclusion about happiness.(关于幸福的结论。)
5.The words you may use:(你可能用到的词:)be satisfied with...对……满意　desire n.欲望　contentment n.知足
the key to happiness幸福的关键
A long time ago, in a rich and beautiful country, there lived an unhappy king. He slept badly and didn't feel like eating. He often cried for no reason. This made the queen and his people worried. So they called a doctor to ex-amine him. But the doctor found nothing wrong with the king's body.He said what the king needed was the shirt of a happy person to wear. That would make him happy.
The prime minister was called to the palace. But when they explained the king's situation to him, he said,“Al-though I have a lot of power, it doesn't make me happy.I'm always worried about losing my power.”Then the king's banker came to say,“I'm afraid I'm not happy either. I have a lot of wealth, but I'm always worried about losing money.Someone tries to steal my money.” Next, the palace singer was called to say,“I'm famous but I'm not happy because I'm worried about being followed by others. I can't be free.”
Finally, the top general was told to go out to find a happy man. He searched and searched but couldn't find any-one. Everyone seemed to have their own problems, and no one was truly happy. Just as he wanted to give up, he saw a poor man on the street. The man was eating with his hands and singing happily to himself. The general went to him and said,“What makes you so happy? You have no power,money, or fame.”The man said,“I have everything I want, and I don't want what I can't have. So I'm happy, and my song comes from the happiness in my heart.”“Can you give your shirt to me? I need it,”said the general.“What shirt? I don't have any shirts,”answered the man.
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[写作要点]
1.这是一篇评论,需要先读懂故事,再从提示的四个方面入手进行写作。这种书面表达题型不多见。
2.归纳故事中的观点时用一般过去时,归纳自己日常生活中的观点和下结论时用一般现在时,应注意时态的转换。
[参考范文]
My Thoughts about Happiness/Happiness
Power,wealth and fame can't always make people happy. For example, the important people were unhappy,be-cause they were afraid of losing what they had, while the poor man was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.
What can always make me happy?Happiness is always in my heart and is easy to find if I pay more attention to what I have, for instance, enjoying the beautiful sunshine after a cloudy day, getting a glass of water from Mother when I'm studying, getting help from my friends when I'm in trouble and so on. There are the moments when I
am happy.
All in all,don't want what you can't have. Contentment is the key to happiness.
精彩语句
1.精美词汇:be satisfied with... 对……感到满意;pay attention to 注意;for instance 例如;all in all 总之
2.出彩结构:①Happiness is always in my heart and is easy to find if I pay more attention to what I have...(if引导条件状语从句,what引导宾语从句)
②All in all, don't want what you can't have. (don't want what you can't have为祈使句的否定形式,what引导宾语从句)Writing 5(2019聊城)
假如你叫陈伟,2019年6月22日和23日是你中考后的第一个周末,请你制订一个周末活动计划,并用英语给你的英国笔友Alan写一封电子邮件,说明你的活动安排。
主要活动内容包括:
1.6月22日上午在家读书;下午与家人和朋友外出活动。
2.6月23日到朋友家附近的公园捡垃圾。
3.你对本次活动的期待。
注意:
1.邮件词数:80左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,但邮件不能出现真实的人名和地名。
3.邮件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alan,
I'm going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend.??????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?
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Yours,
Chen Wei答案
[写作要点]
1.这是一封邮件,要求向笔友介绍你的周末活动计划,应该用一般将来时和第一人称。
2.根据提示内容从三个方面写,并注意适当增加细节,使文章内容充实。
[参考范文]
Dear Alan,
I'm going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend.On the morning of 22nd June. I'm going to get up a little late and then read an interesting storybook. In the afternoon, I'm going out with my family and friends. We're go-ing to take a walk in the country near our home. And on 23rd June we're going to collect litter in the park near my friend's house. I think it's going to be a great weekend—busy but fun!
Yours,
Chen WeiWriting 6(2018青岛)
　　现在,中学生在校内能保证一定时间的运动量,但在校外普遍缺少运动甚至不运动。请就此现象写一篇短文,谈谈你的看法。内容包括:
1.缺少运动甚至不运动的原因;
2.缺少运动甚至不运动对学生的影响;
3.针对这种现象提出合理的改善建议。
要求:1.词数:80—100 (开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
参考词汇:be short of 缺少
Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now. ???? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??
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[写作要点]
1.体裁:议论文。
2.时态:一般现在时。
3.人称:第三人称为主。
4.要点:(1)此现状的原因;(2)此现状的影响;(3)提出合理建议。
[参考范文]
Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now. They spend too much time on the school homework every day.Many kinds of after-school classes take up their spare time.In addition,most students are lost in mobile phones and computer games,which makes them have no time to take exercise.
Lack of exercise may make students unhealthier and cause kinds of diseases.It can also affect the brain develop-ment. Besides, it can make skeletal development defective.
I think we must change this current situation.We can choose the sports we are interested in,so that we can insist well.We should make plans in order that we can arrange our time reasonably for exercise.We can look for the friends we do exercise along with. Let's go into action immediately.
精彩语句
1.精美词汇:spend too much time on在……上花费太多时间;defective adj.有缺陷的;go into action 行动起来
2.出彩结构:In addition,most students are lost in mobile phones and computer games,which makes them have no time to take exercise. which 引导非限制性定语从句,which指代前面整个主句所表达的内容。Writing 7(2018德州)
树立自我保护意识,健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课。下面是某地关心下一代工作委员会为青少年编写的《青少年自我保护、健康成长手册》的部分内容。作为一名中学生,写一篇文章,内容包括:①陈述你是怎样践行手册中提及的三条事项的;②补充至少一条你认为重要的其他事项。
?要求:
1.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
3.80~100词,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.
First, I always obey the traffic rules　　　　　　　
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In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.答案
[写作要点]
本文应使用一般现在时和第一人称。写作要点包括:1.交通规则:禁止闯红灯、要走斑马线。2.关于食物:多吃蔬菜和水果、禁止吃垃圾食品。3.关于交朋友:不要单独见陌生人、互相帮助。4.写一条自己的建议。
[参考范文]
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.
First, I always obey the traffic rules and I never run the red light. When the traffic light is red, I won't go until it turns green. I always cross the zebra walk because it's safe. Second, I often eat healthily and safely. It's important to eat more fruit and vegetables. Eating too much fast food will do harm to my body. Third, I never meet strangers alone, especially friends who I make on the Internet. At the same time if we are true friends, we should help each other.
What's more, I'd like to give you some advice. Now summer is coming, it's dangerous for us to swim alone, es-pecially in deep lakes or rivers. So don't do that.
In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.
精彩语句
1.精美词汇:not...until...直到……才……;what's more 而且;in short 总之
2.出彩结构:Third, I never meet strangers alone, especially friends who I make on the Internet.(who引导定语从句,修饰先行词friends)Writing 8(2018威海)
“照镜子”是生活中的平常事,以生活为镜,可以照出现实中真实的自己。请以“Me in the mirror”为题,写一篇80词以上的英语短文。围绕自己最突出的一至两个优点和缺点,重点谈谈在未来的生活和学习中如何扬长避短、完善自我,成长为更好的自己。
要求:1.题目已给出,不计入总词数;
2.观点正确、条理清晰、表达流畅;
3.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。
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[写作要点]
本题是一篇话题作文,要求根据所给的材料介绍一下镜子里的“我”。时态为一般现在时,人称为第一人称。写作要点包括:1.介绍自己的最突出的一至两个优点和缺点;2.谈谈在未来的生活和学习中如何扬长避短、完善自我,成长为更好的自己。
[参考范文]
Me in the mirror
Looking at myself in the mirror, I know I am an outgoing girl. I like to make friends and I'm always ready to help them. So I'm very popular in my school. But I have a big problem. I'm less interested in my lessons and I can't concentrate in class. In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don' t get good grades which make my parents disappointed.
When I go to senior high school, I hope to get along well with my classmates and try to make more friends. I hope we can help each other and learn from each other. I will make a good study resolution and try my best to go for it. I decide to have a healthier lifestyle. I'll spend more time on my schoolwork and develop good learning habits. I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully. What's more, I will read more books and master good learning methods. I hope to make great progress and make my parents proud of me.
精彩语句
1.精美词汇:be less interested in 不太感兴趣;concentrate v.专注,集中注意力
2.出彩结构:In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don't get good grades which make my parents disappointed.(which make my parents disappointed是由which引导的定语从句)Writing 9(2018潍坊)
　　人总要慢慢长大,那些曾经的过往成就了未来的你。根据图表提示,请你也用英语分享一下学校生活中让你受益的人或事。
内容包括:
1.具体是什么;
2.学到了什么。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.文中不要出现考生本人的真实信息。?
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?????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? 答案
[写作要点]
本题要求分享学校生活中让你受益的人或事,为记叙文。应使用一般过去时和第一人称。写作要点包括:1.要分享的事是什么;2.你从中学到了什么。
[参考范文]
I hated running because it often made me feel hot all over and have a stomachache. My PE teacher advised me to walk first and then try running. So I did it every day after school. I continued doing it for more than two years. Thanks to my PE teacher, last month I passed the running test successfully. From this I learn that we should start everything with the easiest and make progress little by little. And of course, we must keep trying our best.
精美词汇????
all over浑身,到处;advise sb. to do sth.建议某人做某事;little by little逐渐地;try our best尽我们最大的努力Writing 10(2017聊城)
假定你是张华,你在外地学习的好朋友王伟发电子邮件向你请教如何学好英语。请你根据以下要点用英语给他回封电子邮件。
内容包括:
1.看英语电影、听英语歌曲,猜测生词意思。
2.与外教交谈。
3.把单词写在纸条上,利用纸条记忆单词。
注意:
1.词数:80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Wei,
I received your email yesterday. In the email, you asked me how to improve your English. Now I'd like to give you some advice.
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?????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?
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These are my suggestions. I hope they are useful to you.
Yours,
Zhang Hua答案
[写作要点]
1.本文用书信格式,内容为介绍如何学好英语;
2.主体时态用一般现在时;
3.提示的3点内容都要包含,可以适当扩展。
[参考范文]
Dear Wang Wei,
I received your email yesterday. In the email, you asked me how to improve your English. Now I'd like to give you some advice.
Watching English films and listening to English songs are great ways to learn English!Watch and listen several times, and guess the meanings of the new words.
Having a conversation with a foreign teacher is also a good way. You'd better start it with greetings or a ques-tion. Also, smile before you speak and do not feel shy.Write four or five words a day on pieces of paper and place them in your room. Read the words when you see them, and try to use them.
These are my suggestions. I hope they are useful to you.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
深度解析
关于如何学好英语是一个常见的话题。遇到这样的题目,学生有话可说。但是要注意使用题目给出的提示要点,“看英语电影,听英语歌曲,猜测生词意思、与外教交谈、利用纸条记单词”,而且不能有遗漏。另外学生还可根据自己的经验,提出其他的有利于学英语的做法。Writing 11(2017莱芜)
学校网站“英语论坛”栏目向你约稿,要求结合初中学习生活,为即将入校的新生提几点建议。请根据表中信息完成此稿件。要求:1)包含全部要点,可适当发挥;
2)不能出现真实的校名及姓名;
3)开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
4)词数控制在80—100左右。
Dear friends,
I‘m glad to give you some advice about your new school life.??? ?
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?????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?
?????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??I believe you will have a wonderful life in our school!答案
[写作要点]
1.这是一篇应用文,主题是给新生提建议;
2.主体时态为一般现在时;
3.文章要包含表格中的信息:1)如何养成好习惯;
2)参加各类活动,如各种社团;
3)其他方面。
[参考范文]
Dear friends,
I'm glad to give you some advice about your new school life.
Firstly, you will have more subjects to learn, so it's important to develop good learning habits. You should listen to the teacher carefully in class and take an active part in discussions. After class, you should find more time to read books. It's also important to have good eating habits. Try to eat more fruits and vegetables every day. Don't eat junk food much too often. Also, you should exercise regularly, such as taking up a ball game as a hobby.
Secondly, in order to make your school life colorful, I suggest you take part in all kinds of activities such as join-ing some clubs and doing some volunteering.
Besides these, it's also good to keep a diary and make new friends.
I believe you will have a wonderful life in our school!Writing 12(2016济宁)
　　假如你是李梅。你的美国笔友Tom在昨天的e-mail中告诉你,最近他对中国文化产生了浓厚的兴趣,希望你能给他介绍一些经典故事。请你根据下面所给图画,给Tom回复一封e-mail,向他讲述这一经典故事,并希望知道他对该故事及主人公的看法。
Sima Guang hit the tank(缸)要求:
1.文章需包括所有图画的内容,可以适当发挥,使全文连贯;
2.文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息;
3.100词左右(邮件的开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I'm very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Well, let me tell you a famous one with the name“Sima Guang hit the tank”.
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?????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?
?????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ????
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Li Mei答案
[写作要点]
1.审题:
本文是一篇根据图片提示介绍司马光砸缸故事的记叙文,文章时态主要用一般过去时,也可以穿插使用过去将来时或过去进行时。文章用第三人称来叙述故事。
2.确定要点:
(1)起因:司马光和他的小伙伴玩捉迷藏时,一个小伙伴不小心掉进了缸里。
(2)经过:
①小伙伴很害怕,哭喊求助;
②司马光深思熟虑,拿起石头,扔向水缸;
③水缸破裂,小伙伴得救;
(3)结尾:询问对方的感受或看法。[参考范文]
Dear Tom,
I'm very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Well, let me tell you a famous one with the name “Sima Guang hit the tank”.
Once Sima Guang was playing hide and seek with several children in the backyard. There was a large water tank in the yard. It was full of water. When the kids were playing, one child accidentally fell into the tank. Other children were so frightened that they started to run, crying for help. However, Sima Guang was different. He thought it over and then had an idea. He picked up a big stone and threw it at the tank. “Bang!” the tank broke and the water ran out. The kid was saved.
Do you like the story?What do you think of Sima Guang?
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Li MeiWriting 13(2016青岛)
　　初中生活即将结束,丰富多彩的学校活动一定给你留下了许多美好的回忆。根据图表提示,选择一次你最喜欢的活动进行描述。
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内容包括:1.此次活动的过程;
2.你的收获或感受。要求:1.词数:80—100。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories.???? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?? ?
??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?? ? ?? ? ??? ??? ??? ?
?????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?
?????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?? ?答案
[写作要点]
1.本文属于记叙文,主体时态为一般过去时。
2.写作内容:
(1)点题。说出最让你难忘的事;(2)叙述难忘的事的全部过程;(3)表达为何难忘;(4)注意要写对自己有意义的事情。
3.注意写作要点要完整,条理要清晰,不得出现真实的校名和人名。
[参考范文]
My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories. What impressed me most is the football game that was held last year between our class and Class 2.During the last minute of the game, I was about to score the goal when Tom, one of the players from Class 2 fell heavily on the playground. Seeing this, I stopped immediately and ran to ask him whether he was hurt. So I missed the last chance to score.
Looking back on this game, I never regret. Tom and I became very good friends after that. We both believe that friendship is far more important than the game itself.
[参考范文]
My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories. The most unforgettable one is our school trip.
Last May Day, my classmates and I went to the National Tea Museum. It's a relaxing and peaceful place. We watched a video that introduced knowledge about tea. We saw some beautiful tea sets. Each tea set has its own meaning. What's more, we experienced how to make tea. The tea made by myself was delicious.
I was quite happy during the trip. I realized making a perfect cup of tea is just as enjoyable as drinking the tea it-self. I understood better how wonderful the Chinese culture is!Writing 14(2015聊城)
现在有许多新的购物方式,网上购物是其中的一种。越来越多的人熟悉和喜欢网购,但是网购有利有弊。请根据下面提供的信息用英语以Online shopping为题写一篇短文,描述网购的优点和缺点,并谈谈自己的看法。
优点:
1.可以在任何时间购物。
2.只需要一台电脑和一个鼠标。
3.方便比较同类产品的价格,可以省钱。
4.无论何时何地都可以收到所购物品。
……
缺点:
1.网上付款有时不安全。
2.看不到实物,也不能试穿衣服。……
注意:
1.不得在作文中出现你真实的学校名称和自己的姓名。
2.语句连贯,表达准确,词数80—100。
3.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Online shopping
There are many new ways of shopping,and online shopping is one of them.?????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?? ??? ????
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[写作要点]
1.本文主要时态为一般现在时和一般将来时;
2.内容要点:①网购的优点;②网购的缺点;③你自己的看法。
[参考范文]
Online shopping
There are many new ways of shopping,and online shopping is one of them.
Online shopping has several advantages.First,you can shop at any time.Second,to shop on the Internet you only need a computer and a mouse.Third,you can compare the prices of the same product and save money.You can al-so receive it anywhere in the world at any time!
But shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages.Paying over the Internet isn't always safe.You can't see the product or try the clothes on.
I think our life is changing because of online shopping.One day no one will go to the shops any more,because you'll be able to buy almost anything on the Internet.Writing 15(2015德州)
新学期开始,某学校的学生社团又开始招募了。假设你是社团负责人,请根据以下内容和要求写一篇80—100词的英语宣传页,为新同学介绍下列社团的情况(包括名称、活动内容及其目的)。
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　　要求:
1.自拟第四个社团,包括名称、活动内容及其目的,不少于2句;
2.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
4.文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Welcome to Our Clubs
Boys and girls,
Welcome to our school.Now let me introduce some of our clubs to you.??????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?? ??? ??? ? ?
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These are the most popular clubs in our school and I hope you can join us.答案
[写作要点]
1.本文是应用文,以一般现在时为主。
2.介绍社团情况:名称、活动内容及目的。
[参考范文]
Welcome to Our Clubs
Boys and girls,
Welcome to our school.Now let me introduce some of our clubs to you.
Cool Players is a good choice for sports lovers.Here you can do sports one hour a day to build your body and watch sports matches.If you are interested in English,English Lovers is a good choice.In the club,you can speak to foreigners and talk about good ways to learn English.I hope you can make friends with other English lovers.Do you want to be a good cook? In Excellent Cooks,you will learn how to design healthy menus and cook dish-es,which can lead to a healthy life.If you are interested in books,Smart Readers is a good choice.Reading good books and writing reading notes are useful to improve your knowledge and open up your eyes.
These are the most popular clubs in our school and I hope you can join us.Writing 1(2019湖北武汉)
　　学校英语社团正在组织题为“My Family”的征文活动。假如你是李明,请根据以下内容提示用英语完成征文。
内容要点如下:
1.三口之家,家庭幸福,邻里和睦;
2.父母为教师,在校深受欢迎;
3.分担家务,周末户外活动;
4.相互陪伴,经常交流,良好家规助我成长;
5.请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。
注意:
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2.词数:60—80;
3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;B组　2015—2019年全国中考题组4.标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:popular adj.受欢迎的　activity n.活动　rule n.规矩
My Family
I'm Li Ming.?????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?? ??? ??? ? ?? ??? ??? ??? ????? ?
??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?? ??? ??? ? ?? ??? ??? ??? ????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??
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[写作要点]
一、体裁:说明文。
二、要点齐全:
1.三口之家,家庭幸福,邻里和睦;
2.父母为教师,在校受欢迎;
3.分担家务,周末户外活动;
4.相互陪伴,经常交流,良好家规助我成长;
5.一至两点与家庭相关的情况。
三、时态:一般现在时态。
[参考范文]
My Family
I'm Li Ming. I have a happy family, and there are three people in my family. We get on well with our neighbors. My parents are teachers, who are popular in school, and they are loved by their students. They share the house-work at home and we do outdoor activities on weekends. I think it's important to spend time and communicate with family members. I have strict family rules at home. They're so important that they can help me grow up well. We all like doing sports, like basketball and volleyball.
We love each other. What a happy family I have! What about you?
精彩语句
1.精美词汇:get on well with和……相处融洽;be popular (with sb.)受(某人)欢迎的
2.出彩结构:I think it's important to spend time and communicate with family members.(本句话是一个含有宾语从句的主从复合句,it作形式主语,动词不定式是真正的主语)Writing 2(2019河南)
　　假如你有机会和任何一个名人共进午餐。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点:1)这个名人是谁;
2)你为什么想和他或她共进午餐;
3)你想和他或她谈论什么。
2.要求:1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数80左右。
??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?? ??? ??? ? ?? ??? ??? ??? ????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??
??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?? ??? ??? ? ?? ??? ??? ??? ????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??
?? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?? ??? ??? ? ?? ??? ??? ??? ????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??答案
[写作要点]
1.体裁:记叙文。
2.要点齐全:
1)这个名人是谁;
2)你为什么想和他或她共进午餐;
3)你想和他或她谈论什么。
3.时态:以一般将来时为主。
[参考范文]
I'd like to have lunch with Ren Zhengfei, the founder of the well-known Chinese tech company Huawei.
Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. And under his leadership, Huawei has become a high-tech giant worldwide. Over the lunch, I will listen to his success story. Then I will ask him what is important to make it happen. If time permits, I'll ask for his advice for us teenagers today.I'm expecting this lunch already.
精彩语句
1.精美词汇:founder n.创始人;be considered as被认为是……,被看作是……;leadership n.领导
2.出彩结构:Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead.(who引导定语从句,修饰先行词a great man)Writing 3(2019广西北部湾经济区)
　　暑假将至,你校English Club在社刊上发起了征文活动,题目为“My Plan for Summer Holiday”。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
写作要点:
1.学习计划;
2.运动计划;
3.娱乐计划;
4.你的愿望。
写作要求:
1.内容必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
2.语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名,否则不予评分;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。My Plan for Summer Holiday
The summer holiday is coming.???? ?? ??? ??? ??? ????? ??? ??? ??? ?? ?? ??? ??? ??? ????? ??? ??? ??? ??
??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?? ??? ??? ? ?? ??? ??? ??? ????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??
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??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ?? ??? ??? ? ?? ??? ??? ??? ????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??
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答案
[写作要点]
本书面表达可根据题目所给的要点提示,采用总分总的结构进行写作。写作过程中注意以一般将来时为主。为了使内容充实,在写每一个要点时,可适当发挥。
[参考范文]
My Plan for Summer Holiday
The summer holiday is coming. I can't wait to make a good plan for it.
First, I will spend hours on my study every day. Reading more books and practicing writing will be good ways to improve myself. Second, in order to keep fit, I will do some sports with my friends, such as playing basketball and swimming. This summer holiday will be a good time for fun, so I plan to watch movies and have picnics with my family. What's more, to experience different cultures in other places will be the most important part of my plan.
All of these will be helpful for my future life. I am looking forward to a meaningful holiday.
精彩语句
精美词汇:can't wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事;spend...on...在……上花费(时间/金钱);in order to do sth.为了做某事;such as例如;plan to do sth.计划做某事;what's more更为重要的是;look forward to期待Writing 4(2019湖南长沙)
假如你是李华,你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的,有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他,谈谈你对此事的看法,并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。
要求:(1)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Henry,
I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game...
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[写作要点]
1.本文为一封邮件。主体时态应该为一般现在时。人称以第二人称为主。
2.按题目要求将要点进行呈现,其中建议应不少于两点。
[参考范文]
Dear Henry,
I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. It's not easy being in your situation, and it's normal to have these feelings. Anyway, don't be too hard on yourself.
You know, basketball is about team effort. It's never just one person's fault. What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think about how you can do better next time.
As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why don't you sit down and communicate with them? And you could promise that you will spare no effort to better your skills. If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
精彩语句
1.精美词汇:be hard on sb.严厉对待某人;pull together 齐心协力
2.出彩结构:If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one.(if引导条件状语从句)Writing 5(2018河北)
请仔细观察下面的图片,并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。
提示:(1)What are the man and the woman doing?
(2)What should you do when you see people litter like this? Why?
要求:(1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:throw, environment, civilized(文明的)I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is????
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答案
[写作要点]
1.人称:要点一用第三人称;要点二用第一人称。
2.时态:要点一用现在进行时态;要点二用一般现在时态。
3.要点:(1)图片上的男人和女人正在干什么?(2)当你看到人们像这样乱扔垃圾时你会怎么做?为什么?
[参考范文]
I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is throwing rubbish on the ground. The woman is telling him to put the rubbish in the dustbin.
When I see people litter like this, I believe I can not stand by and do nothing. I will stop them from doing so, like the woman in the picture did. The city is our home. It's our duty to protect our environment. What's more, it's important to learn to be a civilized person.
Let's take action and make the world more beautiful!精彩语句
1.精美词汇:stand by and do nothing袖手旁观;what's more 另外
2.出彩结构:It's our duty to protect our environment.(It为形式主语,真正的主语为动词不定式to protect our en-vironment)Writing 6(2018河南)
　　每个人都生活在一个特定的环境。请以“What I like about where I live”为题,并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文,描述你生活的环境。
1.要点:1)你生活在什么样的环境;
2)你喜欢这个环境的什么;
3)你对这个环境有何期望。
2.要求:1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数80左右。
What I like about where I live
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[写作要点]
1.你生活在什么样的环境;
2.你喜欢这个环境的什么;
3.你对这个环境有何期望;
4.人称以第一人称为主;
5.时态主要是一般现在时。
[参考范文]
What I like about where I live
I live in a small and quiet city in Henan Province. Different from other cities, it has no skyscrapers or endless cars on the streets. People there are seldom late for their work and enjoy a slow and peaceful life. And that is what I like most about my city.
However, my city has her problems. She has no high-speed train. I hope she will soon have high-speed trains so that I can travel to other cities more easily!
精彩语句
1.精美词汇:endless adj.无穷无尽的;peaceful adj. 和平的,平静的;however adv. 然而
2.出彩结构:And that is what I like most about my city. (what引导表语从句)Writing 7(2018湖南衡阳)
　　假如你是刘伟,你在英国的笔友Jim对中国的传统节日很感兴趣,他来信询问有关情况。请你给他回一封电子邮件,简单介绍中国的传统节日。今天是端午节,请你重点介绍中国人一般是如何过端午节的。
注意:
1.80~100词左右。
2.可以结合自己的情况适当增加细节,以便行文连贯。
3.开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Liu Wei答案
[写作要点]
1.本文是一封电子邮件,时态以一般现在时为主。
2.要点:简单介绍中国的传统节日,重点对端午节进行介绍。可提及端午节传统的活动和食物。[参考范文]
Dear Jim,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail. I am very happy to share some Chinese traditional culture.
China is a great country with over 5,000 years of history. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as the Spring Festival, the Mid-Autumn Festival, the Lantern Festival and so on.
But today I want to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival. It is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month accord-ing to the Chinese calendar. This festival is to commemorate the death of Qu Yuan. During the festival, I get to-gether with my family to have a big meal. We often eat zongzi. It tastes very nice. Besides, we also watch the dragon boat races. I feel very excited when I watch the races.What do you think of the Dragon Boat Festival? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Liu WeiWriting 8(2017河南)
　　我们每天都要做很多事情,有些还很棘手。请以“I did it!”为题并根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,描述一件你完成的棘手事情。
1.要点:1)你做了什么事情;
2)你是如何做那件事情的;
3)你做完那件事情后的感受。
2.要求:1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数80左右。
I did it!
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[写作要点]
本文属于命题作文。围绕你做了什么事情,你是如何做那件事情的,你做完那件事情后的感受展开来写。由于要求写自己的事情,所以应该使用第一人称。要求描述一件你完成的事情,应该使用一般过去时。
[参考范文]
I did it!
How nervous I was when I was told to give a speech!It was my first speech and I didn't know what to do.
My teacher encouraged me and gave me some useful advice. After I chose a topic I liked best, I watched videos about how to be a good speaker and I learnt a lot of skills. Then I practiced and practiced. Finally, the big day came.
I did it!!!Everyone loved my speech. I was so proud of myself.
精彩语句
1.精美词汇:give a speech作一次演讲;encourage v.鼓励。2.出彩结构:How nervous I was when I was told to give a speech!(感叹句、时间状语从句和被动语态)。Writing 9(2017河北)
英语课上,同学们正在准备举行以“真实的自我”为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲词,向同学们介绍一下自己。
提示:(1)What are your strong points?
(2)How do you improve yourself?
(3)What is your dream for the future?
要求:(1)演讲词须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)演讲词中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone!
I'm Li Hua and I'm very happy to stand here to talk about myself.????
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[写作要点]
1.人称:第一人称。
2.时态:一般现在时、一般将来时。
3.要点:(1)你的优点是什么?(2)你怎样提高你自己?(3)你未来的梦想是什么?
[参考范文]
Hello, everyone!
I'm Li Hua and I'm very happy to stand here to talk about myself. I'm a kind and helpful person. I'm always ready to help others when they're in trouble. I can sing and dance so well that I often give performances at our school party.
When I think back what I've done before, I should help my parents do more housework. Doing housework is good for my future life.
As for my dream, I want to be a teacher. I'll make friends with my kids. I want to teach them everything I know!Thanks for your attention!Writing 10(2016山西)
　　向他人表达善意并帮助他人体现了一个人良好的品格。当你向别人表达善意并给他人提供帮助时,你希望得到回报(repay)吗?针对这一话题,九年级六班的同学们展开了辩论。
假设你是正方或反方的一员,请围绕你的观点,结合自己的亲身经历,说出2至条理由来说服同学们(只需选择一方观点表达即可)。
?要求:1.词数不少于80;
2.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
When I show kindness and help others,??????? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? ? ?
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[写作要点]
1.本文是夹叙夹议的文章。主体时态是一般现在时和一般过去时。
2.内容要点:帮助别人的好处;自己帮助别人的经历;总结。
[参考范文]
When I show kindness and help others, I never expect them to repay me. In my view, helping others gives me a strong feeling of being needed and brings me happiness. On the other hand, everyone may get into trouble and need help, too.
Several days ago, while I was having a walk in the park, I found a little boy crying. Then I asked him what was the matter, and he told me he couldn't find his mom. Luckily, he remembered his mother's phone number. So I called her immediately. Ten minutes later, the boy saw his mom and became excited. His mom was so thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift, but I refused. At that time, I felt quite happy because I did something really good.All in all, the world needs love and we should be ready to help others without expecting any repay. If you want-ed repay, a “Thanks”would be enough.Writing 11(2015北京)
根据中文和英文提示,用英文写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的邮件。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你叫李华,你们学校为配合北京申办冬奥会,倡导人人都做文明中学生。请你根据以下提示,给你的英国笔友Peter写一封邮件,告诉他你认为做个文明中学生什么是重要的,你通常是怎么做的,以及你的感受。
提示词语:think,smile,respect,say hello to,wait in line,on time,happyDear Peter,
How is it going?At my school we're talking about what we should do to be a good student.
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Anything new at your school?
Yours,
Li Hua答案
[写作要点]
1.本文的话题是校园生活,学生比较熟悉。写作内容充分体现了社会主义核心价值观——文明、和谐。主体时态是一般现在时。
2.内容要点:
1) 提出自己的观点,做文明中学生什么样的品德行为最为重要。(一般现在时)
2) 说出自己平时的礼貌行为。(一般现在时)
3) 表达自己对做文明中学生,具有良好品德的感受。(一般现在时)
3.词句亮点:
1)I think it is important to be polite to others.本句不仅用宾语从句丰富了句式而且含有it is+adj.+to do sth.句型。
2)I feel happy for doing all these because it is right for a student to do so.本句含有because引导的原因状语从句,丰富了句式,并且feel+adj.+for doing sth.与it is right for a student to do so句型的使用,使语言更加多彩。[参考范文]
Dear Peter,
How is it going?At my school we're talking about what we should do to be a good student.I think it is important to be polite to others.I say hello to my teachers and classmates.I smile at everyone I talk to.Following rules is al-so important.I wait in line at the bus stop and go to school on time.I feel happy for doing all these because it is right for a student to do so.
Anything new at your school?
Yours,
Li HuaWriting 12(2015浙江杭州)
根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。内容须包括:对下表中关于这两个城市(City A和City B)的全部信息进行比较,分析利弊,确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地。In my opinion,　　　　　????is the better place to spend my summer holiday.????
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[写作要点]
1.本文属于说明性的文章,主体时态为一般现在时。
2.内容要点:①确定暑假旅游的目的地;②比较两个城市的信息,分析利弊。
3.参考词汇:flying,temperature,hotel,things to do,food
[参考范文]
①In my opinion,City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday.Although the temperature there is high-er,the hotel is less comfortable,and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B,I still choose City A.The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A.I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities.Besides,it takes us only two hours to fly there,which saves us a lot of time.I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.
②In my opinion,City B is the better place to spend my summer holiday.Although it takes me two more hours to fly there on an airplane,and I don't have many things to do,I still choose City B.The most important reason is that City B has better weather,not too hot or too cold.Besides,the hotel there is more comfortable and the food is more delicious than that in City A.All these make my holiday more relaxing.I hope the coming summer holiday will be an unforgettable experience.Writing 1(2019重庆)
　　你正在组织一项暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动。作为发起人,请你写一篇发言稿,在你校“英语时光”广播中号召更多的同学参加。
要求:
1.80—120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
1.活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学……);
2.活动构想(时间、地点、内容……);
3.……
Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a Kid in the Mountains”.
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Thank you!答案
[写作要点]
1.体裁:应用文。
2.人称:主体人称为第一人称和第三人称。
3.时态:以一般现在时态为主。
4.要点:
1)活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学……);
2)活动构想(时间、地点、内容……);
3)……
[参考范文]
Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a Kid in the Mountains”. It will provide us with a meaningful week staying with the students in the mountains.
As many of their parents leave for the city development, these students might feel lonely and some may even find it hard to go on studying. So we can bring them some school things like books and pens for their study, and prepare some interesting stories to share. In the daytime, we can go hiking and do some teamwork. In the evening, we can do such activities as popular games and group dance around the fire.
Isn't that exciting? Come and join us. Let's be “a kid in the mountains”. I believe it will bring sunshine to the mountains as well as more confidence to us.
Thank you!
精彩语句
1.精美词汇:meaningful adj.有意义的;development n.发展;prepare v.准备;share v.分享;as well as也,和……一样
2.出彩结构:I believe it will bring sunshine to the mountains as well as more confidence to us. (I believe (that)...结构;as well as连接两个并列成分)Writing 2(2019江苏南京)
　　假如你是李华,在网上看到英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件(app)征集网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息,用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。
IDEAS NEEDED
Britech is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing. The app is to help learners explore ideas, organize them and write them down. Your ideas are needed!
Here's what to do:
Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative!
Please let us know:
●What's the name of the app?
●What problem does the app solve?
●What does the app do?
Contact us at appdesign@Britech.com注意:
1.内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。
2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua答案
[写作要点]
1.体裁:本文是应用文中的回信类作文。
2.人称:第一人称等。
3.时态:主体时态为一般现在时。
4.确定要点:
1)这个app的名称;
2)这个app解决什么问题;
3)这个app应有的具体功能。
[参考范文]
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for designing an app for English writing. I'd like to share my ideas here. Could its name be “Writing Made Easy”?Many of us have difficulty in writing. We don't know how to organize ideas, use proper words, and so on. I hope it can solve these problems.
Here is my advice on what the app does. First, it should provide some reading materials. The more we read, the better we write. Second, the app should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills. Third, there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions.
I hope my advice is worth taking.
Yours,
Li Hua
精彩语句
1.精美词汇:have difficulty in doing sth.做某事有困难;and so on等等;correct mistakes纠错;offer suggestions提供建议
2.出彩结构:①The more we read, the better we write.(本句用了“the+比较级,the+比较级”结构,表示“越……,就越 ……”)②Second, the app should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills. (so that引导目的状语从句)
③Third, there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions. (who引导定语从句,修饰先行词an e-teacher)Writing 3(2019黑龙江齐齐哈尔,B)
初中生活,精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐,展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待,请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟。
提示:1.初中阶段你有哪些收获;
2.初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望;
3.你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。
要求:1.80—100词,首句已给出,不计入总词数;
2.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达准确,逻辑清晰。
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end.????
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答案
[写作要点]
　　1.特别注意时态。本篇文章既回忆过去,又展望未来,所以既要用到一般过去时、现在完成时,又要用到一般将来时态。
2.写作要点分解:(1)收获;(2)遗憾或未实现的愿望;(3)计划或打算。
3.注意行文连贯,表达清晰,语法正确。
[参考范文]
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high school, I've gained confi-dence and happiness. With the help of our teachers, I've learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I've also made some good friends.
However, there is still something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my schoolwork, I couldn't keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt

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