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作文题目：
你是李华，汶川高三的学生，你的笔友刘欢曾在汶川大地震中在你们学校做过自愿者，一直心系汶川，向你打听汶川震后你们学校这些年的变化。请根据以下图片提示，以“Great Changes”为主要内容，回复他。 词数：100左右
1. 学校灾后的变化，如教学与活动场所，以及师生精神面貌等；2. 发生变化的原因；3. 你的感想。

优秀段1：Thanks to the volunteers like you who got involved in the reconstruction, our school is back on the right track now. Certainly, we also credit the government with taking immediate action. Besides, but for the help from our society, we would not hear the laughter in our school again.

优秀段2 When it comes to the reasons why such changes have happened, it is the guidance and leadership of Communist Party, the support of the government, the kindness and care of the entire society, and the perseverance of our people that make our reconstruction a reality. Besides, we wouldn’t have made it without your help, so your participation in the voluntary work has always been highly appreciated.

优秀段3......Thanks to you as well as other warm-hearted volunteers, we were raised up again from the depths of despair and darkness while our homes were rebuilt with the help of our government.




优秀学生作文1：
Hearing that you want to know the great changes over the ten years in Wenchuan after the earthquake in 2008. I am writing to tell you something that you expect.
There have been great changes that have taken place in the school over the past ten years. On May 12,2008, a severe earthquake destroyed almost everything in the school, leaving badly-damaged buildings. It is now, however, taking on a new look. Tall buildings have been put up, including classroom and laboratory buildings, There is also newly-built standard playground. In the new environment, teachers and students are living happily and working hard. It is really amazing that the once-ruined place has now been turned into a beautiful school, full of life
Obviously, without the help of the whole society, there would be no new school today. It is love and concern that have brought about the great changes. Many hands make light work. We can work wonders if we unite as a family, caring for each other and helping those in need. Union is strength. That year you offered so much help to our school. I sincerely invite you to come here again and experienced the great changes with us .

优秀学生作文2：
Knowing that you were a volunteer helping our school after Wenchuan earthquake and are concerned about our reconstruction, I am more than willing to tell you that great changes have taken place.
New teaching buildings have been built in our school where only ruins could be seen after the terrible disaster. What’s worth mentioning is that not only are there brand new classrooms with advanced equipment, but also a playground with athletic facilities. It’s pleasant to see students and teachers playing basketball actively and energetically there.
Tough as it was, volunteers full of kindness and warmth gathered in our school to make joint efforts to rebuild our school. Donations were collected nationwide and even worldwide, which contributed to the development of our school.
I appreciate greatly the help from volunteers, without which, our school would not have recovered so fast. What’s more, I learned to be positive and courageous when facing difficulties. Best wishes!

优秀学生作文3：
Once lying in ruins, our school takes on a brand new look now. New teaching buildings and a playground fully equipped with various facilities have been built, with which, we don’t have to carry on lessons inside the unstable temporary tents any longer. The amazing changes are attributed to the government who took immediate action, the food and supplies we received from our society, and warm-hearted people like you who volunteered to assist us at the scene. It was concern and love that turned the deep sorrow into inner strength.
The earthquake didn’t make us in despair, but strengthened our mind. Having experienced these changes not only promotes our growth psychologically, but also reminds us that we should show gratitude to people who once reached out their hands to us. I will bear those kindness in mind and help people in need in return.


优秀学生作文4：
It's so warm-hearted of you to be concerned about our school when so many great changes have taken place since the earthquake, I am writing to tell you something about my current school life.
Though destroyed 11 years ago, the teaching buildings were swiftly rebuilt, located in the center of the town. Surprisingly, the playground and park nearby are equipped with all sorts of exercise equipment respectively. In the meantime, a large number of excellent teachers came as volunteers, motivating us to study harder and harder. Confidence can be seen everywhere, and our life has begun again.
Personally, not only our prosperous country, but also every ordinary person's blood, sweat, tears and hard work account for these exciting changes. Believing in the strength of determination and hope, people in Wenchuan did it.
? The scary earthquake has gone, but the remains always remind me of the disaster. I think more significance should be attached to education in order to decrease the harm of natural disasters. Also we ought to remain hopeful and dare to face hardship.
Looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes.

优秀学生作文5：
You are so warm-hearted and considerate that our new life still concerns you. Grateful for your care, I am more than delighted to tell you the great changes I have witnessed.
Since the destructive earthquake, teachers across the country have reached out their helping hands without hesitation so as to ensure we were to be educated properly. Apart from it, the government has assisted us with reestablishing our schools. What has also been renewed is our spirits. We put ourselves back on our feet and are determined to move on.
We did need to adjust our emotions and attitudes to a brand new life, as each of us has got through the catastrophe and none wants to suffer from that again. “It’ no use crying over spilt milk.” as the saying goes. It’s not time for sadness but that for welcoming a new start and that’s why everyone united for a better life.
Real bonds can only be revealed while in difficulties, so we should feel grateful for what people from all walks of life have provided for us.

优秀学生作文6：
With your sincere consideration about my school, I’m more than delighted to help you have a concept of the great changes over these years.
Admittedly, the earthquake had not only turned everything in ruins, but also leaded to overwhelming damages. However, guided by the government, our school recovered incredibly swiftly from the disaster and became even better than before. Everything in sight turned up with a new look: the classroom buildings were towering high with a diversity of equipment, as a result of which, the spirits of students and teachers were cheered up. It was the power of belief and will of survival that brought us back to life. Hadn’t we gathered together to help with the rescue work, our school wouldn’t have been rebuilt so perfectly. From the bottom of my heart, the earthquake brought something precious to me which I would cherish forever. Whenever I’m through trials and tribulations, there is a firm belief at heart that motivates me to go ahead fearlessly.
Last but not least, I’d like to convey my appreciation in good faith for your volunteer work.

优秀学生作文7：
Dear Liu Huan,
How are you recently? Great changes have taken place these years on the basis of the voluntary devotion from all walks of life, which left a deep impression on me.
To show you our brand-new rebuilt school, several main changes will be introduced to you. Initially, near the river stands the main teaching building, across from which is our large canteen. What may surprise you is that a brand-new soccer field is going to be completed this month, allowing students to run and laugh on the grassy land, which will add enormous lively atmosphere to our school.
Regarding these changes, we students tend to owe them to the selfless heroes like you. Had it not been for you, our road back to the happy lives would have been more difficult and we would not recover from the pain of losing family and friends in such a short time.
Standing at the turning point of my life, I come to realize that your generous help is of great significance to us, so I won’t hesitate to lend a hand as long as it can do good to others.

优秀学生作文8：
Hearing that you pay loads of attention to Wenchuan these years, I’m very delighted to tell you that Wenchuan has gradually recovered from that horrible earthquake.
To our joy, with enough excellent facilities, the newly-built school provides a great study environment for us, which benefits us a lot. For instance, the brand-new playground and covered stadium not only guarantee our security, but also make us exercise more comfortably. What’s more, what amazes me most is that the teaching quality and our minds have changed a lot, which helps to rebuild our lives and go back to the normal track.
In my perspective, the reasons for the changes above are the hard work of our strong-willed Wenchuan citizens, kindness of government and all the Chinese who lend a hand to us.
In a word, deeply moved, I sincerely hope that Wenchuan can be better and better in the near future. And no matter what happens, we should give thanks in all circumstances.
























































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