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Unit4 如何写以“今昔变化”为话题的文章
【例文1】
我们的成长发生了很大的变化，请你以“How I've changed!”为题根据下面的提示，讲述自己这些年的变化，并且讲述自己认为的最大变化以及原因。
In?the?past Now
thin;short strong;tall
shy outgoing
stay?at?home?alone stay?with?friends
little?communication?with?others

一．审题
体裁 记叙文
话题 以“成长变化”为话题
时态 一般过去时、现在时
人称 第一人称
二．文章布局
开头:直接引出主题 “My life has changed a lot in the last few years...”引出话题

正文：简述变化和原因 I used to...I was....,but now I... The biggest change in my life was....
结尾：表达感受 I am happy about my changes.
3．遣词造句
①词汇库
幽默的humorous；沉默的silent；外向的outgoing；有用的helpful；害羞shyness；活跃的active；严肃的serious；谨慎的careful；意识realize；受欢迎的popular
②短语箱
曾经used to；习惯...be used to；在过去的几年in the last few years；交流have a communication with；闲逛hang out with；花时间做...spend time doing;应对deal with；独处stay alone；感到孤独feel lonely；与...不同be different from；受欢迎的be popular with
③链接句型
1. I used to be afraid of the dark.
2. Now she’s not shy anymore and loves singing in front of crowds.
3. Li Wen was shy and was not able to make friends quickly in school.
4. Li Wen’s parents had much more communication than they used to.
5. I am much happier now and I work even harder than I used to.
6. My life has changed a lot in the last past years.
7. This is the most important change because ...
四．作文模板
My life has changed a lot in the last past years. I used to______________. I was__________________.Now I'm______________.
The biggest change in my life was_______________.This is the most important change because_____________.
I have realized that ________________________. I am happy about my changes.
五．参考范文
How I've Changed
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be very thin and short,but now I am strong and tall. I used to be shy and like staying at home alone. I used to have little communication with my parents and others. Now, I am much more outgoing than before. I often hang out with my friends on weekends. I'm used to spending time with them and I'm more popular at school than before.
The biggest change in my life was my character.This is the most important change because I have more friends now and I don't feel lonely anymore. I am happy about my changes.
【例文2】
近些年，随着经济的发展，我们的家乡发生了很大的变化。请根据下面的提示，写一篇“Changes in My Hometown”的英语短文，介绍你家乡发生的变化。
过去 现在
旧房子 高楼
河水肮脏 河水清澈
步行、骑自行车上班 乘公交车、开小汽车上班
人们没时间锻炼 人们经常锻炼身体
一．审题
体裁 记叙文
话题 以“家乡变化”为话题
时态 一般过去时、现在时
人称 第三人称
2．文章布局
开头:引入主题 “My hometown has changed a lot in the last few years....”引出话题

正文：具体变化 tall buildings;clean water;wider roads;go to work by bus or by car

结尾：表达感受 I'm so happy to see great changes in my hometown.
3．作文模板
My hometown has changed a lot in the last few years./ In recent years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, the houses were_____________. And the rivers used to be___________.There was/were_______________. People used to_____________. However, thing are different now. ___________________________________________________________________________________________.
I'm so happy to see the great changes in my hometown. I hope people will live a happier life.
四．优秀范文
My hometown has changed a lot in the last few years. In the past, the houses were very old and the rivers used to be dirty. There was so much litter in the river. People used to walk or ride bikes to work and they had no time for sports . However, thing are different now. People live in tall buildings. The river is so clean that many people swim in it. People take a car or a bus to work and they spend more time doing exercise to keep fit.
I'm so happy to see the great changes in my hometown. I hope people will live a happier life.
课后练习1
长大意味着什么？是关心、帮助同学，体贴父母、理解父母，还是感恩、回报亲朋好友。请以“I am no longer a child ”为题，讲述你在学习或生活上经历的一件事情，表达你对成长的理解。
提示：
1.写出你这几年的变化
2.生活上或学习上的一件事情来表达你的成长
【参考范文】
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be weak and short,but now, I am strong and as tall as my father. I am outgoing and popular now, but I used to be shy and always stay at home.The biggest change in my life was that I learned to care about others.
This is the most important change because I am no longer a child. It was a Wednesday evening. When I arrived home, no one was in,so I decided to cook the meal for my parents. They came back and they both said the meal was delicious. At this moment, I realized I could do some chores and take care of parents.
I am happy that I have grown up.
课后练习2
学校最近开展了“文明活动月”的实践活动。通过这次活动，同学们的变化很大，尤其是陈磊同学。请根据表格内容写一篇有关陈磊的变化的作文。
In?the?past Now
be?late?for?school never?late
fight?with?sb. get?on?well?with?sb.?
talk?in?class listen?to?the?teacher
play?computer?games do?homework
【参考范文】
It seems that Chen Lei has Changed a lot in the past few days. He used to be late for school, but now he is never late for school. In class, he used to talk with other students, but now he listens to the teachers carefully. After class, he does his homework, but in the past he used to play computer games. Another great thing is that he gets on well with his classmates now, but he used to fight with them.
We are glad that Chen Lei had made great progress.

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