高考英语书面表达作文复习课—润色作文 课件(19张PPT)

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高考英语书面表达作文复习课—润色作文 课件(19张PPT)

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(共19张PPT)
Dear
Leslie,
(2019年全国I卷)
How
are
you?
Glad
to
see
you
have
made
some
progress
in
Chinese
learning
and
I’m
writing
to
tell
you
something
about
our
next
lesson.
The
lesson
will
be
given
from
3
pm
to
5
pm
on
the
afternoon
of
next
Tuesday
in
the
classroom
502.
In
the
class,
you
will
mainly
learn
Tang
poetry,
which
reflects
traditional
Chinese
culture
and
is
deeply
loved
by
Chinese.
You
can
feel
the
beauty
of
Chinese
by
learning
Tang
Poetry.
You’d
better
make
full
preparations
before
class
and
have
a
brief
understanding
of
the
history
of
Tang
Dynasty,
which
makes
it
easy
for
you
to
go
through
the
class.
If
there
is
anything
that
I
can
help
you,
please
don’t
hesitate
to
tell
me.
Looking
forward
to
meeting
you.
Yours
sincerely,
Dear
Leslie,
How
are
you?
Glad
to
see
you
have
made
some
progress
in
Chinese
learning
and
I’m
writing
to
tell
you
something
about
our
next
lesson.
The
lesson
will
be
given
from
3
pm
to
5
pm
on
the
afternoon
of
next
Tuesday
in
the
classroom
502.
In
the
class,
you
will
mainly
learn
Tang
poetry,
which
reflects
traditional
Chinese
culture
and
is
deeply
loved
by
Chinese.
You
can
feel
the
beauty
of
Chinese
by
learning
Tang
Poetry.
You’d
better
make
full
preparations
before
class
and
have
a
brief
understanding
of
the
history
of
Tang
Dynasty,
which
makes
it
easy
for
you
to
go
through
the
class.
If
there
is
anything
that
I
can
help
you,
please
don’t
hesitate
to
tell
me.
Looking
forward
to
meeting
you.
Yours
sincerely,
LiHua
亮点:行文流畅,过渡自然,较好地使用定语从句,被动句和高级短语,语言地道。
Writing
skills
for
high
marks
How
to
beautify
your
article
书面表达复习专题
1.
将单个动词转换为带其名词的短语
prepare
for——
apologize——
affect——
understand——
considerate
——
be
helpful
——
make
an
apology
have
an
effect
on
be
+adj.=be
+of
+n.
make
(full)
preparations
for
have
a
better
understanding
of
take…
into
consideration
be
of
great
help
怎样使词汇高级化
词汇高级化
2.
尽量使用高级词汇
delighted
be
fond
of
show
great
interest
in
participate
in
have
a
good
command
of
English
普通词汇
高级词汇
高兴
happy
喜欢
like
参加
join
in
感兴趣
be
interested
in
擅长,精通
be
good
at
怎样使句式
丰富多彩
假定你是李华,你的英国网友Peter上周在邮件中提到想阅读中国著名的小说,就此请你用英语给他写封回信。内容包括:
1.推荐一本小说;2.?此书内容简介;3.给出阅读建议。
You
want
to
read
some
Chinese
novels.
I
am
writing
to
recommend
a
famous
novel.
Its
name
is
A
Dream
of
Red
Mansions
Knowing
that
you
want
to
read
some
Chinese
novels,
I
am
writing
to
recommend
a
famous
novel,
whose
name
is
A
Dream
of
Red
Mansions
.
the
name
of
which
技巧点拨:把简单句合并成含有定语从句的复合句
定语从句强化练习
I’d
like
to
invite
you
to
my
hometown.
You
can
taste
different
kinds
of
tea.
2.
The
owner
of
the
passport
is
Stephen.
He
comes
from
England.
3.You
had
better
take
proper
exercise
.
It
will
help
you
keep
healthy
and
energetic.
I’d
like
to
invite
you
to
my
hometown
where
You
can
taste
different
kinds
of
tea.
who
,which
Knowing
that
you
want
to
read
some
Chinese
novels,
I
am
writing
to
recommend
a
famous
novel,
________
(name)
A
Dream
of
Red
Mansions
.
name
v.
命名,叫
同义词:
entitle
named
I’m
writing
to
invite
you
to
attend
the
Chinese
paper-cutting
art
exhibition
_____
(hold)
in
the
City
Museum
from
2pm
to
5pm
on
June
1st.
(用非谓语动词润色)
技巧点拨:使用非谓语动词使表达更简洁更高级(to
do
doing
done)
Knowing
held/to
be
held
(广州二模)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Alethea将到中国学习汉语,她来信请你帮忙给她起一个适合她的中文名字,请你给她写一封回信,提出建议并说明理由。
Alethea
的含义是真实,诚实。
I
think
the
name
“艾乐真”
is
suitable
for
you.It
is
easy
for
you
and
your
friend
to
remember.
It
has
special
meanings.
It
is
not
only
easy
for
you
and
your
friend
to
remember
but
also
has
special
meanings.
技巧点拨:使用倒装句增强句子表现力,使句式丰富。
Not
only
is
it
easy
for
you
and
your
friend
to
remember
but
also
has
special
meanings.
倒装句强化练习
1.
You
can
solve
the
problem
in
this
way.
Only
in
this
way______
______
solve
the
problem.
2.This
newspaper
not
only
covers
news
from
home
and
abroad,
but
also
introduce
stories
of
successful
men.
Not
only
_____this
newspaper
______news
from
home
and
abroad,
but
also
introduce
stories
of
successful
men.
can
you
cover
does
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Jack正在为将来的考试焦虑不已,严重影响了生活和学习,为此写信向你求助。请根据以下要点,用英语给他回一封信。
1、制定复习计划,树立信心。
2、坚持锻炼身体。
3
、保持良好睡眠。
First
,
make
careful
plans
before
exams.
……
Second,
take
proper
exercise
regularly.
It
will
help
you
keep
healthy
and
energetic
……Last
but
not
least,
don’t
stay
up
late…….
First,
You
are
supposed
to
make
careful
plans
before
exams.
Second,
take
proper
exercise
regularly,
which
will
help
you
keep
healthy
and
energetic.
Last
but
not
least,
it
would
be
a
good
idea
not
to
stay
up
late
.
技巧点拨:同一篇文章,使用同一种句式,使文章呆板,单调。尽量使句型有变化。
2017全国II卷
书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
审题
体裁
人称
时态
结构(开头,
中间,结尾)
Paper-cutting
is
a
traditional
art
form
in
China
which
has
a
history
of
more
than
1,500
years.
People
often
beautify
their
home
with
paper-cutting
during
festivals
and
weddings.
In
this
exhibition,
not
only
can
you
appreciate
paper-cutting
with
all
kinds
of
patterns
but
can
also
make
a
paper-cutting
by
yourself.
In
addition,
there
are
famous
artists
who
will
perform
how
to
cut
paper
on
the
spot
.
It’s
a
good
chance
for
you
to
have
a
better
understanding
of
Chinese
traditional
culture.
?
Dear
Henry,
I‘m
glad
to
tell
you
there
will
be
a
Chinese
paper-cutting
exhibition
to
be
held
in
the
city
museum
next
week.
I
sincerely
hope
you
can
set
aside
some
time
for
the
art
feast.
高级句型
各种复合句(尤其是定从)
倒装句
强调句型
非谓语动词
It
句型
被动句
who
which
whose
that
when
where
why
Not
only…but
also…
Only+状语……
It’s
……that……
to
do
doing
done
It
is
+adj/n.
to
do
sth
be
done
……
提高作文档次的建议
1.
背诵
背诵一些经典的范文达到“滚瓜烂熟、脱口而出、多多益善”。文章里的高分佳句,可以选择性的熟记加之模仿,灵活运用到写作中去。
2.
默写
背熟后把书合上,把这篇文章默写下来。默写后,做一个工作:仔细对比原文发现写作弱点,你会发现你默写的文章和原文会有一些出入。包括拼写、语法、标点,这种错误就是你写作的弱点,把这些错误用红笔标出来。发现自己的错误及时更正,然后自我总结,以免下次再犯。
3.
模仿写作
背完之后还是要动笔写!“好记性不如烂笔头”,可以拿考题多加练习。可以找有范文的题目进行练习,因为这样方便写完后能与范文进行对比。模仿写作就是仿写你背过的文章再写出一篇新文章。在背完一篇文章后,要想想这篇文章有什么精彩的词组、词汇和句型可以使用。然后换一个话题,把这篇作文用一下,用里面词汇、词组和句型去构思另一篇文章。?
Homework
:
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你
咨询如何
才能学好中文,请根据下列要点回信。
要点:
1.参加中文学习班;
2.看中文书刊、电视;
3.学唱中文歌曲。
4.交中国朋友。
注意:1.词数:100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使
行文连贯;3.开头语已经为你写好。
Dear
Peter,
I'm
glad
to
receive
your
letter
asking
for
my
advice
and
how
to
learn
Chinese
well.
Homework:
beautify
the
articles
and
add
some
linking
words
Here
are
a
few
suggestions.
Take
a
Chinese
course.
You'll
be
able
to
learn
from
the
teachers
and
practice
with
your
fellow
students.
Watch
TV
and
read
books,
newspapers,
and
magazines
in
Chinese
whenever
you
are
free.
Learn
and
sing
Chinese
songs.
You'll
learn
and
remember
Chinese
words
more
easily.
Make
more
Chinese
friends.
They
will
tell
you
a
lot
about
China
and
help
you
learn
Chinese.
Dear
Peter,
I'm
glad
to
receive
your
letter
askin
for
my
advice
and
how
to
learn
Chinese
well.
Here
are
a
few
suggestions.
First,
it
is
important
to
take
a
Chinese
course,as
you'll
be
able
to
learn
from
the
teachers
and
practice
with
your
fellow
students.
(补充原因)Then,
it
also
helps
to
watch
TV
and
read
books,
newspapers,
and
magazines
in
Chinese
whenever
possible(补充时间).
Besides,
it
should
be
a
good
idea
to
learn
and
sing
Chinese
songs,because
by
doing
so
you'll
learn
and
remember
Chinese
words
more
easily(结果).
In
addition,
you
can
also
make
more
Chinese
friends,who
will
tell
you
a
lot
about
China
and
help
you
learn
Chinese.(内容具体化)
Try
writing
to
me
in
Chinese
next
time.
Best
wishes
Li
Hua

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