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(共25张PPT)概要写作精讲3高考英语Summarywritingskills1.主位描述2.要点完整3.逻辑清晰概要写作表达技巧(内容)Herfirstdelightwasgoingtothetower.ItwasbuiltlongagobytheNormaninvadersofAD1066.Thissolidstone,squaretowerhadremainedstandingforonethousandyears.Althoughthebuildinghadexpandedaroundit,itremainedpartofaroyalpalaceandprisoncombined.Summarywritingskills同义替换法(近义词、反义词、词性转换等)句式转换法(改变主语、运用非谓语动词短语、with结构、运用同位语等)压缩长句法(笼统代替具体,运用并列结构等)几种概要写作的表达技巧(语言)Dirtontheskincouldpreventpeoplefromgettingsick.Dirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease.Dirtontheskinwasabarrieragainstoutsidedisease.1.同义替换Bakerconcludesthatpeopledonothavetheabilitytosensewhentheyarebeingstaredat.Baker'sconclusionisthatpeoplearenotcapableoffeelingother'sobservation.1.同义替换-改变词性Ifyoufailtopassthedrugtest,wewillhavetodismissyoufromyourjob.Failuretopassthedrugtestwillresultinyourjobdismissal.Yourskinwillbeburntifyouareexposedtothesuntoolong.Longexposuretothesunwillharmyourskin.Therearemanypeoplewhoareshy.Shynessiscommon.1.同义替换-改变词性:使用抽象名词Unlikebonyfish,sharkshavenobones;theirskeletonismadeofcartilage(软骨)whichisnotashardasbone.Therearemanydifferentspeciesofsharksthatrangefromthesizeofaperson'shandtobiggerthanabus.Thewhalesharkisthelargestintheworld;thebaskingwhaleisthesecondlargestfish.Fully-grownsharksrangeinsizefrom7incheslong,upto50feetlong.Mostsharksareintermediateinsize,andareaboutthesamesizeaspeople,5-7feetlong.Halfofthesharkspeciesareunder39incheslong.Withonlycartilagemakinguptheirskeleton,sharkscomeinvarioussizes,rangingfrom7incheslongto50feetlong.2.改变句式(运用非谓语动词短语及with结构)Thepersonatarestaurantwhotalksonthephonethroughanentiremeal,ignoringhiskidsaroundthetable;thewomanwhotalksonthephoneinthecar,ignoringherhusband;theteenwhotextsmessagesallthewayhomefromschool,avoidingcontactwithkidsallaroundhim.2.改变句式(更换主语)请用一句话来概括下面这段文字(你能写出几种表达法?)1.Cellphonesrobusofourqualitytimewithfamilymembersandfriendsalike.2.Duetocellphoneaddiction,kids,couplesandfriendslackqualitytimeandcompanyfromparents,spousesandfellows.3.Withcellphonedependencedisease,peopletendtogivetheirattentiontocellphonesratherthantheirbelovedones.4.Itiseasierforpeopleaddictedtocellphonestoneglect/overlooktheirfamilymembersandfriends.2.改变句式(更换主语)ChristmasisthedaytocelebratethebirthofJesus.Itisawesternpublicholidayandiscelebratedwithreligiousservices.Itis,however,becomingaphenomenallypopularholidaybothtotheyoungandbusinessmeninChina.Christmas,awesternreligiousholiday,isnowprevalentamongChineseyoungpeopleandbusinessmen.3.改变句式(同位语结构)Christmas的同位语4.压缩长句a.删除细节及重复b.减少例子c.简化描述d.整合信息f.用单词替换短语词组,名词性短语代替从句、非谓语动词结构、with结构、同位语结构等Therearesomepeople,calledshopaholics,whocan'tcontroltheirdesiretospendmoneyandbuythings.Thiskindofaddictivebehaviorcanleadtolargefinancialproblems,familyconflict,anddeepunhappiness.1.Shopaholicscanbringthemselvesseveretroubles.2.Shopaholicscanfindthemselvesinatroubledsituation.4.压缩长句:从具体到笼统Ienjoybeingwithfriendsfortheycanoffermeexcitement,freshideas,comfortandfreefromdoredom.4.压缩长句:名词或动词(并列结构)代替句子Iprefertospendmostofmytimewithmyfriends,becausefriendsofferexcitementandnewideas,theycancomfortmewhensomethingbadhappens,andspendingtoomuchtimebymyselfcanbeboring.Peoplewithdepressionareoftenveryafraidoftalkingtosomeoneexcepttheirdoctors.Theycaneasilybeashamedoftheirconditionandconsequentlytheytrytohideit.Youshouldn'tbesurprisedifadepressedfriendwon'topenuptoyou.However,whenheorshedoes,youshouldletthewordsflow.Don'tbejudgmentalandneverinterrupt!Listeningisnotaneasyskill,asit'slikelythatyoucan'thelpvoicingyouropinion.Depressedpeopletendtokeepsilent.However,oncetheyspeaktoyou,beagoodlistener.4.压缩长句:整合信息一篇好的概要所具备的语言表达特点:使用抽象名词使用非谓语动词结构使用with结构使用名词、动词短语的并列结构使用同位语结构使用从句或其它特殊句型使用高级的词汇使用恰当的连接副词1.使用抽象名词Englishconversationsoftenstartwiththeweather,aculturalnormthatfewcommentatorstrulyunderstand.(要点1)OnetypicalmisconceptionisthattheEnglishenthusiasmfortheweatherisridiculousasitistooboring.(要点2)AnotheristhatthecharmofEnglishweatherliesinitschangeability.(要点3)Actually,theEnglishweather-speakisnotabouttheweather,butawaytomakeaconversation,amethodofsocializing.Theideaof“meltingpot”,initiatedfromaFrenchman,describesAmericaasacreationofmixedracesfromworldwide.ItgotwideacceptanceamongAmericanswhilerejectedbysomeimmigrantsfearinglosingtheirowncultures.Actually,recentimmigrantsstickingtotheirowncultures,arechangingAmerica,andAmericansareconcernedabouttheseparationofthenation.Americaisnowcomparedtoasaladbowl,meaningdifferentgroups,aspartofthiscountry,stillkeeptheirownculturesandlanguages.2.V-ing/V-ed表伴随、结果、原因等China'secommercemarketisgrowingtobethelargestworldwide,withanexpandingonline-shoppingpopulationandincreasingonlinespending.Thegrowthisduetomultiplefactors:higherfamilyincomes,easierInternetaccessandbettershoppingservices.Basically,Chinesefavoronlineshoppingforitswiderchoices,morereasonablepricesandconvenience.Nevertheless,ecommerceinChinaisstilldevelopingatitsearlystage.3.使用With结构4.(名词/动词短语)并列结构Chocolatecomesfromtheseedsofthecacaotree,anativeplantoftheAmazonregionofSouthAmerica.AncientAmericanshadalongtraditionofdrinkingchocolate,attachingaculturalandmedicinalsignificancetoit.AfterbeingdiscoveredbyColumbus,chocolatebegantobespreadacrossEuropeandtherestoftheworld.Withthedemandforchocolategrowingfast,cultivationstartedinAfrica,whichhasnowbecomethelargestchocolateproducerworldwide.5.使用同位语结构6.使用定语从句Releasingheliumballoonsdamagestheenvironment.Theyeventuallyfalldownontheearthandposeathreattoanimals.Besides,althoughthey'retechnicallybiodegradable,ittakestime,whichmeanstheywillstayasgarbageontheplanetforalongtime.Currentlyheliumballoonreleasingisrestrictedorbannedinsomeareas,buttoreallytacklethisproblemrequiresfurtherandgreatereffortsonaglobalscale.7.使用高层次词汇或词组Anewresearchshowsthatstudentstrainoftencoexistswithteacherexhaustion.Students,whofindtheirrequirementsunsatisfiedasaresultofteachers'low-levelmanagementoverclass,mayfeeloverwhelminglystressed.Conversely,teachers,whoencountergreatteachingchallengefromstudents,tendtobeburnedout.Therefore,moresufficientresourcesandsupportforteachersshouldbeguaranteed,orstudentsarelikelytoberuined.8.使用合适的连接副词用于概要写作衔接的连接词:but,and,also,then,besides,thus,therefore,yet,however,additionally,accordingly,moreover,meanwhile,for,nevertheless,despite,though,otherwise,unlike,instead,actually,whereas,similarly,oppositely,…8.使用合适的连接副词影响导致由于Influence/affect/impacthaveaninfluenceonhaveaneffectonhaveanimpactonleadtocontributetobringaboutresultin/accountforowingtoduetoasaresultofresultfrom/bedowntoasaconsequenceof事件关系allowdriveencouragemakepossibleandthus,andconsequently概要写作中常见的逻辑关系“cause&effect”表达方式:对比unlikelike/likewiseincontrasttoonthecontrarycontrarytocomparedwithincomparisonwithwhileas--asbycomparison概要写作中常见的逻辑关系“对比”的表达方式:1.学会把握文章的主题和结构2.学会区分主要信息和次要信息3.积累并掌握概要写作的语言表达技巧备考建议(共11张PPT)概要写作精讲2高考英语主要内容确定文章关键信息的几点策略具体案例讲解TopicofthearticlePart1Part2Part3Part4TS1KD1,2…KD1,2…KD1,2…KD1,2…Mi1,…如何确定文章的关键信息TS2TS3TS4Mi1,…Mi1,…Mi1,…Howtolocatethemainideasandimportantdetails?MindMap(overall/bigpictureofatext,thestructureofthetext)Groupwords(wordsorphrasesfrequentlyappearing)Signalwords(first,last,but,however,forexample,besides,therefore, inconclusion,onthecontrary,meanwhile,ontheonehand, ontheotherhand,some…others…,consequently,…)确定文章的关键信息几个策略RelationshipbetweensentencesMindMap(structureofatext)M4U2:ChemicalorOrganicFarmingPara.1:introductionPara.2:problemsPara.3:solutionPara.4:othersolutionsproblemscausedbychemicals(damagethehealthofpeopleandsoil)organicfarming(definition,benefits)othermethodstokeepsoilfertilechemicalfertilizers(welcomedbutharmful)MindMap(structureofatext)M3U4:Communication:NoProblem?Para.1backgroundPara.2&3problem-noticingPara.4problem-analyzingPara.5problem-solvingMeetinternationalstudentsattheairport(watchingthem)SomemajormisunderstandingsoftheirgreetingbodylanguageNotallculturesgreetthesameway(examples)1.notgoodorbad2.studyinginternationalcustomsLikeanyotherfacility,keepingaschoolopenrequiresagreatdealofmoney.Keepingschoolopeninthemiddleofsummerrequiresairconditioning,andthataddssignificantlytotheschool'sexpenses.Besides,teachersmustbepaidforalltheweekstheyareworking.Forexample,ahighschoolinArizonahadacostincreaseof$157,ooowhentheyswitchedtoyear-roundschooling.Someschoolsmaynotbeabletohandlesuchincreases,andotherschoolsthatcanhandletheseexpensescouldbedoingbetterthingswiththemoney.Groupwordscanindicatethemainidea.Genetechnologycanhelppeopletogivebirthtomorehealthyandcleverchildren.Somefamilieshavegeneticdiseases.Thismeanstheir?childrenwillforsurehavethefamilydisease,whichisagreattroubleforthesefamilies.Inthepast,doctorscoulddonothingaboutgeneticdiseases.Butgenetechnologycansolvethisproblemperfectly.Scientistsjust?needtofindthewronggeneandcorrectit,andahealthychildwillbeborn.Groupwordscanindicatekeysupportinginformation.Asisknowntoall,sportsstarsearnlargeamountsofmoneyeveryyear.LeBronJames,thefamousAmericanbasketballstar,forinstance,earnsanincomeofmorethan20milliondollarsayear.Somepeopleholdtheviewthatthesestarsdonotdeservethehighpaythattheyaregetting.Someevenarguethatsportsstarsdonothingtosocietyapartfromentertainingpeople.Theircontributiontosocietyaremuchlessthanthosemadebydoctors,firemen,scientists,professors,etc.ButIcanneveragreewiththat.Signalwordsmayhelptolocatemainidea.but,however等后面的信息一般是段落的重要信息举例后的信息一般属于次要信息Actually,vacationhappinessisbasedon?thefollowingtoprules.First,chooseyourtravelcompanionswisely,becausenothingcontributesmoresignificantlytoatripthantherightcompanions.Second,don'tspendyourvacationtimeinaplacewhereeverythingistooexpensivesoastomaintainapositivemood.Third,shopwisely,formeaningfulexperiencesprovidemorelong-termhappinessthanphysicalpossessions.Signalwordsmayhelptolocatekeydetails.3个Rules要作为重要细节写到概要中Thebiggestfactorinshort-sightednessisalackoftimespentoutdoors.Exposuretodaylighthelpstheretina(视网膜)toreleaseachemicalthatslowsdownanincreaseintheeye'saxiallength,whichiswhatmostoftencausesmyopia(近视).Acombinationofnotbeingoutdoorsanddoinglotsofworkfocusingupclose(likewritingcharactersorreading)worsenstheproblem.Butifachildhasenoughtimeintheopen,theycanstudyalltheylikeandtheireyesightshouldnotsuffer,saysIanMorganofAustralianNationalUniversity.Topicsentenceexplanationfurtherinformationfurtherexplanation√√××Relationshipbetweensentencesinaparagraph(共11张PPT)概要写作精讲1高考英语主要内容一篇好的概要所具备的特点概要写作中存在的问题案例分析一篇好的概要所具备的特点Whatisasummary?ashortretellingofthemainideaofatextoratopic.Examples:anewsreportadescriptionofamovieablurbonthebackofabook…Whatmakesagoodsummary?a.Agoodsummaryshouldinclude:1.themainideas2.importantdetailsb.Agoodsummaryisshort,trueandfair.(客观、准确、公正;不渲染、不加入自己的主观评价或观点)c.Agoodsummaryiswritteninyourownwordandinaclearorderthattheoriginaltextispresentedin.概要写作高考要求评分时主要从以下4个方面考虑:1.对原文要点的理解和呈现情况2.应用语法结构和词汇的准确性3.上下文的连贯性4.对各要点表达的独立性情况提供一篇350个单词左右的文章(体裁一般为说明文或议论文),要求考生基于该短文写一篇60词左右的内容概要。概要写作要心怀读者,假定读者看不到原文本,你写的文本是否makesense。写概要时,要想象你是在对你的朋友描述或解释这篇文章。1.Unabletofindthestructure2.Unabletofindthekeypoints3.Unabletorewriteinyourownwords4.Unabletowritewithbeautifullanguage概要写作中存在的主要问题ReaditthoroughlytogetthetopicandstructureofthepassageUnderlinetopicsentenceandimportantdetailsineachparagraph(leaveoutunimportantdetails)RelyonyourmemoryfirsttorewritethemainideaofeachpartReviseittoensurethatyourwritingistothepointandclearandthelanguageiswellwritten.概要写作的过程Freereadingisthebestkindofhomeworkforthestudentstodo.Studentsgettochoosewhattheywanttoread.Somestudentsmightreadanadventurestory.Othersmightreadamystery.Studentscanchoosetoreadabouttopicstheydonotlearnaboutinclass.Studentscantaketheirtimereadingathomeinsteadofhavingtoreadonlyinclass.案例分析请阅读下面这段文字并写概要:Freereadingisthebestkindofhomeworkforthestudentstodo.①Studentsgettochoosewhattheywanttoread.Somestudentsmightreadanadventurestory.Othersmightreadamystery.Studentscanchoosetoreadabouttopicstheydonotlearnaboutinclass.②Studentscantaketheirtimereadingathomeinsteadofhavingtoreadonlyinclass.案例分析第一句copying第二句minordetails最后一句confusingorder看看下面这篇概要的问题在哪儿?Freereadingisthebestkindofhomeworkforthestudentstodo.Studentscouldreadadventurestoriesormysteries.Ilikemysteriesbest.Theycanusefreereadingtolearnaboutdifferenttopics.Theycanalsotakemoretimetoreadoutsideofclass.Studentscanchoosewhattheyread.第三句yourownopinionFreereadingisthebesthomeworkforstudents.Itallowsstudentstochoosewhattoreadandlearnaboutandalsoensuresthemmoretimetoread.Randomreadingshouldbeacknowledgedasthesuperbassignmentforstudentswhichempowersthemtoobtainmorealternativesandguaranteesamplereadingtime.Studentsshouldhavefreereadingastheirhomework.Itisimportantforstudentstochoosewhattheyreadandlearnabout.Readingathomecangivestudentsmorereadingtime.主位缺失,逻辑混乱。这篇概要的主位应该是freereading,不是students或readingathome。辞藻华丽,晦涩难懂121.包含文章所有要点,每个要点独立,逻辑清晰。2.按照原文出现的顺序,用自己的语言表达,字数60左右。3.表达连贯,内容客观、清晰,不渲染,不参入自己的观点。4.语言准确、严谨、简练、高级。总结:什么是一篇好的概要?概要写作专项练习(一)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Whilemanyofusgotosleepbeforemidnight,someteenagerschoosetostayupmuchlater.Theyarenotdrivenbytheburningdesiretowriteabetteressayorachieveahighergrade.Instead,theyarebusyplayingonlinegames.KnownasyoungInternetaddicts,theyhavelongbeenaprobleminChina.Areportreleasedin2016bytheChinaYouthAssociationforNetworkDevelopmentshowedthattherewereover24millionyoungInternetaddictsamongChina’syoungurbanInternetusers.Thereportalsosaidthatover18millionyouthshadatendencytodevelopInternetaddiction.TodealwiththeproblemofInternetaddictionamongteenagers,theCyberspaceAdministrationofChinahasreleaseddraftregulationswhichcarriedoutabanononlinegaming.Iftheregulationsareadopted,under-18swouldbebannedfromplayingonlinegamesbetweenmidnightand8am.Assoonasthegovernment’sdraftlawsurfaced,itdrewgreatattentionfromthepublic.Someapplaudedthelawasawaytobetterprotectminors(未成年人),sayingthattoomuchovernightgamingisharmfultominors’healthandbelievingtheperiodbetweenmidnightand8amtobevitaltohumanphysicalfunctions.However,otherswonderedwhetheritwouldbepracticalifitcameintoeffect,asminorscouldjustborrowtheirparents’IDstoregisteraccountstoplayonlinegames.TheGuangmingDailysuggestedthatparentsshouldhelptheirteenagersfindabalancebetweenthecyberworldandtherealworld.Chinaisbynomeanstheonlyonetryingtofightagainstteenagergamingaddiction.Germanyintroducedaregulationin2002inanattempttostopminorsfromplayingonlinegamesfrom10pmto6am.Meanwhile,theUK,theUSandAustraliahaveforcedaratingsystemoncomputergamestomakesurethatteenagerscannotaccess“adult”contentsuchasviolence,sexorbadlanguage.【答案】ManyteenagersinChinahavebecomeaddictedtoovernightonlinegames.Thus,thegovernmentreleasedadraftlawtosolvethelong-lastingissue.Somepeoplewelcomedthelawbecauseitisbeneficialtotheteenagers’health,whileothersdoubtedwhetheritwouldbeeffective.Actually,manyothercountrieshavealsobeenmakinglawsagainsttheyouthonlineaddiction.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。AgroupofscientistsledbySongMingyangattheMassachusettsGeneralHospitalanalyzeddatafromtwomajorstudiesinvolvingmorethan150,000participantstodeterminewhetherpeoplewhoconsumedprotein(蛋白质)fromredandprocessedmeatshadasignificantlyhigherdeathratethanthosewhogottheirproteinfromplants.Theanalysisofthe32?yearNurses’HealthStudy,followedbytheHealthProfessionalsFollow?UpStudyatHarvardUniversity,didn’tjustlookatthedietsoftheparticipantsoverayear.Itstaredrepeatedly—specificallyhowoftentheyconsumedportionsofparticulartypesoffoodduringthepreviousyears—everyfouryears.Song’steamfoundthata10percentincreasegenerallyinproteinsfromanimalsresultedina2percentincreaseindeath,andan8percentriseindeathriskfromheartdisease.Buta3percentincreaseinproteinfromplantsledtoa10percentdecreaseindeathanda12percentdropinriskofdeathfromcardiovascular?related(心血管相关的)death.“Thefindingsareclear,”saidSong.“Aresearchfellowatthehospital’sClinicalandTranslationalEpidemiologyUnitconcludedthatplant?basedproteinsfromsourcessuchasbeans,nuts,quinoaandseedsareahealthierchoicethansteaksorbeefproductssuchashotdogs.Iwouldn’tsuggestthateveryoneswitchtopeoplenoteatinganyanimalproducts.That’sbecausecertainmeats—chickenandfish,forexample—alsoresultinamuchlowerdeathriskoverallandfromheartdisease.”“ButthetraditionalAmericandiet,popularwithanimalproductssuchasburgers,meatballs,meatloaf,steaks,eggsanddairy,isassociatedwithavarietyofbadoutcomes,”Songsaid.Insomecases,it’snotjustthatmeatisbadandplantsaregood.Processedmeatsarefilledwithpotentiallyunhealthyadditives(添加剂).Songsaidhesetaboutthestudybecausewhileothershavesuggestedhealthybenefitsfromaplant?baseddiet,nonelookedatthesourceofprotein.“Wewereabletolinkinformationovertheyears.Thedatafromthetwolarge,long?termstudiesprovidedauniqueopportunitytolookatlong?termhealthoutcomes,”hesaid.【答案】Someresearcherssurveyedmanypeopleforyearstofindwhetherproteinfrommeatorplantsbringsahigherdeathratetohuman.Researchershavefoundthatproteinfromplantsworksbetteratreducingdeathrate.Butabalancedamountofmeatisalsogoodatreducingdeathrate.Song’sstudyhasstatedthesourceofproteinsandfiguredoutthebenefitsofanimalproducts.3.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。MountFujiisaworld?famousmountaininJapan.ItisoneofJapan’s“ThreeHolyMountains”alongwithMountTateandMountHaku.MountFujiis3,776metershigh,anditsperfectbeautifulshapecanbeseenfromallaround.MountFujipresentsdifferentfacesindifferentseasons.InJapan,peopledescribethemountainas“DiamondFuji”whenitisatdawnorduskandas“RedFuji”whenthemountainislitbytheearlymorningsun.MountFujiisanimportantpartofJapaneseculture.Themountainhasbeenthesubjectofnumerousworksofart.IthasalsobeenpartofJapan’sancientfaiths.MountFujiisoneoftheworld’sclassicexamplesofastratovolcano(层状火山),meaningthatitisformedfrommanylayers(层)ofhardenedlava(硬化熔岩)thathasspreadtoproduceahugebase.Thelasteruption(爆发)ofMountFujiwasin1707.ThereisacollectionofhotspringsandlakesnestledaroundMountFuji.Theviewsoverthespringsarewonderful,withendlessbluewater,freshgreenwaterplantsandfishswimminglazily.Youcansoak(浸泡)inoutdoorhotspringswhileadmiringtheviewofMountFujiandhaveJapanesefood,suchasfreshsweetfish.Atthenorthernfootofthemountain,about1,000metersabovesealevel,istheFujiFiveLakearea.Theshoresofthelakesaredecoratedwithseasonalflowers.TheimageofMountFujireflectedonalakesurfaceiscalled“Upside?DownFuji”inJapan.TheJapaneseusedtobelievethatGodlivedonMountFuji.Japan’shighestmountainandhighestvolcanoiscloselywoven(编织)intothecountry’slegendsandart,andisdrawingthousandsoftourists.【答案】ThepassageisaboutMountFuji,oneofJapan’s“ThreeHolyMountains”.Itpresentsdifferentfacesindifferentseasons.Itisoneoftheworld’sclassicexamplesofastratovolcano.Arounditthereisacollectionofhotspringsandlakes.Seasonalflowersmaketheshoresofthelakesbeautiful.Itattractsthousandsoftourists.4.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。AmillionpeoplewillliveonMarswithinonehundredyears.ThisisthebraveexpectationofElonMusk,thefounderofthespacetechnologycompanySpaceX.“Weneedtofullyfocusonbecomingamulti?planetcivilization.That’sthenextstep,”hesaidinarecentinterviewwithAeon.Muskexpectstoseeabout80,000peoplelivingonMarsby2040.It’sallaboutprotectingthehumanracefromextinction,accordingtoMusk.TheEarthhasalwaysbeenaticking(滴答作响的)timebomb.Asthesunbeginstodie,itwillgrowbigger,becomingwhatisknownasaRedGiant.In500millionyears,thesunwillhavebecomelargeenoughtokillanyplantandanimallifeontheEarth,accordingtoUSscientistEdwardGuinan.Inabillionyears,theEarthwillhavebecomeahotplanetwithlittleornowater.ThebravedreamofgettingthehumanracetoMarsisnotonlyMusk’s;othershavemadeplans,too.ADutchcompanysetuptheMarsOneFoundation,hopingtobethefirstprojecttoputhumansonMars.Itreceivedover200,000applicationstobecomepartofthefirstgroupofastronautstogothere.AccordingtoMarsOne,humansettlementonMarsispossiblewithexistingtechnologies.Water,food,energyandoxygenareneededforlifeanywhere.AccordingtoMarsOne,waterthatwasstillintheMartiansoilwouldbeboiledandtakenout.Byusingaprocesscalled“electrolysis”,astronautscouldturnwaterintohydrogenandoxygenforbreathing.Astronautsontheinternationalspacestationhavealreadydonesimilarthings.Foodcanalsobegrowninspace.CertainplantssuchaslettucesandonionscanbegrownusingLEDlightfordifferentcolorspectra(光谱)andmuchlessheat.NASAhasbeenreachingthistoprepareforvisitingMars.【答案】AccordingtoElonMusk,manypeoplewillliveonMarsinthenearfuture.Bydoingso,humanbeingscanavoidbeingruinedbytheincreasinglybiggersun.Luckily,thedreamforhumantosettleonMarsismadepossible.Continuousscientificresearchcanmakewater,food,energyandoxygenavailableinspaceandonMars.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Computershavechangedthewayabusinessfunctionstoalargeextent.Inthepast,corporatehousesrentedspacesforrunningaccountingdepartments.Ittookmonthstogethertofigureoutprofitorlossthatabusinesshadmadeorsuffered.However,computershavebecomethebackboneofallbusinessesnow.Today,computersareusedbeyondbookkeeping(记账)purposestoo.Almosteverythingthathappensinanorganizationisrecorded,workeduponandevaluatedwiththehelpofcomputers.Imaginingourliveswithoutcomputersisnexttoimpossible.Computerswereinitiallyusedonlyinworkplaces.However,theysoonbecameahouseholdname,whichrevolutionizedeverythingfromschoolhomeworktogroceryshopping.WhentheInternetcameintobeing,itcausedagreatchangeinthewaywefunctioned.Overaperiodoftime,computersenabledworkingfromhome,whichcreatedanewtypeofemployment.Thisgaveusageofcomputers,withintheconfines(界限)ofhomes,anewpart.Astechnologyprogressed,simplethingssuchasshopping,bookingtickets,buyinganewhouse,searchingforschoolsandcolleges,researchingforprojectsandmedicalinformationbecamealoteasierwithentryofcomputersineveryhousehold.Asanindispensabletoolinourlives,computershavechangedthewaywethinkinmorewaysthanone.Today,allyouhavetodoaboutfindinganswersisjust“Googleit”!Theonlineworldofblogging,instantmessaging,chattingandsocialnetworkingnotonlyleavesvirtualtraces,butunitestheworldinacompletelyunimaginedway.Thispowerfulmediumisthegreatmodeofmasscommunicationwhichaffectsourthinkingbyprovidingpeoplewithaplatformtovoicetheiropinionsandbegindiscussionsthathavebroughtaboutachangeintheworld.Computershavepushedustoseedifferentworldsandexperiencedifferentcultures.TherevolutioninEgyptisthelatestexampleofhowcomputerschangedtheworld.Todaytheidentityofinformationtechnologyiscomputers.Inventionofthismachinehaschangedtheworld’sperspectiveaboutcultures,economics,historyandcurrentaffairs.Theadvent(到来)ofcomputershasnodoubtbroughtarevolutionarychangeinourexistence.【答案】Computershavebroughtgreatchangestoourlivesforthepastfewyears.Firstly,computershavechangedthetraditionalwaythatpeopledobusinessgreatly.Secondly,computershavebecomeanimportantpartofourlivesandbenefitedusinmanyways.Besides,computershavechangedourwayofthinking.Moreimportantly,computersallowustoexperiencedifferentcultureswithoutleavinghome.Inconclusion,computershavebeenoneofthegreatestinventions.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Punishingchildrenisacontroversial(争议的)topic.Everybodyhasdifferentopinionsabouthowtoacttocorrectachild’sbehavior.Peoplehavedisagreementsaboutwhetheritisgoodforachild’seducationtopunishhim.Theword“punish”meansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople.Punishmentcanbephysicaloremotional.Physicalpunishmentiswhentheparenthitsthechild.Ontheotherhand,emotionalpunishmentiswhentheparent,inordertoeducatethechild,doesn’tlethimwatchTV,gotoplaywithhisfriends,ordothingslikethat.Althoughmanysurveysandstudieshaveshowedwhatthecorrectwayistoraiseachild,nobodyhastheanswerorthetruth.Thereisnosuchthingasagreedstandardaboutraisingachild,soIthinkitwillbeverydifficulttogeteveryonetoagree.Ithinkparentsshouldlovetheirchildandgivehimorherthebesteducation,butatthesametime,theyshouldpunishthechildproperlyifheorshedeservesit.Theparent’sgoalistohaveagoodmanorwomaninsocietyinthefuture,sosometimesyoushoulddowhatisnecessarytogetyourchildtobehavewell.【答案】Peoplehavemixedopinionstowardspunishmenttochildren.Therearemainlyphysicalandemotionalpunishment.Asamatteroffact,itisdifficulttofindtheagreedstandardtoraiseachild.Properpunishmentcanbeinstructiveandnecessarytochildrenwhileloveandeducationarethemostimportantforustomakeourkidsbehavewell.阅读下面短文,根据内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Whilecontactbetweenadolescents(betweentheagesoffifteenandnineteen)andtheirpeers(同龄人)isauniversalcharacteristicofallcultures,thenatureandthedegreeofsuchcontactvaryagreatdeal.InAmericancontemporarysociety,adolescentsspendmuchmoretimewiththeirpeersthanwithyoungerchildrenoradults.Thispatternofagesegregation(隔离)inAmericansocietydidnotbecomeusualuntilthebeginningoftheindustrializedsociety.Changesintheworkplaceseparatedchildrenfromadults,withadultsworkingandchildrenattendingschool.Thedramaticincreaseofmothersintheworkplacehasfurthercontributedtothereductionintheamountoftimeadolescentsspendwithadults.Schoolreformeffortsduringthenineteenthcentury,whichresultedinage-segregatedschoolsandgrades,havereducedtheamountoftimeadolescentsspendwithyoungerchildren.Finally,thechangesinpopulationareconsideredafactorthatmayhavecontributedtotheemergenceofadolescentpeerculture.From1955to1975,theadolescentpopulationincreaseddramatically,from11percentto20.9percent.Thisincreaseinthenumberofadolescentsmightbeacontributingfactortotheincreaseinadolescentpeercultureintermsofgrowthinsizeaswellasintermsofitsimpactonsociety’sothercultures(adults,youngerchildren).Researchsupportstheviewthatadolescentsspendagreatdealoftimewiththeirpeers.ReedLarsonandhiscolleaguesexaminedadolescents’dailyactivitiesandfoundthattheyspendmoretimetalkingtotheirfriendsthanengaginginanyotheractivity.Inatypicalweek,highschoolstudentswillspendtwiceasmuchtimewiththeirpeersaswithadults.Thisgradualwithdrawalfromadultsbeginsinearlyadolescence.Insixthgrade,adults(excludingparents)accountforonly25percentofadolescentsocialnetworks.Anotherimportantcharacteristicofadolescentpeercultureisitsincreasinglyautonomous(自治的)function.Whilechildhoodpeergroupsareconductedundertheclosesupervisionofparents,adolescentpeergroupstypicallymakeanefforttoescapeadultsupervisionandusuallysucceedindoingso.【答案】AdolescentpeercultureisauniversalphenomenonandforAmericanadolescentsmoretimeisspentwithpeersthanwithyoungerchildrenoradults.Firstly,changesinworkplacereducetheamountoftimeadolescentsspendwiththeirparents.Schoolreformsalsoresultinlesstimespentwithyoungerchildren.Additionally,theincreaseinadolescentpopulationisanothercontributingfactor.Aresearchshowsadolescents’gradualseparationfromadultsstartsintheirearlyteenswhentheymanagetoescapeadultsupervision.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Asanaturalemotionthateveryoneexperiencesinlife,angerisinmanycasesaperfectlyhealthyemotion.Angercanmotivate(激发)peopletomakeverypositivechangesintheirlives.Sometimeswehavetobeangryatinjustice(不公正),orevenatnature,beforewecandowhatneedstobedonetocorrectwrongsormakethingsbetter.Butofcourse,thatisnotwhatweusuallythinkofanger.Mostpeoplethinkofangerasanemotionwemustkeepundercontrol.Parentstellachildto“getcontrol”ofhimselfwhenthechildshowsanger.Childrenaresometimessenttotheirroomsorpunishedforexpressingangerinanextremeway.Wemaybeangrywithfriendsoratwork,butweknowitisusuallynotsuitabletoshowit.Wehavetocontroltheangerorsufferwhatmaybethenegativeconsequences.Veryearlyinlife,welearnthatangerissomethingthatmustbecontrolled.Welearnthisforagoodreason.Weknowthatuncontrolledangercanleadtofights,caraccidents,badrelationshipswithothers,unacceptablesocialbehavior,andmanyotherproblems.Manyexpertssaythatifoneholdshisangerin,itcanevenleadtoseverementalandphysicalhealthproblems.Sowhatcanwedotounderstandandcalmthisnaturalemotionthatwecallanger?Expertsoffermanysolutionstoharmfulanger.Someofthesesolutionsincludeexpressingyourfeelingsandtalkingaboutwhathascausedtheangerwithsomeoneyoutrust,avoidingasituationthatcausesanger,beatingapillow,exercisingmoreandmanyothermethods.Whateversolutiononechooses,itisgoodtoknowthatbytryingtofindthesolutiontotheproblemofanger,thefirststepintherightdirectiontosolvingtheangerproblemhasbeentaken.【答案】Anger,asanaturalemotion,isgoodforus.Itcaninspireustomakepositivechangesinourlives.Andmostpeopleagreethatwemustkeepangerundercontrol.However,expertsthinkholdingbackangerisharmfultoourhealth.Therefore,somesolutionsshouldbetakentodealwithanger.Forexample,wecantalkwithfriends,beatapillowortakesomeexercise.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Gettingupearlyhasbeenregardedasagoodhabitsinceancienttimes.Manyyearsago,peoplethoughtthatifwewenttobedearlyandgotupearly,wewouldbeenergeticthewholeday.So,gettingupearlyisofgreatimportancetousall.Infact,morningisthebesttimeofaday.Inthemorning,theairisthefreshestandpeopleareusuallyinthebestcondition.Manyofusmayhavetheexperiencesthatwememorizesomethingsmorequicklyandcorrectlyinthemorningthananyothertimeoftheday.Anditiscertainthatwefinditeasiertounderstandwhatwelearn.Ifwegetupearlyanddosomemorningexercisesoronlytakeashortwalkinthemorning,withoutdoubtwecanbuildupourbodiesandbecomemuchhealthier.Alsowewillhaveenoughtimetomakeaplanandgetreadyforourworkorstudyofthedayifwegetupearly.Forexample,ifeveryoneinthefamilygetsupearly,wifewillhaveenoughtimetopreparethebreakfastforthewholefamily.Childrenwillhaveenoughtimetocatchtheschoolbus,andhusbandwillneverforgettochangehisdirtyshirt.Everythingisinorder.However,ifwegetuplate,we’llprobablyhavetodoeverythinginahurry.Letusremembergettingupearlyisagoodhabitandtryourbesttokeepit.Laterisersmayfinditdifficulttoformthehabitofgettingupearly.Theyhavetomakeanefforttodoso.Ifwesticktogettingupearlyeveryday,wewillcertainlybenefitalotfromit.【答案】Gettingupearlyinthemorningisagoodhabitthatwillbenefitusalot.First,ithelpsusinourstudiesbecauseinthemorningwecanrememberthingsquicklyandcorrectly.Second,wecanbecomehealthierandhealthierbybreathingfreshairanddoingexercisesearlyinthemorning.Third,itenablesustomakeabetterpreparationfortheday.Gettingupearlyisagoodhabitandweshouldtryourbesttokeepit.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Onlineschoolsarebecomingverypopulartoday.Whetheritisworkingprofessionalswhocannotaffordthetimetogotoafull?timecollegebecauseoftheirhugeworkloadorstay?at?homemomswhohavemanydutiesandcannotjoininacollege,onlineschoolsaremuchenjoyedatall.Andnow,evenregularstudents,whohavethetimetogotocollege,aregoinginforonlineeducation,asitleavesthemwithenoughtimetopursue(追求)otherthings,suchasapart?timejoborahobby,alongwithstudying.However,aswitheverything,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagestoonlineschooling.Let’sstartwiththepositives.Theseschoolscostmuchless.Youdon’thavetospendonbuyingbooksortraveling.Anotheradvantageisflexibilityitprovides.Youcanstudyatanytimeduringtheday.Youcanstudywhereveryouwant—inyourhouse,atacafeoreveninapark.Movingontothedisadvantageofschoolonline.Thosestudentswhoalwaysneedapushfromtheirteacherstodowell,areverylikelynottodowellinonlineschools.Andthegreatestdisadvantageofgoingtoschoolonline:therearemanyemployerswhopreferstudentswithatraditionaldegreeoverthosewhohaveanonlinedegree.Theemployersfeelthatstudentswhogotofull?timecollegesaremoreknowledgeablecomparedtothosewhohaveonlinedegrees.Sincetheverypurposeofaneducationistolandapersonagoodjob,onlinedegrees,manyatime,donotservethispurpose.Nodoubtthatonlineschoolsofferthefreedomwhichnoregularcollegecanprovide.However,howmuchtheemployerswillvaluethedegreesandwhetherastudentcanactuallymakehisownstudyscheduleandmostimportantly,sticktoit,dependsuponindividual(个人)toindividual.Sointheend,itcanberightlysaid,onlineschoolsaregoodforsome,whileothersshouldgivethemaskip.【答案】Nowadaysonlineschoolsareenjoyinggreatpopularitybecauseoftheirlowcostandthefreedomregularschoolscan’tprovide.However,onlineschoolinghasitsowndisadvantages.Itislikelythatthosewhoneedotherstopressthemtostudywon’tbehavewellinonlineschools.Besides,manyemployersdon’tvalueonlinedegrees.Soonlineeducationisnotsuitableforeveryone. 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