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A
bowl
of
noodles
from
a
stranger
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That
night,
I
quarreled
with
my
mother,
then
stormed
out
of
the
house.
While
on
the
road,
I
remembered
that
I
did
not
have
any
money
in
my
pocket,
I
did
not
even
take
my
cell
phone
with
me
to
make
a
call
home．
At
the
same
time,
I
went
through
a
noodle
shop,
and
I
suddenly
felt
very
hungry.
I
wished
for
a
bowl
of
noodles,
but
I
had
no
money!
The
seller
saw
me
standing
before
the
counter
and
asked,
“Hey
little
girl,
you
want
to
eat
a
bowl?”
“But...but
I
do
not
carry
money
...”
I
shyly
replied．
“Okay,
I’ll
treat
you.”
the
seller
said,
“come
in,
I
will
cook
you
a
bowl.”
A
few
minutes
later
the
owner
brought
me
a
steaming
bowl
of
noodles.
After
eating
some
pieces,
I
cried．
“What
is
it?”
He
asked．
“Nothing.
I
am
just
touched
by
your
kindness!”
I
said
as
I
wiped
my
tears.
“Even
a
stranger
on
the
street
gives
me
a
bowl
of
noodles,
and
my
mother,
after
a
quarrel,
chased
me
out
of
the
house.
She
is
cruel!”
The
seller
sighed,
“Girl,
why
did
you
think
so?
Think
again.
I
only
gave
you
a
bowl
of
noodles
and
you
felt
that
way.
Your
mother
has
been
taking
care
of
you
since
you
were
little,
why
were
you
not
grateful
and
why
did
you
hurt
your
mom?”
I
was
really
surprised
after
hearing
that．
Why
did
I
not
think
of
that?
A
bowl
of
noodles
from
a
stranger
made
me
feel
grateful,
and
my
mother
has
raised
me
since
I
was
little
and
I
have
never
felt
so,
not
even
a
little．
注意:
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Paragraph
1:
Just
at
that
moment,
many
memories
came
back
into
my
mind．
Paragraph
2:
When
arriving
home,
I
saw
my
mother
sitting
at
the
dinner
table,
worried
and
tired．
What
information
do
you
get
in
the
text?
I
,
My
mother
The
seller
that
night
a
noodle
shop
(who)
(when
&
where)
(what/why/how)
quarrel
A
bowl
of
noodles
Plot
Beginning
Middle
End
Quarrel
Settlement
Problem
Solution
Theme?
understanding
of
_________________________________
Mom’s
unconditional
love
1.
What
helped
“I”
understand
Mom’s
love?
2.
What
stopped
me
from
understanding
at
first?
“Even
a
stranger
on
the
street
gives
me
a
bowl
of
noodles,
and
my
mother,
after
a
quarrel,
chased
me
out
of
the
house.
She
is
cruel!”
“…I
only
gave
you
a
bowl
of
noodles
and
you
felt
that
way.
Your
mother
has
been
taking
care
of
you
since
you
were
little,
why
were
you
not
grateful
and
why
did
you
hurt
your
mom?”
be
accustomed
to/
take…for
granted/
be
completely
blind
to…
a
spoiled
child/
the
apple
of
Mother’s
eye/
unconditional
love
I
was
really
surprised
after
hearing
that．
Why
did
I
not
think
of
that?
A
story
is
an
accident,
which
begins
with
a
problem
and
ends
with
a
solution.
A
good
story
often
has
a
good
theme.
A
better
story
“shows
more
than
tells”.
④___________________________________
Beginning
Climax(高潮)
End
quarrelled,
stormed
out
of
eating
some
pieces,
cried,…wiped
my
tears
remembered
did
not
have
any
money
did
not
even
take
my
cell
phone
really
surprised
after
hearing
angry&
hurt
regretful
many
memories
came
back
into
my
mind(para.1)
arriving
home,
saw
(para.2)
lost(迷茫的)
⑤__________________________________
Underline
my
actions
and
infer
my
feelings.
⑥______________________________
settled
the
quarrel
went
through
a
noodle
shop;
suddenly
felt
very
hungry.
wished
for
a
bowl
of
noodles,
but…
standing;
eat;
shyly
replied
moved&
grateful
shocked
Why
did
I
not
think
of
that?
self-condemned(自责的)
joyful&
moved
Tip1:
Let
actions
“speak”.
(Show
more
than
tell.)
Tip2:
Let
dialogue
“speak”.
(Show
more
than
tell.)
A
story
is
an
accident,
which
begins
with
a
problem
and
ends
with
a
solution.
A
good
story
often
has
a
good
theme.
A
better
story
“shows
more
than
tells”.
A
great
story
displays
details
properly.
Para.1
Just
at
that
moment,
many
memories
came
back
into
my
mind．
Para.2
When
arriving
home,
I
saw
my
mother
sitting
at
the
dinner
table,
worried
and
tired．
Jenny’s
reflection(反思)
about…
Jenny’s
confession(忏悔)
and
Mom’s
devotion.
self-condemned(自责的)
joyful&
moved
spoiled
childhood
quarrel&
her
behavior
her
encounter(遭遇)
(especially
the
seller’s
words)
Show
more
than
tell.
Let
“actions”
speak.
Let
“dialogue”
speak.
be
accustomed
to/
take…for
granted/
be
completely
blind
to…
a
spoiled
child/
the
apple
of
Mother’s
eye/
unconditional
love
Why
did
I
not
think
of
that?
Wisdom
on
“Mother’s
Love”
1.
A
mother's
love
is
never
dried
up.
2.
Mother
is
not
what
we
can
substitute.
3.
God
could
not
be
everywhere
and
therefore
he
made
mothers.
4.
People
heard
the
most
beautiful
voices
from
mother,
from
home,
from
heaven.
5.
All
the
world's
other
are
false
and
empty,
only
the
mother
is
really,
eternal,
not
quenched.
Just
at
that
moment,
many
memories
came
back
into
my
mind.
When
I
was
ill,
she
was
always
the
one
taking
care
of
me.
When
I
had
trouble
with
my
study,
she
never
lost
faith
in
me
and
encouraged
me
to
keep
going.
When
I
arrived
home
during
the
weekend,
she
always
prepared
my
favorite
food,
All
her
kindness
came
back
to
me.
I
should
be
grateful
for
all
she
had
done
for
me,
I
realized
I
should
go
back
home
immediately
and
say
sorry
to
my
mother.
Para.
1:
A
possible
version
for
reference
When
arriving
home,
I
saw
my
mother
sitting
at
the
dinner
table,
worried
and
tired.
She
must
have
been
looking
for
me
everywhere.
I
was
ready
for
her
anger
and
shouts.
However,
before
I
could
apologize,
my
mother
saw
me
and
gently
said,
“Oh,
honey,
you’re
back!
Come
inside.
You
are
probably
very
hungry?
I
cooked
your
favorite
noodles.
Come
and
eat
while
they
are
still
hot.”No
longer
able
to
control
myself.
I
cried
in
her
arms.
I’m
sorry,
Mom,
please
forgive
me,”
I
whispered
to
her
with
tears,
extremely
ashamed
of
myself.
Para.
2:
A
possible
version
for
reference

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