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2020年上海届高三英语二模汇编—英语作文
1、2020黄浦二模
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
你校学生会正开展主题为
“The
first
job
I
want
to
take”
的英语征文比赛，请你撰文参加（文中请不要出现真实的校名和人名）。你的征文内容需包括：
（1）离开校园、步入社会后，你想从事的第一份职业是什么；
（2）你想从事这份职业的原因（可从个人特点、职业价值等方面进行阐述）。
样卷1:
8+9+3=20
After
graduation
from
high
school,
I’d
like
to
act
as
a
doctor,
who
is
ready
to
gave
people’s
lives
with
a
kind
heart.
The
following
reasons
based
on
personal
characteristics
and
job
values
can
illustrate
my
desire
to
become
a
doctor.
On
one
hand,
I’m
willing
to
help
others
in
trouble.
Moreover,
I
have
the
patience
to
give
patients
both
physical
and
mental
supports.
It’s
generally
acknowledged
that
doctors
always
devote
themselves
to
saving
lives
and
curing
diseases,
sometimes
even
neglecting
sleep
and
meals.
Tired
as
working
as
a
doctor
is,
I
believe
I
can
get
through
the
hardship
with
strong
willpower
and
shoulder
the
responsibility.
On
the
other
hand,
it’s
the
duty
of
doctors
to
save
lives,
which
I
respect
and
admire
very
much.
Witnessing
thousands
of
doctors
fighting
against
the
coronavirus,
I
am
deeply
moved
by
their
sense
of
responsibility
and
courage.
Their
joint
efforts
save
lots
of
dying
people
infected
by
the
virus.
Additionally,
the
gratitude
from
patients
can
motivate
me
to
perform
better
and
give
me
a
sense
of
achievement.
In
a
word,
I
have
the
ability
to
work
as
a
doctor.
Simultaneously,
working
as
a
doctor
can
have
a
sense
of
achievement.
样卷2：7+7+3=17
I
heard
that
our
school
was
holding
an
English
composition
contest
on
“The
first
job
I
want
to
take”
and
I
found
that
I
had
a
lot
to
share
with.
After
leaving
the
campus
and
entering
the
society,
my
first
job
to
be
taken
may
be
a
biology
researcher.
I
know
that
the
main
trend
of
occupation
may
be
a
bank
clerk,
a
lawyer,
or
a
doctor,
but
I
have
my
own
reasons
and
ambition:
First,
when
on
the
campus,
I
have
cultivate
huge
interest
in
biology
and
want
to
have
deeper
knowledge.
In
biology,
I
found
the
beauty
of
nature
and
amazing
evolution
of
creatures.
That’s
driving
force
of
me
for
choosing
this
occupation.
Second,
this
occupation
can
have
great
contribution
to
the
future
of
human
beings.
Many
problems
remained
unsolved
may
be
solved
by
them
some
day
in
the
future.
We
fight
against
the
disease
and
pain,
regardless
of
fame
and
wealth.
That’s
all
about
my
first
job
that
I
want
to
take.
I
want
to
be
one
of
the
biology
researcher
who
save
the
world
from
disease
and
pain.
样卷3：
6+6+2
=14
The
first
job
I
want
to
take
after
I
leave
the
campus
and
go
to
the
society
is
to
be
a
teacher.
The
teachers
include
many
subjects.
And
I
want
to
be
a
maths
teacher.
To
myself,
I
am
a
patient
person.
In
school
life
I
always
help
my
classmates
with
all
kinds
of
problems
they
meet.
I
will
help
them
until
they
finally
understand
clearly.
Also,
I’m
good
at
speaking,
I
always
make
speech
in
our
school
activity
such
as
English
Festival.
Then,
I
like
maths
very
much.
I
always
talk
with
my
maths
teachers
or
classmates
about
the
maths
problem.
I
love
to
research
it
deeply.
I
think
that
teacher
is
one
of
the
most
important
people
in
student’s
life.
Teachers
not
only
teach
students
how
to
study
but
also
teach
them
how
to
be
a
man.
As
a
maths
teacher,
I
consider
maths
as
the
most
based
and
important
subject.
If
we
need
to
learn
physics
or
even
science
lessons,
maths
is
the
most
fundamental
thing.
I
can
also
teach
students
to
way
to
research
in
our
daily
life
in
“maths
ways’.
So
I
think
that
working
as
a
maths
teacher
is
a
very
desirable
and
glory
job
to
me.
样卷4:
3+3+1=7
Hearing
that
there
is
a
English
writing
competition.
I
am
very
glad
to
talk
about
the
theme
“the
first
job
I
want
to
take.”
After
I
graduating
and
leaving
the
school,
the
first
job
I
want
to
take
is
waiter.
There
are
two
reasons
why
I
choose
waiter.
The
first
reason
is
that
I
would
like
to
help
others.
No
matter
at
where
I
will
be
a
waiter
such
as
restaurants,
clothes
shops
or
hotels.
Helping
others
can
bring
me
happiness
and
it
will
be
a
best
first
job
for
me.
The
second
reason
is
the
most
important.
I
don’t
have
any
experience
in
the
society.
Being
a
waiter
will
not
be
too
difficult
for
me
to
take
as
the
first
step
to
the
society.
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1.离开校园、步入社会后，你想从事的第一份职业是什么；2.你想从事这份职业的原因（可从个人特点、职业价值等方面进行阐述）。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有：The
first
job
I
want
to
take
after
graduation
from
college
is
a
doctor.
The
reasons
are
as
follows.
the
new
coronavirus，contribute
to
people’s
health
in
the
future，challenge
myself，make
great
efforts，eliminate
the
pain
and
relieve
the
discomfort
of
others，a
sense
of
accomplishment，Being
a
doctor
can
realize
my
dream.
study
hard，enter
a
good
medical
university，
strive
to
become
an
excellent
doctor。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First
of
all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second…
And
then，Finally，In
the
end，At
last，Above
all。2.表并列补充关系：What
is
more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In
addition，as
well
as，not
only…but
(also)。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
2、2020普陀二模
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
近日，这张小女孩在父母卖熟食的案板（the
deli
counter）下认真上网课的照片引发热议，校刊因此特辟专栏请同学们发表感想。请对照你当时在家上课的情况谈谈你的感受，你的投稿必须包括：
1.
描述图片中小女孩上课的场景；
2.
比较你上网课的环境和状态；
3.
简单谈谈你的感受。
【参考范文】
Recently,
a
photo
spread
on
the
Internet
has
impressed
us
all.
It
depicts
a
girl
dedicating
herself
to
taking
online
courses
under
the
deli
counter.
In
such
a
bustling
open-air
market,
she
has
to
study
in
a
crowded
and
noisy
environment
and
bear
the
low
light
throughout
the
courses.
She
doesn’t
have
the
chance
to
have
a
basic
condition,
not
to
mention
a
comfortable
seat.
As
for
me,
my
parents
have
created
a
quiet
and
cosy
atmosphere
for
me
during
my
online
courses.
However,
with
a
much
better
environment,
I
cannot
concentrate
on
my
assignments.
Compared
with
the
girl’s
total
absorption
in
her
work,
I
feel
quite
guilty
and
even
disappointed
about
myself.
Addicted
to
the
mobile
phone,
I
tackle
everything
half-heartedly,
including
my
online
courses.
As
far
as
I’m
concerned,
I
should
have
cherished
such
a
cosy
environment
and
applied
myself
to
my
assignments.
The
spirit
of
the
girl
who
studies
under
the
deli
counter
is
worthy
of
our
study.
The
better
the
condition
is,
the
more
we
should
value
it.
【解析】
这是一篇图画作文，要求描述图片内容，联系自身情况并谈谈感受。
【详解】图画作文与常见的书信体写作不同，是一种较少练习的题型，往往还是描写、记叙与议论等多种文体内容的结合。完成本题需要依靠平时丰富的词汇量积累和对短语句型的掌握。
要点1：审好题，列好点
本文写作时应综合使用第一人称和第三人称，时态上，对于图片内容的描述及对自己上网课环境与状态的叙述，既可以使用现在完成时和一般现在时，也可使用一般过去时，这些均符合写作要求，但要注意文中时态应相对统一，不可频繁切换造成混乱。文中共三个写作点：描述图片中小女孩上课的场景；比较你上网课的环境和状态；简单谈谈你的感受。各点之间注意做好衔接，内容上应相对均衡，与很多书信体作文不同，这三个写作点之间没有明确的详略之分。
要点2：适当拓展，充实内容
描述图片内容时，应着重强调小女孩专心致志和周围学习环境的不佳（包括嘈杂拥挤、光线昏暗等）；而对比自身情况时，从“自己有一个舒适的学习环境，却远不如小女孩专心”这一点上切入立意，最为有话可说。在谈及自身感受时，可以是愧疚、失望，更重要的是对小女孩精神的褒扬，以及立志对自身做出一些改变等。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了许多精彩表达，如非谓语动词Recently,
a
photo
spread
on
the
Internet
has
impressed
us
all.
It
depicts
a
girl
dedicating
herself
to…In
such
a
bustling
open-air
market,
not
to
mention,
concentrate
on
my
assignments,
compared
with
the
girl’s
total
absorption
in
her
work,
tackle
everything
half-heartedly.who
引导的定语从句The
spirit
of
the
girl
who
studies
under
the
deli
counter
is
worthy
of
our
study.
等。范文内容较为出彩，实现了句式的多样性和上下文的逻辑连接自然，显示了驾驭英语的能力。
3、2020徐汇二模
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
假设你叫王林，你的美国好友John来信说他最近每天晚上玩手机到深夜，导致白天没有精神且食欲不振。他对此很担心，但又管不住自己，因此写信向你求助。请你用英语给John写一封回信，谈谈你的想法并给他一些建议。
【参考范文】
Dear
John,
I
am
pleased
to
receive
your
letter
seeking
my
proposals
on
how
to
overcome
the
awful
habit
of
staying
up
late.
Therefore,
I
am
writing
to
give
you
a
helping
hand.
From
my
point
of
view,
there
are
two
reasons
accounting
for
this.
For
one
thing,
a
habit
is
easy
to
form
but
hard
to
get
rid
of.
According
to
the
statistics,
it
may
take
a
person
21
days
to
cultivate
a
habit
but
90
days
to
get
over
it.
For
another,
since
mobile
phones
have
become
an
indispensable
part
in
our
daily
life,
it
is
absolutely
difficult
to
resist
the
temptation
of
it,
especially
for
us
adolescents.
Here
are
some
humble
suggestions
for
your
consideration.
First
and
foremost,
you
are
supposed
to
switch
off
your
phone
and
keep
your
phone
away
from
you
before
going
to
bed
so
that
it
will
not
attract
your
attention.
Additionally,
if
I
were
you,
I
would
work
out
properly
before
going
to
bed
to
relax
yourself
both
physically
and
mentally.
Last
but
not
least,
it
is
high
time
that
you
enhanced
your
awareness
of
early
sleep.
As
a
classic
proverb
goes,
early
to
bed
and
early
to
rise
make
a
man
healthy,
wealthy
and
wise.
Whichever
suggestion
you
will
take,
please
persevere
in
it.
Hopefully,
your
problem
would
be
solved
soon.
Best
wishes!
Yours,
Wang
Lin
【解析】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态多为一般现在时。
要求：
1.
给美国好友回信；
2.
表示对于好朋友担心，并提供可行性方案帮助他解决这一问题。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
overcome
the
awful
habit
of…；give
you
a
helping
hand；became
an
indispensable
part；for
your
consideration；both
physically
and
mentally…
第三步：连词成句
1.
How
to
overcome
the
awful
habit
of
staying
up
late
2.
I
am
writing
to
give
you
a
helping
hand.
3.
Here
are
some
humble
suggestions
for
your
consideration.
4.
You
are
supposed
to
switch
off
your
phone
and
keep
your
phone
away
from
you
before
going
to
bed
so
that
it
will
not
attract
you
attention.
5.
It
is
high
time
you
enhanced
your
awareness
of
early
sleep.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词使用）
1.表文章结构顺序：First
of
all,
Firstly/First,
Secondly/Second…
And
then,
Finally,
In
the
end,
At
last
2.表并列补充关系：What
is
more,
Besides,
Moreover,
Furthermore,
In
addition
As
well
as,
not
only…but
(also),
including,
3.表转折对比关系：However,
On
the
contrary,
but,
although+clause(从句),
In
spite
of+n/doing,On
the
one
hand…,On
the
other
hand…
Some…,while
others…,as
for,
so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because,
As,
So,
Thus,
Therefore,
As
a
result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改，注意主谓一致、单复数、冠词等语法正确使用。
【详解】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I
am
pleased
to
receive
your
letter
seeking
after
my
proposals
on
how
to
overcome
the
awful
habit
of
staying
up
late.运用了非谓语及宾语从句复杂句式if
I
were
you,
I
would
work
out
properly
before
going
to
bed
to
relax
yourself
both
physically
and
mentally.。运用了虚拟条件句，使说辞更具礼貌性。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4、2020杨浦二模
假设你是明启中学学生张华，你的朋友李明来信。在信中他提到他母亲不论在旅游时还是在生活中，总是未经许可就把他的照片发到微信朋友圈（WeChat
Moments），这让他十分烦恼。请你写一封回信，给李明提一些具体的建议并说明理由。
【参考范文】
Dear
Li
Ming，
Thank
you
for
your
email
and
I
think
you
should
not
worry
about
this
matter
too
much.
You
mentioned
that
your
mother
would
post
your
photos
on
WeChat
Moments
without
your
permission.
However,
you
did
not
tell
me
what
exactly
annoys
you.
In
my
opinion,
whatever
the
reason
is,
you
should
try
to
communicate
with
your
mother.
Tell
her
about
your
feelings
and
you
should
be
able
to
work
this
out
together.
For
example,
if
you
feel
insecure
about
having
your
pictures
shared,
you
can
kindly
ask
her
to
post
those
photos
after
speaking
to
you.
As
teenagers,
it
is
normal
to
feel
upset
when
your
parents
are
doing
something
you
do
not
like.
The
key
to
the
issue
is
always
communication.
That's
all.
Please
let
me
know
if
you
have
further
questions.
Looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours,
Zhang
Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，就李明的烦恼，给李明提一些具体的建议并说明理由。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
???总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.
说明写信目的：提建议
2.
具体内容：
1）建议与妈妈交流
2）要求妈妈在征求你的意见后在传照片
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
worry
about；without
your
permission；in
my
opinion；communicate
with；be
able
to；
for
example；ask
sb.
to
do
第三步：连词成句
1.
Thank
you
for
your
email
and
I
think
you
should
not
worry
about
this
matter
too
much.
2.
You
mentioned
that
your
mother
would
post
your
photos
on
WeChat
Moments
without
your
permission.
3.
You
did
not
tell
me
what
exactly
annoys
you.
4.
Whatever
the
reason
is,
you
should
try
to
communicate
with
your
mother.
5.
Tell
her
about
your
feelings
and
you
should
be
able
to
work
this
out
together.
6.
If
you
feel
insecure
about
having
your
pictures
shared,
you
can
kindly
ask
her
to
post
those
photos
after
speaking
to
you.
7.
As
teenagers,
it
is
normal
to
feel
upset
when
your
parents
are
doing
something
you
do
not
like.
8.
The
key
to
the
issue
is
always
communication.
9.
Please
let
me
know
if
you
have
further
questions.
10.
Looking
forward
to
your
reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First
of
all,
Firstly/First,
Secondly/Second…
And
then,
Finally,
In
the
end,
At
last
2.表并列补充关系：What
is
more,
Besides,
Moreover,
Furthermore,
In
addition
As
well
as,
not
only…but
(also),
including,
3.表转折对比关系：However,
On
the
contrary,
but,
Although+clause(从句),
In
spite
of+n/doing,On
the
one
hand…,On
the
other
hand…
Some…,while
others…,as
for,
so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because,
As,
So,
Thus,
Therefore,
As
a
result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：However,
you
did
not
tell
me
what
exactly
annoys
you.这句话运用了what引导的名词性从句，In
my
opinion,
whatever
the
reason
is,
you
should
try
to
communicate
with
your
mother.这句话运用了whatever引导的让步状语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如worry
about；without
your
permission；in
my
opinion；communicate
with；be
able
to；for
example；ask
sb.
to
do
等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5、2020崇明二模
在新冠病毒疫情期间，各校都在通过网络进行线上教学。中华中学在学校网站的贴吧里，就如何提高线上学习的有效性开展了大讨论。假设你是该校学生王平，有意在贴吧中发表你的观点，你所写的内容应包括：
学生该怎么做及其理由；
你期望老师怎么做及其理由。
注：文中不得提及你的真实姓名或学校。
【参考范文】
Due
to
the
outbreak
of
COVID-19,
all
schools
have
been
conducting
online
teaching
through
the
network.
To
achieve
the
good
results
of
online
teaching,
it
requires
the
joint
efforts
of
teachers
and
students.
First
of
all,
students
must
have
a
high
level
of
self-awareness
and
set
strict
demands
on
themselves
as
teachers
cannot
supervise
students
face-to-face.
They
should
attend
online
classes
on
time
every
day
as
usual,
during
which
they
must
turn
off
irrelevant
webpages.
Secondly,
in
order
to
make
the
online
class
more
lively
and
interesting,
teachers
should
strengthen
the
interaction
with
the
students
as
much
as
possible
during
the
teaching
process,
and
they
can
improve
the
participation
and
concentration
of
students
by
answering
questions
online,
commenting
and
answering,
etc.
Most
importantly,
teachers
should
help
students
deal
with
the
tension.
Only
in
this
way
can
online
teaching
play
a
maximum
role.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是他开放性作文，要求就线上教学发表自己观点。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求就线上教学发表自己的观点：在新冠病毒疫情期间，各校都在通过网络进行线上教学。中华中学在学校网站的贴吧里，就如何提高线上学习的有效性开展了大讨论。假设你是该校学生王平，有意在贴吧中发表你的观点，你所写的内容应包括：学生该怎么做及其理由；你期望老师怎么做及其理由。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；
COVID-19（新冠病毒），outbreak
（爆发），online
teaching（线上教学），supervise（监管），self-awareness（自觉），strengthen（强化），
irrelevant（不相关的），lively（生动的），participation（参与），concentration（专注），face-to-face（面对面）及joint
efforts（共同努力）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有due
to（由于），in
order
to
（为了），set
strict
demands
on
oneself（严格要求某人自己），turn
off
(关闭)，on
time
(按时)，deal
with（处理）以及play
a
maximum
role（发挥最大作用），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“They
should
attend
online
classes
on
time
every
day
as
usual,
during
which
they
must
turn
off
irrelevant
webpages.”，状语从句“First
of
all,
students
must
have
a
high
level
of
self-awareness
and
set
strict
demands
on
themselves
as
teachers
cannot
supervise
students
face-to-face.”，倒装句“Only
in
this
way
can
online
teaching
play
a
maximum
role.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
6、2020长宁二模
Directions:Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的学生李平，写信给你在海外的笔友王平，与他分享这段时间在线学习生活的感受。你的信必须包括：
在线学习与在校学习的不同；
你更偏爱的学习方式，并说明理由。
（信的开头已经为你写好。）
【参考范文】
Dear
Wang
Ping,
How
are
you?
I’m
writing
the
letter
for
the
purpose
of
sharing
my
online
schooling
information
during
the
COVID-19
epidemic
with
you.
As
you
know,
the
spring
semester
is
postponed,
but
schooling
continues
online
under
our
teachers’
guidance.
In
my
opinion,
the
time
and
course
schedules
are
just
the
same
as
we
are
in
school.
The
biggest
difference
is
that
online
learning
emphasizes
students’
autonomy,
as
there
are
more
distractions
and
less
supervision
compared
with
on-campus
life,
which
means
we
need
a
stronger
self-regulation.
By
getting
actively
involved
in
classes,
I’ve
adapted
to
such
a
unique
way
of
learning
and
made
progress.
However,
I
still
hope
to
return
to
campus,
where
I
can
enjoy
face-to
face
classes
with
my
friends.
Besides,
I’m
already
missing
my
teachers
and
classmates.
I
wish
we
could
get
COVID-19
epidemic
under
control
soon.
Best
wishes!
Yours,
Li
Ping
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信给在海外的笔友王平，与他分享这段时间在线学习生活的感受。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
人称：第一、三人称；
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时；
结构：总-分法
要点：
1.你在线学习生活的感受；
2.在线学习与在校学习的不同；
3.你更偏爱的学习方式，并说明理由。
第二步：列提纲
（重点词组）
for
the
purpose
of；online
schooling；share
with；during
the
COVID-19
epidemic；as
you
know；postpone；under
sb’s
guidance；in
one’s
opinion；the
same
as；autonomy；there
are；distractions；
supervision；compare
with；on-campus
life；self-regulation；get
involved
in；adapt
to；make
progress；hope
to
do；face-to
face；under
control等
第三步：连词成句
1.
I’m
writing
the
letter
for
the
purpose
of
sharing
my
online
schooling
information
during
the
COVID-19
epidemic
with
you.
2.
The
spring
semester
is
postponed,
but
schooling
continues
online
under
our
teachers’
guidance
3.
The
time
and
course
schedules
are
just
the
same
as
they
are
in
school.
4.
The
biggest
difference
is
that
online
learning
emphasizes
students’
autonomy,
as
there
are
more
distractions
and
less
supervision
compared
with
on-campus
life,
which
means
we
need
a
stronger
self-regulation.
5.
By
getting
actively
involved
in
classes,
I’ve
adapted
to
such
a
unique
way
of
learning
and
made
progress.
6.
I
still
hope
to
return
to
campus,
where
I
can
enjoy
face-to
face
classes
with
my
friends.
7.
I’m
already
missing
my
teachers
and
classmates.
8.
I
wish
we
could
get
COVID-19
epidemic
under
control
soon.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：As
you
know；In
my
opinion；and；Besides；still；
2.表转折对比关系：However；but；
3.表示因果关系：as等
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【详解】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型，如：In
my
opinion,
the
time
and
course
schedules
are
just
the
same
as
they
are
in
school.使用了由as引导的状语从句；The
biggest
difference
is
that
online
learning
emphasizes
students’
autonomy,
as
there
are
more
distractions
and
less
supervision
compared
with
on-campus
life,
which
means
we
need
a
stronger
self-regulation.使用了由that引导的表语从句、由as引导的原因状语从句和由which引导的非限制性定语从句；By
getting
actively
involved
in
classes,
I’ve
adapted
to
such
a
unique
way
of
learning
and
made
progress.使用了方式状语；However,
I
still
hope
to
return
to
campus,
where
I
can
enjoy
face-to
face
classes
with
my
friends.使用了由where引导的非限制性定语从句；I
wish
we
could
get
COVID-19
epidemic
under
control
soon.使用了省略that的宾语从句和虚拟语气等。还使用了一些固定短语，如：for
the
purpose
of；share
with；as
you
know；postpone；under
sb’s
guidance；in
one’s
opinion；the
same
as；there
are；compare
with；get
involved
in；adapt
to；make
progress；hope
to
do；under
control等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7、2020松江二模
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
你是李明，你在读高一的表弟张丰依旧在进行居家学习。他在学习时容易分心，总是忍不住打网络游戏或看网络小说，于是发电子邮件向你求助。请你结合自己的经验回复他一封电子邮件，谈谈你是如何集中精力开展居家学习（homeschool
yourself
during
the
COVID-19
outbreak）的。
【参考范文】
Dear
Zhang
Feng,
I
am
very
sorry
to
hear
that
you
can’t
concentrate
yourself
on
your
study
when
you
are
homeschool
yourself
during
the
COVID-19
outbreak.
To
be
honest,
it
actually
very
easy
to
divert
your
attention
from
your
study
as
a
result
of
the
games
and
the
network
novels.
So
if
you
want
to
have
an
efficient
time
to
your
study,
I
think
the
following
suggestions
will
be
of
great
help.
First
of
all,
you
should
have
a
fix
time
to
study.
During
the
planned
time,
you
can
do
nothing
except
the
study.
What’s
more,
you
have
better
have
your
friends
study
together
through
the
Internet.
It
will
feel
great
to
have
someone
battle
with
you.
Last
but
not
least,
a
strong
willpower
is
fundamental
when
you
study
alone.
A
plan
which
is
based
on
your
daily
schedule
should
be
observed
strictly.
May
my
suggestions
can
address
your
problems
and
if
you
have
any
further
problems,
you
can
contract
me
without
any
hesitation.
Yours
Li
Ming
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封回信，对其表弟没办法集中精力开展居家学习的情况提出建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文。
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和将来时。
结构：总分法。
要求：
对于表弟无法集中精力开展居家学习的情况，根据自己的情况提出建议。
第二步：列提纲（重点短语）
sorry
to
hear；divert
your
attention
from；have
an
efficient
time；be
of
great
help；should
be
observed
strictly。
第三步：连词成句
1.I
am
very
sorry
to
hear
that…..
2.To
be
honest,
it
actually
very
easy
to
divert
your
attention
from
your
study
as
a
result
of
the
games
and
the
network
novels.
3.So
if
you
want
to
have
an
efficient
time
to
your
study.
4I
think
the
following
suggestions
will
be
of
great
help.
5.A
plan
which
is
based
on
your
daily
schedule
should
be
observed
strictly.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序：First
of
all;
What’s
more;
Last
but
not
least。
2.表示并列补充关系:
as
a
result
of;
and；to
be
honest。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：A
plan
which
is
based
on
your
daily
schedule
should
be
observed
strictly.
这边使用了一个限制性定语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如：concentrate
yourself
on；be
of
great
help；battle
with
you；address
your
problems等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
8、2020宝山二模
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
近年人们欢度新春佳节的方式不尽相同。有些人喜欢在家里聚会，有些人喜欢在餐馆聚餐，还有些人喜欢出国过年……
请给你的父母写一封邮件，告诉他们你更喜欢哪种方式。你的文章必须包括:
简单陈述你喜欢的过年方式
建议明年家里过年的方式，并说明理由
注意:请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称
【参考范文】
Dear
Mom
and
Dad,
In
recent
years,
the
Chinese
are
observing
the
Spring
Festival
in
various
ways:
getting
together
at
home
in
a
traditional
way,
dining
out
in
restaurants
or
travelling
abroad
in
fashionable
ways.
As
for
me,
I
favor
the
celebration
at
home
over
other
new
fashions,
because
it
offers
us
the
opportunity
to
spend
time
happily
with
our
family
to
celebrate
the
reunion.
Besides,
nothing
is
more
enjoyable
and
relaxing
than
having
a
taste
of
well-prepared
home-cooked
dinner
on
New
Year’s
Eve.
However,
since
variety
is
the
spice
of
life,
I
suggest
our
spending
the
next
Spring
Festival
travelling
to
other
provinces.
First
and
foremost,
the
holiday
provides
us
with
enough
time
to
travel,
which
won’t
wear
us
out.
In
addition,
as
the
celebration
of
the
Spring
Festival
varies
from
place
to
place,
we
can
experience
different
customs
with
strong
local
characteristics,
thus
having
a
better
understanding
of
the
richness
of
the
customs
and
cultures
in
our
country,
which
can
surely
broaden
our
horizons.
Last
but
not
least,
travelling
across
the
country
during
the
festival
can
strengthen
and
refresh
the
relationships
between
our
family
members
as
we
are
going
to
share
some
unusual
and
unforgettable
memories
during
the
trip.
All
in
all,
though
my
favorite
way
of
spending
the
Spring
Festival
is
staying
at
home
with
my
family,
it
will
be
refreshing
and
memorable
if
we
can
celebrate
this
special
festival
in
an
unusual
way
in
other
provinces
next
year.
Yours,
XXX
9、2020奉贤二模
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
请简要描述图片内容,并结合生活或学习中的例子谈谈你对该图的理解。
【参考范文】
As
is
vividly
depicted
in
the
picture,
some
ants
are
holding
together
and
form
an
ant
bridge
to
let
other
ants
cross
the
ditch
first,
despite
the
risk
of
falling
into
the
water
below.
What
a
thought-provoking
scene
it
is,
giving
me
a
lot
of
food
for
thought.
Take
the
outbreak
of
COVID-19
in
Wuhan
as
an
example.
When
our
country
is
facing
an
overwhelming
epidemic,
everyone
is
willing
to
make
contributions
to
country,
saving
the
citizens’s
lives.
A
large
number
of
nurses
and
doctors
went
to
the
medical
front
lines
regardless
of
their
own
safety.
Patriotic
truck
drivers
risked
infections
to
bring
desperately
needed
food
and
materials
donated
at
home
and
abroad
to
the
people
of
Wuhan.
They
are
just
like
the
ants
in
the
picture,
small
but
powerful.
It’s
through
joint
efforts
of
people
from
all
walks
of
life
that
we
respond
to
the
public
health
crisis
immediately
and
successfully.
In
a
nutshell,
we
must
bear
in
mind
that
as
the
young
generation,
we
should
cultivate
our
awareness
of
cooperation
and
devotion
so
that
we
are
fearless
of
any
difficulty.
10、2020闵行二模
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
假设你是高三某班班长李华，7
月即将毕业，你正计划高考后在班级里开展一项离校公益活动——“绿色离校(Be
a
Green
school-leaver)”旧书回收项目。请写一封倡议信给你们班级同学，信中必须包括：
?该活动的目的和意义
?该活动的具体计划
【参考范文】
Dear
classmates,
As
we
all
know,
our
life
of
high
school
is
coming
to
an
end.
Feeling
reluctant
to
part
with
you,
I
am
planning
to
do
something
unforgettable
and
meaningful.
As
far
as
I’m
concerned,
every
class
of
graduates
leaves
many
used
books
when
graduating
from
school,
and
some
students
even
destroy
them.
It’s
totally
a
waste
of
resources
and
may
result
in
environmental
pollution.
Therefore
I’m
considering
an
activity
called
“Be
a
Green
school-leaver”,
which
requires
participants
to
collect
and
hand
in
used
books
firstly.
After
collecting
these
books,
we
will
organize
and
sort
them,
which
will
finally
be
donated
to
those
who
are
in
need
in
rural
poverty
areas.
As
the
monitor,
I
sincerely
ask
for
your
participating.
Don’t
you
want
to
create
some
memories
while
helping
others
and
this
world?
Let’s
do
this
together!
Yours,
Li
Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，倡议同学们参与离校公益活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
???总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.
阐述倡议主题
2.
介绍活动相关：
1）活动目的和意义
2）活动具体计划
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
graduate；environment-friendly；college
entrance
exam；approach；activity；used
books；public
benefit；plan
on
第三步：连词成句
1.
The
end
of
our
final
term
in
high
school
is
approaching.
2.
I
am
planning
on
a
public
benefit
activity.
3.
The
activity
is
called
Be
a
Green
school-leaver.
4.
The
aim
is
to
recycle
those
used
books
and
donate
them.
5.
In
this
way
we
can
help
those
who
needs
books
and
make
our
school
life
more
meaningful.
6.
Sincerely
hope
you
can
join
me.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First
of
all,
Firstly/First,
Secondly/Second…
And
then,
Finally,
In
the
end,
At
last
2.表并列补充关系：What
is
more,
Besides,
Moreover,
Furthermore,
In
addition
As
well
as,
not
only…but
(also),
including,
3.表转折对比关系：However,
On
the
contrary,
but,
Although+clause(从句),
In
spite
of+n/doing,On
the
one
hand…,On
the
other
hand…
Some…,while
others…,as
for,
so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because,
As,
So,
Thus,
Therefore,
As
a
result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Therefore
I’m
considering
an
activity
called
“Be
a
Green
school-leaver”,
which
requires
participants
to
collect
and
hand
in
used
books
firstly这句话运用了非限制性定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如come
to
an
end，result
in，as
far
as
I’m
concerned等。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
11、2020浦东二模
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
76.
经过一段时间的网上学习之后，明启中学在高三学生中进行了一个题为“你最喜欢的在线上课模式”的调查，调查结果如图所示。
A:
直播课并且有师生互动
B:
录播课并且之后有师生互动时间
C:
直播课但无师生互动
D:
录播课且之后也无师生互动时间
你可能会用到的词汇：
直播课：live
streaming
lesson
录播课：prerecorded
lesson
请你根据该图表写篇作文，你的文中需包含以下信息：
1.
简要描述该图表；
2.
谈谈你的看法。
【范文1】
After
studying
online
for
a
long
period
of
time,
MingQi
Senior
School
conducted
a
survey
to
investigate
students'
favourite
form
of
online
courses.
As
is
shown
by
the
pie
chart,
most
students
like
live
streaming
lessons
with
interactions
between
the
teacher
and
the
students.
30%
of
the
investigated
students
prefer
prerecorded
lessons
with
interactions.
Only
10%
students
like
live
streaming
lessons
or
prerecorded
ones
without
interactions.
According
to
the
statistics,
most
students
tend
to
communicate
with
the
teacher
in
class
and
want
to
get
timely
responses.
I
think
it
is
also
what
the
teachers
want.
In
my
point
of
view,
I
agree
with
the
majority
of
the
investigated
students.
Live
streaming
lessons
with
interactions
can
be
the
most
effective
way
of
on
line
courses.
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
I
must
pay
much
attention
to
what
the
teacher
is
saying
in
case
she
asks
me
to
answer
the
questions.
It
is
similar
to
the
way
we
study
in
the
classroom.
Therefore,
I
think
it
is
the
most
efficient.
What's
more,
immediate
communication
can
solve
students'
problems
if
they
cannot
understand
them
fully,
which
is
helpful
to
improve
our
scores.
Although
prerecorded
lesson
has
its
own
advantages,
such
as
watching
it
again
and
again,
I
think
live
streaming
lesson
is
the
best
form
of
online
study
and
it
suits
me
best.
【范文2】
As
is
depicted
in
the
picture,
students
preferring
live
streaming
lessons
with
interaction
between
teachers.
and
students
account
for
60%,
significantly
outnumbering
recorded
ones
with
interacting
time,
live
streaming
lessons
without
interaction
and
prerecorded
equivalents
alone,
which
take
up
30%,
5%
and
5%
respectively.
From
my
point
of
view,
this
unfold
students’
focus
on
immediate
interaction
when
learning
online,
which
is
concretely
a
necessity
in
learning.
First
and
foremost,
efficiency
and
accuracy
is
what
matters
most
in
online
courses.
That's
why
live
streaming
lessons
with
interacting
time
dwarf
the
other
three
kind
of
lessons.
With
live
streaming
lessons,
teachers
can
stop
at
any
time
to
solve
students’
questions.
Therefore,
students
doubt
won’t
be
piled
up
after
the
lesson
is
over.
Similarly,
teachers
can
correct
their
mistakes
in
time
in
case
that
they
should
mislead
students.
More
significantly,
this
kind
of
lesson
offers
a
chance
for
teachers
to
check
whether
a
student
is
learning
carefully,
which
greatly
promotes
students'
efficiency
and
attention.
Furthermore,
better
listening
experience
is
also
a
major
contribution.
Obviously,
this
kind
of
lesson
provides
almost
the
same
experience
as
learning
at
school.
The
only
difference
is
different
location
of
teachers
and
students.
Therefore,
students
are
more
familiar
to
this
kind
of
lesson
and
give
a
priority
to
it.
In
a
nutshell,
accuracy,
efficiency
and
experience
play
a
paramount
role
in
online
course.
So
I
give
my
unyielding
support
to
live
streaming
lessons
with
interaction
like
the
majority
of
students.
Despite
various
handicaps
during
the
method
of
learning
online,
I
reckon
that
we
can
achieve
success
through
this
kind
of
lesson
and
unremitting
efforts.
(9+9.5+4=22.5分)
【范文3】
As
is
vividly
depicted
in
the
chart,
the
result
of
the
survey
suggests
that
live
streaming
lesson
with
interactions
accounts
for
60%,
topping
the
list.
The
following
options
dominated
by
prerecorded
lesson
with
interactions
respectively
account
for
30%,
5%
and
5%.
The
distribution
of
students’
choice
mirrors
a
wide-spreading
tendency
to
prefer
interactive
lessons
to
non-
interactive
lessons.
Affected
by
the
traditional
teaching
method,
children
stick
to
the
teacher-student
pattern
which
is
suitable
for
them.
From
my
perspective,
it's
rational
to
choose
live
streaming
lesson
with
interactions.
Initially,
live
streaming
lesson
with
interactions
provides
students
with
instant
feedback.
Teachers
can
handle
questions
raised
by
students
while
spontaneously
announce
it
to
all
the
students,
thus
contributing
to
all
the
students
and
engender
the
general
increase
of
learning
efficiency.
Moreover,
interactions
in
life
stream
less
and
take
full
advantage
of
the
advanced
technology.
The
process
of
communication
involves
a
couple
of
technology
which
was
neglected
in
the
past.
The
application
of
modern
technology
can
also
arouse
students'
interest,
thus
promoting
their
sense
of
cooperation
and
active
participation.
In
a
nutshell,
the
live
streaming
lesson
with
elections
benefits
both
students
and
technology.
We
should
cherish
this
kind
of
educational
improvement
not
only
for
ourselves
but
also
for
our
future
generations.
(9.5+9.5+4=23分)
【解析】
本篇书面表达要求写一篇短文。经过一段时间的网上学习之后，明启中学在高三学生中进行了一个题为“你最喜欢的在线上课模式”的调查，
请根据调查结果，写一篇短文来描述调查结果并谈谈你的看法。
【详解】动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。根据内容提示和分析图表可知写作的关键点在于：1.
简要描述该图标，四种网课模式受学生喜欢的程度。2.
就此问题谈谈你的看法。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇、短语及句子有：take
online
courses，conduct
a
survey
among
its
senior
3
students，online
class
mode.
The
results
are
as
follows.
50%
of
the
students
surveyed
like
live
streaming
lesson
with
teacher-student
interaction，30%
of
the
students
like
prerecorded
lesson
with
teacher-student
interaction
after
it，account
for，I
think
interaction
is
necessary.
make
the
online
teaching
atmosphere
more
active，attract
students’
attention，have
problems
explained，in
time，Too
much
screen
time
causes
eyestrain,
and
even
a
decline
in
vision.
have
a
break
regularly。
12、2020静安二模
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
我国教育改革越来越重视培养学生的创新能力，请你从中学生的角度，谈谈我们的教学中哪些做法促进了学生创新能力的发展，提出改进的意见并说明理由。
(注意：请勿出现真实的姓名与学校)
【参考范文】
Dear
classmates,
As
we
all
know,
our
life
of
high
school
is
coming
to
an
end.
Feeling
reluctant
to
part
with
you,
I
am
planning
to
do
something
unforgettable
and
meaningful.
As
far
as
I’m
concerned,
every
class
of
graduates
leaves
many
used
books
when
graduating
from
school,
and
some
students
even
destroy
them.
It’s
totally
a
waste
of
resources
and
may
result
in
environmental
pollution.
Therefore
I’m
considering
an
activity
called
“Be
a
Green
school-leaver”,
which
requires
participants
to
collect
and
hand
in
used
books
firstly.
After
collecting
these
books,
we
will
organize
and
sort
them,
which
will
finally
be
donated
to
those
who
are
in
need
in
rural
poverty
areas.
As
the
monitor,
I
sincerely
ask
for
your
participating.
Don’t
you
want
to
create
some
memories
while
helping
others
and
this
world?
Let’s
do
this
together!
Yours,
Li
Hua
【解析】
本文为说明文。我国教育改革越来越重视培养学生的创新能力，请你从中学生的角度，谈谈我们的教学中哪些做法促进了学生创新能力的发展，提出改进的意见并说明理由。
【详解】本文首先提出我国教育改革越来越重视学生创新能力的培养，在教学中要注重培养学生的创新能力。接着从三个方面来说明如何在教学中培养和促进学生创新能力的发展，提出自己的意见并说明理由。写作时叙述要有序，理由充分有依据。语言要丰富，句式尽量灵活，如运用复合句、倒装等。
【点睛】本文要点完整，结构合理，语言有条理。文中句式非常灵活，尤其是复合句。有定语从句如China's
education
reform
has
paid
more
and
more
attention
to
the
cultivation
of
students'
innovative
ability，which
has
become
an
important
topic
to
promote
students'
innovative
ability
in
teaching；
Change
the
traditional
injection
mode
into
heuristic,
discussion
and
inquiry
mode,
in
which
case
students
are
active
explorers
rather
than
passive
receivers；和As
students,
they
are
happy
to
learn
in
a
loose
and
harmonious
classroom,
which
can
help
their
innovation。状语从句如Students
cannot
innovate
unless
they
can
think,
analyze
and
process
the
information
independently。还有部分倒装，如only
when
teachers
excite
students’
curiosity,
guide
them
to
explore
actively
and
ask
questions
boldly
can
the
spark
of
their
innovative
spirit
be
lighted。以及祈使句如create
an
atmosphere
of
innovative
education
and
provide
a
stage
for
innovation等。
13、2020青浦二模
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李青。史上最长的“寒假”结束后，校刊举办主题征文活动，内容是关于学生在这个“寒假”里发生的一个变化。请你结合自己的实际写一篇文章投稿。你的文章必须包括：
?
简述该变化的具体内容；
?
阐述该变化对你的意义。
（注意：文中请不要出现真实的校名和人名）
【参考范文】
Because
of
novel
Coronavirus,
the
students
had
the
longest
winter
holiday
on
record.
During
the
holiday,
On
the
one
hand,
I
paid
close
attention
to
the
epidemic
situation
through
watching
CCTV
news
or
surfing
the
Internet;
on
the
other
hand
I
insisted
on
studying.
Not
only
did
I
read
classics,
but
also
I
had
online
courses
given
by
my
teachers.
Besides,
I
took
exercise
every
day
to
keep
healthy.
Faced
with
the
disaster,
many
people
including
doctors,
nurses
and
scientists
acted
bravely
and
spared
no
effort
to
fight
against
it.
They
are
real
heroes.
I
was
moved,
so
my
dream
changed
a
lot.
In
the
past,
I
wanted
to
be
a
musician,
but
now
I
want
to
be
a
doctor.
I
hope
I
can
help
more
people
live
healthy
and
happy
lives!
I
will
study
harder
to
realize
my
dream
【解析】
这篇书面表达是一篇话题类作文。假设你是明启中学高三学生李青。史上最长的”寒假”结束后，校刊举办主题征文活动，内容是关于学生在这个”寒假”里发生的一个变化。请你结合自己的实际写一篇文章投稿。
【详解】假设你是明启中学高三学生李青。史上最长的”寒假”结束后，校刊举办主题征文活动，内容是关于学生在这个”寒假”里发生的一个变化。请你结合自己的实际写一篇文章投稿。你的文章必须包括:
简述该变化的具体内容；阐述该变化对你的意义。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般过去时和现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。Not
only
did
I
read
classics,
but
also
I
had
online
courses
given
by
my
teachers.中given
by
my
teachers是过去分词作定语，还应用了倒装句。I
hope
I
can
help
more
people
live
healthy
and
happy
lives!
宾语从句的运用。
14、2020虹口二模
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的学生李华。为了推动校园文化建设，展现当代学生风采，校学生会正策划学生“校园之星”评选活动。学生会初步拟定了“学习之星”、“才艺之星”和“运动之星”三个评选项目。请你给学生会写一封电子邮件，要求增加一个评选项目，并就这个评选项目谈谈你的看法。你的邮件必须包含以下内容：
你要求增加的评选项目；
你的理由；
你对此项目评选的具体实施建议。
注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。
【参考范文】
Student
Union
leaders,
I
was
very
excited
to
learn
that
the
student
union
was
planning
a
student
“campus
star”
competition.
The
student
union
has
preliminarily
drawn
up
three
selection
items:
“learning
star”,
“talent
star”
and
“sports
star”.
But
I
think
we
should
add
a
“writing
star”.
At
present,
influenced
by
computers,
many
students
pay
less
attention
to
handwriting.
Homework
altered
graffiti,
examination
paper
is
not
tidy,
writing
to
be
improved.
I
think
the
specific
suggestions
of
this
project
are
as
follows:
1.
Ask
students
to
present
at
least
two
assignments;
2.
Each
person
copies
a
Chinese
article
and
an
English
written
expression.
Beautiful
writing
will
give
people
a
pleasant
feeling.
I
hope
that
after
this
activity
let
students
have
a
new
understanding
of
writing.
Student
Li
Hua
15、2020嘉定二模
同学们经历了十多年的课堂教学，也体验了两个多月的新型线上教学模式。两种教学模式各有特点。请表明你更偏爱哪种教学模式，并通过比较，阐述你偏爱的理由。
【参考范文】
Affected
by
the
epidemic,
we
have
been
studying
online
for
more
than
two
months.
Online
teaching
is
different
from
classroom
teaching.
Many
students
enjoy
online
teaching,
but
I
prefer
the
latter.
Here
are
the
reasons:
First
of
all,
the
time
of
online
teaching
is
flexible,
but
we
are
required
to
have
a
relatively
high
self-control
consciousness.
However,
we
don’t
need
to
worry
about
discipline
problems
in
classroom
teaching.
Secondly,
our
eyes
can’t
bear
it
for
a
long
time
in
online
teaching,
which
seriously
affect
the
study
efficiency.
In
addition,
differing
from
online
teaching
through
the
screen,
we
can
communicate
with
our
teachers
and
students
face
to
face
in
classroom
teaching
thus
the
teachers
can
easily
judge
the
situation
of
the
class.
To
sum
up,
I
prefer
classroom
teaching
to
online
teaching.
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给英语报刊的编辑写信，发表自己对“学生最应该学会生么”的观点。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1.
你认为学生最应该学会什么？
2.
结合自身情况谈谈你这么认为的理由。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
look
for/
share
sth.
with
sb./
spend
time
in
doing
sth./
as
far
as
sb.
be
concerned/
equip…with…/
to
one’s
surprise/
be
eager
to
do
sth./
lead
to
第三步：连词成句
Hearing
that
you
are
looking
for
some
opinions
on
“What
children
should
learn
most”,
I
feel
honored
to
be
able
to
share
my
views
with
you.
I’m
strongly
against
the
idea
that
children
should
spend
all
of
their
spare
time
learning
playing
the
piano,
English
or
any
other
subjects.
In
my
opinion,
children
should
first
equip
them
with
the
ability
to
tell
right
from
wrong.?
When
I
was
a
child,
I
was
once
caught
cheating
in
the
exam.
I
felt
so
embarrassed
that
I
wished
the
floor
would
open
up.
To
my
surprise,
my
teacher
didn’t
yell
at
me
but
had
a
talk
with
me
in
private.
From
the
private
talk
I
gained
a
lesson
that
I
should
never
take
a
wrong
shortcut
even
though
I
am
eager
to
succeed.
Nowadays
children
are
often
told
that
they
should
achieve
their
goals
whatever
they
do,
which
leads
them
to
wrong
ways
sometimes.
Learning
how
to
tell
right
from
wrong
is
the
first
and
most
important
thing
children
should
learn.
Thank
you
for
taking
time
to
read
my
letter.
I
hope
my
opinions
will
be
a
different
voice
among
all
the
letters
received.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/
if/
though/
although…
定语从句连词：which/
that/
when/
where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达，例如：Hearing
that
you
are
looking
for
some
opinions
on
“What
children
should
learn
most”,
I
feel
honored
to
be
able
to
share
my
views
with
you.中使用了现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句；?Personally
speaking,
I’m
strongly
against
the
idea
that
children
should
spend
all
of
their
spare
time
learning
playing
the
piano,
English
or
any
other
subjects.中that引导同位语从句。
16、2020金山二模
Directions:
Write
an
English
composition
in
120-150
words
according
to
the
instructions
given
below
in
Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生王磊，你经常阅读的英语报刊正在征集读者对于“学生最应该学会什么”的不同意见。你对此话题很感兴趣，写一篇文章表达你的观点，内容包括：
1)
你认为学生最应该学会什么；
2)
结合自身情况谈谈你这么认为的理由。
（文中不要涉及你的真实姓名或学校）
【参考范文】
Dear
editors,
??
Hearing
that
you
are
looking
for
some
opinions
on
“What
children
should
learn
most”,
I
feel
honored
to
be
able
to
share
my
views
with
you.
??
Personally
speaking,
I’m
strongly
against
the
idea
that
children
should
spend
all
of
their
spare
time
learning
playing
the
piano,
English
or
any
other
subjects.
As
far
as
I’m
concerned,
children
should
first
equip
them
with
the
ability
to
tell
right
from
wrong.?
??
When
I
was
a
child,
I
was
once
caught
cheating
in
the
exam.
I
felt
so
embarrassed
that
I
wished
the
floor
would
open
up.
To
my
surprise,
my
teacher
didn’t
yell
at
me
but
had
a
talk
with
me
in
private.
From
the
private
talk
I
gained
a
lesson
that
I
should
never
take
a
wrong
shortcut
even
though
I
am
eager
to
succeed.
??
Nowadays
children
are
often
told
that
they
should
achieve
their
goals
whatever
they
do,
which
leads
them
to
wrong
ways
sometimes.
Hence,
learning
how
to
tell
right
from
wrong
is
the
first
and
most
important
thing
children
should
learn.
??
Thank
you
for
taking
time
to
read
my
letter.
I
hope
my
opinions
will
be
a
different
voice
among
all
the
letters
received.
Yours
sincerely,
Wang
Lei
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给英语报刊的编辑写信，发表自己对“学生最应该学会生么”的观点。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1.
你认为学生最应该学会什么？
2.
结合自身情况谈谈你这么认为的理由。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
look
for/
share
sth.
with
sb./
spend
time
in
doing
sth./
as
far
as
sb.
be
concerned/
equip…with…/
to
one’s
surprise/
be
eager
to
do
sth./
lead
to
第三步：连词成句
Hearing
that
you
are
looking
for
some
opinions
on
“What
children
should
learn
most”,
I
feel
honored
to
be
able
to
share
my
views
with
you.
I’m
strongly
against
the
idea
that
children
should
spend
all
of
their
spare
time
learning
playing
the
piano,
English
or
any
other
subjects.
In
my
opinion,
children
should
first
equip
them
with
the
ability
to
tell
right
from
wrong.?
When
I
was
a
child,
I
was
once
caught
cheating
in
the
exam.
I
felt
so
embarrassed
that
I
wished
the
floor
would
open
up.
To
my
surprise,
my
teacher
didn’t
yell
at
me
but
had
a
talk
with
me
in
private.
From
the
private
talk
I
gained
a
lesson
that
I
should
never
take
a
wrong
shortcut
even
though
I
am
eager
to
succeed.
Nowadays
children
are
often
told
that
they
should
achieve
their
goals
whatever
they
do,
which
leads
them
to
wrong
ways
sometimes.
Learning
how
to
tell
right
from
wrong
is
the
first
and
most
important
thing
children
should
learn.
Thank
you
for
taking
time
to
read
my
letter.
I
hope
my
opinions
will
be
a
different
voice
among
all
the
letters
received.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/
if/
though/
although…
定语从句连词：which/
that/
when/
where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达，例如：Hearing
that
you
are
looking
for
some
opinions
on
“What
children
should
learn
most”,
I
feel
honored
to
be
able
to
share
my
views
with
you.中使用了现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句；?Personally
speaking,
I’m
strongly
against
the
idea
that
children
should
spend
all
of
their
spare
time
learning
playing
the
piano,
English
or
any
other
subjects.中that引导同位语从句。
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