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厦门一中2020-2021学年高三上学期12月阶段性考试
67.
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
About
a
half-mile
behind
our
Minnesota
farm
lay
a
pond.
In
summer,
my
brother
Harry
and
I
would
run
through
a
stand
of
oak
trees
to
skip
stones
there.
The
pond
wore
a
collar
of
black
mud.
It
was
not
a
place
for
swimming.
In
late
summer,
the
pond
would
be
covered
by
a
green
and
bubbly
scum（起泡的浮渣）.
Sometimes
a
strong,
unpleasant
smell
rose
from
it.
We
stayed
away.
When
winter
came,
the
pond
was
once
again
an
inviting
place.
One
day
when
ice
covered
it,
Harry
said
to
me,
揟ry
walking
across.
The
ice
looked
solid.
No
water
showed
through
it,
but
I
hesitated.
Go
ahead.
Harry
urged.
揟ry
it.
You抮e
lighter
than
I
am.
If
the
ice
holds,
we
can
run
and
slide
carefully
on
it.
It抣l
be
fun.
I
wanted
to
please
Harry,
and
I
thought
about
the
fun
of
a
long
slide
on
the
ice.
I
began
to
slide
across
the
pond.
In
the
middle
of
the
pond,
the
ice
gave
way
with
a
sudden
crack（裂缝）!
I
stretched
out（伸展）my
arms.
The
next
thing
I
knew
I
was
hanging
on
to
the
edge
of
a
hole
in
the
ice
by
arms
outstretched
on
the
ice.
From
my
shoulders
down
I
hung
in
icy
water.
I
thought
of
the
bottom
of
the
pond.
I
knew
it
would
be
black
and
awful
down
there,
full
of
mud
and
maybe
rotting
creatures.
I
tried
to
climb
out
of
the
hole,
but
when
I
got
a
knee
on
the
ice,
it
broke
like
window
glass.
Again
and
again
I
tried
to
get
out.
Again
and
again
the
ice
broke
into
pieces.
The
hole
widened.
I
was
wearing
a
coat
of
heavy
material.
As
it
became
completely
wet,
it
dragged
me
down.
I
was
tired
of
the
struggle
and
rested
with
my
arms
stretched
out
on
the
ice.
I
looked
at
Harry
on
shore.
He
seemed
rooted
to
the
spot.
揑
can抰
get
out!
I
screamed
when
I
caught
some
breath.
注意：
1.
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.
至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
Harry
turned
and
ran
from
the
pond.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:
The
moment
I
crashed
through
the
kitchen
door,
sobbing,
mum
rushed
over.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
He
turned
and
ran
from
the
pond.
Staring
at
his
familiar
figure
out
of
sight,
I
wondered:
“Is
he
running
for
help,
or
is
he
running
away
and
leaving
me
sliding
to
the
bottom?
After
what
seemed
to
be
centuries
of
waiting,
I
was
on
the
edge
of
collapse.
Suddenly,
Harry
came
back
with
a
branch,
which
was
large,
black,
and
v-shaped.
He
pushed
the
branch
toward
me.
I
grabbed
it
immediately
and
was
eventually
dragged
out
of
the
icy
water
by
Harry.
What
a
narrow
escape!
We
stumbled
home,
with
my
clothes
dripping
water.
The
moment
I
crashed
through
the
kitchen
door,
sobbing,
mum
rushed
over.
She
helped
me
take
off
my
coat,
and
gave
me
a
quick
bath,
then
passed
me
a
cup
of
milk
to
warm
me
up.
I
tearfully
complained
to
her
about
all
that
had
happened
and
Harry
was
blamed
for
getting
me
sibling
into
such
a
trouble.
His
head
drooping,
Harry
murdered
an
apology
to
me.
I
was
comforted
and
relieved,
but
in
fact,
the
pond
was
still
attractive
to
young
Harry
and
me,
especially
when
winter
came
again.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章叙述了作者小时候与哥哥去附近农场后面的池塘滑冰，冰面裂开，作者不小心掉进冰窟窿的故事。
【详解】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，有一年冬天，作者由于小时候与哥哥哈利到农场后面的一个池塘玩耍，池塘表面结了冰，哥哥认为冰面足够坚固，能够撑得住作者的体重，所以鼓励作者从冰面上走过去。作者很想取悦哥哥，同时也非常想感受滑冰的快乐，于是就尝试着划过去。突然，冰裂开了，作者掉进了冰窟窿，双肩以下都泡在冰冷的水里！
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：他转身从池塘里跑开了……因此，下文应该续写哥哥跑走了以后，作者独自挣扎求生的心理过程。要详细叙述哥哥返回后，带着一个树杈把作者从冰窟窿里面拉出来的情景。第二段的开头是：当我哭着冲进厨房的门时，妈妈冲了过来……因此，下文应该续写作者回到家后，妈妈首先匆忙帮作者脱掉冰冷的外套，给他洗个热水澡以及喝一杯热牛奶；然后，作者缓过来以后，委屈的向妈妈叙述事情发生的经过，妈妈责备哥哥没有照顾好作者；文章最后，作者认为，尽管经此劫难，当冬天到来，那个池塘对哥哥和他依然是极大的诱惑。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，用下划线标出所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：run
away，leave
sb.
doing，take
off等高级词汇；非限制性定语从句Harry
came
back
with
a
branch,
which
was
large,
black,
and
v-shaped，after引导的时间状语从句，with
my
clothes
dripping
water复合结构等高级句式。
河北省石家庄市2021届高中毕业班教学质量检测（一）
47.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。
I
prided
myself
on
being
a
good
neighbor.
My
husband,
Charles,
and
I
knew
everyone
who
lived
along
our
rural
road.
Walking
that
road
now,
I
thought
about
how
we
all
relied
on
each
other.
We
picked
up
mail
for
people
on
vacation,
lent
out
tools,
and
watched
each
other's
children.
Each
house
I
passed
held
a
friendly
association.
Except
Kelly抯.
It
hadn抰
always
been
this
way.
At
one
time,
Kelly
and
I
had
a
good
relationship.
Our
children
were
close
in
age
and
often
played
together.
Our
husbands
were
playmates.
I
never
went
by
her
house
without
waving
or
stopping
to
chat
if
I
saw
her
outside.
Not
anymore.
If
Kelly
was
out
in
her
yard
when
I
walked
or
drove
by,
I
acted
as
if
I
didn’t
see
her.
As
if
there
were
a
big
wall
between
us.
At
first
it
felt
satisfying
to
let
Kelly
know
what
I
thought
of
her.
Today
the
sight
of
her
house
just
made
me
sad.
How
did
things
go
wrong?
It
had
all
started
with
a
cat.
A
stray
(流浪猫)
who
turned
up
in
my
driveway.
That
wasn抰
unusual.
I
already
had
two
stray
cats
I
had
adopted
as
well
as
a
dog.
But
this
cat
was
violent.
He
drove
my
own
cats
away
from
their
food
bowls
and
hissed
at
me
when
I
tried
to
drive
him
off.
Imagine
my
surprise
a
few
days
later
when
Kelly
announced
she
was
taking
in
the
cat.
揑
think
he抯
sweet,
she
said.
I
didn抰
even
know
that
Kelly
liked
cats.
She抎
never
had
one
before
as
far
as
I
knew.
Living
with
Kelly
didn抰
make
the
cat
any
friendlier.
He
constantly
showed
up
on
our
porch,
stealing
our
cats
food
and
picking
fights.
揟hat
cat抯
out
of
control,
I
said
to
Kelly
angrily
over
the
phone
one
day.
Ive
had
enough
of
it.
揌e抯
always
perfectly
sweet
with
us!
Kelly
said,
getting
defensive.
揑
had
no
idea
you
disliked
him
so
much.
注意：
1.
续写词数应为150左右；
2.
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
That
was
the
first
brick
in
the
wall
between
us.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One
day,
when
I
was
walking
on
that
road
again,
I
saw
Kelly
smiling
at
me.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
That
was
the
first
brick
in
the
wall
between
us.
On
a
sunny
day,
I
was
bathed
in
the
beautiful
sunshine
when
suddenly
the
cat
jumped
on
my
laps.
It
seemed
to
come
out
of
nowhere
so
my
hair
almost
stood
on
end.
Bouncing
up
from
my
chair,
I
dropped
the
cat
hard
on
the
ground
and
ran
after
it.
While
this
was
going
on,
Kelly
was
just
standing
on
her
balcony
glaring
at
me.
“That
was
how
you
treat
my
cat?”
she
shouted.
A
brick
turned
into
a
wall
from
then
on.
One
day,
when
I
was
walking
on
that
road
again，I
saw
Kelly
smiling
at
me.
I
smiled
back,
saying:
揑
was
sorry
for
the
cat
the
other
day!
She
admitted
the
cat
was
not
friendly
sometimes
and
her
husband
had
sent
it
the
揝tray
Cats
Shelter.
揙ur
relationship
is
not
that
easy
to
break,
isn抰
it?
She
looked
at
me
in
the
eye.
We
burst
into
laughter
immediately
and
gone
was
the
wall.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，作者和邻居们都相处融洽，但是凯利除外。之前有一段时间，作者和凯利的关系很好，但后来因为一只流浪猫，两人的关系开始交恶。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：那是我们之间墙上的第一块砖。本段应该写在一个阳光明媚的日子里，我沐浴在美丽的阳光下，突然一只猫跳到我的膝盖上。不知从哪里冒出来的，我的头发都竖起来了。我从椅子上跳起来，把猫重重地摔在地上，然后追了过去。当这一切发生的时候，凯利正站在阳台上瞪着我。“你就是这样对待我的猫的？””她喊道。从那时起，一块砖变成了一堵墙。第二段开头是：有一天，当我再次走在那条路上时，我看见凯利对我微笑。本段应该写我笑着回答说：“那天我为猫感到难过！她承认这只猫有时候不太友好，她的丈夫把它送到了“流浪猫收容所”。“我们的关系不那么容易破裂，不是吗？”她看着我的眼睛。我们立刻大笑起来，墙不见了。
续写时要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写的内容要与原文保持一致。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了短语和高级句子。如：stand
on
end，bounce
up，run
after，from
then
on，burst
into
laughter等短语；时间状语从句While
this
was
going
on,
Kelly
was
just
standing
on
her
balcony
glaring
at
me.非谓语结构Bouncing
up
from
my
chair,
I
dropped
the
cat
hard
on
the
ground
and
ran
after
it.等高级句式。
汕头市金山中学2021届高三年级上学期联考
47.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Emily
White
was
born
seventeen
years
ago
with
so
many
birth
problems
in
her
body.
Some
of
her
organs,
bones
and
muscles
were
out
of
shape.
No
one
expected
her
to
survive.
She
did
make
it
but
with
her
strange
body
figure,
everyone
could
recognize
her,
even
from
a
distance.
In
Emily
White's
hometown,
there
was
a
yearly
outdoor
performance
in
the
school
auditorium（礼堂）.
It
had
been
performed
for
so
many
years
and
actually
had
become
one
of
the
most
important
events
of
the
Christmas
season
for
many
of
the
town's
people.
Many
people
tried
out
each
year
for
it
but
so
many
were
turned
away.
It
could
only
include
the
most
excellent
people
in
the
field.
Emily
had
a
beautiful
singing
voice.
Last
year
she
went
to
Mrs.
Owens
her
music
teacher
to
ask
to
join
in
the
performance.
Without
letting
her
sing,
Mrs.
Owens
took
a
look
at
Amy's
body
and
said,
"Child,
you
just
don't
fit.
Everyone
would
stare
at
you
and
that
would
make
you
uncomfortable.
It
would
make
them
uncomfortable,
too."
Without
singing
a
single
note,
Emily
was
sent
back
through
the
door
of
the
choral（合唱）room.
Hurt
and
upset,
she
decided
never
to
try
out
again.
But
Mrs.
Owens
then
retired.
This
year,
there
came
a
new
music
teacher,
Butler.
He
heard
about
Emily
and
suggested
that
she
have
a
try.
Emily
didn't
want
to
be
rejected
again,
so
she
hesitated
a
little
about
it.
As
Emily
struggled,
the
door
was
pushed
open
and
Mr.
Butler
called,
"Emily,
you're
next."
Although
kind
of
nervous.
Emily
did
as
Mr.
Butler
told
her
to
do.
Mr.
Butler
sat
by
the
piano
to
accompany
Emily.
When
Emily
finished
her
testing
performance,
she
thanked
Mr.
Butler
and
knew
the
result
would
be
posted
on
the
door
of
the
choral
room
the
next
day.
Emily
couldn't
sleep
that
night.
She
was
suffering
from
the
feelings
that
she
didn't
fit
and
the
great
need
to
be
accepted.
By
the
next
morning,
her
stomach
was
even
in
pain
because
of
stress.
Para1:
The
next
day,
Emily
nervously
glanced
at
the
list
on
the
door
of
the
choral
room.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para
2:
Finally,
the
day
of
performance
came.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Paragraph
1
The
next
day,
Emily
nervously
glanced
at
the
list
on
the
door
of
the
choral
room.
She
was
not
rejected
this
time.
Her
name
was
posted
at
the
top
of
the
list.
She,
Emily
White,
was
chosen
to
be
the
leading
singer!
She
would
sing
alone
in
the
performance.
Emily
couldn't
believe
her
eyes.
There
must
be
some
mistake.
But
Mr.
Buttler
said
to
her
with
determined
eyes,
"Emily,
I
choose
you
because
you
should
perform
the
part
your
voice
is
unusual.
Believe
in
yourself."
Greatly
encouraged,
Emily
practiced
really
hard.
Paragraph
2
Finally,
the
day
of
performance
came.
Standing
in
front
of
the
line,
Emily
felt
her
throat
tight
and
her
palms
sweating.
When
the
curtain
opened
up,
the
eyes
of
the
whole
audience
fell
upon
Emily.
"Emily
White!"
Someone
whispered.
Then,
along
with
the
first
note
of
music,
Emily
began
to
sing
her
heart
out.
Her
voice
was
like
a
nightingale
ringing
in
the
auditorium.
Applause!
Emily
felt
so
happy
and
comfortable.
She
was
shining
on
the
stage.
Emily
White,
with
so
many
birth
problems
in
her
body,
was
an
angel.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读文章可知，Emily17年前出生时身体就有很多问题，她的一些器官、骨骼和肌肉变形了，好在Eimly有一副美丽的歌喉，但她在去年想要参加音乐选拔，却被音乐老师无情拒绝。今年来了一位新的音乐老师听说了她的事情，给与了她一次展示自己的机会，Emily很感激，但到等待选拔结果的时候她很紧张。续写部分分为两段。
【详解】根据提示，第一段开头：The
next
day,
Emily
nervously
glanced
at
the
list
on
the
door
of
the
choral
room.
Emily匆忙赶到合唱室，焦虑地看着合唱室门上的名单。所以可以接着写：她这一次没有被拒绝，她的名字位于榜首，被选中成为了主唱，她可以在表演中独唱了。但是Emily不敢相信，觉得肯定是搞错了，但Butler老师带着坚定的眼神说：“我选择你是因为你要演唱这一部分，你的声音太不寻常了，相信自己。”受到了极大的鼓舞，Emily的训练真的非常努力。
第二段的开头是：终于，表演的那天来了。所以可以接着写：站在队伍前面，Emily感到喉咙发紧，手心冒汗。大幕打开时，所有观众的目光都落在Emily身上。“Emily
White!”有人小声说。接着，随着音乐的第一个音符，Emily开始放声歌唱。她的声音像夜莺在礼堂里鸣响。掌声!
Emily感到很高兴和舒适。她在舞台上光芒四射。Emily
White，尽管她的身体里有那么多的生育问题，但她是一个天使。
续写要求字数为150字，按要求完成续写内容。
【点睛】两段续写的内容合乎事件的发展，描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子，如：glanced
at；rejected；determined
eyes；nightingale
ringing
in
the
auditorium等高级词汇；运用被动表达：She
was
not
rejected
this
time.；Her
name
was
posted
at
the
top
of
the
list.；She,
Emily
White,
was
chosen
to
be
the
leading
singer!等；分词作状语：Greatly
encouraged和Standing
in
front
of
the
line；由when引导时间状语从句：When
the
curtain
opened
up,
the
eyes
of
the
whole
audience
fell
upon
Emily.等高级表达。
“决胜高考”2021届新高考八省第一次模拟测试
47.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It
was
a
lazy
Sunday
morning,
the
type
of
day
that
getting
out
of
bed
requires
an
effort.
When
Marilyn
and
I
entered
the
kitchen,
Lori
was
already
at
the
table
doing
her
homework.
Seeing
us
coming,
she,
suddenly,
stood
and
faced
me,
揥hy
are
there
more
pictures
of
Lisa
than
there
are
of
me?
she
asked.
Lisa
is
our
older
daughter.
I
stared
back,
not
understanding
the
question.
Lori
turned
and
left
the
room.
Caught
off-guard
by
the
question,
I
looked
at
Marilyn.
揂re
there
more
pictures
of
Lisa
than
of
Lori?
Marilyn
shrugged
and
raised
her
eyebrows
in
a
motion
of
puzzlement.
揂re
you
aware
that
there
are
more
pictures
of
Lisa
than
Lori?
I
added.
Marilyn
said,
揑抳e
never
counted
them.
I
don抰
know.
Marilyn抯
answer
was
the
same
as
my
thoughts,
揑
hadn抰
realized
that
there
was
any
significant
difference.
Now
why
would
Lori
ask
such
a
question?
I
asked.
Marilyn
just
shook
her
head
and
stared
back
at
me.
After
a
few
minutes
of
thought
she
said,
揥hen
Lisa
was
born,
you
were
taking
photographs.
You
hardly
went
anywhere
without
a
camera.
When
Lori
was
born,
you
were
involved
in
colored
slides
(幻灯片).
There
must
be
hundreds
of
slides
of
Lori
somewhere
in
the
house
that
Lori
has
never
seen
or
doesn’t
remember.”
After
digesting
Marilyn’s
remarks,
I
agreed.
“After
Lori
leaves,
we’ll
look
for
those
slides.
Who
knows,
we
may
find
more
slides
of
Lori
than
pictures
of
Lisa,
I
joked.
Later
that
afternoon,
when
we
were
alone,
we
went
into
the
basement
where
we
had
stored
the
boxes
that
we
had
brought
from
our
previous
home.
It
wasn抰
long
before
we
discovered
the
trays
of
slides,
and
for
the
rest
of
the
afternoon
we
looked
at
each
tray,
pointing
out
those
slides
that
highlighted
Lori.
揥hat
are
you
going
to
do?
Marilyn
asked.
揑t抯
her
birthday
in
a
few
weeks,
I
said,
揥e抣l
select
about
one
hundred
slides
with
Lori
and
convert
them
into
pictures,
put
them
into
an
album
and
give
to
her
as
a
gift.
I
don’t
know
if
the
album
will
answer
her
question,
but
at
least
she’ll
know
that
we
care
enough
to
find
her
an
answer.”
注意：1.
续写词数应为150左右：
2.
开头已给出。
Paragraph
1:
Over
the
next
few
days,
we
secretly
went
through
all
of
our
slides.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph
2:
On
November
24,
before
leaving
for
work,
I
opened
her
door
and
slipped
the
album
inside.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】One
possible
version
Over
the
next
few
days,
we
secretly
went
through
all
of
our
slides.
We
kept
on
selecting
and
rejecting
pictures
until
we
were
satisfied.
Those
pictures
brought
back
memories
of
the
early
years
of
our
marriage
and
we
hoped
they
showed
how
we
felt
about
our
daughter.
Marilyn
had
them
converted
into
photographs.
Then,
we
placed
them
into
an
album
with
a
birthday
card
explaining
why
her
mother
and
I
had
put
the
album
together.
When
the
album
was
finally
finished,
we
hid
the
book
until
her
birthday.
On
November
24,
before
leaving
for
work,
I
opened
her
door
and
slipped
the
album
inside.
Then
I
left
the
house
and
drove
to
work.
I
was
about
to
enter
the
office
when
the
telephone
rang.
I
picked
up
the
receiver,
and
on
the
other
end
of
the
receiver,
a
tiny
voice
spoke,
''I
love
you,
Daddy,
''
she
said
and
disconnected.
The
receiver
remained
against
my
ear
for
a
few
more
minutes
before
I
placed
it
on
the
telephone.
Our
message
had
been
delivered
and
acknowledged.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写。文章主要讲述，一天作者的女儿Lori问他为什么Lisa的照片比自己多。作者一开始不明白是怎么回事，后来在Marilyn的提示下才明白，原来Lisa小时候拍了很多照片放在家里，而Lori的是幻灯片，也有很多。作者下午去储藏室找有Lori的幻灯片，准备把它们转化成照片，在生日时给她惊喜。
【详解】续写分为两个部分
第一部分的开头是：接下来的几天，我们秘密地看完了所有的幻灯片。所以可以接着写：他们选取一些照片作为生日礼物，在选照片的过程中想起了一些美好的回忆。他们把选好的照片装进相册，准备给Lori惊喜。
第二部分的开头是：11月24日，在前往工作前，我打开Lori的门，悄悄把相册放了进去。所以可以接着写：在作者到达工作地后，接到了Lori打来的电话。她对作者说了一些暖心的话，让他感动的话。作者也很高兴自己的心意被女儿接受了。
续写内容要符合逻辑，注意时态、人称、主谓一致。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Then,
we
placed
them
into
an
album
with
a
birthday
card
explaining
why
her
mother
and
I
had
put
the
album
together.中why引导宾语从句；I
was
about
to
enter
the
office
when
the
telephone
rang.中使用了固定句型was
about
to
do…when…“正要做某事（突然）”
长郡中学2021届高三开学摸底考试
47.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
William
Preston
was
sorry
to
see
his
mother
Krystal
Preston
struggle.
Finding
herself
newly
single
with
three
children
and
three
dogs
inside
her
home,
Krystal
Preston
said
she
was
at
a
"low
point"
in
her
life.
The
family
had
just
made
a
fresh
start,
but
with
no
car
or
means
of
transportation,
Krystal
was
struggling
to
make
ends
meet.
"The
last
couple
of
weeks
have
been
filled
with
so
many
tears,
anger,
confusion,
and
heartache,"
Krystal
wrote.
William
was
only
13,
but
as
the
oldest
boy,
he
already
considered
himself
the
man
of
the
family.
He
was
a
hard
worker
who
often
helped
out
around
the
neighborhood
to
earn
extra
cash
for
his
family,
doing
everything
including
odd
jobs.
After
watching
a
YouTube
video
of
someone
gifting
their
mother
a
car,
William
immediately
began
setting
his
plan
in
motion.
William
went
on
Facebook's
marketplace
and
soon
located
an
inexpensive
car.
The
boy
looked
around
his
house
and
his
eyes
landed
on
the
only
valuable
object
he
owned:
his
Xbox
(微软游戏机).
If
he
combined
the
value
of
the
Xbox
with
his
own
ability
to
trade
work
for
cash,
perhaps
it
was
possible
for
him
to
help
his
mother
out.
He
quickly
typed
an
email
to
the
seller.
"It
was
really
cheap
so
I
asked
her
if
I
could
trade
it
or
earn
it.
And
at
first
she
said
no,
but
after
she
thought
about
it,
then
she
said
yes,"
William
recalled.
William
negotiated
(谈判)
a
trade
with
the
woman,
providing
house
and
yard
work
along
with
his
Xbox
in
exchange
for
the
car.
When
the
deal
was
done,
the
seller
even
came
to
his
house
with
him.
Krystal
said
that
the
day
her
son
walked
into
the
kitchen
and
told
her
he'd
bought
her
a
car,
and
that
she
didn't
believe
him
at
first.
After
she
met
the
seller,
however,
she
began
to
see
that
he
was
absolutely
telling
the
truth.
Paragraph
1:
Krystal
was
so
moved
by
her
son's
actions.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph
2:
Krystal
says
that
her
son's
actions
have
been
life-changing
in
many
ways.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Paragraph
1:
Krystal
was
so
moved
by
her
son's
actions.
She
was
so
proud
of
what
a
good
young
man
he'd
become
that
she
shared
a
photograph
of
William
and
the
car
along
with
the
story
of
how
he'd
stepped
up
to
help
her
out.
"I'm
proud
of
what
my
kid
did,
but
as
mom,
I'm
supposed
to
be
able
to
take
care
of
my
kids.
I'm
supposed
to
do
this,
not
the
other
way
around,"
Krystal
said.
"What
13-year-old
buys
their
mom
a
car?
I
don't
know
any.
I
can't
even
express
it;
there
are
no
words
that
can
express
my
gratitude
and
how
proud
I
am."
Paragraph
2:
Krystal
says
that
her
son's
actions
have
been
life-changing
in
many
ways.
He
is
the
boy
who
understands
what's
really
important
in
life.
He
gave
up
his
favorite
Xbox
for
his
mother.
When
he
is
free,
he
often
helps
look
after
the
three
dogs
in
his
house,
and
this
shows
he
is
a
kind
person.
He
said,
"No
matter
how
tough
things
get,
my
family
will
go
through
soon."
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。
【详解】文章主要讲述William
Preston的母亲Krystal
Preston正处于人生低谷，独自抚养三个孩子和三条狗，家里没有交通工具，Krystal只能勉强维持生计。13岁的William是家中长子，他努力挣钱帮母亲养家，受一段视频影响，他把自己的微软游戏机的价值和用工作换现金的能力结合起来，为母亲买了一辆车。
读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来，续写时注意词数应为150左右。
这篇短文续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：Krystal被她儿子的行为所感动。所以接下来要详细写儿子是怎样做的，她看到这些后的感受。第二段开头是：Krystal说她儿子的行为在很多方面改变了她的生活。接下来应该写儿子的日常行为，对家的贡献，全家生活和母亲心态的改变。
【点睛】作者所续写内容符合文章的发展进程，情节合理，字数符合要求。作者在文中使用了复合句，固定句型，使得文章句式灵活多变，也展现了作者较高的英语句式驾驭功底。如She
was
so
proud
of
what
a
good
young
man
he'd
become
that
she
shared
a
photograph
of
William
and
the
car
along
with
the
story
of
how
he'd
stepped
up
to
help
her
out.运用了so…that句型和宾语从句；there
are
no
words
that
can
express
my
gratitude
and
how
proud
I
am.和He
is
the
boy
who
understands
what's
really
important
in
life.运用了定语从句；this
shows
he
is
a
kind
person.运用了宾语从句。此外，作者在文中较多使用高级词汇，如be
supposed
to,
express
gratitude,
No
matter
how,
go
through等，使得文章表达更准确生动。
江苏省苏州四市五区2020~2021学年第一学期高三期初调研试卷
47.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Just
after
New
Year’s,
before
school
vacation
ended.
I
went
out
for
a
walk.
It
was
a
walk
I抎
been
meaning
to
take
ever
since
we
moved
to
the
house.
I
took
my
camera-the
first
time
I'd
taken
my
camera
out
since
we
came
to
the
country-and
went,
dressed
in
my
down
jacket
and
wearing
heavy
boots.
I
walked
toward
the
seemingly
abandoned
house
that
I
could
see
across
the
fields
from
the
upstairs
window.
A
truck
was
parked
at
the
end
of
the
road,
beside
a
tiny,
weather-beaten
house.
There
was
smoke
coming
out
of
the
chimney,
and
curtains
in
the
two
little
windows
on
either
side
of
the
door.
A
dog
was
in
the
yard,
who
barked
when
he
saw
me
coming.
And
beside
the
truck-no,
actually
in
the
truck,
or
at
least
with
his
head
inside
it,
was
a
man.
揌i,"
I
called.
It
would
have
been
silly
to
turn
around
and
start
walking
home
without
saying
anything,
even
though
I've
promised
my
parents
all
my
life
that
I
would
never
talk
to
strange
men.
He
lifted
out
his
head,
a
gray
head,
smiled-a
nice
smile-and
said,
"Miss
Chalmers.
I'm
glad
you've
come
to
visit."
揗eg,"
I
said.
I
was
puzzled.
How
did
he
know
who
I
was?
＂For
Margaret?"
he
asked,
coming
over
and
shaking
my
hand.
“Forgive
me.
My
hands
are
very
dirty.
My
battery
dies
in
this
cold
weather."
＂How
did
you
know
my
name
was
Chalmers?"
He
wiped
his
hands
on
a
towel
that
was
hanging
from
the
door
handle
of
the
truck.
"My
dear,
I
apologize.
I
have
not
even
introduced
myself.
My
name
is
Will
Banks.
And
it's
much
too
cold
to
stand
out
here.
Your
feet
must
be
frozen,
even
in
those
e
inside,
and
I'll
make
us
each
a
cup
of
tea.
And
I'll
tell
you
how
I
know
your
name.
I
stood
unmoved.
He
saw
me
hesitate,
and
smiled.
"Meg,"
he
said,
揑'm
seventy
years
pletely
harmless,
even
to
a
beautiful
young
girl
like
e
on
in
and
keep
me
company
for
a
bit,
and
get
warm."
I
laughed,
because
he
knew
what
I
was
thinking,
and
very
few
people
ever
know
what
I'm
thinking.
Then
I
went
in
his
house.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
He
took
my
jacket
and
hung
it
up
with
his,
and
poured
tea
into
two
thick
pottery
mugs.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________It's
nice
to
have
a
new
friend,
like
Will..
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】One
possible
version:
He
took
my
jacket
and
hung
it
up
with
his,
and
poured
tea
into
two
thick
pottery
mugs.
After
we
sat
at
the
table,
Will
told
me
the
whole
story.
The
house
my
family
was
living
in
was
actually
built
by
his
grandfather.
He
was
born,
raised
and
married
in
that
house.
Alter
his
Margaret
died,
he
moved
to
this
small
house.
When
he
heard
my
parents
were
looking
for
a
place,
he
offered
the
house
to
them.
He
thought
it
was
a
perfect
place
for
a
writer
like
my
father-the
peace
there
stimulated
imagination.
He
said
again
that
he
was
glad
I'd
come
to
visit.
It's
nice
to
have
a
new
friend,
like
Will.
I
suggested
taking
pictures
of
him.
"My
dear,"
he
said,
straightening
his
shoulders
and
buttoning
the
top
button
of
his
shirt.
"I
would
be
honored."
The
soft
light
was
coming
in
through
the
kitchen
window
onto
his
face.
He
sat
right
there,
smiling
and
talking.
I
just
shot
quickly.
Years
later,
those
pictures
still
brought
back
the
warm
memories
of
that
day.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者搬家后第一次出去散步，在一个小木屋遇见了70多岁的Will
Banks，Will
Banks在打招呼时喊出了作者的名字，但是作者却不认识他，Will
Banks邀请作者进屋喝杯茶，顺便讲述他为什么知道作者的名字。
【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：他拿着我的夹克衫和他的挂在一起，向两个厚陶杯里倒茶……，所以应该写进屋后的情况，即Will
Banks向作者讲述是如何得知作者的名字的；第二段开头是：有一个像Will这样的朋友还不错……，本段应该作者听了Will讲述的故事后，把Will当成在这个陌生国家的朋友，提议给他拍些照片，多年后，这些照片仍能让作者想起那些温暖的回忆。续写时要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：look
for，suggest
doing
sth.，bring
back等高级词汇；After
we
sat
at
the
table,
Will
told
me
the
whole
story.中After引导的时间状语从句，He
said
again
that
he
was
glad
I'd
come
to
visit.中that引导的宾语从句等高级句式。

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