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2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十）
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Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes. As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty. He would have been a stray (流浪的) dog, until he came to me.
I was seven years old. My dad had just got a new job in Nasik. We had moved into a rented house. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.
It was a cold dark night. We had our meal and went to sleep. Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amused with what I saw outside.
There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door. It was wet and trembling. At first it was difficult to see the little one. It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its presence.
It was trying to get under the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had managed to get in as I could see only its head outside the doormat. Was it sick or injured?
I felt pity for the poor soul. I went in and came out with an old towel. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he became dry. I took him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow. He seemed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.
The next morning, everyone in the family came to know about the unusual guest. “Shall we keep him with us？” I questioned my mom.
Like any other parents would, my parents first totally refused my idea but my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty.
Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.
One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg.
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Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly.
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思路分析
【文章大意】　时至今日，我依旧记得Spotty。它本是一只流浪狗，在一个寒冷的夜晚，它蜷缩在我家门口，被我发现。心生怜悯的我把它抱进来，并为它做了一个温暖的小窝。第二天，我和姐姐央求爸爸和妈妈收养了Spotty。慢慢地，它成为了我们家庭的一员。
【写作指导】　
Paragraph 1的开头语是“一天，Spotty像往常一样散步后归来，但是断了一条腿”，文章接下来应该描述对Spotty伤口的处理，作者的伤心或愤怒等，也可能涉及Spotty虽然受伤了，但是依旧很坚强。
Paragraph 2的开头语是“大约一年后，一天半夜，我们听到Spotty上气不接下气地叫”，再结合Paragraph 1的内容可知，文章接下来应该描述Spotty的死亡。
续写句式提炼
一天后；spotty从日常散步回来，腿骨折了。
翻译：
我喊我妈妈，她很快在他腿上绑了绷带，给他食物吃。我很难过。
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但是第二天，spotty恢复了正常的比赛，尽管他的腿受伤了。
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这件事之后，我和spotty的关系变得更加密切。我真的很钦佩他的勇气。
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差不多一年后，一个午夜，我们听到spotty气喘吁吁地叫着。
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我们走出来，看到他在不停地吠叫，向某个地方走去。
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过了一会儿，spotty变得安静了。
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第二天早上，当我没有看到spotty时，我的心脏跳了一跳。
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我在每一个角落都找他，但他却不见踪影。我哭着等着他，但没有他的迹象。
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spotty会怎么样？他会死吗？这些是我脑海中唯一的问题，但它们永远没有答案。
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参考答案：
One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg.
I called out my mother and she quickly tied a bandage around his leg and gave him food to eat. I was very upset.
But the next day, Spotty was up to his usual games though his leg was injured.
After this incident my relation with Spotty became more intense. I really admired him for his courage.
Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly.
We came out and saw that he was barking continuously heading somewhere.
After some time Spotty became quiet.
The next morning, my heart skipped a beat when I didn't see Spotty.
I searched for him in each and every corner but he was nowhere. I cried and waited for him but there were no signs of him.
What would have happened to Spotty? Would he have died? These were the only questions in my mind, but they all remained unanswered forever.
篇章成文
One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg. I called out my mother and she quickly tied a bandage around his leg and gave him food to eat. I was very upset. But the next day, Spotty was up to his usual games though his leg was injured. After this incident my relation with Spotty became more intense. I really admired him for his courage.
Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly. We came out and saw that he was barking continuously heading somewhere. After some time Spotty became quiet. The next morning, my heart skipped a beat when I didn't see Spotty. I searched for him in each and every corner but he was nowhere. I cried and waited for him but there were no signs of him. What would have happened to Spotty? Would he have died? These were the only questions in my mind, but they all remained unanswered forever.
课后练习
Many years earlier, my mother knew that she could not send me to college and pay for it. She worked in a retail store and made just enough to pay the bills and take care of the other children at home. If I wanted to go to college, it was up to me to find out how to get there.
I found that I qualified for some grants because of the size of our family, my mom’s income and my SAT scores. There was enough to cover school and books, but not enough for room and board. I accepted a job as part of a work-study program. While not attractive, it was one I could do. I washed dishes in the school cafeteria.
Just when I thought I was going to drop out of my college career, an angel appeared. Well, one of those that are on earth, without wings. “I heard that you need some help,” he said. “What do you mean?” I asked, trying to figure out which area of my life he meant. “Financially, to stay in school.” “Well, I make it okay. I just have trouble working all these hours and finding time to study.” “Well, I think I have a way to help you out.”
He went on to explain that his grandparents needed help on the weekends. All that was required of me was cooking meals and helping them get in and out of bed in the morning and evening. The job paid four hundred dollars a month, twice the money I was making washing dishes. Now I would have time to study. I went to meet his grandparents and accepted the job.
My first discovery was his grandmother’s great love of music. She spent hours playing her old, off-key piano. One day, she told me I didn’t have enough fun in my life and took it upon herself to teach me the art. Grandma was impressed with my ability and encouraged me to continue. Weekends in their house became more than just books and cooking, they were filled with the wonderful sounds of the out-of-tune piano and two very out-of-tune singers.
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1
When Christmas break came, Grandma got a chest cold, and I was afraid to leave her.
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Paragraph 2
The envelope was from grandma who had just passed away.
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参考答案：
Paragraph1:
When Christmas break came, Grandma got a chest cold, and I was afraid to leave her. I hadn’t been home since Labor Day, and my mother was anxious to see me. I agreed to come home, but for two weeks instead of four, so I could return to Grandma and Grandpa. I said my good-byes, arranged for their temporary care and return home. As I was loading my car to go back to school, the phone rang. “Grandma died last night, I’m sorry.”I hung up the phone feeling like my world had ended. I had lost my friend, and that was far worse than knowing I would have to return to washing dishes. I went back at the end of four weeks, asking to begin the work-study program again. The financial aid advisor looked at me as if I had lost my mind. I explained my position, then he smiled and slid me an envelope. “This is for you,” he said.
Paragraph 2:
The envelope was from grandma. She had known how sick she was. In the envelope was enough money to pay for the rest of my college year and a request that I take piano lessons in her memory. Moved to tears, I determined to learn piano lessons by heart and my memory of grandma motivated me to practice day and night. I don’t think the piano piece was even played with more feeling than it was my second year in college. Now, years later, when I walk by a piano, I smile and think of Grandma. She is playing the piano smilingly in heaven, I am sure.

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