高考英语二轮写作专题:简单句的润色 课件(33张PPT)

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高考英语二轮写作专题:简单句的润色 课件(33张PPT)

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课件33张PPT。Love in your eyes
Sitting silent by my side
Going on Holding hand
Walking through the nights
Hold me up Hold me tight
Lift me up to touch the sky
Teaching me to love with heart
Helping me open my mind
I can fly
I'm proud that I can fly
To give the best of mine
Till the end of the time
Believe me I can fly
I'm proud that I can fly
To give the best of mine
The heaven in the sky
欣赏美Proud of you How to simple sentencespolishFill in the blanks using the expressions according to the video.1.The 21st century ,the eyes of the world are now on the west coast of Pacific Ocean ______China is getting ready to undertake unprecedented responsibilities.
2. Since China adopted its reform and opening-up policy ________ ______(30years) ago,its economy has been growing at an amazingly fast speed.
3. Chinese President Xi Jinping announced that China will host China International Import Expo_______ (start) from 2018.创设情境---引入美where three decadesstarting创设情境---引入美Do you know any other ways to make your simple sentences
more colorful?
↓ polish ?How to polish ?(润色) 润色升级 1. He dreamed of flying in the sky.1.尽量使用高级词汇
2.短语优先 He had a dream.
He wanted to fly in the sky.合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 2. He always made himself a paper plane.
He enjoyed making it best.He always made himself a paper plane, which he enjoyed best.恰当使用从句合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 3. He finished homework.
Then he made himself a paper plane to
play with.Having finished his homework, he made himself a paper plane to play with.使用非谓语动词合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 4.
There was a plane flying in the sky. What a beautiful plane flying in
the sky!使用感叹句合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 5. He said to himself: “Something must be done at once.” He said to himself : “I must do something
at once.”使用被动句合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 6.He said to himself : “If only I could fly in the sky!”He said to himself : “I really want to fly
in the sky.”使用虚拟语气合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 7. Although faced with many difficulties, he never lost heart.Although he faced many difficulties, he never lost heart.使用省略句合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 8.With a strong willing in his heart, he worked very hard at his lessons.
He had a strong willing, so he worked very hard at his lessons.使用with 复合结构 合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 9.It was by working hard and a dream in his heart that he made his dream come true. He worked very hard at his lessons.
He had a dream in his heart.
So he made his dream come true 18 years later.使用强调句合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 10.Only eventually did he realize: “Where there is a dream, there is a success.”
Eventually, he realized: “Where there is a
dream, there is a success.”使用倒装句合作探究---寻找美
The ways to polish your simple sentences: (润色升级)1.尽量使用高级词汇,避免重复
2.短语优先2.恰当使用高级句式及其他结构1.词汇1.使用非谓语动词
2.使用从句
3.使用感叹句
4.使用被动句
5.使用虚拟语气
6.使用省略句
7.使用with 复合结构
8.使用强调句
9.使用倒装句
……
Summary方法总结---分享美
以“心中有梦”为标题将润色后的句子合并成一篇通顺自然的短文
A dream in his heart
When David was seven years old, he dreamed of flying in the sky. _________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Only eventually did he realize “Where there is a dream ,there is a success.”
Intensive exercise创造展示---提升美 Where there is a dream,
there is a success!情感教育: A dream in his heart
When David was seven years old, he dreamed of flying in the sky. Having finished his homework, He always made himself a paper plane, which he enjoyed best. On his way to school, there was a plane in the sky. What a beautiful plane it was! “If only I could fly in the sky! Yeah, something must be done.” he said to himself. Although faced with many difficulties, he never lost heart. With a strong willing in his mind , he worked very hard at his lessons. 18 years later, it was by hard working and his dream in the heart that he made his dream come true. Only eventually did he realize “Where there is a dream ,there is a success.”
Possible version创设情境---引入美Do you know any other ways to make your simple sentences
more colorful?
↓ polish ?How to polish ?(润色) 润色升级 1. He dreamed of flying in the sky.1.尽量使用高级词汇
2.短语优先 He had a dream.
He wanted to fly in the sky.合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 2. He always made himself a paper plane.
He enjoyed making it best.He always made himself a paper plane, which he enjoyed best.恰当使用从句合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 3. He finished homework.
Then he made himself a paper plane to
play with.Having finished his homework, he made himself a paper plane to play with.使用非谓语动词合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 4.
There was a plane flying in the sky. What a beautiful plane flying in
the sky!使用感叹句合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 5. He said to himself: “Something must be done at once.” He said to himself : “I must do something
at once.”使用被动句合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 6.He said to himself : “If only I could fly in the sky!”He said to himself : “I really want to fly
in the sky.”使用虚拟语气合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 7. Although faced with many difficulties, he never lost heart.Although he faced many difficulties, he never lost heart.使用省略句合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 8.With a strong willing in his heart, he worked very hard at his lessons.
He had a strong willing, so he worked very hard at his lessons.使用with 复合结构 合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 9.It was by working hard and a dream in his heart that he made his dream come true. He worked very hard at his lessons.
He had a dream in his heart.
So he made his dream come true 18 years later.使用强调句合作探究---寻找美
润色升级 10.Only eventually did he realize: “Where there is a dream, there is a success.”
Eventually, he realized: “Where there is a
dream, there is a success.”使用倒装句合作探究---寻找美
The ways to polish your simple sentences: (润色升级)1.尽量使用高级词汇,避免重复
2.短语优先2.恰当使用高级句式及其他结构1.词汇1.使用非谓语动词
2.使用从句
3.使用感叹句
4.使用被动句
5.使用虚拟语气
6.使用省略句
7.使用with 复合结构
8.使用强调句
9.使用倒装句
……
Summary方法总结---分享美 最近你班召开了“我的中国梦”主题班会,同学们都被习主席提出的“中国梦”深深鼓舞,每个人都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解,大家深信中国梦一定会实现。请结合实际,谈谈自己的梦想,以及如何实现你的梦想。
写作要求:
1.尽量使用本节所学内容,写出漂亮的单句。
2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。
3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。
4.书写须清晰、工整。
Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by Chairman Xi's Chinese Dream, everyone talked enthusiastically about his understanding
of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future. ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
I firmly believe that “Where there is a dream, there is a success.”
HomeworkThank you! Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream.
Inspired by President Xi's Chinese Dream, Everyone talked enthusiastically
about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this
dream will come true in the future.
I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor.
Not only can doctors save people's lives but also they are doing a
respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their
professional knowledge.
To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on. I must learn as
much as I can so that I can get into a good medical college, where I can
prepare myself adequately for the job of a doctor. Only in this way can I
accomplish my goal. I firmly believe that “Where there is a dream, there is
a success.”
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