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1 建议信
1如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
整体三部分
Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性
2. Body
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
小结；呼应主题
2 建议信的基本框架：
开头（beginning）----
开门见山，简要交代身份，向对方陈述自己的写作目的.
主体(body)----
对所提出的问题进行陈述，接着提出自己的建议。
结尾(ending)----
呼应开头，重申观点。
3 建议信开头常用的句式和套话
1、Thanks for trusting me.
2、 I am writing to express my view concerning (关于）…
3．After I read your letter, I am sorry to know that …
4．I am very glad to hear that you want to…
5．I know you have trouble in… after reading your letter, I know that….
6.I am writing to you for the purpose of (doing) …
7. I am writing in reply to your problem\concern (of\that…)
8. You have asked me for my advice in regard to（关于）… and I’ll try to make some conductive(指导性的） suggestions.
巩固练习：
非常感谢你的来信。很抱歉听说…，所以我今天写信是为了…
Thanks for your letter. I feel so sorry to hear (that) ….
and I’m writing to you for the purpose of (doing) …
非常感谢您的来信和信任。你写信问我关于如何…，
我在此尽量给你一些建设性的意见。
Thanks for your letter and trust (in me). You have written to ask me in regard to\concerning … and I will try my best to give you some conductive proposals.
4 正文（body）常用的句式和套话
1．It is (also) a good idea (to do sth\that-clause)
2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could …
3. I would like to propose/ recommend that … (should)
4. Were I you, I would…
5. You may consider doing sth
6. Why not do sth Why don’t you do sth
7. From my point of view, it would be wise\reasonable to take the following action.
8. I wonder if you have considered the following action.
9. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to propose that you should…
10. You may\might as well do sth…
11. In my view, from where stand, as far as I’m concerned, …
巩固练习：
在我看来，多和父母沟通其实是个不错的办法。不知道你有没有考虑过？
From where I stand, it’s a good idea to spend more time
communicating with your parents. I wonder if you have
considered it
既然考前你这么紧张，你不妨试试多参加一些户外活动，这会在某种程度上减缓您的焦虑。
Since you will be so nervous before the test, you may as well participate in more outdoor activities, which will relieve you of your worry in some way.
5.建议信结尾常用句式
1. I do hope you will take my advice into account/ consideration.
2. (In the end, ) I do hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions/ recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
4. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.
5. I feel that it would be beneficial if you follow my advice.
6 常用关联词
表示并列的过渡词或短语
as well; or; too; also; as well as; and ;
not only…but also…. ; both … and….
either … or… ; neither…nor…
First……；Second……; Third……
For one thing; For another (thing)
2. 表示递进的过渡词或短语
Moreover ; What’s more; Besides; furthermore;
in addition; additionally, What’s worse,
3. 表转折对比的过渡词:
although, but, however, instead (of), on the contrary, (be) different from, despite, in spite of, regardless of,
On the one hand,…; On the other hand, …
Some …; Others…
4. 表原因的过渡词:
because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to（由于）, owing to, out of, on account of, as a result of,
5.表结果的过渡词:
so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, then, hence, consequently, so that
6.表条件的过渡词:
if, unless , as long as, providing (that) , provided (that) , suppose (that), supposing (that), on condition that,
7.表时间和顺序关系的过渡词:
recently, at the same time, meanwhile, finally, at last, from now on, first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, then, next, finally, in the end, eventually
8.表换一种方式表达的过渡词:
in other words, that is to say, namely
9.表进行举例说明的过渡词:
for instance, for example, such as, including
10.表陈述事实的过渡词:
In fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to be honest, honestly speaking, honestly speaking, to tell you the truth, in reality
11.表目的的过渡词：
for this reason, for this purpose, for the purpose of (doing), so that, in order that, in order to, so as to, with the aim of doing,
12.表总结的过渡词:
in a word, in short, generally speaking, finally, at last, in conclusion, in summary, all in all, in brief, to sum up
13 表示见解和观点的表达：
in my view/ opinion; from where I stand; as for me; from my point of view; as far as I am concerned, I do agree with the idea that (同从）…..
7 增分句型：
There is no denying the fact that ...
不可否认...
There is no doubt that ...
毋庸置疑的是，....
It can't be denied that ...
毫无疑问的是，...
It must be admitted that ...
必须得承认的是，...
It must be pointed out that ...
必须要指出的是，...
2. As is known to all, \ As we all know, ...
It's known to all that ...
It‘s well-known that…
众所周知,
3. When it comes to(当谈到、提到，关于） …
如果谈到类似的话题，我建议你应该……
注意：建议类作文建议多多尝试被动语态！！！！！
写作练习 1：
假如你是李华，是英国某高中的交换生。你的朋友Tom最近经常开小差，不完成作业，有时还无故逃课，请按照以下要点给Tom写一封信。
1 描述该同学的行为；
2 他的行为造成什么样的后果；
3 表示愿意帮助他并给出合理的建议。
注意：
1 词数100字左右
2 信的开头和结尾已经给你写好
A letter of advice
Beginning +
行为
后果
愿意帮助+
Ending
1 开小差
2 逃课
A 影响学习和他人
B 让老师和父母担心、失望
C 无法延续大学梦
1 坚定表达意愿
2 适当给出建议
3 。。。。。。
3 不交作业
Dear Tom, （称呼） We are good friends and I really care about you. Recently, I have noticed that you are not behavi ng yourself at school, and I feel so sorry. （交代写信缘由：担心和关心）
Your mind often wanders in class, so you can’t absorb important knowledge the teachers give us. To make matters worse, you fail to finish your homework and sometimes even skip classes for no good reason.（描述行为）
There is no doubt that if you don’t stop doing all these improper things, you can’t fulfill your university dream， let alone starting a promising future. （后果1） Besides, you will disappoint those who care about you, for which you will surely feel regretful in the future. （后果2）
As your sincere friend, I am always ready to give you a hand. And I suggest (that) you (should) change your attitude towards study before it’s too late. Just be open and talk about your problem with me.（建议）
Looking forward to your reply （套语）.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作练习2：
假如你是李华，请根据下表内容，给你校校长写
一封120字左右的信，说明学校饭堂(dining room\hall)存在的现状，并给出你的建议。
现状 1 吃饭时人太多，要花很长时间排队；
2 还有不少同学占位；
3 有少数同学浪费食物
措施 1. 禁止占位；
2. 各年级轮流吃饭；
3. 多开展一些主题活动，如“爱惜粮食”，“拒绝浪费”等；
写作要求：
1 字数100字左右；
2 信的开头结尾已经写好；
Dear headmaster,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
A letter of advice
交代身份，
切入主题
呈现问题
给出建议
1 Li Hua
2 Dining room’s problems
A 人多拥挤 （影响）
B 占位（后果）
C 浪费
1 分流吃饭 （措施\好处）
2 拒绝占位
3 开展主题活动 （举例）
Dear headmaster, （称呼） I‘m Li Hua, a student from Grade 2.（交代身份）I am writing to share my concern about the dining room’s problem in our school. （交代写信缘由，陈述写信原因）
With so many students coming to have meals at the same time, our dining room are very crowded and we will waste a lot of time waiting. （问题1） Besides, some students would like to occupy the seats, causing much inconvenience to us. （问题2） What’s worse, a few students will leave most of their food untouched, which is a bad habit. （问题3） （饭堂问题和后果）
Many students as well as I have been worrying about the hidden problems. So I strongly recommend (that) some effective and urgent measures (should) be taken. （过渡句-总）First of all, occupying seats in advance should be forbidden. （建议1） In the second place, it is also a good
idea to allow some students to have meals 10 minutes earlier\later than others. （建议2）What’s more, some theme activities should be held as often as possible, like “Value our food” and “Reject wasting”.（建议3） I do hope my suggestions can be considered and the problems can be solved soon. （总）
Yours, Li Hua （落款）
写作练习3：
假如你是你们学校一名很热心的学生李华，得知学校要建设娱乐休闲中心，正在征求同学们的意见，请你根据以下几个方面的提示给校长写一封120词左右的建议信。
1. 娱乐休闲中心应该包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室。
2. 最好在学生的课余时间开放。
3. 尽量不要收费。
4. ……
写作要求：
1 字数100字左右；
2 信的开头结尾已经写好；
A letter of advice
交代身份，
切入主题
给出建议
1 Li Hua
2 校娱乐中心兴建
A 包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室（缘由）
B 开放时间 （好处、缘由）
C 收费 （理由）
D ……
套语结束语
Dear Mr. President,
I am student in our school-Li Hua. Recently, a good news has come to my attention that our school is going to build a new leisure center. I’m writing to ask you to consider the following suggestions.
Firstly, I’d like to suggest that there should be a table-tennis room as well as a badminton court. I think it would do great good if you could build the center with an eye to those students who are interested in playing table-tennis or badminton.
Secondly, could the center open in our spare time If so, we will have enough time to make full use of it.
Thirdly, we will be more than happy if the center is free. As we all know, not every student can afford the extra expense.
Thank you for reading my letter. I do hope you will consider my suggestions. If the center is built, it will greatly enhance student life here on campus.
Looking forward to your reply.
　　 Yours sincerely,
　　 Li Hua
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