资源简介 (共26张PPT)UNIT5 MUSICReading for Writing--Write a speechLearning Objectives1. Sort out how music has had an impact on Sarah’s life.2. Analyse and summarize the structure and language features of a speech.(本单元写作主题:演讲稿)3. Write a speech about how music has changed your life.Lead-inWhat is he doing He is making a speech.Look and PredictPre-ReadingWhat’s the speech about Sarah Williams1. Where is she 2. What is she doing 3. How does she feel She is in hospital.She is listening to the music.She feels relaxed.Reading for structureE: Introduce herself and the topic.Task1: Skim the text and match the main idea to each paragraphB: The impacts of musicC: Sarah’s personal experience.A: Sarah’s advice and hope.D: Thank the audience.Beginning (Para.1)Body (Para.2-3)Ending (Para.4-5)Writing tip 1: Appropriate structure makes the speech smooth, logical and coherent.Para. 1Good morning! My name is Sarah Williams. It’s an honour to be here and to share with you the story of how music has had an impact on my life.Greet the audienceIntroduce yourselfPropose the topic2. Read for ContentGood morning! My name is Sarah Williams. It’s an honour to be here and to share with you the story of how music has had an impact on my life.Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all Two years ago, I was told I had a serious disease which was difficult to cure. My body ached all the time and thus I thought I didn’t have much longer to live. I was veryafraid and I felt so alone and discouraged. Then one day, I had to go through a two-hour medical treatment. The doctor wanted me to relax so he had me listen to some music, and one of the songs was "Happy". The song made me feel so much better that from then on I began to listen to music all the time. John A.Logan said,“ Music is the medicine of the mind." And It’s true. Music helped me recover.Para. 2Q1: What was Sarah's problem Q2: How did music help her during her difficult time Sarah had a serious disease which was difficult to cure.It made her feel much better and helped her recover because it is the “medicine of the mind”.Reading for ContentPara.2Task 3: Read Para. 2 and fill in the chartWhenWhatHowtwo years agothen one dayfrom then onhad a serious disease which was difficult to curelisten to some music before medical treatmentMusic helped her recoverafraid, alone, discouragedfeel so much betterhappygratefulTime orderMusicWriting tip 2: Suitable personal experience with problem-solving pattern makes the speech vivid.ProblemSolutionProblem- solving patternReading for ContentPara.3Task 4: Read Para. 3 and answer the questions1. What impacts does the music have on Sarah 2. How does Sarah describe the impacts of music Impacts of musicGive me happinessGive me strength and reliefGive me hope and satisfactionMade my spirits fly like a kiteIt was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.Became my best friendSpoke word of encouragementsupportive detailstopicsentencesReading for ContentPara.4&5Task 5: Read Para. 4-5 and answer the questions1. What is her hope and advice Do you agree Of course, I hope none of you have to go through the same kind of suffering that I did. At the same time, we all go through various periods when we feel sad or alone. During those times, music can help you in the same way that it helped me. I hope all of you will somehow begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life.Thank you!Ending(para 4-5)Express hope and adviceThank the audience’s listeningRead for language featurespersonificationrhetorical questionmetaphorrepetitionquotesimileWhat rhetorical devices do you know rhetorical devicesRhetorical devices (修辞手法)3. Read for Language Featuresrhetorical devicessimile (明喻)metaphor (隐喻)personification (拟人)quote (引用)repetition (重复)rhetorical question (设问)Read for language featuresTask 5: recognize the rhetorical devices used in the sentences【A】Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all 【B】John A. Logan said, “ Music is the medicine of the mind.”【C】Music gave me happiness... Music gave me strength and brought me relief... Music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.【D】It made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.【E】It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.【F】It became my best friend.Rhetorical questionQuoteRepetitionSimileMetaphorPersonificationWriting tip 3: Proper rhetorical devices make the speech vivid and impressive.Rhetorical device(修辞手法)simile(明喻)metaphor(暗喻)Jack works like a horse.That businessman is a real fox.rhetorical question(设问)How could I be so stupid personification(拟人)The sky cries.quote(引用)As Longfellow says, “Music is ...''repetition(重复)I came, I saw, I conquered.ExampleAppreciate the language featuresvividpowerfulattractiveappealingconvincing…What is the function of using rhetorical devices in a speech To make the speech more __________.Words and lexical chunks1 share with2 face a time3 get through those hard times4 a sense of satisfaction5 words of encouragement6 the deepest part of my being7 go through various periods8 treasure分享经历……的时光度过那些艰难的日子满足感鼓励的话心灵/内心深处经历……的时光珍惜①two years ago 两年前②and thus 因此③then one day 后来有一天④so…that… 如此…以至于…⑤from then on 从此之后⑥it is true 的确如此⑦moreover 不仅如此;而且These discourse markers are used to show how the text is connected and organized.How can music benefit your life ......make us strong in mindrelax and refresh ourselvesgive us strength and hopeoffer us comfort and companyrelease our stress/pressureinspire us to be positive and optimistichelp us overcome all the difficultiesbring us happiness/joy/reliefcalm us downrelease our pressuremake us relaxed and peacefulgive us courage and powerkeep us companyoffer us comfort素材积累:what can music bring for us (音乐的作用)一分钟背诵三条How to write a speech Useful expressionsshare with分享face a time经历……的时光get through those hard times度过那些艰难的日子a sense of satisfaction满足感words of encouragement鼓励的话the deepest part of my being心灵/内心深处go through various periods经历……的时光treasure珍惜Write a speechStructureLanguagefeatures(rhetorical question)(quote)(repetition)(simile)(metaphor)(personification)two years ago 两年前and thus 因此then one day 后来有一天so…that…如此…以至于…from then on 从此之后it is true 的确如此moreover不仅如此;而且(2022广东东华高级中学期末)假如你是李华,作为交换生正在英国学习. 你所在的学校要举办以 The Power of Music为主题的演讲比赛. 请你写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:1.与音乐有关的一次经历;2.音乐的力量或影响。注意:1.词数80左右2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。1.三段式 2.演讲稿开篇直接切入主题 3.红笔标注处要点练习开篇切入主题It's an honor to be here to share with you the speech themed The power of music音乐的力量(三种方法)Every time I felt depressed, it was music that made me relaxed and peacefulNot only did it release my pressure, but also offered me comfortSo powerful the music is that we have enough courage to overcome difficulities. 部分倒装Good morning, everyone, 根据时间,选择性使用My name is Li Hua. When it comes to music, we have our own stories. As for me, music actually offered me enough power to overcome difficulties. When failing in the mid-term examination, I felt so upset that I refused to communicate with my friends, even my parents. When I heard some inspiring songs, which gave me confidence, I gradually ignored the failure and spared no effort to study. Finally, I made great progress in the final examination. From my experience, I hope that you can obtain the power which music offers to achieve your own dreams.Thanks for your listening.(2021江苏南京阶段检测)假定你是李华。你的英国外教Mr.Green非常喜欢中国民间音乐。请你给他写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加你校组织的民间音乐会,内容包括:1.提出邀请;2.音乐会的时间、地点、活动安排等;3.表示期待。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:民间音乐会 folk music concert开篇发出邀请Hearing that you show great interest in chinese folk music.I'm writing to invite you to attend the folk music concert时间地点It was scheduled to be held in our school hall.活动安排A variety of activities were arranged, varying from...to...Finish your writing of the speech.Homework 展开更多...... 收起↑ 资源预览