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09：【好题精选】书面表达 -2023年中考英语专题练（含答案解析）（湖北黄石市）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．英语课上，大家针对中学生节食减肥这一话题进行了讨论，请你根据以下要点提示写篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。
提示：1.健康比漂亮更重要；
2.学生应该以学习为主，不要过于注重外貌和别人的看法；
3.可通过多锻炼和改变不良饮食习惯保持健康；
4.保持健康的心态。
注意：1.短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
2.80词左右。（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）
参考词汇：dieting节食；appearance外貌；state of mind心态
Quite a few students choose to lose weight by dieting. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、材料作文
2．20世纪70年代，美国人Martin Cooper发明了手机。你对手机了解多少呢？你觉得学生可以使用手机吗？请根据表格内容介绍一下手机的发明人、发明时间等及其用途（可适当发挥），并谈谈你对学生使用手机的观点及理由。
发明人 Martin Cooper
发明时间 1970s
用途 过去 打电话
现在 1. 拍照 2. 上网聊天 3. … 4. …
你的观点及理由 ……（至少两点）
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3．Write at least 60 words on the topic “‘Double Reduction Policy’ affects me”.（以“‘双减政策’影响我”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
全国义务教育阶段都在实施“双减政策”。“政策”实施后，校内课后服务全面覆盖，学生作业有限定，周末培训机构不再提供服务。学生有了更多自主学习和享受家庭生活的时间了。对你而言，“双减政策”给你带来了哪些影响呢？你是如何看待这些影响的呢？
以下短语供选用：put into effect 实施 benefit me/everyone 使我/大家获益 give individual help 给予个别帮助 service after class 课后服务
（注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
文章首句“Since ‘Double Reduction Policy’ was put into effect, something has changed in my life.”已给，这些文字不计入文章字数。
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4．疫情期间，为避免交叉感染，并让学生吃到更加营养、安全的食品，学校出台配餐制，由老师陪同学生一起在教室用餐。请你根据以下要点，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。
要点：
1. 食堂环境干净卫生，学生们吃得健康、安全；
2. 饭菜种类多样，学生们有很多选择，营养也更全面；
3. 省去了在家和学校之间往返所花的时间；
4. 家长们更加放心，也更轻松；
5. 你的观点；
注意:
1. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
参考词汇：regulation 规定；cafeteria 食堂；nutritious 有营养的
In order to improve nutrition and food safety in schools, we were asked to eat dinner in the classroom with our teachers.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．中共中央、国务院印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》，提出了中学生应该树立劳动最光荣、劳动最崇高、劳动最伟大、劳动最美丽的观念。 作为一名中学生，请你就家务劳动发表自己的观点。内容包括：
（1）你认为应该培养学生的劳动意识吗？为什么？
（2）你打算做些什么来让自己养成主动劳动的好习惯？
作文要求：
(1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯，词数80个左右。

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6．在第24届北京冬奥会上涌现出了许许多多可歌可泣的动人故事，敢想敢拼的苏翊鸣、多才多艺的谷爱凌、永不放弃的徐梦桃等一大批运动员成为国民偶像。现在学校发出倡议向他们学习，并组织举办一场以“每个人都了不起！(Everyone is excellent!)”为题的英语征文比赛。请你根据这一话题发现身边“了不起”的老师、同学或者自己。
提示：
1.介绍“了不起”的你/我/他（她）；
2.你/我/他（她）做了哪些“了不起”的事？
3.作为中学生我们应该……
要求：
1.短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3.词数：80词左右（短文开头己给出，且不计入总词数）。
Everyone is excellent!
There are many excellent people in the world, such as excellent scientists, excellent players and so on. But I think everyone including ordinary people can be excellent, too.
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7．教育部最近正式发布《义务教育劳动课程标准》，要求中小学生学会做家务，比如清洁卫生，煮饭，家电使用、维修，种菜。作为一名中学生你非常赞同此举措，觉得中小学生做家务好处多多。综合下面信息 (不必全写) ，结合你的实际谈谈感受，写一篇短文。句式多样化，字数限定80—100左右。
参考信息：
1. 在家里你经常帮父母做家务，在学校你经常为班集体做一些力所能及的事，比如……；
2. 你认为中学生学做一些家务是很必要的，有很多好处；
3. 在做家务时一方面你会在过程中开动脑筋，另一方面可以培养责任心，自信心；
4. 在植树这样的课外劳动中，你开拓了视野，放松了自己，更加了解了自己；
5. 长大后独自生活工作能照顾好自己；
6. 有责任心的孩子在学习方面更容易取得好成绩；
7. 让我们一起成为一个有用的人。
参考词汇：develop a sense of responsibility (培养责任心)
be confident in (对……自信)
open one’s mind to the outside world (开拓视野)
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三、书信作文
8．As an old saying goes, “A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.” 假如你叫李华，在你的初中学习生涯中，一定有许多朋友给了你不少帮助。在毕业之际，请给你的好友李雷写一封感谢信。
要点：
1. 感谢他（她）对你的帮助。
2. 他（她）是如何帮助你的。
要求：
1. 请结合具体事例，适当发挥；语言通顺，意思连贯。
2. 文中不能出现与本人相关信息。
3. 80词左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Li Lei,
How time flies! We are going to graduate from junior high school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假如你是李华，初中生活即将结束，在步入高中学校学习之际，你思绪万千。请你根据下面表格的提示，写一封信表达你对父母的由衷感激及今后打算如何回报父母。
提示：
父母为我 生活的照顾 饮食起居
精神的支持 交友、学习、压力
我为父母 感恩、陪伴、理解父母
注意：1.内容必须包含表格中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥。
2.词数：80-100词。（开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数）
3 文中不能出现学生真实姓名和所在学生的名称。
Dear Mom/DadMy Junior School life is coming to an end. Now, I’d like to show my thanks to you for you for your devotion to me these years.
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Yours love,
Li Hua
四、讲稿
10．今年6月6日是第27个全国爱眼日，爱护眼睛很重要，请用英语写一篇关于保护眼睛的演讲稿，在班会上发言。
提示：1. 爱护眼睛的重要性；
2. 保护视力的方法：保持饮食均衡、勤做眼保健操、控制屏幕使用时间、养成良好的生活习惯；
3. ……
注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
3. 80词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：eyesight(视力)
have/keep a balanced diet (保持饮食均衡)
control the screen time (控制屏幕使用时间)
Good morning, everyone! My topic today is “Protecting Our Eyes”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
参考答案：
1．One possible version:
Quite a few students choose to lose weight by dieting.
In my opinion, health is more important than beauty. For a student, studying is always the first thing to consider. Don’t pay much attention to your appearance and don’t let others’ opinions influence your normal life. However, if you really want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing your unhealthy eating habits. You should also keep a healthy state of mind. It can not only help with your studies, but also help you overcome difficulties in dieting. So be happy every day, don’t worry too much about weight.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇议论文，要求对中学生节食这一话题谈谈自己的看法；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：文章写作提示已经给出，写作时应包含所给提示，另外可以适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：陈述自己关于健康，学习，锻炼及心态的看法；
第二步：文章最后对自己的观点进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
① in my opinion依我看
② pay attention to关注，注意
③ appearance外表
④ overcome difficulties克服困难
[高分句型]
① However, if you really want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing your unhealthy eating habits.（用if引导条件状语从句）
② It can not only help with your studies, but also help you overcome difficulties in dieting.（并列连词not only...but also的使用，使文章具有连贯性）
2．例文：
Nowadays, mobile phones have played an important role in our daily life. But do you know who invented the mobile phone As far as I know, the first mobile phone was invented by Martin Cooper in the 1970s. In the past, it was only used to make phone calls. However, with the development of science and technology, mobile phones now are used to take photos, chat online, listen to music, watch movies and so on.
In my opinion, students shouldn’t be allowed to take phones to school. Here are the reasons:
First, some students may use their mobile phones to cheat in the exam. Second, some students may send short messages or play with their mobile phones in class. These kinds of behaviors will be bad for their study.
Though mobile phones are very useful in our daily life, we should try to use them in a proper way.
【详解】题干解读：本文要求写一篇以手机为主题的文章。首先根据表格提供一些信息，对手机的发明人和用途作简单的介绍。然后分析手机的利与弊，谈谈自己的观点及理由。
写作指导：本文可从两部分着手：一部分介绍手机的发明和用途，介绍手机的发明人和过去的用途可使用一般过去时的被动语态；另一部分谈谈你针对学生是否应该带手机到学校的观点和理由，理由按照要求至少写两点。书写时一定要注意时态的正确运用，上下文语句贯通。
3．例文：
‘Double Reduction Policy’ affects me
Since ‘Double Reduction Policy’ was put into effect, something has changed in my life. The policy benefits me a lot. After the policy, service after class is fully covered, the teachers can give individual help to the students who are poor in study. My homework is limited, and weekend training institutions no longer provide services. I have more time to study by myself and enjoy my family life. I can learn to draw and play with my friends. I think these effects are very useful to my study and life.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍 “双减政策”对“我”的影响。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍“双减政策”给“我”带来的影响以及“我”对这些影响的看法；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
4．例文
In order to improve nutrition and food safety in schools, we were asked to eat dinner in the classroom with our teachers.
Thanks to the regulation, something great has taken place in our school. First, the cafeteria is clean and workers are working hard to provide us with different kinds of nutritious food. Also, if there is any problem about food safety or others, our school leaders are able to know and solve it in time. Because of the regulation, we eat healthier and safer than before. What’s more, it saves the time spent commuting between home and school. At the same time, our parents needn’t worry about our diet anymore and they feel more relaxed.
We teenagers are the future of our country and need to grow healthy, so I think the new regulation really benefits us and is necessary. I hope it will be carried on forever.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以学校配餐制为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍学校配餐制的好处和带来的便利；第三段表明自己的观点。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
5．范文：
I think it’s necessary for students to help do some labors in their free time. Students can learn something about life by doing so.
As for me, I will help my parents do chores at home. For example, I will help them clean the floor, wash the vegetables and do the dishes actively when I’m free. I can learn how to take care of myself by sharing the housework. At school, I will help my classmates clean our classroom and school yard carefully. I will learn how to work with others. It’s also beneficial to me to develop a good friendship with my classmates. Besides, I will do some volunteer work on weekends, such as picking up the rubbish in the park or planting trees and so on.
In a word, I think we should develop the habit of doing labors to become better persons.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于说明文，主要讲述学生们是否应该培养劳动意识和原因，以及你打算如何培养自主劳动的习惯。本文采取三段式，第一段提出观点，即学生应该帮忙做一些家务；第二段从自身的角度出发，讲述我怎么帮忙做家务；第三段总结，即我们应该培养劳动的习惯。
2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称叙述，时态以一般现在时为主，讲述自己如何帮忙做家务时，应使用一般将来时。写作时保证要点齐全，不要遗漏要点，条理清晰。可以适当使用所学亮点词句，如It’s adj for sb to do sth, help sb do, take care of, beneficial以及develop the habit of等。
6．例文
Everyone is excellent!
There are many excellent people in the world, such as excellent scientists, excellent players and so on. But I think everyone including ordinary people can be excellent, too.
My friend Tony is tall and thin. He’s good at each subject and always ready to help others. Once I was badly ill and had to be in hospital for several months. Tony gave away all his money to me as soon as he heard the news. And he’s worried that I would fall behind others in my study. So he often went to help me with my lessons after school. I think he’s not only kind-hearted but also excellent.
As students, we should learn from those excellent people and make ourselves excellent.
【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求以“Everyone is excellent!”为题写自己生活中平凡却了不起的老师、同学或者本人。根据题目要求可知，本文应该写自己周围的人或者自己，所以学生注意不要写成名人事迹。
2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一或第三人称，时态根据具体语境可用现在时或过去时。文章已给出基本思路，首先简单介绍自己要写的人，即个人基本信息；然后介绍这个人做过的“了不起”的事；最后表达自己的感想，即建议向这个人学习。文章应做到层次分明、思路清晰，不要出现单词拼写及语法时态错误。
7．范文：
It is good to do housework
Nowadays, more attention has been paid to housework. I think it is good for middle school students to do housework. Doing housework helps to develop our independence and teaches us how to look after ourselves. I used to be lazy at home. Seeing this, my mother came up with an idea—I have to earn my pocket money by doing housework. It changed me a lot. Once my mother told me to buy some fruit. I quickly made a list, compared prices and bought fresh fruit. I have a habit of managing money now.
This is how I learn to do housework—it’s a skill that lasts a lifetime. So please take action and let’s be a useful person together.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时根据自己的亲身体会谈谈做家务的感受。内容包括：首先介绍自己对做家务的看法；接下来叙述自己的亲身体会，说明做家务对中学生来说是有好处的；最后呼吁同学们行动起来，多做家务，成为一个有用的人。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时。在叙述内容时，力求语法正确，语句通顺，保证叙述内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。
8．例文
Dear Li Lei,
How time flies! We are going to graduate from junior high school. I really want to express my thanks to you.
I still remember that when I first arrived at this new school, I was shy and nervous. I didn’t know anyone in our class and you were the first to say hello to me. I felt warm and happy. During the three years of study, you always helped me when I had difficulty learning. You helped me with my English and gave me a lot of useful suggestions. My English has improved a lot.
Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求针对初中生活好友的帮助，给李雷写一封感谢信，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第二人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题，感谢对方的帮助；第二段介绍他是如何帮助你的；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
9．Dear Mom/Dad
My Junior School life is coming to an end. Now, I’d like to show my thanks to you for you for your devotion to me these years. Since I was born, you have been taking good care of me. Every day, you were the first to get up and prepare breakfast for me. On my way to and from school, you were always with me. When I failed an exam and felt stressed, you were the one to encourage me. When I didn’t get well with my friends. You told me to learn to be caring.
Now, I have grown up, I’ll spend more time staying and communicating with you. And I’ll try my best to understand you and do what I can for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇书信作文，要求根据表格的提示，写一封信表达对父母的由衷感谢以及今后打算如何回报父母，注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称， 通过描述父母在各方面对自己的照顾来表达对父母的感谢；写作中描述父母为自己做过的事情时，应用一般过去时；表达自己的感情时，应使用一般现在时；写作中注意语言准确，衔接紧密，行文流畅。
10． Good morning, everyone! My topic today is “Protecting Our Eyes”.
Nowadays more and more students are nearsighted. As we all know, the eyes are the windows to the soul. If there is a problem with the eyes, there will be a lot of trouble in life and study. So we should try our best to protect our eyes. Here are some suggestions.
First, we should keep a balanced diet. Second, we should do eye exercises frequently. Third, we should control screen time. Finally, we also need to form good living habits.
In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求写一篇演讲稿。根据内容提示，写一篇作文关于保护眼睛。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。除去所给的开头和结尾，文章可再分为三段，第一段介绍爱护眼睛的重要性；第二段给出保护视力的方法；最后一段做总结。行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

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