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①不遗余力做某事
②在…上做贡献
①燃料废物
②不当使用
③不断增加的需求
④出现了xx问题
⑤引起xx的注意
①执行严格规定 　　　　　　　　
②对…进行罚款
fuel wastes
inappropriate usage of
increasing demand for…
…has witnessed…(problem)
draw one’s attention
carry out strict regulations
fine sb. for + n.
①号召某人做某事
②参与……
③共享单车
call on sb. to do sth. 　　　　
get involved in
shared bike
spare no effort to do sth.
make contributions to doing sth.
知礼
Reading for Writing
写作
ENVIRONMENTAL PROTECTION
Warm-up
part 1
Guessing game
Where is it
Li River
What do you know about Li River
Li River is one of the most beautiful and popular river landscapes in China.
It is over 100 miles long and is surrounded by the famous Karst mountain formations.
What might have caused water pollution in the Li River
an increasing volume of tourists
many tour boats
rubbish in the river
the increase of local population …
Pre-writing
part 2
Words and Expressions
1. 对...有消极影响
2. 导致严重空气污染问题
3. 采取紧急措施
4. 恢复它原来的美丽
5. ...的增长
6. 有效地解决问题
7. 垃圾分解办法
8. 当局（当地政府）
9. 下一代
10. 一个干净(绿色)和可持续的未来
have negative effects on...
contribute to severe air pollution
urgent steps should be taken to...
restore its original beauty
the growth/increase in
tackle the problems effectively
garbage disposal methods
the local authorities
generations to come
a clean and sustainable future
Activity 1: Read for the genre
Read para.1 and try to clarify the genre of this text.
The beautiful Li River and its amazing surrounding scenery is one of the most well- known tourist destinations in China’s Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region. It attracts millions of domestic and foreign visitors each year. However, its reputation as a top destination has had negative effects on the river’s water quality. This report looks at the problem of water pollution and some actions that have been taken to deal with it.
Topic Sentence
main idea
Topic Sentence
Activity 3: Read for the content
Read para.2 for the topic sentence.
Activity 3: Read for the content
Read para.2 and draw a mind map to show the factors that caused
the pollution.
Increasing volume of tourists
Tourists frequently throw garbage into water
Tour boats throw cooking oil into the water
Rise in number of commercial and industrial enterprises
= more waste
More chemicals for crop production go into the water
Local population rise rapidly to meet tourism demand
= more household waste
Causes of
Li River Pollution
Activity 3: Read for the content
Read para.3-4 and draw a mind map to show the measures taken to
deal with it.
Topic Sentence
Read para.3-4 and draw a mind map to show the measures taken to
deal with it.
Topic Sentence
Activity 3: Read for the content
Read para.3-4 and draw a mind map to show the measures taken to
deal with it.
Measures
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7
8
9
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closure of polluting enterprises
construction of waste water treatment facilities
collection and transport of household waste
set up strict regulations
regular inspections and fines for abuses
Water Ten Plan
River Chief System
use the media
new rules
Text structure
Para.1 introduction / problem
Para.2 causes
Para.3 solutions
Para.4 further solution / plan
How to write a report on an environmental issue
如何写报告
【文体感知】
　　报告是一种应用文文体。它通常包括调查报告、读书报告、实验报告等具体的报告形式。本单元的写作任务是写一篇有关环境问题的调查报告。它主要包括问题、原因、措施、效果等。调查报告要有明确的中心思想、清晰的段落层次和合理的结构安排。
Writing
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于环境问题的报道。写作时注意以下几点：
1.以事实为依据，对事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。
2.要有明确的文章结构。
3.语言要具体、准确、简练，通俗易懂。
You may use the following table to help your writing.
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体裁 议论文 时态 一般现在时和一般过去时
主题 环境保护 人称 第一或第三人称
Tips 第一段: 提出问题及原因 第二段: 给出解决建议 第三段: 得出结论
当今，我们周围的空气环境变得越来越差，为了加强学生们的环保意识，学校打算开展以“为家乡空气污染问题出谋献策”为主题的征文活动，警示人们要保护环境。请你写一篇报告，内容要点如下：
1. 写明家乡空气污染的原因；
2. 建设绿色家乡，建议采取什么措施（2-3点）；
3. 倡议大家行动起来。
其他要求：80词左右；注意使用本单元所学的语言表达和写作要点。
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1.几年来，由于燃料废物的不当使用和对汽车的需求不断增加，我的家乡出现了严重的空气污染，这引起了我们的注意。
第一段：提出问题及原因
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①燃料废物
②不当使用
③不断增加的需求
④出现了xx问题
⑤引起xx的注意
fuel wastes
inappropriate usage of
increasing demand for…
…has witnessed…(problem)
draw one’s attention
My hometown has witnessed severe air pollution for several years due to the inappropriate usage of fuel wastes and the increasing demand for cars, which drew our attention.
第二段：给出解决建议
2.为了解决这个问题，地方当局采取了紧急措施。他们不仅执行了严格的规定，还对滥用燃料的工业工厂进行了罚款。
①执行严格规定 　　　　　　　　
②对…进行罚款
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carry out strict regulations
fine sb. for + n.
To tackle the problem, the local authorities took urgent steps. Not only did they carry out strict regulations, but also they fined industrial factories for fuel abuses.
第二段：给出解决建议
3. 另外，推荐使用新能源的汽车, 这样就减少了二氧化碳的排放。
①新能源
②用非限制性定语从句翻译句子:
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new clean energy　　　　　　　
Besides, cars using new clean energy were preferred, which reduced the carbon dioxide emission.
第二段：给出解决建议
4. 最重要的是，政府呼吁人们参与到减少空气污染源的活动中，比如用共享单车代替私家车等。
①号召某人做某事
②参与……
③共享单车
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call on sb. to do sth. 　　　　
get involved in
Most importantly, the government called on people to get involved in reducing the source of air pollution, such as replacing private cars with shared bikes, etc.
shared bike
第三段：总结
5.让我们不遗余力地为解决家乡的空气污染问题作出贡献。
①不遗余力做某事
②在…上做贡献
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spare no effort to do sth.
make contributions to doing sth.
Let’s spare no effort to make contributions to solving the air pollution problem in our hometown!
Reducing air pollution
　　My hometown has witnessed severe air pollution for several years due to the inappropriate usage of fuel wastes and the increasing demand for cars, which drew our attention.
　　To tackle the problem, the local authorities took urgent steps. Not only did they carry out strict regulations, but also they fined industrial factories for fuel abuses. Besides, cars using new clean energy were preferred, which reduced the carbon dioxide emission. Most importantly, the government called on people to get involved in reducing the source of air pollution, such as replacing private cars with shared bikes, etc.
Let’s spare no effort to make contributions to solving the air pollution problem in our hometown!
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Read for writing methods
item related expressions
cause and effect the development of the economy;
urbanization;
more cars are needed-car exhaust;
inappropriate use of fossil fuels;
…
Expressions used to relate causes and effects.
Writing methods
Expressions about problems and solutions.
item related expressions
problems and solutions With…(cause), …has witnessed…(problem) for several years.
(problem) alarms us of…
Urgent steps should be taken to alleviate the issue.
Initially, industrial companies should…
Also, governments can…
As for individuals, they should…
Summary

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