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假定你是李华，你校今年开设了蔬菜栽培、传统工艺（handcraft）等实践课程。请你给外国好友John写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．你的参与情况；
2．你的体会。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
思考：你觉得本文应该写几段？二段？三段？还是四段
有同学说两段呀，因为给了两个要点呀。还有的同学说，三段，因为还要有写信目的。嗯，不错，那还有呢？写完“你的体会”真的就能结束了吗？突兀不？
01
你觉得文章最后怎么收尾？跟Jone说点什么为宜？
02写这封邮件时，首先要明确邮件的基本结构，然后按照要求的两个内容点进行展开。以下是具体的分析和建议：
1. 首段：简短问候；写信目的。
简短问候之后可以简要说明学校开设了哪些实践课程。接着，具体介绍自己选择了哪些课程。（可以参与其中一种，或者多种，怕没话说的，可以写两种，但是不能再多了。课程可以从“蔬菜栽培、传统工艺”中选，或者自己另选都可以。）
可采用以下高分实用表达句式:
问候：
1) I hope you're doing well!
2) I hope this email finds you well.
3) I hope this email finds you in good spirits.
写信目的：
1) I wanted to share something exciting from my school.
2) I'm excited to share (with you) that our school has introduced/launched practical courses this year, (including ... and ...)
3) Exciting news from here: our school introduced practical courses this year, (including ... and ...)
2. 分享自己的参与情况
详细描述参与实践课程的过程，可以包括学到的知识、技能。
可采用以下高分实用表达句式:
1) In the ... course(课程1), I learned to ..., understanding the process from ... to .... In the ... class(课程2), I've started learning how to ...
2) In the ... class(课程1), I've learned how to ..., which has been incredibly rewarding. It's amazing to see ...
On the ... side(课程2), I've been exploring the art of ...
3) Diving into the world of ...(课程1), I've developed a newfound respect for ... It’s been both challenging and rewarding to see my efforts bloom. The ... course(课程2) has been equally enriching, offering me a hands-on experience in ...
3. 谈谈自己的体会
谈谈这些课程如何影响了你的看法或生活。分享在学习过程中的感受，体会部分应突出个人的成长和收获。比如对某个传统工艺的喜爱或对蔬菜栽培成果的自豪感等等，让John感受到这些课程的价值和乐趣。
可采用以下高分实用表达句式(该段句式要重点模仿，实用性超高):
1) These courses have not only taught me ... but have also allowed me to ...
2) This experience has been eye-opening, giving me a deeper appreciation for ... Both courses have not only taught me ... but also instilled in me a greater respect for ..
3) These experiences have been incredibly fulfilling, teaching me not just about ..., but about ...
结尾
尾要收好。不要写不相关的，比如希望收到John的回复。那这部分写什么，你想一想应用文最大的特征是什么？是突出交际性啊。你不能是单方面告知，那是报道类的风格，更重要的把对方当个朋友和他交流，交流叫什么，communication或者interaction，要有互动，要把对方involve进来，不能让阅卷老师看了之后直呼John只是工具人。所以，你大概知道怎么写了吧。比如表达希望未来有机会与John分享或一起体验这些实践课程的愿望。
可采用以下高分实用表达句式:
1) I can’t wait to show you ... and perhaps share ... when you visit!
2) I wish you could experience these classes with me and see the beauty of ... and the fulfillment that comes from ....
3) It’s been a journey of growth, learning, and discovery, one that I’m eager to share more about with you in the future.
通过这样的构思，邮件不仅能传达信息，还能展示你的学习热情和对传统文化的尊重，同时也能够鼓励John对中国的传统工艺和蔬菜栽培等产生兴趣。
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1. 在学校的花园里，亲眼看到我辛勤劳动的成果生机勃勃地成长，这真是太神奇了。
It’s amazing to see ________________________ in the school’s garden.
2. 我学会了如何从种子开始种植蔬菜，这个过程极其有益且令人满足。
I’ve learned how to ______________________, which __________________.
3. 观察我种下的种子生长成健康的植物，这一经历让我深感充实。
It’s been _____________________ the seeds I planted grow into healthy plants.
4. 这让我更加欣赏那些保持这些传统活着的艺术和工匠们。
This has given me __________________ the art and the artisans who __________________.
5. 这些课程不仅教给了我实用技能，还让我体验到了亲手创造某物的乐趣。
These courses have not only __________________ but have also ______________ the joy of creating something __________________.
6. 这次经历大开眼界，让我对我们的文化遗产有了更深的认识。
This experience ________________, ____________________ for our cultural heritage.
7. 这两门课程不仅教会了我宝贵的技能，还在我心中种下了对自然和传统的更大敬意。
Both courses have not only ________________ but also ___________________ for nature and tradition.
8. 这些经历极其充实，教会了我不仅仅是种植或手工艺的技巧，更重要的是保留我们文化遗产的重要性。
These experiences have been __________________, teaching me not just about planting or crafting, but about the importance of __________________.
9. 我逐渐意识到，不论是土壤中茁壮成长的植物还是承载着你努力和创造性的手工艺品，亲手创造某物中蕴含的乐趣是如此之多。
I’ve come to realize that there’s ______________ in creating something with your own hands, whether it’s a plant ________________ or a piece of craft _________________________.
10. 我希望你能和我一起体验这些课程，看到这些传统艺术的美丽以及种植食物带来的满足感。
____________ these classes with me and see the beauty of these traditional arts and the ______________________ cultivating one’s food.
答案
1.It’s amazing to see the fruits of my labor literally come to life in the school’s garden.
2.I've learned how to grow vegetables from seeds, which has been incredibly rewarding.
3.It's been a fulfilling experience watching the seeds I planted grow into healthy plants.
4.This has given me a deeper appreciation for the art and the artisans who keep these traditions alive.
5.These courses have not only taught me practical skills but have also allowed me to experience the joy of creating something with my own hands.
6.This experience has been eye-opening, giving me a deeper appreciation for our cultural heritage.
7.Both courses have not only taught me valuable skills but also instilled in me a greater respect for nature and tradition.
8.These experiences have been incredibly fulfilling, teaching me not just about planting or crafting, but about the importance of preserving our cultural legacy.
9.I’ve come to realize that there’s so much joy to be found in creating something with your own hands, whether it’s a plant flourishing in the soil or a piece of craft bearing the marks of your effort and creativity.
10.I wish you could experience these classes with me and see the beauty of these traditional arts and the fulfillment that comes from cultivating one’s food.
范文
Dear John,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm excited to share with you that our school introduced practical courses this year, including vegetable cultivation and traditional handicrafts.
I jumped at the chance to enroll in both. In the vegetable cultivation course, I learned to grow various vegetables from seeds, understanding the process from soil preparation to harvesting. In the handicraft class, I've started learning how to create traditional Chinese crafts.
These courses have not only taught me practical skills but have also allowed me to experience the joy of creating something with my own hands. I wish you could experience these classes with me and see the beauty of these traditional arts and the fulfillment that comes from cultivating one’s food.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

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