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I was eight years old and wasn't aware of all the arrangements being made for our journey as a family to Lond on in 1950. My mother was in great pain and wished to visit specialists in London. My father reluctantly had to s ell our property in Queensland. The day before we boarded the ship, Father unwillingly said goodbye to his five-year-old cattle dog, Spider, who was loved by us all. Father's friend Sandy was to be his guardian while we were overseas, as he had been getting to know Spider for many weeks.
Six weeks later, an air letter arrived from Sandy, giving my father the news that Spider had run away just two weeks after we had sailed. Sandy had advertised constantly on ABC radio and other regional newspapers. Despite many "sightings", the dog was never found. It seems Spider just kept running and searching for us. As he was cattle dog, my father thought he would be shot or dingo-trapped, because of his appearance. But our family thought that Father held a secret hope that Spider was still alive.
We sailed back to Australia two years later and re-established our home. My father immediately began his own search for Spider. One cold winter's Saturday morning eight months after our return, my father had a call from an elderly lady living on her own on the outskirts of the town. As she told my father on the telephone, it was "just glimpses of a dingo-type dog in the shadows" of her disused tennis court. That was enough for my father to interrupt my homework.
We set off in his blue and black Jensen car which he h ad brought back from England. It was hardly the right vehicle for the rough roads we travelled that day. Five and a half hours later, we found the run-down old property. Sadly, she told my father that the "dingo dog" hadn't been around for a few days. My father had a strange look in his eye. He put two fingers to his lips and did his special whistle for Spider.
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Paragraph 1: Suddenly there was a sound in the bush.
Paragraph 2: Once home we had the task of getting all the prickles (刺) off him.
文本分析：
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush.
Q1: What would father do What would we do
search/follow/whisper specially/get it/人与动物的互动( feed/cuddle拥抱'groom梳理毛发/scratch 抓痒/stroke轻抚/comfort安慰/play with 和...玩耍)
Q2: How did my father and we feel excited(如何表达)
indescribably wild joy 难以形容地开心
be overwhelmingly moved 极为感动
'can hardly conceal his excitement 几乎无法掩饰他的兴奋
a mixture of excitement and delight 既兴奋又开心
dance/jump for joy高兴地跳起来
be wild with delight欣喜若狂
Para2:Once home we had the task of getting all the prickles(刺)off
him.
Q1: How would we get all the prickles off the dog (精细化动作体现对它的爱)
02:What's the dog's reaction (狗如何体现对主人的感情)
03: How will they get along with each other (友爱和谐地生活在一起，具体体现有哪些 )
五要素分析：
Characters Father, dog(Spider ), I and my family members
Actions search--find--take good care of the dog--cherish
Feelings excited、delighted(失而复得的高兴)
Setting bush(寻找场地)，our home(关爱狗，与狗和谐相处的场地)
下水文：
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. Out of the growth flew this battered dog right into my father's arms. Spider had leaped over the tennis court fence with great force and certainty. My father's eyes shone, and the old lady and I stood there with tears in our eyes. He kept licking my father's face and making choking noises. He smelt dreadful. We wrapped him in an old blanket and I held him on my lap on the way back. He never once took his eyes off my father as we drove home. Every so often I received a lick of gratefulness.
Once home we had the task of getting all the prickles (刺) off him. With tenderness, we meticulously inspected every part of the little dog that had been weighing on our hearts. After ensuring it was unharmed, my father gently plucked out the thorns from the bushes that had lodged in its fur. Following this, the rest of our family members placed it in a basin and gave it a warm bath. The puppy cooperated throughout, occasionally licking our fingers to express its long-held affection for us. Once everything was done, the puppy regained some of its former vigor, sparkling his eyes as it trotted towards my father, who tearfully smiled as he held it close. Watching this, I couldn’t help but think: this puppy was always a necessary member of our family, and we will live together joyfully and harmoniously forever.
人与动物语料积累
1.动作
Wag the tail 摇尾巴 smell/sniff 嗅 bark/yap/yelp 狗吠 lick 舔
put the earsup 把耳朵竖起来 shake the whole body 抖动全身
Bite the corner of the coat 咬住衣角 hold it tightly with the paws 用爪子紧紧按住
Rub their necks and backs with their paws 用爪子摩擦它们的脖子和背部
raise its whole body on its hind legs 用后腿支起全身 fall on its back 摔得四脚朝天
run around me 围着我跑 leap to its feet 跳起来
Keep scratching you with his front paws 用前爪不停挠你
2.情绪——高兴
(1) They were glad to see Poppy coming back to her usual self (他们很高兴看到Poppy又回到了它原来的状态), guiding the little dog on daily walks and even introducing to it her favorite toys. [2020年1月高考浙江卷]
(2) Smiling ever so bright (笑得更加灿烂), he called out to his parents, who tugged him in for a long hug. [2020年1月高考浙江卷]
(3) Her parents watched them playing around and smiled with relief (轻松地笑了)——Poppy was back to her old cheerful self！[2020年1月高考浙江卷]
3.主题升华
1. When dealing with them, it’s not only we who take care of them, most of the time, it’s they that heal us.在和他们相处的时候，不仅是我们要照顾他们，大多数时候治愈我们的是他们。
2. Despite the chill winter wind, their home where the two lovely dogs played happily was filled with the warmth of love and reunion.尽管东风凛冽，他们家里的小狗快乐地玩耍，家里满是爱和团聚的温暖。
3.This magical kitten was changing our lives and this was just the beginning.这只神奇的小猫正在改变我们的生活，而这仅仅是开始。4.For the first time in my life, I began to believe there really exists a spiritual close/magical bond between we human beings and other animals in the world. 我一生中第一次开始相信，我们人类和世界上的其他动物之间确实存在一种精神上的亲密/神奇的纽带。

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