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(共13张PPT)
Continuation Writing
Warming up
Let’s watch a video.
Step 1 Lead in
Jenny
her mother
had a quarrel
Step 1 Lead in
What happened betweenJenny and her mother
What did you do when you had a quarrel with your mother
Step 2 Read for the basic information
She was offered _______________and she thanked the seller.
She realized her ________ and decided to go home to make an _______ to her mother.
angry
sad
touched, grateful
grateful and regretful
Para .1 Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath....
Para .2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back....
Jenny __________ with her mother that afternoon and __________ the house.
quarreled
ran out of
She__________ in the street for hours, _________ and wishing for something to eat.
wandered
hungry
a bowl of noodles
mistakes
apology
The theme of the passage is _____________________________________
__________________________________________________________
understanding mother’s love and improving
the relationship between parents and children.
tense:
simple past tense(一般过去时)
characters:
Jenny, her mother, the seller
events:
nervous and ashamed
relieved and happy
emotions:
Step 3 Predict the plots
Para. 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. _____________________________________________________________________________________
Tip 2 : Predict the plot of para.2 based on the text and the second given sentence. (reasonable&positive)
Possible plot: Her mother accepted her apology and Jenny understood the love of her mother . They agreed to develop mutual understanding
Para.1 Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
Tip 1:Predict the plot of para. 1 based on the two given sentences.
Possible plot: Jenny went back home, but her mother was not in. When she was waiting for her mother, she was lost in memory.
Para.1 Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. ...
_________________________________
Step 4 Brainstorm the content of para.1
What did she do next
Was her mother at home
What did Jenny think in her mind
How did she feel
Tip 3:Infer the content by making questions.
(what,how,why...)
What questions can you ask about the plot in Para. 1
Ex: Why did Jenny take a deep breath
Step 5 Writing
Individual work:Write para.1 based on the questions.
Of course, you can have your own reasonable and logical plot.
Para.1 Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. ...
_____________________________________________
Tips:
1. Details:actions,feelings, expressions,etc.
2. Transitional words: however, suddenly, to one’s surprise
3. Different sentence structures: it is ... that..., cluses(从句), ect.



Step 6 Assessment and sharing
Group work:exchange your writing with your group members and assess their writing according to the ctiteria(标准) and explain your assessment.
Each group recommends one student to share the their assessment and the good expressions of the writing .
Principles of continuation writing
What steps should the continuation writing follow
The ending should be __________.
The style of the passage should be
_______________________________ with the original text.
Step 7 Conclusion
Read for the basic information
Predict the plot
Brainstorm the details
Write and polish
1
2
3
4
The plot should be ______________
and ____________.
positive
reasonable(合理的)
logical(有逻辑的).
coherent and consistent（连贯一致）
Let’s see what Jenny did.
Be appreciative of what mother has done for us!
mutual understanding
stand in the others' shoes
Complete the second paragraph by making your own questions and polish it according to the criteria of the continuation writing.
Assignment
Thanks!

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