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专题03应用文写作之建议信
建议信是就某事向某个人或某个组织提出建议或忠告的信件。建议信应言简意赅、目的具有合理性和说服力,并要注意礼貌。建议信通常包括三部分:开头:说明写信缘由.主体:陈述具体的建议和理由。结尾:希望建议被考虑和采用。建议信是高考重点考查的考向。
解题思路秘籍
开头：陈述事由，表明写作意图 注意语气委婉、交际用语得体、使对方易于接受。
主体：首先建议对方做什么或者选择什么，建议或推荐做上述事情的原因，询问对方自己所提的建议如何，希望对对方有帮助，如果还有其他问题请告知，询问对方的看法，提出对对方有帮助的建议。
结尾：希望建议被考虑和采用。
提分秘籍01必备短语
put forward one's suggestions 提出某人的建议
take sth seriously 认真对待某事
raise the awareness of 唤醒……的意识
realize the importance of sth 认识到某事的重要性
had better do sth 最好做某事
make a great difference to sb/sth 对某人/事有很大的影响
share my opinions with you 与你分享我的观点
raise/improve working efficiency 提高工作效率
reduce harmful behaviors 减少有害行为
have positive effects on 对……有积极的影响
needless to say ... 不必说……
It's a good idea to do sth 做某事是个好主意
提分秘籍02必备句式
开头常用句
I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life.Here are a few suggestions.
我很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。这里有一些建议。
I have received your letter saying you plan to pay a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信，信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
I've heard from you, learning that you're worried about your driving test. I'd like to share some of my ideas as follows.
收到来信，获悉你担心驾照考试。我想分享我的如下想法。
主体常用句
What's more, you may as well join in a summer camp, which not only broadens your horizons but also helps you develop the spirit of teamwork.
另外，你不妨参加夏令营，这不但会开拓你的视野而且有助于你培养团队精神。
As for my point of view, to start with, you'd better do more reading.
至于我的观点，首先，你最好多阅读。
If I were you, I would do more travelling.
如果我是你，我就会多外出旅游。
In addition, it does benefit you if you participate in a variety of afterclass activities.
此外，参加各种课外活动对你也有益处。
In addition, it's a good idea to prepare your lessons in advance.
另外，提前准备功课是个好主意。
You are supposed to choose Chinese calligraphy because it's a natural combination of beauty, strength, history and technique.
你应该选择中国书法，因为它是美丽、力量、历史和技巧的自然结合。
结尾常用句
Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post.
在此，我希望我的建议能够为我们学校的《英语报》的改进版增添精彩的一笔。
I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work!
无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运！
提分秘籍03必备模版
结构 内容
首段：自我介绍，活动背景，发出邀请。 I'm ________ (自我介绍). A ________ (活动名称) will be held at/in ________ (地点) on ________ (时间) in order to ________ (目的或原因). As you are ________ (相关专家或亲朋好友), we would be honored to have you there with us.
主体：活动具体内容及安排。 The occasion will start at ________ (具体时间). This will be followed by a ________ (进一步的安排). At around ________ (时间), ________ (另一个安排)．
尾段：希望接受邀请，盼望回复。 We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.I am looking forward to your reply.
结构 内容
首段：点明写作背景和目的。 I'm ________ (简单自我介绍). When I was reading the advertisement, ________ (表达看到相关广告后的感受). I think it's a good opportunity for me to ________ (应聘的原因). Therefore I recommend myself without hesitation.
主体：主题句，理由(从素质、能力、经验等方面陈述)。 I think I am qualified for this job. To start with, ________ (理由一：个人素质). In addition, ________ (理由二：个人能力). Furthermore, ________ (理由三：工作经验)．
尾段：恳请对方同意。 I would appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply./Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.
高考真题回顾
（一）
（2020·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear George,
I'm writing to invite you to join us in the “Chinese speech contest for foreigners” to be held in our school. The activity is scheduled at 8:00 a.m. on January 20th in the lecture hall.
The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”, through which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese splendid traditional culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China.
Immensely fascinated by its mysterious culture and age-old history, you can, undoubtedly give us a wonderful and impressive performance. You are expected to sign up for the contest at www. . I'd appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。
第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组） ：Chinese speech contest（中文演讲比赛）；be scheduled（安排）；be bound to（必然）；gain a better understanding of（更好地了解）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”, through which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese splendid traditional culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China.运用了定语从句；I'd appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换
自然, 为文章增色添彩。
（二）
（2022·全国·高考真题）假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请你的外教Caroline来你校的广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：attend→participate in
建立：establish→set up
帮助：aid→assistance
许多：plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略结构)
（三）
（2022·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验，内容包括：
1.位置与开放时间； 2.室内设施和功能。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Michael,
Good news ! Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays. Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet. It’s really convenient for us to do some group projects. Why not ask our group members to go and experience it
Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
由……组成：consist of→ be made up of
位于：be located on→ be situated on
与……相连接： be linked to →be connected to
预定：reserve→book
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
拓展句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, which consists of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet.（of which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays.（过去分词作状语）
最新名校模拟提分巩固练
典例01
（2024·全国·模拟预测）假定你是校英文报“Campus Weekly”专栏的主编李华，请给外教Mr. Steve写封邮件向他约稿。
内容包括：
1. 栏目介绍；
2. 稿件要求。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr Steve,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Steve,
I’m Li Hua, editor of the “Campus Weekly” column of our school’s English newspaper. I’m writing to invite you to contribute to our column.
“Campus Weekly”, which enjoys great popularity in our school, focuses on various topics related to school life. We kindly request you to write an article that offers insights into cross-cultural experiences, or any other topics you find interesting for our readership. Plus, due to the standard print layout, the length of the article is generally limited to 40o words. If you’re interested, please submit your article before April l0th.
Looking forward to your early reply
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生按以校英文报“校园周刊”专栏的主编李华的身份，按照要求给外教Mr. Steve写封邮件向他约稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
专注于：focus on→ concentrate on
各种各样的：various→ a variety of
与……相关：related to→ about
请求：request→ ask
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m Li Hua, editor of the “Campus Weekly” column of our school’s English newspaper.
拓展句：I’m Li Hua, who is the editor of the “Campus Weekly” column of our school’s English newspaper.
【点睛】【高分句型1】“Campus Weekly”, which enjoys great popularity in our school, focuses on various topics related to school life.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】We kindly request you to write an article that offers insights into cross-cultural experiences, or any other topics you find interesting for our readership.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）
典例02
（2024·广东·一模）假定你是李华，你校将举办“经典文化探索展 ”，并通过网络进行直播。请你给外国笔友 Hans写封邮件，邀请他在线观看。内容包括：
1. 活动介绍；
2.观看时间 、方式；
3.你的期待。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Hans,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m excited to share that our school will be hosting a “Classic Culture Exploration Exhibition,” and I would be thrilled if you could join us for the online live streaming of the event.
The exhibition will showcase a diverse range of classic cultural artifacts, literature, and art, which offers a fascinating exploration of our rich heritage. The live streaming will take place at 9 AM Beijing next Friday, and you can join in through our school’s official website as attached below.
I’m looking forward to having you virtually with us for this enriching experience. Your participation will surely add to the enjoyment of the event.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，邀请外国笔友Hans在线观看学校“经典文化探索展”的网络直播，内容包括：活动介绍、观看时间及方式和期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：offer→provide
参加：join in→participate in
参与：participation→involvement
必定：surely→certainly
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：The live streaming will take place at 9 AM Beijing next Friday, and you can join in through our school’s official website as attached below.
拓展句：The live streaming will take place at 9 AM Beijing next Friday, when you can join in through our school’s official website as attached below.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m excited to share that our school will be hosting a “Classic Culture Exploration Exhibition,” and I would be thrilled if you could join us for the online live streaming of the event.（运用了that引导宾语从句和虚拟语气）
【高分句型2】The exhibition will showcase a diverse range of classic cultural artifacts, literature, and art, which offers a fascinating exploration of our rich heritage.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
典例03
（2024·江西南昌·一模）假定你是校英语报新开辟栏目Foreign Teachers On Campus的编辑李华，请给学校外教John写封电子邮件，向其约稿，内容包括：
1. 栏目介绍；
2. 稿件要求。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear John,
I’m a column editor of our school’s English newspaper. I’d like to invite you to write an article for us. Recently we created a “Foreign Teachers on Campus” section in our paper, which is about foreign teachers’ work and life in China. It is well received among students. As a popular teacher in our school, could you please write something about your teaching experiences and the reasons why you chose to teach in China for this section Besides, we welcome some suggestions on learning English, which can benefit students a lot. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生是校英语报新开辟栏目《校园外教》的编辑李华，要求考生按照要求给学校外教John写封电子邮件，向其约稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近：recently→ lately
创建：create→ establish
建议：suggestion→ recommendation
回复：reply→ response
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’m looking forward to your reply.
拓展句：It is your reply that I’m looking forward to.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently we created a “Foreign Teachers on Campus” section in our paper, which is about foreign teachers’ work and life in China.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】As a popular teacher in our school, could you please write something about your teaching
experiences and the reasons why you chose to teach in China for this section （运用了why引导的限制性定语从句）专题03应用文写作之建议信
建议信是就某事向某个人或某个组织提出建议或忠告的信件。建议信应言简意赅、目的具有合理性和说服力,并要注意礼貌。建议信通常包括三部分:开头:说明写信缘由.主体:陈述具体的建议和理由。结尾:希望建议被考虑和采用。建议信是高考重点考查的考向。
解题思路秘籍
开头：陈述事由，表明写作意图 注意语气委婉、交际用语得体、使对方易于接受。
主体：首先建议对方做什么或者选择什么，建议或推荐做上述事情的原因，询问对方自己所提的建议如何，希望对对方有帮助，如果还有其他问题请告知，询问对方的看法，提出对对方有帮助的建议。
结尾：希望建议被考虑和采用。
提分秘籍01必备短语
put forward one's suggestions 提出某人的建议
take sth seriously 认真对待某事
raise the awareness of 唤醒……的意识
realize the importance of sth 认识到某事的重要性
had better do sth 最好做某事
make a great difference to sb/sth 对某人/事有很大的影响
share my opinions with you 与你分享我的观点
raise/improve working efficiency 提高工作效率
reduce harmful behaviors 减少有害行为
have positive effects on 对……有积极的影响
needless to say ... 不必说……
It's a good idea to do sth 做某事是个好主意
提分秘籍02必备句式
开头常用句
I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life.Here are a few suggestions.
我很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。这里有一些建议。
I have received your letter saying you plan to pay a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信，信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
I've heard from you, learning that you're worried about your driving test. I'd like to share some of my ideas as follows.
收到来信，获悉你担心驾照考试。我想分享我的如下想法。
主体常用句
What's more, you may as well join in a summer camp, which not only broadens your horizons but also helps you develop the spirit of teamwork.
另外，你不妨参加夏令营，这不但会开拓你的视野而且有助于你培养团队精神。
As for my point of view, to start with, you'd better do more reading.
至于我的观点，首先，你最好多阅读。
If I were you, I would do more travelling.
如果我是你，我就会多外出旅游。
In addition, it does benefit you if you participate in a variety of afterclass activities.
此外，参加各种课外活动对你也有益处。
In addition, it's a good idea to prepare your lessons in advance.
另外，提前准备功课是个好主意。
You are supposed to choose Chinese calligraphy because it's a natural combination of beauty, strength, history and technique.
你应该选择中国书法，因为它是美丽、力量、历史和技巧的自然结合。
结尾常用句
Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post.
在此，我希望我的建议能够为我们学校的《英语报》的改进版增添精彩的一笔。
I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work!
无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运！
提分秘籍03必备模版
结构 内容
首段：自我介绍，活动背景，发出邀请。 I'm ________ (自我介绍). A ________ (活动名称) will be held at/in ________ (地点) on ________ (时间) in order to ________ (目的或原因). As you are ________ (相关专家或亲朋好友), we would be honored to have you there with us.
主体：活动具体内容及安排。 The occasion will start at ________ (具体时间). This will be followed by a ________ (进一步的安排). At around ________ (时间), ________ (另一个安排)．
尾段：希望接受邀请，盼望回复。 We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.I am looking forward to your reply.
结构 内容
首段：点明写作背景和目的。 I'm ________ (简单自我介绍). When I was reading the advertisement, ________ (表达看到相关广告后的感受). I think it's a good opportunity for me to ________ (应聘的原因). Therefore I recommend myself without hesitation.
主体：主题句，理由(从素质、能力、经验等方面陈述)。 I think I am qualified for this job. To start with, ________ (理由一：个人素质). In addition, ________ (理由二：个人能力). Furthermore, ________ (理由三：工作经验)．
尾段：恳请对方同意。 I would appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply./Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.
高考真题回顾
（一）
（2020·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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（2022·全国·高考真题）假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
（三）
（2022·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验，内容包括：
1.位置与开放时间； 2.室内设施和功能。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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最新名校模拟提分巩固练
典例01
（2024·全国·模拟预测）假定你是校英文报“Campus Weekly”专栏的主编李华，请给外教Mr. Steve写封邮件向他约稿。
内容包括：
1. 栏目介绍；
2. 稿件要求。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr Steve,
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Yours,
Li Hua
典例02
（2024·广东·一模）假定你是李华，你校将举办“经典文化探索展 ”，并通过网络进行直播。请你给外国笔友 Hans写封邮件，邀请他在线观看。内容包括：
1. 活动介绍；
2.观看时间 、方式；
3.你的期待。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
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Yours,
Li Hua
典例03
（2024·江西南昌·一模）假定你是校英语报新开辟栏目Foreign Teachers On Campus的编辑李华，请给学校外教John写封电子邮件，向其约稿，内容包括：
1. 栏目介绍；
2. 稿件要求。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua

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