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专题06应用文写作之感谢信
感谢信是向提供关心、帮助或支持过自己的集体或个人表达感谢的信件。感谢信应写得真诚具体、及时，通常包含三部分内容:开头:表达谢意;主体:列举感谢缘由(回顾对方对自己的帮助);结尾:再次感谢，表达祝愿或回报意愿。感谢信是高考重点考查的考向。
解题思路秘籍
开头:表明写作意图，向对方表达感谢。
主体:语气要诚恳，让对方感受到你的真诚。要对感谢的原因展开说明,写明感谢的原因展开叙述这件事。
结尾：再次感谢，并表示希望回报对方。
提分秘籍01必备短语
in return 作为回报
professional assistance 专业的帮助
mean a lot to sb 对某人十分重要
generous donation 慷慨捐赠
enable sb to do sth 使某人能够做某事
encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事
have the chance to do sth 有机会做某事
constructive and instructive help 建设性的、有益的帮助
be grateful/thankful to sb for sth 因某事感激某人
convey the endless appreciation to sb 向某人表达无尽的谢意
express the sincere gratitude/thanks for sth 为某事表达真诚的谢意
make remarkable achievements 取得非凡的成就
提分秘籍02必备句式
开头常用句
I'd like to take this opportunity to express my sincere gratitude to you for your timely help.
我想借这次机会对您的及时帮助向您表达真诚的感谢。
I'm writing to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for the warm welcome you extended to my friend Kevin
when he visited your school last week.
我的朋友凯文上周去参观贵校的时候受到了您的热情欢迎。为此，我写信向您表达衷心的感谢。
Now I'm writing to extend my gratitude to you on behalf of my school and myself.
现在我写信代表我们学校和自己向您表达感激。
主体常用句
Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English.
在你的专业指导下，我在英语方面取得了令人难以置信的进步。
But for your help during my one year's stay in New York, I wouldn't have adapted to it so quickly.
在纽约一年的时间里，要不是你的帮助，我不会如此迅速地适应它。
What impressed me most is the beautiful scenery and friendly people in your country.
给我印象最深的是你们国家那迷人的景色和友善的人们。
More importantly, your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British culture and adapt to the life there.
更重要的是，你的帮助和善意使我更容易理解英国文化，并且适应那里的生活。
It was with your generous help and tender care that I had a wonderful time there.
正是您的慷慨帮助和悉心照顾让我在那里度过了美好的时光。
Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.
每当我遇到困难时，你总是让我振奋起来，帮助我摆脱困境，这激发了我对英语的热情，也促进了我重新获得极大的信心。
结尾常用句
Thank you again for recommending these English novels to me.
再次感谢推荐这些英文小说给我。
Words fail me to express my thanks to you./My gratitude to you is beyond my description.
对您的感谢我无法用语言来表达。
Please accept my sincere gratitude for your participating in today's lecture.
您来参加今天的讲座，请接受我真心的感谢。
提分秘籍03必备模版
结构 内容
首段：表示感谢。 I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ________ (感谢的原因)．
主体：感谢事由。 If it had not been for your assistance in ________ (对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been ________ (没有对方帮助时的后果). Everyone agrees that it was you who ________ (给出细节)．
尾段：再次感谢。 Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
高考真题回顾
（一）
（2020·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
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【答案】Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.
We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details
Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于the Steamboat改编短剧的支持。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构：总分总法
第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
write to；according to ；combine ； adaption ；challenge；attached to ；convenient
第三步：连词成句
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
（二）
（2019·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3. 临别祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是应用文写作任务，要求写一封感谢信。
【详解】1. 审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助；最后一段表达祝愿。
3. 关键词和句子
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：leaving for the United States soon，express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me up。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了Alex对自己的帮助，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：eagerly，heartfelt gratitude，Honestly speaking，professional
guidance等；高级句式：Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.使用了让步状语从句和定语从句。这些都提升了文章的档次
（三）
（2010·陕西·高考真题）假定你是李华。你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据写作要点和要求给Sue写封电子邮件。
写作要点：
1.对她表达感谢之意；
2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情；
3.希望了解她的近况。
要求：
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域；
2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）；
3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；
4.书写须清晰、工整；
5.邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。
Dear Sure,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China.
All the best
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Sure,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds
me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood
How is everything with you lately We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.
All the best
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Sue Wood写信，表达对她的感谢，并告诉她最近班里发生的事情。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激的：thankful→grateful
种植：grow→plant
最近：recently→lately
决定做某事：be determined to do sth.→decide to do sth.
2.句型拓展
同义句
原句：We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
拓展句：We all miss you and are very grateful for all that you did for us.
【点睛】[高分句型1]We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school (运用了省略that/which的定语从句)
最新名校模拟提分巩固练
典例01
（2024·云南昆明·一模）假定你是李华，你在学校举办的“Adversity and Courage”英语演讲比赛中获奖，请给指导外教 Miss Morton 写一封邮件表示感谢。内容包括：
1. 感谢指导；
2. 个人感悟。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Morton,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Miss Morton ,
I am writing the letter to tell you that I got a first prize in the English Speech Contest “Adversity and Courage” held in my school last Friday.
Thanks for your guide in my English .You gave me a lot of help. I was very happy when we stayed together studying. During the time when we stayed, you were kind to me. You were humorous. You taught me how to speak English fluently. I made great progress with your kind help, without which I couldn't have got the prize.
Through this activity, I deeply realized that adversity and courage can make a person better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。假定考生是李华，你在学校举办的“Adversity and Courage”英语演讲比赛中获奖，请给指导外教 Miss Morton 写一封邮件表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
告诉：tell→inform
快乐的：happy→pleased
帮助：help→assistance
举行：hold→throw
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Thanks for your guide in my English .You gave me a lot of help.
拓展句：Thanks for your guide in my English where you gave me a lot of help.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was very happy when we stayed together studying.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】I made great progress with your kind help,without which I couldn't have got the prize.（运用了介词+关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句）
典例02
（2024·辽宁·二模）假定你是李华。几个月前，你由于英语学习进步缓慢而感到沮丧，外教Mr. Smith给予了帮助。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.回顾Mr. Smith对你的帮助；
3.你的感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80个左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
How are you going I want to take a moment to express my sincere gratitude for your invaluable assistance in improving my English.
A few months ago, I was at a loss what to do because I had little progress in English. It’s your guidance and support that have made a significant difference to my academic performance. You not only helped me expand vocabulary but also directed me to improve my grammar. Most importantly, with your help, I have gained confidence in English and achieved results that I never thought possible.
I have benefited a lot. Once again, thank you, Mr. Smith, for being such an outstanding teacher and mentor.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Mr. Smiths写一封感谢信，就对方在英语上给与自己的帮助表示感谢。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
宝贵的：invaluable→precious
进步：progress→advance
帮助：help→assist
指导：direct→instruct
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：You not only helped me expand vocabulary but also directed me to improve my grammar.
拓展句：Not only did you help me expand vocabulary but also you directed me to improve my grammar.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s your guidance and support that have made a significant difference to my academic performance.（运用了It’s…that强调句型）
【高分句型2】Most importantly, with your help, I have gained confidence in English and achieved results that I never thought possible.（运用了that引导限制性定语从句）
典例03
（2024·山东日照·一模）假定你是校英文报编辑李华，最近英文报开设了“英文诗歌创作”专栏，外教Andy提供了很大的支持和帮助。请你给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 表达感谢；
2. 回顾所提供的帮助。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Andy,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Andy,
I am writing to inform you that I won the first prize in the “English poetry writing”column started by the English newspaper. I am grateful for what you have done for me. Without your patient guidance and continuous encouragement, I could not have made it.
It was kind of you to set aside half an hour every day from your busy schedule to teach me how to write a poem. Besides, after I wrote the poem, you revised my poem and gave me some advice.
Thanks again for your generous help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生写一篇感谢信，感谢外教Andy在你参加“英文诗歌创作”活动中所提供给你的的支持和帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激的：grateful→thankful
指导：guidance→direction
友好的：kind→nice
此外：Besides→In addition
2.句式拓展
改为定语从句
原句：Besides, after I wrote the poem, you revised my poem and gave me some advice.
拓展句：Besides, after I wrote the poem, you revised my poem and gave me some advice, which played a very important role in winning the first prize.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to inform you that I won the first prize in the “English poetry writing”column started by the English newspaper. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I am grateful for what you have done for me. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)专题06应用文写作之感谢信
感谢信是向提供关心、帮助或支持过自己的集体或个人表达感谢的信件。感谢信应写得真诚具体、及时，通常包含三部分内容:开头:表达谢意;主体:列举感谢缘由(回顾对方对自己的帮助);结尾:再次感谢，表达祝愿或回报意愿。感谢信是高考重点考查的考向。
解题思路秘籍
开头:表明写作意图，向对方表达感谢。
主体:语气要诚恳，让对方感受到你的真诚。要对感谢的原因展开说明,写明感谢的原因展开叙述这件事。
结尾：再次感谢，并表示希望回报对方。
提分秘籍01必备短语
in return 作为回报
professional assistance 专业的帮助
mean a lot to sb 对某人十分重要
generous donation 慷慨捐赠
enable sb to do sth 使某人能够做某事
encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事
have the chance to do sth 有机会做某事
constructive and instructive help 建设性的、有益的帮助
be grateful/thankful to sb for sth 因某事感激某人
convey the endless appreciation to sb 向某人表达无尽的谢意
express the sincere gratitude/thanks for sth 为某事表达真诚的谢意
make remarkable achievements 取得非凡的成就
提分秘籍02必备句式
开头常用句
I'd like to take this opportunity to express my sincere gratitude to you for your timely help.
我想借这次机会对您的及时帮助向您表达真诚的感谢。
I'm writing to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for the warm welcome you extended to my friend Kevin
when he visited your school last week.
我的朋友凯文上周去参观贵校的时候受到了您的热情欢迎。为此，我写信向您表达衷心的感谢。
Now I'm writing to extend my gratitude to you on behalf of my school and myself.
现在我写信代表我们学校和自己向您表达感激。
主体常用句
Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English.
在你的专业指导下，我在英语方面取得了令人难以置信的进步。
But for your help during my one year's stay in New York, I wouldn't have adapted to it so quickly.
在纽约一年的时间里，要不是你的帮助，我不会如此迅速地适应它。
What impressed me most is the beautiful scenery and friendly people in your country.
给我印象最深的是你们国家那迷人的景色和友善的人们。
More importantly, your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British culture and adapt to the life there.
更重要的是，你的帮助和善意使我更容易理解英国文化，并且适应那里的生活。
It was with your generous help and tender care that I had a wonderful time there.
正是您的慷慨帮助和悉心照顾让我在那里度过了美好的时光。
Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.
每当我遇到困难时，你总是让我振奋起来，帮助我摆脱困境，这激发了我对英语的热情，也促进了我重新获得极大的信心。
结尾常用句
Thank you again for recommending these English novels to me.
再次感谢推荐这些英文小说给我。
Words fail me to express my thanks to you./My gratitude to you is beyond my description.
对您的感谢我无法用语言来表达。
Please accept my sincere gratitude for your participating in today's lecture.
您来参加今天的讲座，请接受我真心的感谢。
提分秘籍03必备模版
结构 内容
首段：表示感谢。 I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ________ (感谢的原因)．
主体：感谢事由。 If it had not been for your assistance in ________ (对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been ________ (没有对方帮助时的后果). Everyone agrees that it was you who ________ (给出细节)．
尾段：再次感谢。 Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
高考真题回顾
（一）
（2020·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（二）
（2019·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3. 临别祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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（三）
（2010·陕西·高考真题）假定你是李华。你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据写作要点和要求给Sue写封电子邮件。
写作要点：
1.对她表达感谢之意；
2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情；
3.希望了解她的近况。
要求：
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域；
2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）；
3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；
4.书写须清晰、工整；
5.邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。
Dear Sure,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China.
All the best
Li Hua
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典例01
（2024·云南昆明·一模）假定你是李华，你在学校举办的“Adversity and Courage”英语演讲比赛中获奖，请给指导外教 Miss Morton 写一封邮件表示感谢。内容包括：
1. 感谢指导；
2. 个人感悟。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Morton,
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Yours
Li Hua
典例02
（2024·辽宁·二模）假定你是李华。几个月前，你由于英语学习进步缓慢而感到沮丧，外教Mr. Smith给予了帮助。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.回顾Mr. Smith对你的帮助；
3.你的感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80个左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
典例03
（2024·山东日照·一模）假定你是校英文报编辑李华，最近英文报开设了“英文诗歌创作”专栏，外教Andy提供了很大的支持和帮助。请你给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 表达感谢；
2. 回顾所提供的帮助。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Andy,
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Yours,
Li Hua

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