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专题05应用文写作之咨询信
咨询信是写信人针对某项活动或相关情况请求有关个人或部门介绍所询问信息的应用文。咨询信通常分为三部分:开头自我介绍，说明目的。主体咨询具体事宜。结尾表示感谢，期盼回复。咨询信是高考重点考查的考向。
解题思路秘籍
开头 简单叙述相关信息，说明意图，清楚表明写信的目的是要寻求什么样的信息 应注意礼貌，不宜使用带有生硬或命令口吻的询问
主体 询问具体问题。对于所要询问的信息分条提出 可以根据情况和问题作进一步的解释阐述 结尾要对收信人所能给予的任何帮助表示感谢
结尾 表达渴望对方回复的心情，提供联系方式以便收信人与你联系
提分秘籍01必备短语
be intended for 为……而准备
enquire about 询问……的情况
provide sb with sth 向某人提供某物
consult sb about sth 向某人咨询某事
around the corner 即将到来
charge sb for 为……向某人收取费用
be designed for 为……设计
be important to 对……来说很重要
know the exact time and place 知道确切时间和地点
be keen on sth 对……热衷
give details of sth 提供某事的细节
make up one's mind to do sth 某人下决心做某事
提分秘籍02必备句式
开头常用句
I'm writing to see whether it is possible for you to provide me with some information regarding the summer school during the vacation.
我写信问一下您是否可以给我提供一些关于暑期学校的信息。
I'm more than delighted to join in a poetry recitation competition to be held in our school.But I feel puzzled about how to make preparations for it. So I'm writing to consult you about something relevant to it.
我非常高兴能参加即将在我们学校举行的诗歌朗诵比赛，但我不知道如何做准备，所以我写信是想咨询您与之相关的一些事情。
I plan to attend a summer school during the vacation. I've seen your ad, and I'd like to know something more about your sixweek course.
我计划在假期期间上一个暑期学校。我看过你的广告，我想了解更多关于你六周的课程。
主体常用句
To begin with, could you be so kind as to tell me when the course will start
首先，你能告诉我课程什么时候开始吗？
In order to be prepared in advance, I want to know whether the university provide oncampus housing.
为了提前做好准备，我想知道学校是否提供校内住宿。
n addition, it is still unclear to me how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.
另外，我还不清楚我需要支付多少学费，是否包括住宿。
My another question is whether I can live with international students so as to have a better understanding of different cultures.
我的另一个问题是我是否可以和国际学生一起生活，以便更好地了解不同的文化。
I wonder whether you have special requirements for the tutor, like age, education background, etc.
我想知道你是否对导师有特殊的要求，比如年龄、教育背景等。
I would be more than obliged if you could keep me informed of the content of the course in details so that I can make proper arrangements.
如果您能将课程内容详细告知我，以便我做出适当的安排，我将不胜感激。
结尾常用句
I'd be forever grateful if you could send me information concerning the class.
如果你能提供一些关于课程的信息，我感激不尽。
I am expecting your prompt response.
我期待你的及时回应。
Thank you for your generosity, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
感谢你的慷慨，如能迅速回复我将感激不尽。
提分秘籍03必备模版
结构 内容
首段：自我介绍，要咨询的问题。 I am ________ (自我介绍). I would appreciate it very much if you can provide me with more details about ________ (要咨询的内容)．
主体：咨询内容。 First of all, ________ (要咨询的问题一). Secondly, ________ (要咨询的问题二). Thirdly, ________ (要咨询的问题三). I would also like to inquire ________ (附加问题). Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the abovementioned aspects？
尾段：期待回复，表示感谢。 Thank you for your kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
典例分析01
（22-23青海西宁·期末）假定你是李华，得知你的笔友Mike的家乡最近发生了大地震，损失惨重。请你给他写一封慰问信，内容包括：
1. 你所了解的灾情；
2. 你的担忧；
3. 你的帮助。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mike,
How are you doing I am sorry to hear that a terrible earthquake happened in your hometown. I can imagine how difficult this moment must be for you. I’m really worried about you, your family and all your friends there. I’m crossing my fingers for you now in the hope that you are all safe.
I’ve collected some donations from my classmates. To some extent, it may help you get over the difficulty.
Best wishes to you all!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给家乡最近发生大地震的笔友Mike写一封慰问信，需描述自己所了解的灾情，表达担忧，并说明自己的帮助。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
难过的：sorry→sad, sorrowful
糟糕的：terrible→dreadful, awful, horrible
发生：happen→occur, take place
困难的：difficult→hard, tough
为……担心：be worried about→be concerned about
一定程度上：to some extent→in some way, to a certain extent, to some degree
克服：get over→conquer, overcome
困难：difficulty→obstacle, barrier
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I’ve collected some donations from my classmates. To some extent, it may help you get over the difficulty.
拓展句：I’ve collected some donations from my classmates, which, to some extent, may help you get over the difficulty.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that a terrible earthquake happened in your hometown. (运用了连接词that引导名词性从句作hear的宾语)
[高分句型2] I can imagine how difficult this moment must be for you. (运用了连接副词how引导名词性从句作imagine的宾语)
[高分句型3] I’m crossing my fingers for you now in the hope that you are all safe. (运用了连接词that引导名词
性从句作hope的同位语)
典例分析02
（21-22·安徽池州·期末）假定你是李华。你的英国好友Joe竞选篮球队队长失败了，他给你来信说他很受挫败。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封慰问信。
1. 得知消息；
2. 安慰并鼓励他；
3. 表达自己的关心和祝愿。
注意： 1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数100左右。
3. 参考词汇： 竞选run for
【答案】Dear Joe,
I am sorry to hear that you failed in your attempt to run for the position of the basketball team leader. I know exactly how you feel. However, we can learn more lessons from failure than from success. Maybe it is a good thing for your future. Now what is important is to cheer up. Learn from the experience and think about what to do next. To be exact, first, did you make good preparations for the competition It is very important to be well prepared for all kinds of activities. Second, what are your strengths and shortcomings This is another question for you to think deeply about, because it will make your next attempt more successful.
Have faith in yourself. You are a capable, wise person and I believe in you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Joe写一封安慰信。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.得知消息；
2. 安慰并鼓励他；
3. 表达自己的关心和祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
run for；cheer up；think about；to be exact； make good preparations for ；be well prepared for；all kinds of ; have faith in；believe in
第三步：连词成句
1.I am sorry to hear that you failed in your attempt to run for the position of the basketball team leader.
2.I know exactly how you feel.
3.However, we can learn more lessons from failure than from success.
4.Maybe it is a good thing for your future.
5.Now what is important is to cheer up.
6.Learn from the experience and think about what to do next.
7.To be exact, first, did you make good preparations for the competition
8.It is very important to be well prepared for all kinds of activities.
9.Second, what are your strengths and shortcomings
10.This is another question for you to think deeply about, because it will make your next attempt more successful.
11.Have faith in yourself.
12.You are a capable, wise person and I believe in you.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
文章使用了表文章结构顺序的衔接词：First, Second
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you failed in your attempt to run for the position of the basketball team leader. （that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2] It is very important to be well prepared for all kinds of activities. （it作形式主语，真正的主语是动词不定式）
[高分句型3] This is another question for you to think deeply about, because it will make your next attempt more successful.（because引导原因状语从句）
典例分析03
（23-24高一上·河南信阳·期中）假设你是李萍，得知你的外籍教师Fred在下班回家的路上发生车祸住院。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件：
1. 表达同学们的关心；
2. 安慰并鼓励他；
3. 表达祝愿与期望。
注意：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Fred,
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Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】Dear Fred,
On hearing the news that you’re injured and in hospital on your way home from work, we feel very sorry. Are you getting much better now Please don’t worry about your illness. What you need to do is to have a good rest and follow the doctor’s advice.We believe that you are brave enough to win the battle against your disease. You needn’t worry about our lessons, either. When you come back to school, we are all willing to work hard to make up for the missing lessons. We are greatly convinced that we can catch up with others quickly. We all hope that you will recover as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Ping
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写封邮件慰问出车祸的外籍教师Fred。
【详解】1.词汇积累
消息：news→information
休息：have a rest→take a break
建议：advice→suggestion
返回：come back→return
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：We believe that you are brave enough to win the battle against your disease.
拓展句：We believe that you have enough courage to overcome your illness.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What you need to do is to have a good rest and follow the doctor’s advice.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】We are greatly convinced that we can catch up with others quickly.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
最新名校模拟提分巩固练
（一）
（2024·云南曲靖·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Julia发来邮件，说一个同学的恶作剧（prank）让她的自尊心受到了伤害，而且对自我产生了怀疑。请你给她回一封邮件安慰她。注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Julia,
I’m really sorry to hear about the prank that hurt your self-esteem and made you doubt yourself.
Please remember that your worth is not determined by others’ actions or words. You are a strong and incredible person, full of unique qualities and strengths. Don’t let this incident define you. Surround yourself with people who truly appreciate and support you. Take some time to reflect on the things that make you special, and focus on nurturing your self-confidence.
If there’s anything I can do to support you, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生回复英国笔友Julia的邮件，对她在邮件中描述的因恶作
剧而受到伤害的情况给予安慰。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
伤害：hurt→injure
决定：determine→decide
了不起的：incredible→remarkable, extraordinary
专注于：focus on→concentrate on
培养：nurture→develop, cultivate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You are a strong and incredible person, full of unique qualities and strengths.
拓展句：You are a strong and incredible person, who is full of unique qualities and strengths.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m really sorry to hear about the prank that hurt your self-esteem and made you doubt yourself. (运用了that引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Please remember that your worth is not determined by others’ actions or words. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
（23-24高三河北张家口模拟）假定你是李华，今天课上你发现外教Mr. Smith有感冒症状。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达你对他的关心；
2. 表示愿意陪他去看医生，提供必要的帮助。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith，
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. During today’s class, I noticed that you seem to be showing symptoms of a cold. I am genuinely concerned about your health.
If you haven’t got better, I strongly recommend seeing a doctor to get proper advice and treatment. I am willing to accompany you to the hospital or clinic and offer any assistance you may need. Please let me know if there’s anything I can do to help you feel better.
Take care and get well soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封邮件，对其有感冒症状表示关心，并表示愿意陪他去看医生，提供必要的帮助。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
真诚地：genuinely→ sincerely
担忧的：concerned → worried
建议：recommend → suggest
陪伴：accompany sb.→ keep pany
2. 句式拓展
合并句子
原句：During today’s class, I noticed that you seem to be showing symptoms of a cold. I am genuinely concerned about your health.
拓展句：During today’s class, I noticed that you seem to be showing symptoms of a cold, so I am genuinely concerned about your health.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 During today’s class, I noticed that you seem to be showing symptoms of a cold. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 If you haven’t already, I strongly recommend seeing a doctor to get proper advice and treatment. (运用了if引导的状语从句)
（三）
（23-24·辽宁·沈阳模拟）假定你是李华，你校交换生Henry在篮球比赛的备赛训练中受伤，不能参加这次比赛，因此他心情很低落。请你给他写封邮件安慰他，内容包括：
1. 表达理解和惋惜；
2. 提供帮助和鼓励。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Henry,
As your friend, I understand how disappointing it is for you to miss the basketball game due to your injury.
Your hard work and dedication are evident, so this setback must be difficult for you to accept. Remember, setbacks are part of the journey. Focus on healing first and foremost. I'm here to support you, whether it's assistance or just a listening ear. What should be top priority now is your recovery.
Don't let this injury crush your spirit – you'll bounce back stronger. Stay positive and take care!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封慰问信。要求考生以李华的身份，就你校交换生Henry在篮球比赛的备赛训练中受伤不能参加这次比赛，因此他心情很低落一事，写一封慰问信对他进行安慰。
【详解】1.词汇积累
理解：understand→ make sense of
令人失望的：disappointing → frustrating
困难的：difficult→ challenging
现在：now→ for the present
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：This setback must be difficult for you to accept.
拓展句：This unforeseen obstacle must pose a considerable challenge for you to come to terms with.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I understand how disappointing it is for you to miss the basketball game due to your injury.（从句中使用了动词不定式的复合结构做主语、it作形式主语）
【高分句型2】What should be top priority now is your recovery.（使用了连接代词what连接的主语从句）专题05应用文写作之咨询信
咨询信是写信人针对某项活动或相关情况请求有关个人或部门介绍所询问信息的应用文。咨询信通常分为三部分:开头自我介绍，说明目的。主体咨询具体事宜。结尾表示感谢，期盼回复。咨询信是高考重点考查的考向。
解题思路秘籍
开头 简单叙述相关信息，说明意图，清楚表明写信的目的是要寻求什么样的信息 应注意礼貌，不宜使用带有生硬或命令口吻的询问
主体 询问具体问题。对于所要询问的信息分条提出 可以根据情况和问题作进一步的解释阐述 结尾要对收信人所能给予的任何帮助表示感谢
结尾 表达渴望对方回复的心情，提供联系方式以便收信人与你联系
提分秘籍01必备短语
be intended for 为……而准备
enquire about 询问……的情况
provide sb with sth 向某人提供某物
consult sb about sth 向某人咨询某事
around the corner 即将到来
charge sb for 为……向某人收取费用
be designed for 为……设计
be important to 对……来说很重要
know the exact time and place 知道确切时间和地点
be keen on sth 对……热衷
give details of sth 提供某事的细节
make up one's mind to do sth 某人下决心做某事
提分秘籍02必备句式
开头常用句
I'm writing to see whether it is possible for you to provide me with some information regarding the summer school during the vacation.
我写信问一下您是否可以给我提供一些关于暑期学校的信息。
I'm more than delighted to join in a poetry recitation competition to be held in our school.But I feel puzzled about how to make preparations for it. So I'm writing to consult you about something relevant to it.
我非常高兴能参加即将在我们学校举行的诗歌朗诵比赛，但我不知道如何做准备，所以我写信是想咨询您与之相关的一些事情。
I plan to attend a summer school during the vacation. I've seen your ad, and I'd like to know something more about your sixweek course.
我计划在假期期间上一个暑期学校。我看过你的广告，我想了解更多关于你六周的课程。
主体常用句
To begin with, could you be so kind as to tell me when the course will start
首先，你能告诉我课程什么时候开始吗？
In order to be prepared in advance, I want to know whether the university provide oncampus housing.
为了提前做好准备，我想知道学校是否提供校内住宿。
n addition, it is still unclear to me how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.
另外，我还不清楚我需要支付多少学费，是否包括住宿。
My another question is whether I can live with international students so as to have a better understanding of different cultures.
我的另一个问题是我是否可以和国际学生一起生活，以便更好地了解不同的文化。
I wonder whether you have special requirements for the tutor, like age, education background, etc.
我想知道你是否对导师有特殊的要求，比如年龄、教育背景等。
I would be more than obliged if you could keep me informed of the content of the course in details so that I can make proper arrangements.
如果您能将课程内容详细告知我，以便我做出适当的安排，我将不胜感激。
结尾常用句
I'd be forever grateful if you could send me information concerning the class.
如果你能提供一些关于课程的信息，我感激不尽。
I am expecting your prompt response.
我期待你的及时回应。
Thank you for your generosity, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
感谢你的慷慨，如能迅速回复我将感激不尽。
提分秘籍03必备模版
结构 内容
首段：自我介绍，要咨询的问题。 I am ________ (自我介绍). I would appreciate it very much if you can provide me with more details about ________ (要咨询的内容)．
主体：咨询内容。 First of all, ________ (要咨询的问题一). Secondly, ________ (要咨询的问题二). Thirdly, ________ (要咨询的问题三). I would also like to inquire ________ (附加问题). Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the abovementioned aspects？
尾段：期待回复，表示感谢。 Thank you for your kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
典例分析01
（22-23青海西宁·期末）假定你是李华，得知你的笔友Mike的家乡最近发生了大地震，损失惨重。请你给他写一封慰问信，内容包括：
1. 你所了解的灾情；
2. 你的担忧；
3. 你的帮助。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version:
典例分析02
（21-22·安徽池州·期末）假定你是李华。你的英国好友Joe竞选篮球队队长失败了，他给你来信说他很受挫败。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封慰问信。
1. 得知消息；
2. 安慰并鼓励他；
3. 表达自己的关心和祝愿。
注意： 1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数100左右。
3. 参考词汇： 竞选run for
典例分析03
（23-24高一上·河南信阳·期中）假设你是李萍，得知你的外籍教师Fred在下班回家的路上发生车祸住院。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件：
1. 表达同学们的关心；
2. 安慰并鼓励他；
3. 表达祝愿与期望。
注意：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Fred,
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Yours,
Li Ping
最新名校模拟提分巩固练
（一）
（2024·云南曲靖·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Julia发来邮件，说一个同学的恶作剧（prank）让她的自尊心受到了伤害，而且对自我产生了怀疑。请你给她回一封邮件安慰她。注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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（23-24高三河北张家口模拟）假定你是李华，今天课上你发现外教Mr. Smith有感冒症状。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达你对他的关心；
2. 表示愿意陪他去看医生，提供必要的帮助。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith，
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Yours,
Li Hua
（三）
（23-24·辽宁·沈阳模拟）假定你是李华，你校交换生Henry在篮球比赛的备赛训练中受伤，不能参加这次比赛，因此他心情很低落。请你给他写封邮件安慰他，内容包括：
1. 表达理解和惋惜；
2. 提供帮助和鼓励。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry,
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Yours,
Li Hua

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