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Unit 8 Literature
Writing Workshop
A Continuation of a Story
高二英语组 张崇
1 ．___________v.继续→___________adj. 继续的
[k n tinju'ei n] n. 延续， 继续部分
2. aboard [ 'b :d] prep.&adv.在（船，飞机，火车）上；
上（船，飞机，火车）
3. seaman ['si:m n] n.水手，海员，水兵
4. comfort ['k mf t] vt.安慰，抚慰 n.舒适感，满足感
5. take… for granted 视…为理所当然（而对其不重视）
6. emotional [i'm u n l] adj.情感的,敏感的,情绪激动的
continuation
continuous
continue
go aboard 上船 (飞机，火车)
comfortable adj.舒服的 comfortably adv.舒服地
scholar ['sk l ] n.有学问的人;学者
poison ['p iz n] n. 毒药,毒素,毒物vt.毒害,毒杀
forgive [f 'giv] vi. & vt.原谅,宽恕,饶恕
fence [fens] vi. 击剑n.栅栏,围栏,篱笆
handkerchief ['h k t if] n.手帕
noble ['n ub l] adj.高尚的,崇高的,贵族的
forgive sb for (doing) sth 原谅某人(做)某事
1. Within hours of the news, Helen arrived ___________(comfort) her heartbroken friend.
2. Walk out of our __________(comfort) zone and try new things!
3.After five minutes of waiting, they finally _______________ (aboard) the ship!
4.You can’t take for granted that they’ll listen to you.(英译汉)
______________________________________________________
5.I will never forgive her______ what she did.
to comfort
comfort
went aboard
你不能把他们听你话当作理所当然。
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What happened in the story “The Last Leaf”
2 What might happen next
3 What is important in continuing a story
1. You are going to write a continuation of the story “The Last Leaf”. Discuss the questions with your partner.
Read for Writing
2. Read a continuation of 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea. Answer the quesions.
1. Where did this part of the story happen
2. What did the narrator meet
3. What did Ned think would happen to them
4.How is the continuation connected with the original story
A Continuation of 20000 Leaques under the Sea
We were aboard the machine now, and I shook with cold in the darkness. My eyes could see nothing. We were alone. I couldn’t say where I was, (nor could l imagine), All was black, and I was amazed that even after some minutes, my eyes had not been able to see even the smallest shape. l could hear Ned and Conseil breathing quickly. They were nervous, too.
Our prison was suddenly lit, and we closed our eyes painfully at the light. (There came the sound of a heavy door opening), and two seamen appeared. They examined us with great attention, without saying a word. Then they shut the door again and left.
“We will die in this prison!” cried Ned.
“Nonsense!” I said. “We have survived worse than this!” I did not completely believe the words I said, but I knew they would comfort Ned and Conseil.
The door opened again, and the men returned with water and dry biscuits. Hardly a large meal, but it made me realise just how hungry l was. We ate in silence.
“Tomorrow, we take you home,” said one of the men in a deep voice. “But first you must tell us how you found our machine” smiled. I would never again take my home for granted.
Read for Writing Read a continuation of 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea. Answer the quesions.
1. Where did this part of the story happen
2. What did the narrator meet
3. What did Ned think would happen to them
4.How is the continuation connected with the original story
It happened inside the submarine.
The narrator met two seamen of the submarine.
They would die.
It uses the same characters as the original story, and it tells what happens next.
4. Write 2-3 sentences as the continuation of “The Last Leaf”. Use similar expressions in the Sentence Builder that make the description vivid and lively.
Continuation (2-3 sentences)
Johnsy was lost in guilt. Johnsy and Sue sat behind the window gazing at the last leaf that Mr. Behrman had painted with tears in silence. Then they looked at each other sadly.
Compose Your Writing
5. Draw a story map for your continuation of “The Last Leaf”. Make sure your continuation is coherent with the original story.
Writing Help
It’s important to:
understand the setting, the characters and the plot of the original story;
start your continuation with a new plot based on what has happened;
include different types of details like sensory details, actions and thoughts;
create dialogues that sound real and natural;
write the continuation in the same tone and tense as the original story.
看课本P30为 The Last Leaf 进行续写。
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应 位置作答。 Hearing what Sue said, Johnsy was lost in guilt. .
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Since then, they devoted their whole heart to the cause of art. .
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My Story Map Title
Setting
Characters
New plot
The development of the story
Ending
The spirit never dies
a three-story building in Greenwich Village, after Mr. Behrman passed away
Johnsy and Sue
Johnsy and Sue worked harder in art after Mr. Behrman died. They decided to get on in life and share this touching story with people.
With their continuous hard work, they successfully held an art exhibition of their paintings and some remaining works from Mr. Behrman.
The local newspaper reported about this. Some rich men bought their works. Johnsy and Sue raised a charity to support poor people with pneumonia.
Share what you will write in class.
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Compose Your Writing
Hearing what Sue said, Johnsy was lost in guilt.
Johnsy and
Sue sat behind the window gazing at the last leaf that Mr. Behrman had painted with tears in silence. Then they looked at each other sadly.“I’ve been a bad girl, but now I have regretted and I will do something for Mr. Behrman, who sacrificed his life for mine.” Johnsy told Sue.
Johnsy combined her own style with the inspiration from Mr. Behrman, and created some paintings that drew attention from the local newspaper.With their continuous hard work, They successfully held an art exhibition of their paintings and some remaining works from Mr. Behrman.The local newspaper reported about this. Some rich men bought their works. Johnsy and Sue raised a charity to support poor people with pneumonia.
Since then, they devoted their whole heart to the cause of art.

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