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专题11 应用文之祝贺信
祝贺信中开头部分表达写信目的“祝贺对方事由”
1 am very happy to hear that＋句子 (you have won the first prize in...)
1 am much delighted to learn that＋句子
I have learned with delight that＋句子
It is really exciting to know/ to be informed that
I am writing to offer you my sincerest congratulations on sth. (your winning the prize.)
Hearing the news that you..., I was unable to contain my excitement
Congratulations on your exam results/ Congratulate you on...
Congratulations! We are all proud of your remarkable achievements.
常用短语：祝贺某人某事 congratulate sb. on sth. /congratulations（to）sb. on sth.
祝贺信中间部分表达对其成功进行积极的评价
1．兴趣与天赋
There is no doubt that/Undoubtedly, you are particularly interested in Playing tennis.
There is no denying that your success partly lies in your talent for tennis.
It was your interest and talent that pushed you hard (to train every day.)
You are really talented in playing tennis.
2．自身的努力
The past 3 months saw /witnessed your effort...
What distinguished you from others was your effort, which paid off eventually
No one can deny your effort in the past days, which made it possible for you to...
Despite a great challenge, you spared no effort to train yourself hard.
It was persistence and determination that led you, step by step, to your success.
It is not the success but your effort that matters much.
You couldn’t have made such remarkable achievements without your continuous effort.
Your success is mainly due to your hard work and everyday practice.
You were always the first to arrive at the gym and the last to leave.
3．比赛的表现及总结
You showed persistence in the competition, which contributed to your final success.
Your excellent performances proved your power and strength.
You deserved the prize/to win the competition due to the faith, effort and courage you showed.
You were bound to be successful because of.. in spite of the hardships.
It is quite inspiring, as no one from our school has ever won the contest before. Undoubtedly,your success is a great honor for both you and our school. We are proud of you.

祝贺信结尾部分再次表达祝贺以及对未来的祝福
Again, I’d like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt congratulations and best wishes to you. I wish you greater success in the future.
My best wishes for your future success.
Best wishes for your even greater /better progress in the future.
Dear _______ ,
(首段祝贺) Congratulations on your _______ . It was delightful for me to hear that ______________ . I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement. Please accept my sincere congratulations on your ___________.
(评论事件) I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. Now you prove to me a mature and well-rounded（全面的）________in every respect.
(展望未来，再次祝愿) Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the future ___________ . Again, I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______. May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams!
Yours，
___________
Writing1:2021新高考I&II卷
你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；
2. 喜爱的栏目；
3. 期望和祝福。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear Editor-in-Chief，
Congratulations on the 10th anniversary of Youth.
I have been a devoted reader since I subscribed to the newspaper. Obsessed with it, I read each issue from cover to cover. It boasts a variety of columns, of which Chinese culture is my favorite. The series of contents not only introduces abundant cultural knowledge but also values the inheritance of brilliant culture and strengthens our cultural confidence.
As a fan of Youth. I recommend that it will be better if it carries some articles about the life of foreign teens and I hope that it will become even more popular.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：found→establish
沮丧的：depressed→upset
此外：besides→what’s more
得到：receive→obtain
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.
拓展句：Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
1.(2023届湖南省长沙市湖南师范大学附属中学高三下学期模拟试卷)
假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛”(Chinese Traditional Culture Contest)中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信，内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.回顾他的付出和努力；3.期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献。
注意：
写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Congratulations on your winning the first prize of the foreign contestant group in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest, which came as no surprise.
In order to prepare for the contest, on the one hand, you gave up your rest time and buried yourself in the library to get a deeper insight into the types and characteristics of Chinese traditional culture to enrich your knowledge reserve. On the other hand, you immersed yourself in the question bank provided by the contest organizer to make perfect, so perfect that many Chinese students are no match for you. Now, your hard work has finally paid off.
Looking forward to your making greater contributions to the promotion of Chinese culture!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为祝贺信；
（2）因两人是朋友关系，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为说明Peter成功的付出与努力，故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）... came as no surprise毫不奇怪；
（2）On the one hand, ... On the other hand, ...一方面，...；另一方面，...
（3）bury oneself in埋头于；
（4）get a deeper insight into深入了解；
（5）immerse oneself in沉浸于...；
（6）no match for sb不是某人的对手；
（7）pay off得到回报。
2.(2022·湖南常德·模拟预测)
在2022年北京冬奥会上，Eileen Gu（谷爱凌）获得了两金一银的好成绩，她的自信、聪慧和勤奋给我们留下了深刻印象。假设你是李华，你校外刊开设了“What I want to say to Eileen Gu”专栏，请你给她写一封信，内容如下：
1. 对她的成就表示祝贺；
2. 作为同龄人她对你的影响和启迪；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按以下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear Eileen,
It is universally acknowledged that the 24th Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was a success. It was you who won two gold and one silver medals, which contributed to the final result—China at top 3 of the medal list. I am writing to congratulate you on your achievements. The whole nation is proud of you. Thank you heartedly for what you have done to our country.
Your success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide to follow you to do something for our motherland. I am impressed by your confidence, intelligence and diligence. Your attitude towards life will never stop influencing my thoughts and actions.
Wish you live a more wonderful life.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给我国选手谷爱凌（Eileen Gu）写一封信，祝贺她在北京冬季奥运会上赢得了两金一银的好成绩、她对你的影响和启迪以及表达对她的祝愿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
为……作贡献：contribute to →make a contribution to
以……为骄傲：be proud of →take pride in
鼓舞：inspire →encourage
决定：decide to →be determined to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide to follow you to do something for our motherland.
拓展句：Your success and spirit inspire me greatly, which makes me decide to follow you to do something for our motherland.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Thank you heartedly for what you have done to our country.(运用了what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】It was you who won two gold and one silver medals, which contributed to the final result—China at top 3 of the medal list.(运用了强调句和which引导非限制性定语从句）
3.(2022·河南·宝丰县第一高级中学模拟预测)
假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Ann在北京冬奥会期间提供了志愿服务并且被评选为优秀志愿者。请你给她写封电子邮件表示祝贺，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺；
2.告知庆祝派对的安排。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Ann,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ann,
Knowing that you have worked as a volunteer of the Beijing Winter Olympics and have been selected as an excellent volunteer, I’m really happy for you. And I’d like to offer my sincere congratulations to you.
To celebrate your achievement, I will hold a party for you this Saturday evening. I will invite some of our friends over, who have prepared surprise gifts for you and are eager to know about your experiences during the Winter Olympics. In addition, you will enjoy delicious Chinese food cooked by myself. I’m sure you will like the party. Please arrive at my home by 5: 00 pm.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰朋友Ann写封电子邮件，对她被评选为北京冬奥会优秀志愿者表示祝贺，内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.告知庆祝派对的安排。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
选择：select→choose
高兴的：happy→delighted
礼物：gift→present
提供：offer→provide
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To celebrate your achievement, I will hold a party for you this Saturday evening.
拓展句：I will hold a party for you this Saturday evening, the purpose of which is to celebrate your achievement.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Knowing that you have worked as a volunteer of the Beijing Winter Olympics and have been selected as an excellent volunteer, I’m really happy for you. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I will invite some of our friends over, who have prepared surprise gifts for you and are eager to know about your experiences during the Winter Olympics. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
4.(2022·全国·模拟预测)
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友John获得了在华高中留学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 祝贺获奖；
2. 肯定付出；
3. 期待见面交流。
注意：1. 写作词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear John,
I would like to express my congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition.
It is really good news that you became champion of this competition. I know you were not very good at Chinese at first. However, you practised speaking Chinese almost every day. As the saying goes, “Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.” And your efforts paid off at last! I believe you can achieve more in the future.
I’m looking forward to seeing you soon and catching up on all the updates.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你的英国朋友John写一封电子邮件，祝贺他在华高中留学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
想要：would like to →want to
比赛：competition →match
冠军：champion →winner
期望：look forward to → expect
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句：I would like to express my congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition.
拓展句：Knowing that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition, I would like to express my congratulations to you.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]It is really good news that you became champion of this competition.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导的主语从句）
[高分句型2]I believe you can achieve more in the future.（运用了宾语从句）
5.(湖南省长沙市长郡中学2023-2024学年高三下学期寒假作业检测)
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris来邮件与你分享了他参加了他们学校中文学习俱乐部开展的“中国成语(Chinese Idioms)”比赛，并获得了冠军的消息。请你给他写一封回信。要求如下：1.表达祝贺；2.肯定努力；3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
Congratulations on your winning the "Chinese Idioms" contest held by your school's Chinese Learning Club, which came as no surprise.
The past year has witnessed your hard work in studying Chinese idioms. For one thing, you were buried in Chinese idiom storybooks, gaining you a deeper insight into Chinese idioms. For another, you immersed yourself in the question bank of the idioms to improve your proficiency. It was your persistence and perseverance that made you stand out. As it turns out, practice makes perfect, and your diligence has ended up with a championship.
Wish you new and greater progress in the journey of your Chinese study!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为祝贺信；
（2）因两人是笔友关系，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为肯定所做的努力，故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）... came as no surprise毫不奇怪；
（2）witness运用无灵主语结构；
（3）For one thing, ... For another, ...一方面，...另一方面，...；
（4）be buried in埋头于；
（5）immerse oneself in沉浸于；
（6）It was ... that ...强调句型；
（7）as it turns out由as引导出定语从句，其中as指代后面的整件事；
（8）end up with sth结果以做某事而告终。

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