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专题10 应用文之建议信
第一段：写信原因+写信目的
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会对你有一些帮助。
2. Learning / Hearing that you have difficulty in dealing with the relationship with your parents, I'd like to give you some advice.
得知 / 听说你在处理与父母的关系上有困难，我想要给你一些建议。
3. I'm more than glad to receive your letter asking me how to learn Chinese. The following are some suggestions for you.
很高兴收到你就如何学习汉语向我征求建议的来信。以下是给你的一些建议。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese well, and I will try to offer some practical suggestions here.
你向我征求关于如何学好汉语的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些实用的建议。
5. I'm writing in reply to your last letter on how to speak English fluently and accurately.
我写信是来回复你在上封信中提到的如何准确流利地说英语的问题。
6. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）.
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
第二段：给出具体的建议及理由
1. To begin with / First and foremost, you are supposed to do 你应该做…
2. You'd better do sth. 你最好做……/ You may as well do sth. 你不妨做…
3. Last but not least, why not do sth 最后，为什么不……？
4. Personally / As far as I'm concerned / From my point of view, it would be a wise choice / good idea if you read a book or listen to music. By doing this, you will calm yourself down.在我看来，看书或听音乐将会是明智的选择 / 不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。
5. There's no need for you to be so worried and nervous, and it's necessary for you to consult some books concerning the traditional Chinese culture.
你没必要如此担心和紧张，你有必要查阅一些关于中国传统文化的书籍。
6. Another suggestion is that you should wear a protective mask to prevent yourself from getting infected if you go outdoors.
另一个建议是，你应该戴上防护口罩，以防外出时被感染。
7. In addition, I strongly suggest / advise that you should make use of time to master the present subjects.此外,我强烈建议你利用时间掌握现在的科目。
8. If I were you / Were I you, I would work out regularly in order to keep healthy. 如果我是你，我会经常锻炼以保持健康。
第三段：希望采纳建议+表达美好祝愿
1. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful / beneficial / practical. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
我希望你会认为这些建议有帮助/有益/可行。如果你有任何问题，请随时和我联系。
2. I sincerely hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way.
我真诚地希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
3. I hope my suggestions can make a difference to you. Best wishes and good luck!
希望我的建议能对你有影响。
4. I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration. I am sure you will have a pleasant online learning experience.
希望你能考虑我的建议。我相信你会有一个愉快的网上学习经历。
5. I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions.
如果你能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。
Dear ________,
I was glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on _________(别人求助内容). Here are my suggestions. / You have asked me for my advice with regard to__________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
To get started, you had better _________(建议一). Besides, it’s a good idea to _________(建议二). Last but not least, I think the most efficient way is to _________(建议三).
With all the factors taken into consideration, I’m sure you will _________(成功解决问题). / I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with your__________(祝愿)
Best wishes,
Li Jin
Writing1:2023 新高考I&II卷
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little
room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with
or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）
Writing2: 2023 安徽省、云南省、吉林省、黑龙江省四省联考卷
你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容
包括：
1. 音乐会特点；
2. 观看感受；
3. 意见建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
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【答案】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after another. Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one. I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. They performed the song in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling of connection.
I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for us Chinese students and our international friends to learn about and from each other.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会，在线上留言板上写一则评论。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确定无疑地：undoubtedly→without doubt
尤其地：particularly→ especially
感动：touch→ move
希望：hope→ expect
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
拓展句：There is no doubt that their performances are of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
1.(2024年湖北省八市高三3月联考)
假定你是李华，你的笔友Jack因高三学习压力增大，总为一些小事对家长或同学发脾气，为此他很懊恼，希望得到你的帮助。请你回复一封邮件，内容包括：1.表示理解；2.提出建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li hua
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I learn that the increasing academic pressure is becoming a headache for you. Actually, it is not uncommon for senior three students of your age to lose your temper with parents and classmates. So just take it easy and here comes my advice.
It always comes first to do exercise, such as running, climbing, playing basketball, and the like, so that you can relieve yourself both physically and mentally. Balancing your work and play to guarantee your study efficiency is also preferable, Equally important is to communicate with your parents and friends to gain their understanding and support.
I hope my advice is of some help to you. Looking forward to your breaking free from your bother.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为建议信；
（2）因两人是笔友关系，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为就如何缓解学习压力提出具体建议，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）academic pressure学业压力；
（2）become a headache for sb对某人来说是一件头疼的事情；
（3）it is not uncommon for sb to do sth双重否定表达肯定意义=it is common for sb to do sth；
（4）take it easy放轻松；
（5）here comes my advice运用完全倒装结构；
（6）it always comes first to do sth做某事总是排在首位的；
（7）and the like等等=and so on；
（8）balance your work and play劳逸结合；
（9）... is also preferable某事也是更好的；
（10）Equally important is to do sth表语形容词置于句首产生完全倒装结构；
（11）is of great help to sb对某事而言有所帮助；
（12）break free from your bother摆脱困扰。
2.(2023年全国高考英语真题北京卷)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动。他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：1.活动形式；2.活动内容。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear Jim,
I am glad to learn that you are planning a club activity themed with "Green Beijing". Here are my suggestions.
It always comes first to invite a celebrated expert for a lecture on environmental protection. To act, after all, we should think first. Activities like garbage picking and waste classification in famous scenic spots in Beijing are also preferable, which will promote the ecological concept of health and environmental protection to tourists with practical actions. Plus why not choose green travel so that you can contribute to Beijing's environmental protection
I hope my advice is helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为建议信；
（2）因两人相识，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为建议的具体内容，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）It always comes first to do sth做某事是首要的；
（2）celebrated形容词，意为“著名的”；
（3）... are also preferable也是更好的；
（4）Plus此外；
（5）contribute to对...做出贡献。
3.(2024年河南省普通高中毕业班高考适应性测试)
假如你是李华，你校计划举行以“Fly Your Dream”为主题的英语周活动。现就活动的内容、形式征集建议，请你给负责本次活动的外教Chris写一封信，提出你的想法。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下形式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I am glad to learn that our school is scheduled to hold an English week activity of "Flying Your Dreams". This activity, I believe, will be of extraordinary significance. And here comes my proposal.
Themed with "dream", it would be preferable to focus on the diversity in various forms of the big event. On the top of my list are stage activities, ranging from painting and speech contests, to the English song performance. Flying kites is another alternative. Every individual can make a kite with a dream on it and fly their dreams. Not only will it stimulate the students' interest, it will also improve their hands-on ability, killing two birds with one stone.
I hope my suggestions are of some help and wish this event a complete success!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为建议信；
（2）因两人是师生关系，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为就英语周活动的内容和形式提出具体建议，故本文总体时态定调为一般将来时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）be scheduled to do sth计划做某事；
（2）be of extraordinary significance意义非凡；
（3）here comes my proposal运用完全倒装结构；
（4）themed with以...为主题；
（5）it would be preferable to do sth做某事是更好的；
（6）On the top of my list are ...介宾短语置于句首产生完全倒装结构；
（7）ranging from ... to ...表达形式多样性的结构；
（8）another alternative另一个选择；
（9）Not only will it ...否定词置于句首产生部分倒装结构；
（10）stimulate one's interest激发兴趣；
（11）killing two birds with one stone分词短语作结果状语，意为“一石二鸟，一箭双雕”；
（12）of some help有所帮助。
4.(2023届重庆市高三第一次联合诊断检测·康德卷)
假定你是李华，美国“汉语桥（Chinese Bridge）”网上冬令营组织方正在网上征集活动内容，欢迎网友献计献策。请你给组织方写一封建议信，内容包括：1.你建议的活动（至少两项）；2.你的理由；3.你的希望。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear committee members,
I'm glad to know that you are seeking for the events of Chinese Bridge online winter camp. Here comes my advice as a guideline.
Music knows no borders. It always comes first to hold an instrument concert, in which students can play some familiar Chinese classical folk music, which can further stimulate students' interest in learning Chinese and help them feel the weight of history of traditional Chinese music. A Chinese story speech contest is also preferable, since there are a wealth of classic myths and legends in China. These activities, I’m convinced, will definitely bring the students a cultural feast.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration. I hope the winter camp will be a great success!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为建议信；
（2）因文本开头已给出，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为提出并说明原因，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）Here comes my advice运用完全倒装结构；
（2）Music knows no borders音乐无国界；（3）It always comes first to do sth首先要做某事；
（4）stimulate one's interest in激发某人的兴趣；
（5）feel the weight of history感受历史的厚重感；
（6）... is also preferable也是更可取的；
（7）a wealth of丰富多彩的，很多的；
（8）I'm convinced我相信，文中用作插入语；
（9）definitely明确地；
（10）bring sb a cultural feast带给某人一场文化盛宴；
（11）I would appreciate it if如果...我将不胜感激；
（12）take sth into consideration把某事考虑在内。
5.(浙江省绍兴市2024届高三一模考试)
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David刚升入高中，但因一时无法适应新的校园生活而焦虑，写信向你倾诉他的烦恼。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：1.分析可能的原因；2.给出合理的建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear David,
I'm sorry to learn that you are at a loss for your freshman year. It is not unusual for students of your age, in fact, to have difficulty adapting to the new campus life. In contrast to junior high, study in senior high is more challenging, let alone the increase of subjects, which adds to our psychological anxiety. Here comes my advice.
It always comes first to plan the time at school wisely, because only by keeping a balance between study and rest and working out regularly can we get used to the intense high school life. Plus, getting ourselves involved in some club activities is also preferable, which will build up our confidence and help fit in well with the students around us.
I hope you will adapt to high school life soon. Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为建议信；
（2）因两人是笔友关系，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为分析无法适应高中生活的原因并提出建议，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）at a loss for对...茫然不知所措；
（2）freshman year高中第一年（生活）；
（3）It is not unusual双重否定表示肯定；
（4）In contrast to和...比较；
（5）challenging=difficult；
（6）let alone更别提；
（7）Here comes my advice运用完全倒装结构；
（8）It always comes first to do sth做某事总是排在第一位；
（9）only by ... can we ...否定词置于句首产生部分倒装结构；
（10）plus此外；
（11）get sb involved in使某人参与某事；
（12）... is also preferable也是更可取的；
（13）fit in well with适应，融入。

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