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专题07 应用文之报道
第一段：目的+活动/时间/地点
①、Aiming at doing..../ With the aim of doing...., 活动 is/ was scheduled to be held in/at 地点（Lecture Hall/Stadium/Library/Playground/Room 101）+时间next Friday，lasting for 4 hours/ from 8 a.m to 4 p.m next Friday.
②、Last Friday witnessed a 活动, in which 参与者participated+地点。
中间段：具体活动项目或流程
①、Being interested in/fond of /keen on...., 参与者 expect to do.....
②、安排/具体活动 will be arranged /organized to .....
③、Not only do/did 参与者 do sth...but also do sth
常见：④、They gathered at 集合地点 at 时间点 and set out for 目的地.
⑤、All the way 参与者 were doing，doing and doing，enjoying sth.
⑥、Upon arrival, students, who were divided into four groups, immediately started to do sth......
结尾段：活动评价或带来的意义
①Hopefully，this meaningful/ impressive/significant XXX will be of great beneficial to you/ bring ....to you.
②The XXX was highly thought of, because not only did it provide ...for sb to do, but was also of great beneficial to the participants, physically and mentally.
③What a wonderful time we had ! Not only did it provide students with...., but also did .....
各种活动常见的意义/影响/感想如下：
1）a valuable opportunity/chance to enjoy the nature/ improve their physical condition/health
build up your body/strengthen your physical condition
2) help the students / each other get closer to the nature /promote/enhance the friendship among them
3) help them relieve their heavy studying burden/ pressure
4) teach them the importance of team work
5) Not only was it of great benefits to all the participants, physically and mentally, but also.....
6) bring life to traditional Chinese culture/ have a deeper understanding of …./ get/obtain/acquire more knowledge of …
7) enrich knowledge about… and broaden your horizon
8) it helps to / contributes to (doing) experience something different/ special
活动名称 Successfully Held
时间witnessed a/an 形容词activity titled “题目” held by 主办方+地点, which involved 参与人, with the intention of目的（动词用doing）.
As scheduled, the activity started with 活动1, which活动1意义. Then, under the guidance of指导人, a series of fascinating activities were organized, ranging from活动2 to活动3. Undoubtedly, There were many moments when we were amazed at the excellent performances of 参与人. However, what impressed me most was that 精彩瞬间（完整句子表述）
The activity benefited us a lot, through which not only did we 感受1(动词原形）, but we also 感受2(动词过去式）.
Writing1:2023浙江1月卷
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道,内容包括：
1.活动的过程；
2.收获与感想。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按以下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
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【答案】
Last weekend, I participated in the "Getting to Know the Plants Around Us" event organized by the school student union.
The event commenced with a lecture on the significance of plants in our daily lives, followed by a guided tour
of the school garden.During the tour, we learned about different types of plants, their characteristics, and their uses. We also had the opportunity to touch and smell the plants, which helped us to better understand their unique features.The highlight of the event was the hands-on activity where we were given the chance to plant our own seedlings.
Overall, the event was a great success. It not only provided us with valuable knowledge about plants, but also allowed us to appreciate the beauty and importance of nature. It was a great reminder that we should all do our part in protecting and preserving our environment.
Writing2: 2020新高考I卷
假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:
1. 参加人员:
2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:
3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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【答案】
A Cross-Country Running Race
A 5000-metre cross-country running race, part of the sports meeting in our school, was staged by the students’ union last Sunday.
150 participants from three grades got involved in the race actively. Among the most of the participants were students and teaching staff. The race route started at the school gate and ended at the foot of the South Hill.
The race turned out to be a great success. Not only does it strengthen our body but it also tests our will and enriches our school life. Every participant expects another one.
1.（2023·新疆·校联考二模）
假定你是校英语报的记者，上周末你校举办了“校园十佳歌手”大赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。
内容包括：1.活动主题及参加人员；
2.活动详情；
3.活动反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Campus Top Ten Singers Competition, whose theme was to enrich school life and give full play to youth as well as their positive outlook, was launched last weekend. We students and all teaching staff gave an active response as well as a big applause to this event.
Those who are enthusiastic about singing participated in the competition, which was full of climax and splendor. The contestants’ singing styles are diverse, expressing their love for music and their declaration of youth. After fierce competition, the top ten singers came out in public. It not only opens a grand event for teachers and students but also attracts students to speak out for their dreams. We students will continue to follow the beat of youth and feel the life of culture and art.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道，要求考生为校英文报写一篇关于学校举办的“校园十佳歌手”大赛的报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
主题：theme→subject
反应：response→reaction
充满：be full of→be filled with
各种各样的：diverse→varied
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句：After fierce competition, the top ten singers came out in public.
拓展句：It was after fierce competition that the top ten singers came out in public.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Campus Top Ten Singers Competition, whose theme was to enrich school life and give full play to youth as well as their positive outlook, was launched last weekend. (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] The contestants’ singing styles are diverse, expressing their love for music and their declaration of
youth. (运用了现在分词作状语)
2.(2023·甘肃·统考三模)
假定你是李华，上周末你校举办了为期两天的美食节。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动准备；
2.活动现场概述；
3.活动反响。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
A Two-day Food Festival
An annual food festival was held last weekend in our school.
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【答案】
A Two-day Food Festival
An annual food festival was held last weekend in our school. Before the festival, every one of us launched into setting up tents and posting our menus.
There’ s nothing better than the senses we experienced at a food festival—the rows of food trucks and tents as far as the eye could see, the rhythmic sound we heard from cooking, the smells of dozens of delicious food being prepared around us and of course the taste of everything we could stomach. However, what impressed me most was in fact the cultures behind the food vividly introduced by the cooks. Also, wonderful background music and colorful flags added to the pleasure of the occasion.
It was everyone’s joint efforts that made the activity such a big success and it’s the cultures behind the food
that made the festival special. Every one of us sang high praise for the event.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生就上周末学校举办的为期两天的美食节，为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：活动准备，活动现场概述，以及活动反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开始着手、积极投入：launch into → put into
极目望去：as far as the eye could see → in sight
美味的：delicious → tasty
赞不绝口：sing high praise for → speak highly of
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：However, what impressed me most was in fact the cultures behind the food vividly introduced by the cooks.
拓展句：However, what left the biggest impression on me was the vivid introduction of the cultures behind the food by the cooks.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】However, what impressed me most was in fact the cultures behind the food vividly introduced by the cooks.（运用了what引导的主语从句，过去分词短语作后置定语）
【高分句型2】It was everyone’s joint efforts that made the activity such a big success and it’s the cultures behind the food that made the festival special.（运用了强调句型，“make+宾语+补语”结构）
3.(丽水、湖州、衢州 2024年4月三地市高三教学质量检测试卷)
上周末你校举办了“急救知识进校园”的活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.活动的过程；2.活动的影响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。
First Aid Knowledge Hits the Campus
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【答案】
First Aid Knowledge Hits the Campus
Last Saturday witnessed an activity themed with First Aid Knowledge Hits the Campus in the lecture hall, running for 2 hours, in order to equip the students with first aid skills.
The event began with an expert lecture focusing on first aid, followed by the demonstration of first aid skills in an emergency from doctors and nurses of the People's Hospital. Some students practiced first aid skills under the guidance of professional nurses and learned how to deal with common injuries in case of emergency.
The event had a profound impact on the students, who feel more confident and prepared in handling emergencies.
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为报道；
（2）因文体是报道，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为介绍已举办的“急救知识进校园”活动，故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）Last Saturday witnessed运用无灵主语 ；
（2）themed with以...为主题；
（3）focus on围绕；
（4）followed by紧接着；
（5）under the guidance of在...的指导下；
（6）have a profound impact on对...产生深远影响。
4.(广东省2024届高三年级2月份大联考)
上周六你校英语俱乐部开展了以“Is it necessary for teenagers to study abroad ”为题的辩论赛。请你为本次辩论赛写一篇英语报道，内容包括：1.辩论过程及结果；2.活动的意义。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
A debate focusing on whether it is necessary for teenagers to study abroad was held last Sunday.
The pros and cons are eyeball to eyeball with convincing arguments. The positive side believes that studying abroad can help teenagers to enjoy high-quality educational resources, broaden their horizons and relieve the increasingly severe employment pressure in China. The negative side, however, argues that studying abroad is expensive, puts a lot of pressure on the family, and guarantee no personal safety. The negative side ended up winning the debate, and the best debaters were selected.
Not only did this activity enrich the students' extracurricular life, and provide a platform for students to show themselves, it also encouraged students to think about problems in a new light, and demonstrated the cultural charm of the language.
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为报道；
（2）因文体是报道，故作者身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为介绍已举办辩论赛活动的过程、结果和意义，故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）eyeball to eyeball争锋相对；
（2）convincing adj. 令人信服的；
（3）broaden one's horizons拓宽视野；
（4）increasingly越来越多地；
（5）however在文本中用作插入语；
（6）argue持反对观点的人运用的动词；
（7）ended up doing sth以做某事而结局；
（8）Not only did ...否定词置于句首产生部分倒装结构；
（9）in a new light用全新的角度。
5.(2023年湖北省八市高三3月联考)
为了增强学生的安全防范意识，今天上午你校组织了紧急逃生疏散演练活动。假定你是李华，请你给校英文广播站写一篇相关的新闻报道，内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动流程；3.活动感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：疏散演练evacuation drill
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【答案】
The School Emergency Evacuation Drill
This morning witnessed an emergency evacuation drill organized by our school in the Teaching Building, aiming to improve students' safety awareness.
With the alarm sounding at 9:30, there went the drill. Under the guidance of the teachers, the students of each class evacuated from the east and west fire channels to the open field, covering their mouths and noses with wet towels and clothes. Then came the head count by monitors. After the drill, the principal in charge made comments on the activity, followed by the professional’s guidance to all the students on the essentials of using fire extinguishers.
Not only did this drill enable all students to master fire escape skills, it also improved their ability to cope with emergencies.
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为报道；
（2）因文体是报道，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为介绍应急疏散演练活动，故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）witness用作无灵主语（即拟人写法）；
（2）aiming to do sth旨在做某事；
（3）... there went the drill运用了完全倒装结构，意为“演练开始了”；
（4）... covering their mouths and noses with wet towels and clothes运用分词短语作状语结构；
（5）Then came the head count运用完全倒装结构，意为“接着是清点人数”；
（6）..., followed by ...分词短语作状语，意为“紧接着”；
（7）Not only did this drill enable ...否定词置于句首产生部分倒装结构；
（8）cope with处理。

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