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专题09 应用文之感谢信
感谢信开头部分说明写信的原因
①I am writing to express my thanks for ... 我写信是为了表达我对……的谢意。
②I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for ...在信中我要为……向你表达我诚挚的谢意。
③On behalf of my whole family, I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for ... 我代表我全家对……表示真诚的感激。
④I am extremely grateful to you for ...我非常感谢你……
⑤Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to ...非常感谢您为帮助我们……所做的一切。
⑥I am writing to show my sincere appreciation to sb. for sth. 我写信是为了表达我对……真诚的谢意。
感谢信中间部分细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助
①It was nice/ kind/ thoughtful/ considerate (考虑周到的) of you to...
②Thank you very much for your kind hospitality (热情招待) and the honor you showed me during my visit.
③It was with your help that I made such rapid progress in English. (强调句型)
④If it had not been for your ( help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldn't have ( won the prize) 虚拟语气
⑤But for/ Without your( help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldn't have (won the prize) 虚拟语气
感谢信结尾再次表达对对方的感谢
①Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories; we will remember them forever.没什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆，我们会永远牢记在心。
②Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you！/Thanks again for your kind help.我再次对你表示衷心的感谢。/对你的热心帮助再次表示感谢。
③I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by ...如果我有机会通过……报答你的好意，我会非常高兴。
④My true gratitude is beyond the words’ description. 我真挚的感谢之情已经无法言表。
⑤Words fail to express my gratitude deep in my heart.无法用言语表达我内心真诚的感谢之情。
⑥Please do not hesitate to let me know if there is anything I could do to pay you back.如果有什么我可以帮助你的，请不要犹豫跟我说。
Dear __×××__ ,
How is everything going （用于比较熟悉的人之间简单打招呼）/ I'm Li Hua, a student from ××× Middle School.（用于正式的感谢信中自我介绍） ①I am writing to extend/express/show my sincere/heartfelt gratitude for ______(开头说明感谢对方的原因).
②But for your assistance in ______(对方给予的具体帮助), I would not have ______(运用虚拟语气句式表达没有对方帮助时会产生的后果).
③You have given me so much help that I will never forget. Last month, ______(回忆感谢对方做出的细节1-2点).
④Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. （结尾再次表达感谢之意）/ Wish you have a healthy body and lead a happy life! （也可以表达自己对另一方的祝福）/ If there is a chance, welcome to China, I am looking forward to your coming. / I am looking forward to meeting you one day to express my heartfelt thanks for your generous help face to face.（还可以邀请对方来中国参观）
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Writing1:2019年6月浙江卷
假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3. 临别祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear Alex,
It’s really a pity that you will leave us and go back to your country. On the occasion of parting, I would like to express my deep gratitude to you. Thank you very much for your help with my English study over the months.
For various reasons, my English was not very good. But your timely help made a difference. With your patient and effective help, my English has improved a lot. What’s more, thanks to your help, I now have confidence in my English study and have effective learning strategies.
Parting is inevitable, but I believe our friendship will last forever. Wish you all the best and a good journey back home.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing2: 2017年北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你
们制作以"感恩母校"为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程．
注意：词数不少于60．
提示词：视频video
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【答案】
Graduation finally came．My classmates and I decided to do something．Having had a heated discussion，we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school.
Material collecting took us a whole week，during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life．The editing part after that was tough．We debated over what to put into the video．Some compromises were unavoidable，but the video turned out perfect．Several days later，when the video was played on the graduation ceremony，it was well received．The students and teachers shared a great time，which surely gave us a great sense of achievement．
1.(2024届湖南省雅礼中学高三月考试卷四)
假如你是李华，你在口语课上回答错误，引得全班哄堂大笑。外教Julia及时救场，你想写封信表达你的感谢。内容包括：1.当时的情况；2.外教的做法；3.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Julia,
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Yours,
Li hua
【答案】
Dear Julia,
I hope this letter finds you well. I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for helping me out of embarrassment in the oral English class.
Memories of your help came flooding back to me. In the class yesterday when I was required to introduce Hu’nan specialties, I had intended to say that Hu’nan has a lot of delicious snacks. However, the word “snacks" was mispronounced as “snakes”, causing laughter from the whole class. So awkward was I that I didn't know where to put myself. It was at that moment that you distracted my classmates' focus by asking them to talk about the legends of snakes, which saved me from embarrassment and strengthened my determination to learn spoken English well. After all, no method is better than more practice.
Many thanks for your kindness! Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.应用文写作三步法：
（1）仔细审题，确定本文为感谢信；
（2）因对方是外教老师，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）根据写作要求，本文主体部分为感谢对方帮助自己摆脱口语课犯错被同学嘲笑的尴尬，确定本文时态主基调为一般过去时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）I hope this letter finds you well无灵主语结构；
（2）express one's gratitude to sb for sth因某事向某人表达谢意；
（3）Memories of your help came flooding back to me分词短语做状语；
（4）had intended to do sth本来打算做某事；
（5）So awkward was ...so+形容词置于句首产生部分倒装结构；
（6）... didn't know where to put myself无地自容，尴尬地想钻地洞；
（7）It was at that moment that强调句型；
（8）save sb from使某人免除某事；
（9）no method is better than ...某事是不二法门。
2.(2022年全国高考新高考卷应用文)
假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Jason即将返回自己的国家。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾他对你的帮助；
3. 再次感谢，临别祝愿；
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已经给你写好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear Jason,
It's really hard to say goodbye to you! Words fail to convey my endless appreciation to you in this letter, as you have done so much for me.
Undoubtedly, it was your support and encouragement that lit me up when I was confronted with difficulties in English learning. Whenever you had time, you would help me practice my oral English. Besides, you also frankly shared your learning experience with me. Had it not been for your assistance, I couldn't have made such great progress.
Thanks again for your kind and generous help. Wish you a good journey and good luck in everything you do.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3.(2022年吉林江城中学高三期中)
假如你是李华，高二生活即将结束，请你给自己的父母写一封感谢信。
注意：1. 信中内容包括下面的所有内容；
2. 词数：100左右；
3. 信的开都已经给出，但不计入总词数。
内容： 1. 感谢父母多年来无微不至的关怀；
2. 自己近期学习一直十分刻苦，进步不小，这次考试也很顺利，希望父母放心；
3. 以后一定多帮父母做些家务，还要让父母品尝一下自己亲手做的菜。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Dear parents，
I ’m writing to show my thanks to you. The Grade two is over. Now I know clearly that you are expecting me eagerly.
I want to express my deep gratitude to you both for what you have done for me，especially since I went to the senior school . These days，I have been studying hard and have made greater progress. I did a good job in the final exam. I hope you can set your mind at rest. During the summer holiday, I plan to help you do some housework that I have hardly done before. Apart from it, I will learn to cook so as to prepare a delicious dinner for you both in person.
My dear parents，everything is Ok with me .
Best wishes.
Yours，
Lihua
4.(2022年北京·昌平一中高三考试)
假定你是李华，你被自己心仪的大学录取了。请你给你的外教Mrs. Wilson写封感谢信，感谢在校期间她对你的教导和帮助，内容包括：
1. 表达感谢；
2. 回顾老师对你的帮助；
3. 表达对老师的想念以及衷心祝愿。
注意：1. 词数不少于100；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear Mrs. Wilson,
I’m glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to college, which I have been dreaming of. I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
It was you who offer me a series of practical approaches to learning English. But for your guidance, I couldn’t have made such unbelievable progress in English. In addition, it’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to win the first prize in a recent English speech contest, which motivated me to devote myself to learning English and built up my confidence. What’s more, not only did you cheer me up in difficulties, but you also inspired my enthusiasm for learning English. Words fail to express my endless appreciation to you, as you have done so much for me.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant and safe journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
5.(宁波市2023学年第一学期期末九校联考高二英语)
假定你是李华，最近你因在学业上遇到了困难而十分沮丧，你的英国朋友Edward推荐你读一些科学家的励志故事。阅读之后，你收获颇丰，打算写一封信给他，内容包括：1.表示感谢；2.分享收获。
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Dear Edward,
I hope this letter finds you well! I’m writing to express my thanks for your recommendation of some scientists’ inspiring stories, from which I have benefited a lot.
Successful examples are all alike, while each and every failure varies in its own way. The spirit of successful scientists has been encouraging me to pursue my dreams and goals firmly. Edison did thousands of experiments to invent the lamp, his perseverance driving me to embrace challenges bravely. Despite difficulties and threats, Qian Xuesen, a renowned rocket expert, resolutely returned to China, devoting his whole life to the country, which gives me a deep insight into the meaning of life. Tu Youyou's rigorous scientific attitude and her teamwork spirit also helps me learn to be humble and open-minded.
Words fail to extend my gratitude for your support and encouragement. Many thanks again!
Best regards,
Li Hua
1.应用文写作三步法：
（1）审题确定本文为感谢信；
（2）因双方是朋友关系，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）根据写作要求，本文主体部分为感谢对方推荐的科学家励志故事，确定本文时态主基调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）I hope this letter finds you well运用无灵主语结构；
（2）express one's thanks for sth因某事向某人表达谢意；
（3）Successful examples are all alike, while each and every failure varies in its own way.仿写自托尔斯泰的名句Happy families are all alike；every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way.幸福的家庭千篇一律，不幸的家庭各有不同。
（4）..., his perseverance driving me to embrace challenges bravely运用独立主格结构；
（5）despite尽管，介词，后接名词；
（6）give sb a deep insight into让某人深刻理解；
（7）Words fail to extend my gratitude for ...言语难以表达我的感激之情。

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