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最生动的“无灵”主语句（一）
运用“无灵”主语句，能突出人物的心理情感，使续写语言更加生动形象、栩栩如生
■续写句式1（a burst/wave/surge/rush/ripple/sense/feeling of+）表情感状态的名词十有灵动词十sb.
表“某人感到…”或 “一阵/一种……向某入袭来”
用于该句式的有灵动词（短语)有:
seize/take hold of “抓住；攫住”；get the better of/defeat“击垮”；sweep/flood/rush over“袭来”；creep upon “慢慢产生” ；come over “影响” ; run through/pass through “掠过” ； swallow“吞噬；淹没”；choke “使哽咽” ； tear...into pieces “把……撕碎” ；fail“使失望；有负于”等。
① Suffering and despair defeated me, and I fell sobbing on the doorstep.
痛苦和绝望击垮了我，我倒在门阶上哭泣。《简 爱》
②Mary felt a wave of anger sweep over her.
玛丽感到一阵愤怒。《秘密花园》
③The polar bear came near. Horror slowly crept on us.
北极熊走近了。恐惧慢慢向我们袭来。（2020 浙江高考）
■续写句式2主语是表示身体部位/音容笑貌的名词十有灵动词
这类名词有：face,eye,heart,hand,finger,laughter,smile, tears, voice 等；
动词有：brighten/light up “照亮” ；well up“涌出” ；spread/flash across“浮现”；fill..with...“用……装满”；cloud over“显得阴沉（恐惧、愤怒、忧愁等）”等。
①My fingers shook with anger, so that I could not go on sewing.
我气得手指发抖，没法继续缝了。（《简 爱》）
②I was relieved when a bright, sweet voice interrupted us.
一个清亮甜美的声音打断了我们，我松了一口气。《《简·爱》）
练能生巧
根据汉语和提示用无灵主语或有灵动词填空，并背诵
1.她站在门口，绝望得说不出话来
She stood by the door, and （主语） choked her words.
2.他一看到熟悉的字迹，便热泪盈眶。
The moment he saw the familiar handwriting, （主语） （动词）in his eyes.
3.她慢慢走出屋子，内疚和担忧一阵阵涌上她的心头。
She slowly walked out of the room, and （主语） （动词）her in waves.
4.她焦虑不安，在比赛前突然失去了信心。
(主语）tore her into pieces, and before competition her (主语）suddenly （动词）her.
看到那头可怕的狼，我吓得喉咙紧，两腿发软。
At the sight of the frightening wolf， I felt so scared that （主语） （动词）and （主语）felt week.
B.根据A中各句进行一对一仿效写句，并背诵
1.我抱着礼物，兴奋得什么话也说不出来
2.当老人多年后回到家乡时，激动得热泪盈眶。
3.他开车驶过那座桥时，阵阵孤独与瘦苦涌上心头。
她压力很大。她想坚持，却鼓不起勇气。
看着那头发怒的北极熊，我们吓得心脏狂跳，两腿发软。
最生动的“无灵”主语句（二）
除表情感的其他名词、如行为、动作、自然现象或时间、地点的名词，也可用在该句式中。
■续写句式3表行为或动作的名词十有灵动词
常见的表示行为或动作的名词有：sight，thought,sense,idea,visit,arrival等。谓语：send, remind, make, leave,drive（驱使）等有灵动词。
The thought of going back to Thornfield for an evening with Mrs. Fairfax bored me.
一想到要和费尔法斯太太一起回桑菲尔德过夜，我就厌烦了。（典范英语10《简·爱》）
■续写句式4表自然现象等的名词+有灵动词
这类名词有:fog,snow, night, earthquake 等。谓语是：fall，blanket(覆盖），envelop（笼罩），come，strike,hit, threaten
等有灵动词。
A storm was gathering, but we stayed there until thunder and lightning crashed.
暴风雨即将来临，但我们一直待在那里，直到雷电交加。（典范英语10《简·爱》)
■续写句式5表时间和地点的名词+有灵动词
这类名词有地点名词，如 the town；时间名词，如the following year。谓语是：witness（见证），find，see等有灵动词。
①The following year saw the death of his mother.
第二年他的妈妈去世了。
②Shanghai witnessed many great historical events.
上海发生了许多重大历史事件。
练能生巧
根据汉语提示运用无灵主语和有灵动词补全以下各句并背诵
1.浓雾笼罩着整个大地。
blanketed the field.
2.那个同学的名字我一时想不起来了。
The name of the classmate me for the moment.
3.我突然想到一个可怕的想法。
A terrible thought suddenly me.
这可怜的家庭遇到许多麻烦事。
A lot of troubles the poor family.
沿着小路，我们来到一个古镇。
The path us an ancient town.
夜幕降临，风刮得更大了，由于天气寒冷，大家都躲进了室内。
, the wind grew stronger, and had driven everyone indoors.
根据I中各句进行一对一仿效写句，并背诵
大雪笼罩了这座大山。
2.那个城市的名字我一时想不起来了。
3.我突然想到一个可行的计划。
这可怜的老妇人去年遇到许多麻烦事。
沿着宽阔的马路，我们来到一个美丽的城市。
6.夜幕降临，雪下的更大了，狗也躲在了室内。
Ⅲ、微续写
一、根据汉语提示利用无灵主语句填写空白部分，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It took 8 hours to rebuild Kelly's injured face. During the long 8 hours, Rocky was waiting alone outside the operation room.① （他的小脸苍白，愁云满面). Fear,depression,anxiety，② （他心中涌上这些负面情绪）as he waited.③ （因为他痛苦绝望，tear...into pieces)，the five-year-old boy just couldn't stop crying his heart out. No sooner had the doctor told Rocky his mother was fine than he rushed into the room. What first entered his eyes was his mother's face covered with bandage. As tears streamed down his cheeks ④ (用 with结构升级加黑体部分），the boy greeted his mom with big hug and the warm words that said "I know you can! And I love you no matter how you change!" Kelly held the boy tightly in her arms, ⑤ （她的双眼涌上高兴和宽慰的泪水）.
二、根据汉语提示利用无灵主语句填写空白部分，使之构成一个完整的故事。
We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.① （想到我们可能在这样的黑暗中迷路，我们既担忧又害怕）.Much to our delight，② .
（远处的水声引起了我们的注意，把我们带到了河岸). Dad suggested that we should walk along the river.③ （沿着河我们会来到农舍） and nothing seemed better than that. Time appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and before long, ④ (农舍映入眼帘)，in front of which stood uncle Paul.What a thrilling but memorable experience it was!
答案：练能生巧
I.1. despair/hopelessness
2. tears; welled up
3. guilt and worry; flooded over/swept over/rushed over/came over
4. Anxiety; confidence; deserted/escaped/failed
5.my throat; tightened; my knees
II.1. I held the present, and excitement choked my words.
2.When the old man returned to his hometown after so many years, tears of excitement welled up in his eyes.
3. Loneliness and grief rushed/flooded/came/swept over him in waves when he drove by the bridge.
4. Stress tore her into pieces. She wanted to hold out, but her courage deserted/escaped/abandoned/failed her.
5.At the sight of the angry polar bear we felt so scared that our hearts were pounding/thumping and our knees felt weak.
Ⅲ. ① His little face was pale and clouded over
② all these negative feelings suddenly flooded/came/swept over him
③As suffering and helplessness tore him into pieces
④ With tears streaming down his cheeks
③tears of happiness and relief welled up in her eyes
二、练能生巧
I.1.The thick fog 2. escaped 3. struck/hit/occurred to 4. visited 5. led; to 6. Night fell; the freezing weather
Ⅱ.1. The heavy snow blanketed the big mountain.
2.The name of the city escaped me for the moment.
3.A practical plan suddenly struck/hit/occurred to me.
4.Many troubles visited the poor old lady last year.
5.A broad road led us to a beautiful city.
6.Night fell, the snow grew heavier and the heavy snow had also driven dogs indoors.
Ⅲ. ①The thought of getting lost in such darkness filled us with worry and fear
②the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and led us to the riverbank
③It would lead us to the farm house
④the farm house came into sight

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