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续写大市模拟女生打印度鼓
一、原文
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
①　“I’ll bet Anjali knows. Right, Anjali Why don’t you show us since you’re the star student,” Deepak taunted（奚落).
②　Anjali was confused. She wasn’t trying to show off. She was just playing tabla(印度塔不拉鼓), like everyone else. And why was Deepak being so mean lately Is it because tabla is a boy's thing She didn’t care that people thought it was a boys’ instrument. Anjali knew there was no such thing. She danced her fingers across the tabla to perform the composition in confusion. “Ugh!” Anjali heard someone groan, and she stopped playing.
③　“I guess I don’t know it that well after all,” Anjali said sheepishly to the teacher, Mr. Zakir. Her stomach was doing flip-flops. That wasn’t true. Not even a little. Mr. Zakir’s eyes narrowed. He looked like he was about to say something, but changed his mind. “The recital(演奏会) is next week, everyone. Keep practicing. I will be announcing who will get to perform onstage with me at my next concert!” Anjali had dreamed of a moment like that. She wanted to win the opportunity, but she needed to sort things straight with Deepak first.
④　As the class was dismissed, Anjali hurried over to Deepak. When she finally made eye contact with him, he purposely looked away and walked off. The next day at school, Anjali overheard Deepak whispering to Mary. “People are only interested because she’s the only girl in tabla class and they want her to feel special. She’s not that good—” Anjali was furious. She excused herself and went to the bathroom. She took some deep breaths but couldn't relax. Her heart was pounding:
⑤　“It’s not my fault that people make a big deal about a girl playing tabla. I make mistakes too，but I work really hard. Maybe he should too. He should be less mean and practice more.”
⑥　“If I play in this concert, no one will talk to me again. He will turn everyone against me.”
⑦　“I don’t want to see a tabla or hear a tabla or play a tabla EVER AGAIN!!” Anjali yelled at the mirror. It was quiet for a moment. She believed it was one of her darkest days ever.
Para1: Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall.
Para2: After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali.
二、理解难点梳理
1. “I’ll bet Anjali knows. Right, Anjali Why don’t you show us since you’re the star student,” Deepak taunted.
- 这句话中，Deepak用挑衅的语气对Anjali说，他打赌Anjali知道答案，并要求她在大家面前展示。这里的“taunted”（奚落）表明Deepak并不是真心赞赏Anjali，而是在讽刺她。Anjali感到困惑，因为她并没有想要炫耀，只是在像其他人一样演奏塔布拉鼓。
2. And why was Deepak being so mean lately Is it because tabla is a boy's thing
- 这里Anjali在思考Deepak最近为什么对她这么不友好。她猜测是否因为塔布拉鼓被认为是男孩子的乐器。Anjali不在乎别人的看法，她认为没有所谓的“男孩子的乐器”或“女孩子的乐器”。探讨了性别偏见的主题
3. “I guess I don’t know it that well after all,” Anjali said sheepishly to the teacher, Mr. Zakir. That wasn’t true. Not even a little.
- 在这句话中，Anjali因为紧张和压力，谦虚地（或者说有些自卑地）对老师说她并没有掌握得很好。但实际上，她知道自己是有能力的，这从句子中的“Not even a little”可以看出来，表明她并不认同自己的话。
4. “If I play in this concert, no one will talk to me again. He will turn everyone against me.”
- 这里Anjali担心如果她在音乐会上演奏，Deepak会因为嫉妒或其他原因而让其他同学排斥她。这反映了她对Deepak可能的负面影响的担忧。
二、原创下水文
Para1: Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall.
①　其中一件特别引起了她的注意——一位女音乐家，在聚光灯下容光焕发，她的表情充满了深深的专注和不可否认的喜悦。
One in particular caught her attention—a female musician, radiant under the spotlight, her expression one of deep concentration and undeniable joy.
②　这张照片有力地提醒了安贾利，她开始打手鼓的初衷:不是为了获得认可，而是为了对音乐本身的热爱。或 这张照片触动了她的心弦，重新点燃了她的激情和决心。
The image was a powerful reminder to Anjali of why she started playing the tabla in the first place: not for recognition, but for the passion for music itself. 或 The image tugged at her heartstrings, reigniting her passion and determination.
③　在接下来的几天里，安贾莉全身心地投入到手鼓上，她的手指舞动着，焕发出新的活力和决心。
Over the following days, Anjali poured her heart and soul into honing her skills on the tabla, her fingers dancing with renewed vigor and determination.
④　她的奉献并没有被忽视。扎基尔宣布，安贾利将在即将到来的独奏会上与他一起登台。
Her dedication did not go unnoticed. Mr. Zakir announced that Anjali would join him on stage for the upcoming recital.
⑤　当演出的那天到来时，安贾利演奏得如此熟练，观众们都被迷住了。演出取得了巨大的成功，安贾莉得到的掌声不仅回荡在大厅里，而且回荡在她的内心深处，肯定了她的价值。
When the day of the performance arrived, Anjali played with such proficiency that the audience was captivated. The performance was a resounding success, with Anjali receiving applause that echoed not just in the hall but deep within her, affirming her worth.
Para2: After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali.
⑥　他称赞她出色的表演时，脸上带着钦佩和悔恨的表情。你在场上表现太棒了，安加利。我不该因为你是女孩就怀疑你。他坦白了，声音里带着良心。
His face bore a mix of admiration and remorse as he complimented her on her outstanding performance. "You were incredible out there, Anjali. It was wrong of me to doubt you just because you're a girl." he confessed, his voice tinged with conscience.
⑦　安加利被他出人意料的道歉吓了一跳。几个星期以来积累起来的紧张气氛似乎在那一刻烟消云散了。
Anjali was taken aback by his unexpected apology. The tension that had built up over the weeks seemed to dissolve in that moment.
⑧　“谢谢你，迪帕克，”安贾利微笑着回答。
"Thank you, Deepak," Anjali, beaming with smile, responded.
⑨　这种新发现的相互尊重不仅是他们个人关系的进步，也是打破了笼罩在手鼓课堂气氛中的性别偏见的进步，为每个人创造了一个更加包容和支持的环境。
This newfound mutual respect was a step forward not just for their personal relationship, but also for breaking down the gender biases that had clouded the atmosphere in their tabla class, fostering a more inclusive and supportive environment for everyone.
读后续写范文：
Para1: Stepping out of the bathroom, Anjali saw some inspiring posters on the wall.
One in particular caught her attention—a female musician, radiant under the spotlight, her expression one of deep concentration and undeniable joy. The image was a powerful reminder to Anjali of why she started playing the tabla in the first place: not for recognition, but for the passion for music itself. 或The image tugged at her heartstrings, reigniting her passion and determination. Over the following days, Anjali poured her heart and soul into honing her skills on the tabla, her fingers dancing with renewed vigor and determination. Her dedication did not go unnoticed. Mr. Zakir announced that Anjali would join him on stage for the upcoming recital. When the day of the performance arrived, Anjali played with such proficiency that the audience was captivated. The performance was a resounding success, with Anjali receiving applause that echoed not just in the hall but deep within her, affirming her worth.
Para2: After the recital, Deepak walked up to Anjali.
His face bore a mix of admiration and remorse as he complimented her on her outstanding performance. "You were incredible out there, Anjali. It was wrong of me to doubt you just because you're a girl." he confessed, his voice tinged with conscience. Anjali was taken aback by his unexpected apology. The tension that had built up over the weeks seemed to dissolve in that moment. "Thank you, Deepak," Anjali, beaming with smile, responded. This newfound mutual respect was a step forward not just for their personal relationship, but also for breaking down the gender biases that had clouded the atmosphere in their tabla class, fostering a more inclusive and supportive environment for everyone.
续写亮点：
The image was a powerful reminder to Anjali of why she started playing the tabla in the first place: not for recognition, but for the passion for music itself. 或 The image tugged at her heartstrings, reigniting her passion and determination.
运用了not..but...结构。
Over the following days, Anjali poured her heart and soul into honing her skills on the tabla, her fingers dancing with renewed vigor and determination.
运用了独立主格结构。
Mr. Zakir announced that Anjali would join him on stage for the upcoming recital.
When the day of the performance arrived, Anjali played with such proficiency that the audience was captivated.
运用了主从复合句。
The performance was a resounding success, with Anjali receiving applause that echoed not just in the hall but deep within her, affirming her worth.
运用了with复合结构。
His face bore a mix of admiration and remorse as he complimented her on her outstanding performance.
运用了主从复合句。
Anjali was taken aback by his unexpected apology.
运用了被动语态。
The tension that had built up over the weeks seemed to dissolve in that moment.
运用了定语从句。
"Thank you, Deepak," Anjali, beaming with smile, responded.
运用了现在分词短语做状语。
This newfound mutual respect was a step forward not just for their personal relationship, but also for breaking down the gender biases that had clouded the atmosphere in their tabla class, fostering a more inclusive and supportive environment for everyone.
运用了现在分词短语做状语。

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