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《备战2024年高考英语二轮真题零失误规范训练》（北京专用）
专题18 书面表达3年真题+最新模拟15篇 （技能+真题+模拟）
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目 录
技能专区 1
真题专区 3
模拟专区 4
技能专区：冲刺备考名师提醒，洞悉高考命题规律，提供高效提分干货
英语书面表达高分秘诀
根据最新《考纲》、书面表达的评分标准、及高考后的阅卷情况，可以看出书面表达高分卷应具备以下特点：
一、外在美：
第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。
二、结构美：
有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰，要点全面。
三、词汇美：
生动具体词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。
四、句式美：
运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。
五、衔接美：
使用恰当的连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。
书面表达增加细节五大技巧
一、增加交际功能性语言
1. 收信人和写信人是朋友关系
在书信的开头可以添加问候语How are you doing these days 或根据题目增加合适的寒暄语。
2. 收信人是长辈或地位高一点的人，或陌生人。在信件开头可以补充自我介绍，以表尊重。
结合题目中设置的情景，增加个人身份介绍，合情合理，符合交际需要。
3. 回应来信所提问题，自然引出写作目的
有些书面表达题，要求考生根据题目要求，给对方回信。先提及对方的来信内容，说明回信背景。
4. 根据信件写作目的，补充适当的开头和结尾
不同类型的信件一般会有特定的格式，我们要用心去整理和归纳。如建议信：
写作目的——I am writing to give you some practical/constructive suggestions.
信件结尾——I do hope that you’ll find these suggestions useful/ beneficial/helpful.
二、扩充写作要点的具体内容
我们要根据提示要求，通过列举等添加与要点相关的具体内容。如:
三、添加句子成分，拓展句子，充实文章
在要点句基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分，如定语，状语（如原因，目的，结果，让步，方式）等，使语言逻辑清晰，便于理解。
1. 巧用修饰语
恰当地使用形容词或定语从句使句子更加形象生动。
2. 明确交待原因
交待原因是为了使句意更完整，避免给读者留下疑问。交待原因通常可以借助介词短语或原因状语从句，如owing to, due to, because of, thanks to, as a result of, because, as, since, now that等词语引导。
3. 清晰阐明目的
在句子中使用阐明目的的词语，如: so as (not) to, in order to, so that, in order that, for the fear that, for the purpose of等，使句子条理清晰，逻辑性强。
4. 恰当补充条件，增强表达效果
可以通过if, as long as, only if, unless, provided that, supposing that 等引导条件状语。如：
5. 合理延伸结果
可用so that, so…that, such…that或therefore, hence等来增加结果状语句。
6. 添加与要点相关的让步状语等内容
可通过although, though, while, as, even though, even if, whoever, whatever, whenever, wherever, however, no matter+疑问词等添加与写作内容相关的信息。
四、添加过渡词，突出篇章连贯性
根据行文或段落需要，在句子与句子或段落与段落之间适当增加过渡词语或过渡句，以使文章浑然一体，
五、补充个人感受和评价
作者如果能在行文中流露真实情感，则可以有效缩短与读者之间的距离，使读者产生共鸣。
真题专区：练真题，明方向；练技巧，提能力；练速度，提分数！
1．（2023·北京·统考高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
2．（2022·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；
2．交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2021·北京·高考真题）假设你是某中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Tom原定本周六一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
模拟专区：做好题才有好成绩！练速度，补漏洞，强信心！
1．（2024·北京海淀·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。六月十四日是世界献血者日(World Blood Donor Day)，你在京学习的英国好友Jim决定当天去献血，并询问你的意愿。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.你的答复及理由；
2.提醒注意事项。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
9 April 2024
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2024·北京朝阳·一模）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。在第16个全国防灾减灾日到来之际，你们学校开展了一次以“安全进校园”为主题的教育活动。你校国际部交换生 Jim 对此很感兴趣，发来邮件询问。请你
用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动安排。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：全国防灾减灾日—National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2024·北京房山·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim计划明年来北京上大学学习中文，特发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 推荐他上哪所大学；
3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：1. 词数100 词左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2024·北京东城·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年世界地球日的主题为“Planet vs. Plastics”，你校将举办相关活动。你的笔友Jim发来邮件，询问该活动的情况。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 活动内容；
2. 你的任务。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2024·北京石景山·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim在汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名，他发来邮件感谢你提供的帮助。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺；
2.回顾他的困难；
3.赞扬他的努力。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2024·北京·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Chris想了解不同颜色在中国文化中的涵义。请你用英文给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.颜色及其涵义；
2.生活中的实例。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7．（2024·北京西城·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你和你校交换生Jim准备联合参加学校组织的校园文创设计大赛(Campus Cultural and Creative Design Competition), 请给Jim发邮件，内容包括：
1. 分享你的创意;
2. 询问Jim的建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2024·北京·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。国际月季节(International Rose Festival) 将于下周在
北京举办。你得知你校外教Jim对花卉十分感兴趣，想邀请他一同参加。请你用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 介绍国际月季节基本信息；
2. 介绍其亮点。
注意: 1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9．（2024·北京延庆·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周将要举办“科技嘉年华”活动。请你给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动安排。
科技嘉年华 Science and Technology Carnival
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
LiHua
10．（2023·北京·模拟预测）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校组织了主题为“爱阅读，爱思考”的系列读书活动。请你用英文给英国笔友Jim 写一封邮件，向他介绍该活动。内容包括：
1. 活动目的及形式;
2. 个人收获及后续计划。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
11．（2023·北京·三模）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。上周末你班到光明农场参加了公益劳动。你的英国朋友Jim想了解相关情况，请你给他写封邮件分享此活动，内容包括：
1. 活动目的和活动内容;
2. 活动反响和收获。
注意：词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：公益劳动voluntary labour
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
12．（2023·北京海淀·三模）假设你是红星中学学生会“环保部”部长李华。你的英国好友Jim的学校正在征集主题为“Beat Plastic Pollution”的环境保护活动方案，他一时没有想法，写信请你给提供建议。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 简要介绍你的设计方案及理由；
2. 询问意见并表达祝愿。
注意：1．词数 100 左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
13．（2023·北京西城·二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你想做一个问卷调查，了解中英学生在某方面的差异。你打算请英国好友 Jim 答卷，并且请他将问卷转发给他的同学和朋友。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.问卷的目的；
2.问卷的内容。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：调查问卷 questionnaire
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
14．（2023·北京房山·二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校交换生Jim打算今年暑假回英国，想送给他的妈妈一件具有中国特色的礼物，特发来邮件就准备什么礼物向你咨询。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1. 建议的礼物；
2. 说明选择该礼物的原因；
3. 表达祝福。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
15．（2023·北京昌平·二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。作为你校英语戏剧社的负责人，在毕业前的活动上你将做离任发言。请你用英文写一份发言稿，内容包括：
1. 回顾开展的主要活动与收获；
2. 表达感谢及祝愿。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
16．（2023·北京东城·二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim来信提及他参加了学校举办的“从地标建筑读懂一座城市”的世界城市展示活动。请你用英文给他回一封电子邮件，谈谈你的想法。内容包括：
1.你推荐的城市及其地标建筑；
2.推荐理由。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：地标landmark
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
17．（2023·北京海淀·二模）假设你是红星中学高三“传统文化社”社长李华。你校国际部留学生Jim邀请你参加他们组织的“China Day”活动并做展示。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 接受邀请并表示感谢；
2. 你展示的内容及理由。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
18．（2023·北京朝阳·二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你最近读完了外教Jim推荐的一本英文书，请你用英文给Jim写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表达感谢并分享读书收获;
2.交流后续英文书阅读计划。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
19．（2023·北京门头沟·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你校将组织参观中国载人航天工程成就展，你班的英国交换生Jim对中国航天兴趣浓厚，请你写一封邮件邀请他参加，内容包括：
1．活动目的及时间安排；
2．活动内容；
3．询问对方意向。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：中国载人航天工程成就展 exhibition of achievements in China’s manned spaceflight program
Dear Jim.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
20．（2023·北京海淀·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你与交换生Jim要共同完成一篇项目学习的论文，他建议用AI完成初稿。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 委婉拒绝并说明理由；
2. 你的建议及计划。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词语：项目学习—project-based learning
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua《备战2024年高考英语二轮真题零失误规范训练》（北京专用）
专题18 书面表达3年真题+最新模拟15篇 （技能+真题+模拟）
解析版
目 录
技能专区 1
真题专区 2
模拟专区 7
技能专区：冲刺备考名师提醒，洞悉高考命题规律，提供高效提分干货
英语书面表达高分秘诀
根据最新《考纲》、书面表达的评分标准、及高考后的阅卷情况，可以看出书面表达高分卷应具备以下特点：
一、外在美：
第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。
二、结构美：
有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰，要点全面。
三、词汇美：
生动具体词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。
四、句式美：
运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。
五、衔接美：
使用恰当的连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。
书面表达增加细节五大技巧
一、增加交际功能性语言
1. 收信人和写信人是朋友关系
在书信的开头可以添加问候语How are you doing these days 或根据题目增加合适的寒暄语。
2. 收信人是长辈或地位高一点的人，或陌生人。在信件开头可以补充自我介绍，以表尊重。
结合题目中设置的情景，增加个人身份介绍，合情合理，符合交际需要。
3. 回应来信所提问题，自然引出写作目的
有些书面表达题，要求考生根据题目要求，给对方回信。先提及对方的来信内容，说明回信背景。
4. 根据信件写作目的，补充适当的开头和结尾
不同类型的信件一般会有特定的格式，我们要用心去整理和归纳。如建议信：
写作目的——I am writing to give you some practical/constructive suggestions.
信件结尾——I do hope that you’ll find these suggestions useful/ beneficial/helpful.
二、扩充写作要点的具体内容
我们要根据提示要求，通过列举等添加与要点相关的具体内容。如:
三、添加句子成分，拓展句子，充实文章
在要点句基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分，如定语，状语（如原因，目的，结果，让步，方式）等，使语言逻辑清晰，便于理解。
1. 巧用修饰语
恰当地使用形容词或定语从句使句子更加形象生动。
2. 明确交待原因
交待原因是为了使句意更完整，避免给读者留下疑问。交待原因通常可以借助介词短语或原因状语从句，如owing to, due to, because of, thanks to, as a result of, because, as, since, now that等词语引导。
3. 清晰阐明目的
在句子中使用阐明目的的词语，如: so as (not) to, in order to, so that, in order that, for the fear that, for the purpose of等，使句子条理清晰，逻辑性强。
4. 恰当补充条件，增强表达效果
可以通过if, as long as, only if, unless, provided that, supposing that 等引导条件状语。如：
5. 合理延伸结果
可用so that, so…that, such…that或therefore, hence等来增加结果状语句。
6. 添加与要点相关的让步状语等内容
可通过although, though, while, as, even though, even if, whoever, whatever, whenever, wherever, however, no matter+疑问词等添加与写作内容相关的信息。
四、添加过渡词，突出篇章连贯性
根据行文或段落需要，在句子与句子或段落与段落之间适当增加过渡词语或过渡句，以使文章浑然一体，
五、补充个人感受和评价
作者如果能在行文中流露真实情感，则可以有效缩短与读者之间的距离，使读者产生共鸣。
真题专区：练真题，明方向；练技巧，提能力；练速度，提分数！
1．（2023·北京·统考高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
1．Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→tip
提供：offer→provide
开展：carry out→conduct
主题：theme→topic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2．（2022·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；
2．交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．Dear Jim,
How’s everything
I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay
The talk will last about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which platform you’ll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份电子邮件，邀请英国好友Jim为班级做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近好吗：How’s everything → How’s it going
提供、给予：give → offer / provide
不擅长：be weak in → be bad at / be poor in
建议：suggestion → advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing.
拓展句：I’m writing to ask if it is convenient for you to offer us an online talk on English writing.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay (运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语)
【高分句型2】It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your
talk.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
3．（2021·北京·高考真题）假设你是某中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Tom原定本周六一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
3．Dear Jim,
I'm Li Hua, your good friend who is the student of Senior 3 in Hongxing high school. We have made an appointment to go out this weekend, but I'm so sorry that l can't keep my promise. The reason is that my grandma was sent to the hospital because she had a sudden heart stoke and have to get an operation immediately. My parents
and l must go to visit her and keep her company. l hope you can understand my concerns about my grandma and we can go out next weekend during which I will be free.Also you can tell me what time suits you best and we can go out at that time. I am truly sorry again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是某中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Tom原定本周六一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表达歉意并说明原因；2.提出建议并给出理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
打算做某事：plan to do→ make an appointment to do
违背诺言：break one’s promise→ can't keep one’s promise
照顾：take care of sb.→look after
有空：be available → be free
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：People can easily communicate with each other in distant places.
拓展句：Although people are separated by the very far distance, they can easily communicate with each other.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The reason is that my grandma was sent to the hospital because she had a sudden heart stoke and have to get an operation immediately. (运用了that引导的表语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] l hope you can understand my concerns about my grandma and we can go out next weekend during which I will be free. (运用了介词+which引导的限制性定语从句)
模拟专区：做好题才有好成绩！练速度，补漏洞，强信心！
1．（2024·北京海淀·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。六月十四日是世界献血者日(World Blood Donor Day)，你在京学习的英国好友Jim决定当天去献血，并询问你的意愿。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.你的答复及理由；
2.提醒注意事项。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
9 April 2024
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Thank you for considering me for such an important cause. I truly appreciate your invitation to join you in donating blood on World Blood Donor Day.
However, due to personal reasons, I won’t be able to participate this time. Nonetheless, I fully support your decision to donate blood, as it can save lives.
Please remember to eat a healthy meal before donating, stay hydrated, and get plenty of rest afterward. Also, make sure to follow all instructions given by the medical staff during the donation process.
Wishing you a successful and rewarding experience!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本书面表达是一篇应用文写作，在京学习的英国好友Jim决定在世界献血者日当天去献血，想要询问你的意愿，按要求考生用英文写一封电子邮件回复Jim。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important→significant/crucial
因为：due to→owing to/because of
完全地：fully→completely/totally
拯救：save→rescue
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Please remember to eat a healthy meal before donating, stay hydrated, and get plenty of rest afterward.
拓展句：Before you prepare for the donation, remember to eat a healthy meal, stay hydrated, and get plenty of rest afterward.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Nonetheless, I fully support your decision to donate blood, as it can save lives. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Also, make sure to follow all instructions given by the medical staff during the donation process. (运用了过去分词作后置定语)
2．（2024·北京朝阳·一模）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。在第16个全国防灾减灾日到来之际，你们学校开展了一次以“安全进校园”为主题的教育活动。你校国际部交换生 Jim 对此很感兴趣，发来邮件询问。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动安排。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：全国防灾减灾日—National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How is everything going Knowing that you are interested in the “Safety Education into Campus” event, I am glad to share it with you.
In response to the 16th National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day, our school organized activities to raise our awareness of self-protection in the face of emergencies. First, an expert from a professional rescue team delivered a lecture on how to react when disasters strike us, such as fires and earthquakes, equipping us with basics of evacuation. Besides, we made brochures concerning the practical tips on dealing with disasters and handed them out on campus to further spread the safety knowledge among students.
I have prepared an English brochure for you. Hope it will help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给国际部交换生Jim写邮件，说明“安全进校园”为主题的教育活动的目的和安排。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感兴趣的：be interested in→show interest in
高兴的：glad→delighted
此外：besides→furthermore
处理：deal with→cope with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In response to the 16th National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day, our school organized activities to raise our awareness of self-protection in the face of emergencies.
拓展句：In response to the 16th National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day, our school organized activities that aim to raise our awareness of self-protection in the face of emergencies.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are interested in the “Safety Education into Campus” event, I am glad to share it with you.（运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】First, an expert from a professional rescue team delivered a lecture on how to react when disasters strike us, such as fires and earthquakes, equipping us with basics of evacuation.（运用了疑问词+to do作宾语和when引导的状语从句，现在分词作状语）
3．（2024·北京房山·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim计划明年来北京上大学学习中文，特发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 推荐他上哪所大学；
3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：1. 词数100 词左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文：
Dear Jim,
You couldn’t imagine how happy I am when learning that you’ll come to Beijing to attend college. Welcome to Beijing!
I strongly recommend Peking University to you. It offers the best courses of Chinese history and philosophy. Studying with leading experts and outstanding schoolmates, you will get a deeper insight into traditional Chinese culture.
As for preparation, I suggest you surf the Internet for some relevant information about this university, such as its history and development, its academic performance and various departments. Moreover, you had better learn some Chinese in order to communicate with others better on campus.
Hope my suggestions will be of some help. If you have any question, just feel free to contact me. I couldn’t wait to see you next semester in Beijing!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写封邮件，欢迎他来北京上大学学习中文，推荐他上哪所大学，建议他做哪些准备工作。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→delighted
提供：offer→provide
专家：expert→specialist
另外：moreover→furthermore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Studying with leading experts and outstanding schoolmates, you will get a deeper insight into traditional Chinese culture.
拓展句：If you study with leading experts and outstanding schoolmates, you will get a deeper insight into traditional Chinese culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] You couldn’t imagine how happy I am when learning that you’ll come to Beijing to attend college. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句，省略句和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If you have any question, just feel free to contact me. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
4．（2024·北京东城·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年世界地球日的主题为“Planet vs. Plastics”，你校将举办相关活动。你的笔友Jim发来邮件，询问该活动的情况。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 活动内容；
2. 你的任务。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad to share with you the upcoming event at our school.
The theme of this year’s World Earth Day is “Planet vs. Plastics”, focusing on the danger of plastic pollution and our school has organized a series of activities. These include a lecture on plastic pollution, a workshop on how to reuse plastics, and a clean-up campaign. I have been assigned to help organize the clean-up campaign. We will gather in the schoolyard and head to our designated area and work together to pick up any plastic waste that we find. I’m really looking forward to this opportunity.
I hope you can also participate in similar activities in your area to help protect our planet.
Best regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，就你的笔友Jim发来邮件，询问你校在今年世界地球日将举办以“Planet vs. Plastics”为主题的活动一事，用英文给他回复，介绍此项活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴：be glad to→ be thrilled to
集中精力于：focus on → concentrate on
一系列的：a series of→ a sequence of
帮助：help→ assist
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：I’m glad to share with you the upcoming event at our school.
拓展句：It gives me immense pleasure to inform you about the forthcoming event scheduled at our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The theme of this year’s World Earth Day is “Planet vs. Plastics”, focusing on the danger of plastic pollution and our school has organized a series of activities.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
【高分句型2】We will gather in the schoolyard and head to our designated area and work together to pick up any plastic waste that we find（运用了关系代词that引导的定语从句）
5．（2024·北京石景山·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim在汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名，他发来邮件感谢你提供的帮助。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺；
2.回顾他的困难；
3.赞扬他的努力。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m writing to express my congratulations on your winning the first place in the Chinese speech contest. It’s your hard work that means more than anything.
I remember vividly how you devoted yourself to making this achievement. During the preparation of the contest, you polished your draft many times and better your pronunciation with great patience. I’m glad you mastered the public speaking skills and they turned out really effective. More importantly, you never felt hesitant and unsure about yourself. You deserve such an achievement for your confidence and perseverance.
Wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友 Jim回复一封邮件，对他在汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名表示祝贺，回顾他的困难并赞扬他的努力。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey
全力以赴做某事：devote oneself to doing→bend oneself to doing
改进：better→improve
坚持：perseverance→tenacity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You deserve such an achievement for your confidence and perseverance.
拓展句：There is no doubt that you deserve such an achievement for your confidence and perseverance.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s your hard work that means more than anything. (运用了强调句)
[高分句型2] I remember vividly how you devoted yourself to making this achievement. (运用了how引导的宾语从句)
6．（2024·北京·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Chris想了解不同颜色在中国文化中的涵义。请你用英文给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.颜色及其涵义；
2.生活中的实例。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I hope you are doing great! Knowing that you are interested in the implication of colors in Chinese culture, I am writing to share my ideas with you.
In our culture, many colors hold deep symbolic meanings. For instance, red, the color of celebration and joy, symbolizes good luck and prosperity. Black, on the other hand, embodies a sense of depth and mystery, which often lends a mysterious touch.
These symbolic meanings are reflected in various aspects in our daily lives. Take black for example. In art forms like ink painting and calligraphy, black ink is used skillfully to convey a sense of harmony and balance. In traditional martial arts, black is also a sign of inner exploration.
How do colors play a role in your culture Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Chris回一封邮件，告诉他不同颜色在中国文化中的涵义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→take an interest in
例如：for instance→for example
各种各样的：various→all kinds of
表达：convey→express
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：For instance, red, the color of celebration and joy, symbolizes good luck and prosperity.
拓展句：For instance, red, which is the color of celebration and joy, symbolizes good luck and prosperity.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Knowing that you are interested in the implication of colors in Chinese culture, I am writing to share my ideas with you.（运用了现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
Black, on the other hand, embodies a sense of depth and mystery, which often lends a mysterious touch.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
7．（2024·北京西城·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你和你校交换生Jim准备联合参加学校组织的校园文创设计大赛(Campus Cultural and Creative Design Competition), 请给Jim发邮件，内容包括：
1. 分享你的创意;
2. 询问Jim的建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How is it going I’ve just had a “light bulb” moment for our entry in the upcoming Campus Cultural and Creative Design Competition, and I can’t wait to share it with you to get your thoughts.
How about creating a series of bookmarks On one side, we’ll have our school motto, and on the flip side, breathtaking illustrations showcase our campus throughout the four seasons. Each bookmark will capture a special moment or scene that perfectly reflects the essence of that particular season. I really think this idea not only nails the competition theme but also offers a practical yet visually stunning product that truly represents the spirit of our school.
What do you think Would love to hear your thoughts and any suggestions you might have!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Jim发邮件，介绍你参加校园文创设计大赛的创意。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：competition→contest
……怎样：how about→what about
建议：suggestion→advice
本质：essence→nature
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Would love to hear your thoughts and any suggestions you might have!
拓展句：If you have any better thoughts or suggestions, don’t hesitate to contact me.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Each bookmark will capture a special moment or scene that perfectly reflects the essence of that particular season. (运用了that引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] I really think this idea not only nails the competition theme but also offers a practical yet visually stunning product that truly represents the spirit of our school. (运用了not only…but also…句型)
8．（2024·北京·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。国际月季节(International Rose Festival) 将于下周在北京举办。你得知你校外教Jim对花卉十分感兴趣，想邀请他一同参加。请你用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 介绍国际月季节基本信息；
2. 介绍其亮点。
注意: 1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Learning you’re interested in flowers, I’m writing to invite you to attend International Rose Festival. It will be held in the Rose Valley next Friday.
This event is a celebration of beauty and culture, aiming to attract people from all over the world to appreciate beautiful roses. It starts with a grand parade and is followed by activities including rose exhibitions, cultural performances and rose cultivation workshops.
As a local student, I’m excited about the International Rose Festival. It not only offers chances to enjoy the pleasure of gardening, but also enlarges your knowledge on various kinds of roses.
I’m sure you will enjoy the festival. Would you like to come with me
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请对花卉十分感兴趣的外教Jim参加下周在北京举办的国际月季节。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in
和：and→as well as
机会：chance→opportunity
各种各样的：various→a variety of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This event is a celebration of beauty and culture, aiming to attract people from all over the world to appreciate beautiful roses.
拓展句：This event is a celebration of beauty and culture, which aims to attract people from all over the world to appreciate beautiful roses.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning you’re interested in flowers, I’m writing to invite you to attend International Rose Festival. (运用了现在分词作状语和省略that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m sure you will enjoy the festival. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
9．（2024·北京延庆·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周将要举办“科技嘉年华”活动。请你给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动安排。
科技嘉年华 Science and Technology Carnival
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
LiHua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m writing to invite you to the Science and Technology Carnival to be held next week in our school.
The aim of this activity is to enrich our school life and arouse our interest in science and technology. During the carnival, there will be a variety of activities, including exhibitions of the latest scientific and technological achievements, lectures by famous scientists, and hands-on experiments. In addition, there will be a science competition, where you can show your creativity and knowledge.
I believe this event will be a great opportunity for you to learn more about science and technology and interact with other students. I look forward to seeing you at the carnival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加学校即将举办的“科技嘉年华”活动。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
目的：aim→ purpose
各种各样的：a variety of → various/all kinds of
著名的：famous → well-known
此外：in addition→ what’s more
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to invite you to the Science and Technology Carnival to be held next week in our school.
拓展句：I’m writing to invite you to the Science and Technology Carnival which will be held next week in our school.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】In addition, there will be a science competition, where you can show your creativity and knowledge. (运用了where引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe this event will be a great opportunity for you to learn more about science and technology and interact with other students. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
10．（2023·北京·模拟预测）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校组织了主题为“爱阅读，爱思考”的系列读书活动。请你用英文给英国笔友Jim 写一封邮件，向他介绍该活动。内容包括：
1. 活动目的及形式;
2. 个人收获及后续计划。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How are you doing I am writing to tell you about some details about the activity “Love reading, Love thinking” organized by my school, Red Star High School.
The purpose of this activity is to encourage students to develop the habit of reading and to enhance our critical thinking abilities. The activities include book sharing sessions, reading contests, book reviews, and discussions on various topics related to literature.
Personally, I find this activity very meaningful and inspiring. I have found that it has broadened my horizons, enriched my knowledge and stimulated my interest in reading. After the activity, I plan to continue to read
widely and to share my insights with my classmates.
I would love to hear your thoughts on this. Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jim介绍学校组织的主题为“爱阅读，爱思考”的系列读书活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
活动：activity→event
鼓励：encourage→inspire
提高：enhance→improve
各种各样的：various→a variety of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to tell you about some details about the activity “Love reading, Love thinking” organized by my school, Red Star High School.
拓展句：I am writing to tell you about some details about the activity “Love reading, Love thinking” which was organized by my school, Red Star High School.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to tell you about some details about the activity “Love reading, Love thinking” organized by my school, Red Star High School.(运用了过去分词作后置定语）
【高分句型2】I have found that it has broadened my horizons, enriched my knowledge and stimulated my interest in reading.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
11．（2023·北京·三模）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。上周末你班到光明农场参加了公益劳动。你的英国朋友Jim想了解相关情况，请你给他写封邮件分享此活动，内容包括：
1. 活动目的和活动内容;
2. 活动反响和收获。
注意：词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：公益劳动voluntary labour
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Knowing that you’re interested in students’ voluntary labour, I’m writing to share something about it.
Aimed to promote the all-round development of the students, a labor practice took place on Guangming Farm last month. Each student took an active part in the activities, teaming up to have all the tasks finished efficiently. Throughout the three days, we gained a lot.
The practice left a deep impression on us. Not only did it enrich our school life, but it further developed our love for work.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友Jim回复邮件，介绍上周末你班到光明农场参加的公益劳动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
感兴趣：take an interest in→be interested in
改善：improve→promote
参加：participate in→take an active part in
有效地：effectively→efficiently
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Aimed to promote the all-round development of the students, a labor practice took place on Guangming Farm last month.
拓展句：A labor practice took place on Guangming Farm last month, whose aim is to promote the all-round development of the students.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you’re interested in students’ voluntary labour, I’m writing to share something about it. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Not only did it enrich our school life, but it further developed our love for work. (运用了部分倒装)
12．（2023·北京海淀·三模）假设你是红星中学学生会“环保部”部长李华。你的英国好友Jim的学校正在征集主题为“Beat Plastic Pollution”的环境保护活动方案，他一时没有想法，写信请你给提供建议。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 简要介绍你的设计方案及理由；
2. 询问意见并表达祝愿。
注意：1．词数 100 左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Extremely thrilled to know that you are calling for activity plans themed “Beat Plastic Pollution”, I feel it my privilege to offer mine, hoping to give you a hand.
First, it is a wise choice to propagandize the using of cloth bags instead of plastic bags in school and call for students to spread the behavior to the people around them. Second, make a rule that students should be prevented from using plastic bags, encouraging the use of degradable plastic bags. Finally, collecting and recycling plastic bags are easy to be conducted in school.
I sincerely hope my plan is of benefit to you.
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。假设你是红星中学学生会“环保部”部长李华。你的英国好友Jim的学校正在征集主题为“Beat Plastic Pollution”的环境保护活动方案，他一时没有想法，写信请你给提供建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
激动的：thrilled→excited/full of excitement
提供：offer→provide/supply
规章制度：rule→regulation
有益的：be of benefit→be beneficial
2.句式拓展：
原句：I sincerely hope my plan is of benefit to you
拓展句：I sincerely hope my plan that I mentioned above is of benefit to you
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Second, make a rule that students should be prevented from using plastic bags, encouraging the use of degradable plastic bags.(运用了that引导同位语从句，现在分词作状语。)
【高分句型2】
Extremely thrilled to know that you are calling for activity plans themed “Beat Plastic Pollution”, I feel it my privilege to offer mine, hoping to give you a hand.(运用了形容词作状语，that引导宾语从句，过去分词作后置定语以及现在分词作状语。)
13．（2023·北京西城·二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你想做一个问卷调查，了解中英学生在某方面的差异。你打算请英国好友 Jim 答卷，并且请他将问卷转发给他的同学和朋友。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.问卷的目的；
2.问卷的内容。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：调查问卷 questionnaire
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim.
How are you doing I’m writing to ask if you can help me with a questionnaire.
It is about the reading habits of Chinese and British youth. With so many reading materials accessible via
digital devices, I want to know how both groups’ reading habits have changed.
It contains twenty questions concerning reading materials, reading length as well as reading frequency. It also asks about digital devices young people use.
I wonder if you could answer the questions in it. Then, please kindly forward the questionnaire to your classmates and friends. I would appreciate it very much. Please see the attached questionnaire.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封求助信。要求考生以李华的身份请英国好友 Jim如何对了解中英学生在某方面的差异做一个问卷调查，并请他将问卷转发给他的同学和朋友。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助：help→ do sb a favor
许多：many → numerous
想要做某事：want to do sth→ would like to do sth
包括：contain→ involve
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：It contains twenty questions concerning reading materials, reading length as well as reading frequency.
拓展句：It contains twenty questions which are about reading materials, reading length as well as reading frequency.
【点睛】【高分句型1】With so many reading materials accessible via digital devices, I want to know how both groups’ reading habits have changed.（with复合结构结构作状语）
【高分句型2】I wonder if you could answer the questions in it.（if引导的宾语从句）
14．（2023·北京房山·二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校交换生Jim打算今年暑假回英国，想送给他的妈妈一件具有中国特色的礼物，特发来邮件就准备什么礼物向你咨询。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1. 建议的礼物；
2. 说明选择该礼物的原因；
3. 表达祝福。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear from you! As you want to give a gift with Chinese characteristics to your mom, I would suggest a Chinese silk scarf.
Chinese silk scarf is an excellent choice to showcase the beauty of Chinese culture. It is not only sophisticated in pattern and design, but also comfortable to wear. Besides, there are many patterns with rich cultural meanings to choose from. For instance, peony, lotus, and phoenix all represent happiness, prosperity, and good luck in Chinese culture.
I hope this gift will impress your mom and bring her joy. Please convey my best regards and best wishes to her. Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校交换生Jim打算今年暑假回英国，想送给他的妈妈一件具有中国特色的礼物，特发来邮件就准备什么礼物向你咨询。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggest→recommend
表达：convey→express
快乐：joy→happiness
选择：choice→option
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：It is not only sophisticated in pattern and design, but also comfortable to wear.
拓展句：Not only is it sophisticated in pattern and design, but also it is comfortable to wear.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As you want to give a gift with Chinese characteristics to your mom, I would suggest a
Chinese silk scarf. (运用了as引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] I hope this gift will impress your mom and bring her joy. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
15．（2023·北京昌平·二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。作为你校英语戏剧社的负责人，在毕业前的活动上你将做离任发言。请你用英文写一份发言稿，内容包括：
1. 回顾开展的主要活动与收获；
2. 表达感谢及祝愿。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Good morning, everyone!
It’s a great honor to deliver my last speech here as the President of English Drama Club.
Time flies over us, but leaves its shadow behind. Never will I forget the colorful activities during the past two years, such as the lectures on Shakespeare’s plays, the course of drama appreciation and our amazing performances at the annual Art Festival. Our club not only gave us a platform to show ourselves, but also offered me a chance to witness the magic of communication and cooperation. My personal ability has been improving as well.
Today I must express my sincere gratitude to all of you. Thank you for always being there to support me. Wish our club a brighter future. Thanks again.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。作为你校英语戏剧社的负责人，在毕业前的活动上你将做离任发言。请你用英文写一份发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：chance→opportunity
表达：express→convey
改善：improve→promote
感激：gratitude→appreciation
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Our club not only gave us a platform to show ourselves, but also offered me a chance to witness the magic of communication and cooperation.
拓展句：Not only did our club not only give us a platform to show ourselves, but also it offered me a chance to witness the magic of communication and cooperation.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Never will I forget the colorful activities during the past two years, such as the lectures on Shakespeare’s plays, the course of drama appreciation and our amazing performances at the annual Art Festival. (运用了部分倒装)
[高分句型2] It’s a great honor to deliver my last speech here as the President of English Drama Club. (运用了it作形式主语句型)
16．（2023·北京东城·二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim来信提及他参加了学校举办的“从地标建筑读懂一座城市”的世界城市展示活动。请你用英文给他回一封电子邮件，谈谈你的想法。内容包括：
1.你推荐的城市及其地标建筑；
2.推荐理由。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：地标landmark
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Good to hear from you, and what an interesting activity! We can really tell a lot about a city from its buildings.
I know you are a fan of Chinese architecture, so if you haven’t decided which city to pick, you may consider
Beijing, with the Forbidden City as a distinctive landmark.
Located in the centre of Beijing, the Forbidden City, the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing dynasties, has a history of over 600 years. It has witnessed the changes of the city. Thus, it is surely a worthy landmark of Beijing and a good choice for your project.
I hope my advice will be helpful. Wish you every success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim回一封电子邮件，谈谈对你他参加了学校举办的“从地标建筑读懂一座城市”的世界城市展示活动的想法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：good →pleased
决定：decide → determine
见证：witness →see
建议：advice → suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Located in the centre of Beijing, the Forbidden City, the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing dynasties, has a history of over 600 years.
拓展句：Located in the centre of Beijing, the Forbidden City, which is the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing dynasties, has a history of over 600 years.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Located in the centre of Beijing, the Forbidden City, the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing dynasties, has a history of over 600 years.（运用了过去分词作状语）
【高分句型2】I hope my advice will be helpful.（运用了宾语从句）
17．（2023·北京海淀·二模）假设你是红星中学高三“传统文化社”社长李华。你校国际部留学生Jim邀请你参加他们组织的“China Day”活动并做展示。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 接受邀请并表示感谢；
2. 你展示的内容及理由。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m writing with great honor to accept your invitation to your “China Day” event. Thank you so much for offering me this precious opportunity to be part of it.
I’m thinking of presenting Chinese calligraphy. I will introduce and demonstrate the basic techniques of calligraphy, after which I would ask some audience to try writing some characters.
I choose this topic because it is a unique way to appreciate the beauty of Chinese characters and understand the essence of Chinese culture. Moreover, I think only when the audience get involved can they truly understand the beauty of Chinese culture.
How do you like this idea Tell me if you would like me to change. Best wishes to the event.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三“传统文化社”社长李华。你校国际部留学生Jim邀请你参加他们组织的“China Day”活动并做展示。请考生用英语给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：opportunity→chance
考虑：think of→think about
理解：understand→make sense of
想要：would like→want
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thank you so much for offering me this precious opportunity to be part of it.
拓展句：Thank you so much because you can offer me this precious opportunity to be part of it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I will introduce and demonstrate the basic techniques of calligraphy, after which I would ask some audience to try writing some characters.（运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Moreover, I think only when the audience get involved can they truly understand the beauty of
Chinese culture.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和部分倒装）
18．（2023·北京朝阳·二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你最近读完了外教Jim推荐的一本英文书，请你用英文给Jim写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表达感谢并分享读书收获;
2.交流后续英文书阅读计划。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Thank you for your recommendation of the English novel The Old Man and the Sea.
Having finished reading, I’ve harvested a lot. The tough man who fights against the big fish and sharks alone in the sea inspires me to brave frustrations in my life. And I have learned that we should stick to our dreams no matter what hardships we may encounter.
The book unfolds a new world to me. Thus, I make a plan for further reading. English novels enlightening my mind will be included in my reading list. I intend to read one book a month. While reading, I will take down my understanding in time to gain more beyond the lines.
I would appreciate it if you could give me more recommendations.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生用英文给Jim写一封邮件，内容包括：1.表达感谢并分享读书收获；2.交流后续英文书阅读计划。
【详解】1.词汇积累
完成：finish→complete
激励某人做某事：inspire sb. to do sth.→encourage sb. to do sth.
坚持：stick to→persist in
感谢：appreciate→be grateful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thank you for your recommendation of the English novel The Old Man and the Sea.
拓展句：Thank you for your recommendation of the English novel whose name is The Old Man and the Sea.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
The tough man who fights against the big fish and sharks alone in the sea inspires me to brave frustrations in my life.(运用了who引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
And I have learned that we should stick to our dreams no matter what hardships we may encounter.(运用了that引导宾语从句，no matter what引导让步状语从句)
19．（2023·北京门头沟·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你校将组织参观中国载人航天工程成就展，你班的英国交换生Jim对中国航天兴趣浓厚，请你写一封邮件邀请他参加，内容包括：
1．活动目的及时间安排；
2．活动内容；
3．询问对方意向。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：中国载人航天工程成就展 exhibition of achievements in China’s manned spaceflight program
Dear Jim.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How’s everything going To advocate the spirit of innovation and devotion, our school will organize a trip to the exhibition of achievements in China’s manned spaceflight program. Knowing you’re interested in China’s spaceflight industry, I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The activity will be held in National Museum at 8 a.m.this Sunday. First, we’ll see the models of the space station and rockets to get deeper insights into China’s spaceflight. Then we’ll enjoy various pictures and videos shot during the space missions, which will vividly show Chinese astronauts’ life in space. Besides, with instructions of volunteers, we’ll know about the glorious stories behind the spaceflight program.
Would you like to come Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给交换生Jim写一封邮件邀请他参加学校组织的中国载人航天工程成就展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→ show interest in
首先：first→ first of all /initially
各种各样：various → a variety of
此外：besides → what’s more/moreover
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First, we’ll see the models of the space station and rockets to get deeper insights into China’s spaceflight.
拓展句：First, we’ll see the models of the space station and rockets so that we can get deeper insights into China’s spaceflight.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing you’re interested in China’s spaceflight industry, I’m writing to invite you to join us.（运用了现在分词作状语和省略连接词that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Then we’ll enjoy various pictures and videos shot during the space missions, which will vividly show Chinese astronauts’ life in space.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
20．（2023·北京海淀·一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你与交换生Jim要共同完成一篇项目学习的论文，他建议用AI完成初稿。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 委婉拒绝并说明理由；
2. 你的建议及计划。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词语：项目学习—project-based learning
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Thanks for your suggestion on using AI to finish the first draft of our paper. But after further consideration, I’m afraid it’s not a wise idea.
Firstly, it goes against the purpose of project-based learning, which is to cultivate critical thinking and teamwork. Moreover, AI is unlikely to accurately present our ideas, because it hasn’t “got involved in” our project.
So, I suggest we write the paper ourselves. We can start by brainstorming together to create an outline after generating some original and creative ideas. Then we can work independently on different parts, and finally work together to finalize our paper. I believe we can do a better job than AI.
Hope you can understand. Expecting our distinctive draft.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你与交换生Jim要共同完成一篇项目学习的论文，他建议用AI完成初稿。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，委婉拒绝提议，并说明理由，以及自己的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
产生：generate→produce
完成：finish→complete
培养：cultivate→develop/nurture
此外：moreover→besides
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：We can start by brainstorming together to create an outline after generating some original and creative ideas. Then we can work independently on different parts, and finally work together to finalize our paper.
拓展句：We can start by brainstorming together to create an outline after generating some original and creative ideas, after which we can work independently on different parts, and finally work together to finalize our paper.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thanks for your suggestion on using AI to finish the first draft of our paper. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Moreover, AI is unlikely to accurately present our ideas, because it hasn’t “got involved in” our project. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)

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