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2024年高考英语写作短文故事续写作文
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Today was February 5th, a cold rainy morning, the sort of start that made me wish that I could skip school and head back to my warm home. and bed. Though it was my senior year, most days seemed to remain the same boredom.
Being late for 5 minutes, I dashed up the stairs, swung open the door to my British Literature class.like a sopping wet dog. and plopped down (@然下)in my seat. The eyes around the room glared at meas my teacher cleared her throat. Mathew maybe go and see the lost-and-found for a change of clothes.I felt my face turn red and stormed out quickly.
The lost-and-found bin did not look promising, until I came across an oversized navy coal at the bottom. I put it on and zipped up, this would do for the next couple of hours. Freezing up, I dug my hands deeper down into the pockets to keep warm. Then I hit something, and pulled out a somewhat crinkled(皱巴巴的)piece of notebook paper with some words.“To you, yes you." I read aloud, realizing that this must be a letter from someone. "Dear Person,I don' know exactly who you are, but believe that this let her found you for a reason. I am the least likely of people to write something of this sort, but it's my senior year, and I thought that I would make true friends. If you would like to participate in this experiment.please leave your response in locker 115, second floor." My eyes brightened.I finished my letter by the bell, as I made my way through the crowd, Charlic jammed his shoulder into mine from the opposite direction. "Hey! Out of my way!" I shouted. He just ignored me, not looking back. Charlie is popular in our school and people like him (but not me) I know Charlie never likes me.ever since primary school. finally made it to the second floor, slipped the letter into the locker, and left secretly.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段每段的开头语已为你写好
Paragraph l: Soon my unseen pen pal and I wrote letters every day.Paragraph 2: I waited for my pen pal in the stadium after school that day
范文一
Paragraph 1: Soon my unseen pen pal and I wrote letters every day. I shared daily life with him, day by day. I like the feeling of writing letters to someone unknown. My boring life has now become interesting. I am now looking forward to going to school. I haven't been late for school. The pen pal also wrote letters to me. Every time, a flock of happiness flashed across me when I read his letters. As time goes by, I learned a lot of things about him. So I made up my mind to invite him to meet in the stadium.
Paragraph 2: I waited for my pen pal in the stadium after school that day. However, the person was different from what I imagined. Instead, it was the boy I didn't like - Charlie. My jaw dropped to the ground, and I couldn't utter any words. He also had the same expression as me. We both felt embarrassed. Nevertheless, we hit it off and broke the ice. If we want to know a person, we should try our best to make contact. This experience was like an everlasting flower, blooming in the river of my memories.
范文二：进一步优化润色成拔高款作文，蓝色是好词好句好素材，尖子生可以选用
Paragraph 1: Soon my unseen pen pal and I wrote letters every day. Sharing daily life with him, I found a unique joy in writing letters to an anonymous recipient. The monotony of my existence transformed into an eagerly awaited adventure with each school day on the horizon. My pen pal's correspondence filled me with elation every time I unfolded a letter. As the days progressed, my knowledge of this individual grew profoundly. Thus, I resolved to arrange a rendezvous at the stadium.
Paragraph 2: I waited for my pen pal in the stadium after school that day. To my astonishment, the person who emerged was not the one my mind had conjured. It was Charlie, a boy who had never piqued my interest. My jaw slackened, and words escaped me. Mirroring my shock, he too, was at a loss for words. Despite the initial awkwardness, we overcame the ice and forged a bond. This encounter taught me that genuine acquaintance demands effortful engagement. Like a timeless bloom in the meadows of my memory, this encounter will forever flourish.
和他分享日常生活，我在给一位匿名收件人写信的过程中找到了一种独特的乐趣。随着每一个学期的到来，我单调的生活变成了一场令人期待的冒险。每次展开笔友的来信，我都满心欢喜。随着时间的推移，我对这个人的了解越来越深。因此，我决定在体育场安排一次会面。
令我惊讶的是，出现的人并不是我想象中的那个人。是查理，一个从未引起我兴趣的男孩。我惊愕得张大嘴巴，无言以对。他和我一样震惊，也不知所措。尽管最初有些尴尬，但我们还是打破了僵局，建立了联系。这次相遇让我明白，真正的了解需要努力的交流。这次相遇将像我记忆中的草地上的永恒花朵一样永远盛开。
范文一与范文二：优化改写理由供参考
1.Sharing daily life with him, I found a unique joy in writing letters to an anonymous recipient.” 通过使用“Sharing daily life with him”作为开头，使得句子更加流畅，并将原本平淡的叙述转化为更具表达力的句式。同时，“anonymous recipient”比“someone unknown”更为精确。
2.“The monotony of my existence transformed into an eagerly awaited adventure with each school day on the horizon.” 此句通过运用更为生动和形象的词汇，如“monotony”, “eagerly awaited adventure”, 提升了文本的表现力，同时“with each school day on the horizon”增加了对未来的期待感。
3.“My pen pal's correspondence filled me with elation every time I unfolded a letter.” 这里用“elation”替换了“happiness”，使表达更加高级，同时“every time I unfolded a letter”更具画面感，增强了读者的阅读体验。
4.“Despite the initial awkwardness, we overcame the ice and forged a bond.” 通过使用“forged a bond”替换了“hit it off”，让表达更加精确和生动，同时保留了原文“broke the ice”的意象，通过“Despite the initial awkwardness”增加了故事的层次感。
5.“Like a timeless bloom in the meadows of my memory, this encounter will forever flourish.”采用了更为诗意和富有哲理的表达方式，将这次相遇比作记忆中永恒盛开的花朵，提升了整篇文章的意境。

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