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I remember that I was worn out when I got home that afternoon. I’d had to be at the theatre for the audition(试演) at nine that morning, and then I'd been waiting around for about three hours before the director finally saw me. I performed my song and almost at once he told me I could go home. “I am very sorry,” he said, “but your voice isn’t quite right for the part.” It had been a similar story at all the auditions that I’d done over the past few weeks.
我记得那天下午回到家时我已经筋疲力尽了。我不得不去剧院试镜(试演) 那天早上九点，我等了大约三个小时，导演终于看到了我。我表演了我的歌，他几乎立刻告诉我可以回家了。“我很抱歉，”他说，“但你的声音不太适合这个角色。”过去几周我参加的所有试镜都是这样。
It had been my dream for years to be in a famous musical like The Sound of Music or Mamma Mia, so I’d taken lessons in singing and dancing, and had come to the city to try and get a part in a show. I’d been really pleased when I’d managed to set up no fewer than ten auditions, but so far all of them had gone the same way. As I arrived back that afternoon at the little apartment where I rented a room, I really wondered whether I should bother going to the eleventh the next morning. It was a show I’d have loved to be in — but really, what was the point Someone I knew had told me about a job at a local coffee shop, and had said that if I called in for a quick chat at ten the next day, I'd almost certainly get the job. It meant missing the audition, but right now, it seemed like a much more sensible thing to do.
多年来，我一直梦想能出演《音乐之声》或《妈妈咪呀》等著名音乐剧，所以我上了唱歌和跳舞的课，并来到这座城市，试图在一场演出中扮演一个角色。当我设法安排了不少于十次试镜时，我真的很高兴，但到目前为止，所有的试镜都是一样的。那天下午，当我回到我租了一个房间的小公寓时，我真的很想知道第二天早上是否应该去11点。这是一个我很想参加的节目——但实际上，这有什么意义？我认识的一个人告诉我当地一家咖啡店的工作，并说如果我第二天十点打电话来快速聊天，我几乎肯定会得到这份工作。这意味着错过试镜，但现在，这似乎是一件更明智的事情。
I always sing when I need to cheer myself up, and because there was no one else in the apartment, I slipped off my shoes, went and stood in front of the mirror and started singing. Quite quickly I found myself belting out(大声唱) one of my favourite songs, Bridge over Troubled Water. As I finished the song, I suddenly heard applause. I looked around the room thinking that my roommate had perhaps slipped in without me noticing — but there was nobody. Then I went over to the open window of the apartment, and saw an elderly woman standing on the far side of the pavement below, looking up at me.
我总是在需要振作起来的时候唱歌，因为公寓里没有其他人，我脱下鞋子，站在镜子前开始唱歌。我很快就发现自己筋疲力尽了(大声唱) 我最喜欢的歌曲之一，《麻烦水上的桥》。当我唱完这首歌时，我突然听到掌声。我环顾房间，心想我的室友可能在我没有注意到的情况下溜了进来——但没有人。然后我走到公寓敞开的窗户前，看到一位老妇人站在下面人行道的另一边，抬头看着我。
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She reached her arms up towards me with a great smile on her face.
The next day I went to the eleventh audition.
Main idea of the story:
The protagonist has always dreamed of participating in famous musicals such as "The Sound of Music" or "Mamma Mia", and thus received singing and dance courses. However, she has failed in all ten auditions over the past few weeks. After returning to the apartment, she began to doubt whether it was worth attending the eleventh audition. In the lonely apartment, she sang loudly to cheer herself up when she unexpectedly heard applause from a stranger.
The key in the continuation writing:
In the continuation, the protagonist is encouraged by strangers, and after being inspired, she decides to give it her all. The next day, he went to attend the eleventh audition. His performance was recognized by the director and accepted, and the protagonist realized that his dream would truly come true, as long as he had the courage and faith.
The plot development of the Continuation:
According to the given article, it can be inferred that the author is struggling with whether to attend the eleventh audition tomorrow after multiple failed attempts, but there is still another job that can be basically finalized waiting for the author tomorrow. The author's singing attracted the old woman outside the window, who gave her a positive response. The second paragraph of the continuation is the author's decision to participate in the 11th audition.
So candidates should infer that in the first paragraph of the continuation, they should write: the encouragement of the author by the unfamiliar woman can be described using expressions, psychology, and language. The second paragraph needs to write: The author's brilliant performance during the competition shook the whole audience. And it's best to have sublimation. The theme of the sublimation article is: hard work will yield rewards, those with aspirations will achieve success, and so on.官方范文，
She reached her arms up towards me with a great smile on her face. I was taken aback by her unexpected gesture of appreciation. Her eyes sparkled with admiration as she shouted from below, “You have a voice of an angel, my dear! Keep singing, don’t ever stop!” The unexpected support from a stranger was like a beacon of light in the midst of my doubts and disappointments. I felt a surge of confidence and determination washing over me. With renewed spirit, I made up my mind to go all out for the audition the next day.
The next day I went to the eleventh audition. As I walked into the theatre, I felt a newfound sense of purpose and self-assurance. The director greeted me with a warm smile, and this time, as I sang my heart out, I could feel the magic in the air. When I finished, there was a moment of silence before the room erupted into applause. The director’s eyes were shining with excitement as he said, “You’ve got the part! Welcome to the show!” It was at that moment that I realized dreams really did come true, and all it took was a little courage and belief in oneself.
参考范文一，
She reached her arms up towards me with a great smile on her face. My eyes were wet at seeing her gesture, which was the sign of approval I had needed most. She waved at me, “Your voice is beautiful. I like it. It’s like angel’s!” These words were like a beacon in the darkness, rekindling my hope. It was at that moment that my heart cheered and my confidence was restored. I waved at her back, shouting, “Thank you!” Then I made up my mind to attend the next audition. I would stick to my dream regardless of the disappointments.
The next day I went to the eleventh audition. Although the past failures haunted me when I was in the waiting room, I tried to keep my spirit up. couldn’t succeed without trusting myself. When it was my turn to do the audition, I took a deep breath, went to the stage and sang my favorite song, Bridge over Troubled Water. I poured such expectation and feeling in it that I forgot the presence of everyone. When I finished, there was a silence before a new response, “it’s special. Ok, you’re in. ” I made it! I could pursue my dream again!
参考范文二，
She reached her arms up towards me with a great smile on her face. Her genuine applause echoed in the small apartment, filling the space with warmth and encouragement. It was a simple gesture, but it meant the world to me in that moment of self-doubt and disappointment. As I stood there, basking in the unexpected praise, I realized that sometimes, support can come from the most unexpected places. With her kind gesture, the elderly woman reminded me that passion and determination are worth pursuing, even in the face of setbacks.rejection.Encouraged by the encounter, I decided to give the audition the next morning a shot.
The next day, I went to the eleventh audition. As I walked into the theater, I carried with me not just my dream of being in a musical but also the memory of the elderly woman's applause. As I stepped onto the stage, I poured my heart and soul into my performance, channeling the encouragement of the mysterious woman from the day before. To my surprise and delight, the director's eyes lit up as I sang, and when I finished, he smiled and said, "You've got the part." It was my long-waited answer and tears of sensation welled up in my eyes. I was grateful that the applause from the woman made my day.

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