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第一节 (满分 15 分)
假定你是学生会主席李华，你校高三师生下周将举行篮球“师生友谊赛”，请你给外教 Mr. Smith写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.活动方案；
2.邀请加入。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
一、考查意图
此篇应用文要求考生根据所给的真实而灵活的任务情景写一篇短文。在语言能力、思维品质和文化意识等核心素养和关键能力对学生进行考查。具体来说就是考查考生运用书面语言表达观点、意图和情感等的能力。也考查考生在逻辑性、批判性、创造性等思维方面的能力和水平。
在语言组织与表达方面，该题考查考生能够运用规范和富有逻辑性的语言进行清晰、有条理的书面表达能力，包括合理的语篇构建能力，恰当运用丰富的词汇、语法、语篇知识，进行得体表达的语用能力。同时，该题也考查考生在单词拼写、标点符号等语言准确性和整洁规范书写等方面的能力。
二、语篇内容
主题内容是邀请外教参加你校高三师生下周将举行篮球“师生友谊赛”，包括师生友谊赛的活动方案。
该题的核心价值在于引导学生通过与外教的书面交流，积极参加到学校丰富多彩的活动，强调应用性和创造性能力的培养。引导考生在深入思考和表达自己观点的同时，准确使用语法和词汇，运用一定的句型清楚、连贯和创造性地表达自己的观点和想法。
三、学生存在的问题
1. 内容方面: 活动方案设计欠佳，仅有分组比赛，内容单一。
2. 语言方面：词汇使用的得体性欠妥，语法结构单一。
3. 篇章结构：整体结构清晰，但缺少句间和段间的有效衔接。
4. 写作规范：单词拼写不精准，标点、大小写使用不规范。
四、参考范文
官方范文，
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. I am delighted to invite you to participate in the upcoming teacher-student friendship basketball game at our school.
The game is scheduled to kick off at 14:00 p.m. next Friday afternoon at the school gymnasium. After a brief opening ceremony, the students and teachers will engage in a friendly competition. Additionally, a special half-time show featuring performances by the school’s dance club and music band will entertain the audience. The game will not only be an opportunity for interaction and exchange between teachers and students but also a platform for everyone to relax and have some fun.
Looking forward to the game and hope to see you there. Thank you for considering our invitation.
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文一，
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. Our school will launch a basketball friendship competition among teachers and students, so I’m writing to invite you to join in.
The basketball competition will start at 3:00 a.m. on next Monday, lasting for a whole week. According to the rules, all teachers in senior 3 will make 2 groups, while students from 10 classes will make 10 groups. Teachers will compete with students to get qualified for the next round of match. Therefore, the winners will compete with other winners for the final winner. I’m sure that students will be overjoyed to see your participation and will do their utmost to challenge you.
Looking forward to your participation. I would appreciate it if you could inform me about your decision.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考范文二，
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. Our school is organizing a basketball "Teacher-Student Friendship Match" next week for high school seniors, so I’m writing to invite you to join in.
The event aims to foster camaraderie between teachers and students through sportsmanship and teamwork. Each team will consist of both teachers and students, promoting collaboration and mutual respect on and off the court. The match will follow standard basketball rules, with fair play and friendly competition emphasized throughout. We would be delighted if you could join us in this exciting event. Your participation would not only add to the fun but also strengthen the bond between the school community. Your presence will undoubtedly inspire both students and staff alike.
Looking forward to your favorable response.
Yours sincerely,
参考范文三
Dear Mr Smith,
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. Knowing that you are enthusiastic about basketball, I sincerely invite you to participate in the friendship basketball game .
As scheduled, the basketball game will take place at 4:00 p.m. next Friday. First of all, it will begin with a grand opening ceremony, which will undoubtedly be a true feast for eyes and ears. After that, students and teachers will be divided into two teams to engage in the friendly game. Finally, the game will come to an end with a brief closing ceremony. What is worth mentioning is that our serious headmaster will be a team player, which will add some spice to the game. Also of primary note is that there will be a surprising gift in store for every participant. So I guarantee that it is a golden chance to have fun and strengthen the bond between students and teachers.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. Looking forward to your participation!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

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