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(共16张PPT)
高中英语应用文：
发布网络评论
你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：_________ _________
This online concert is absolutely fantastic!
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Step1:明确交际用途(Clear)
Step2:分解题干要点(Correct)
Step3:包含所有要点
Brainstorming
你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：
1.音乐会特点； 2.观看感受； 3.意见或建议。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic!
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
绿苔私家英语
Step4:分块构思内容
内容1:音乐会特点+音乐会的特色内容
(P50-51) Chinese traditionaf,classical music,country music,hip-hop,techno music,orchestral music_弦乐(wind instrument风管乐器，stringed instrument玄乐器),etc.
different languages
different music styles
different culturesonline
(From the video)Traditional Chinese insturments:钟、磬[qìng]、埙xūn]、鼓、古筝、古琴、琵琶、二胡、阮[ruǎn]、竹笛、箫、笙[shēng]、木鱼等。
内容1:音乐会特点+ 音乐会的特色内容
It featured dazzling stringed instruments like western
violin and Chinese erhu and sentimental performance
from both China and Britain.
In stead of being noisy and loud, this concert turned out
to be lyric e and melodious:
The moon over a Fountain Chinese classic pieces, such as" The Butter fly lovers" even brought tears to the
audience' s eyes and received a standing ovation in the end.
step 4: 分块构思
内容2:观看感受
必修二 Unit3 The Internet
(教材P28)One of the greatest benefits of the Internet was its ability to remove the distance that usually exists between people.
One of the greatest benefits of the online concert was itsability to remove the distance that exists between we Chinese students and our sister-school friends in Britain.
The concert offered a great platform to connect studentsand teachers of the two schools through music despitethe physical distance between us.
step 4: 分块构思
内容2:观看感受
必修二Unit 5 Music
(教材P49)“Music is the universal language of mankind.”
(教材P56) Music gives me happiness.When I listened to music, it made my spirit fly like a kite in the wind.Music gave me strength and brought me; relief.
It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those;hard times. Moreover,music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction. It became my best friend. It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part; of my being.
step 4: 分块构思
内容2: 观看感受
必修二Unit5 Music(教材P52)
The virtual choir is a wonderful way for people around the world to sing with; one voice and thus make the world a better place.
Undoubtedly,this online concert is a wonderful way for people from and China to appreciate the music Britain with one heart, thus making the world a better place abouf the online concert.
step 4: 分块构思
" Butterfly lovers” " Romeo and Juliet"
The friends from the UK played Shakespeare' masterpiece " Romeo and Juliet”. we played" Butter fly lovers", a household story with the same theme and whose melody is recognized worldwide（得到了世界的认可).
内容3:意见 或 建议
①对事情的一定的看法或想法(同建议)。
②(对人、对事)认为不对因而不满意的想法。
objection; different opinion; compaint
提出的主张
proposal;suggestion;proposal ;recommendation
Is it appropriate to point out a problem
What can you suggest
Step4: 分块构思内容(Courteous)
内容3:意见或建议
建议参考“建议信”的表达句式
增加交流机会
have more of theseonline concerts; there will be moreopportunities..
improve thesound/tone quality;
increase networkstability
字幕和翻译
there were subtitles or translations for the lyrics of the songs
增加互动
more interactive elements, forexample,“bullet-screen”.
Step5:简短总结评论
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This online concert is absolutely fantastic!
S1:Anyway,this concert is …
S2:All in all,music is …
S3:Undoubtedly,this online concert is …
"6C" principle
Clear
Correct
Complete
Coerent
Connected
Courteous

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