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沉默的邻居
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For courage,my fingers clung to the harness(背带、保护带)on Chó's broad back as we passed the fence of my neGroll's yard.
Walking by Mr.Groll's yard is the best part of our morning walk,and also the worst.It is the best part because the Good morning,Chó,”whisper the rose scents to my guide dog's nose.Other roses shout to me,“Hello,Mai!"
Now comes the worst part:Mr.Groll.As usual,friendly Chó thumps her tail.But Cho is just a dog;how can she know that this neighbor does not like me at all
“Hello,Mr.Groll.”I greeted him as I did every morning.And like every other morning,he did not answer me.But I knew hewas there,watching,behind his fence.He always sounds out of breath,and the creaky gate swings nervously in his hand.Maybe he's afraid of me because I'm blind.Disabilities do scare grown-ups sometimes.Then I remembered:the other day Iheard him playing checkers (西洋跳棋)with my friend Jimmy,who's in a wheelchair.
Chó and I marched on,and my thoughts kept step.Why did Mr.Groll ignore me It's a mystery to me.
Papa has told me that some folks do not like people from faraway places.Does this solve the mystery Maybe Mr.Groll does notlike neighbors from faraway places.No,that can't be it.Every Saturday Mr.Groll and my big brother,Lien,help each otherwith yard work.They are friends.
Well,then,I wondered,why wouldn't he talk to me The toe of my shoe scuffed the sidewalk,and I think,maybe he didn'tlike me because I'm a girl.The sidewalk humed beneath my feet.A skateboard zoomed by."Hello,Mai and Chó!”my friend Jana yelled.“Hi,Mr.Groll.”I waited.If Mr.Groll ignored Jana,then the mystery was solved.But his voice called out,“Hello, Jana!”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:The sound of it twisted my heart.Paragraph
2:“It is Chó that scares my words away.”he replied.
Read for plot
in the moring by Mr. Groll’s yard
I wondered,why wouldn't he talk to me I wanted to make it clear.
“Hello,Mr.Groll.” I greeted him as I did every morning. And like every other morning, he did not answer me.
Main idea
●这篇文章主要讲述了一个盲人女孩Mai(我)和导盲犬Chó在早晨散步时经过邻居Mr.Groll的院子，描述了我与Chó的友好互动以及与Mr.Grol之间的沉默和隔阂。我每天都会向Mr.Groll打招呼，但他总是不回应，让我感到困惑。我觉得可能的原因，可能因为自己的视觉障碍、或者因为我来自远方，甚至可能是因为我是女孩，但也——排除了。这时，刚好朋友贾娜看到了邻居Mr.Groll,并打招呼。我在观察，如果格罗尔先生无视贾娜，那么这个谜团将被揭示。然而，格罗尔先生却回应了贾娜。
“Hello,Mr.Groll.”I greeted him as I did every morning. And like every other morning, he did not answer me.
Maybe he's afraid of me because I'm blind.Disabilities do scare grown-ups
sometimes.Then I remembered:the other day I heard him playing checkers(西洋跳棋)with my friend Jimmy,who's in a wheelchair.
A skateboard zoomed by."Hello,Mai and Chó!"my friend Jana yelled. "Hi, Mr. Groll.”I waited.If Mr.Groll ignored Jana,then the mystery was solved.But his voicecalled out,“Hello,Jana!”The sound of it twisted my heart.
Read for conflict
Conflict 1 greeted him vs did not answer me blind girl unsure
Conflict 2 responsed to Jana vs ignored me/twisted my heart
Mai尝试与Mr.Groll打招呼，但后者始终保持沉默，形成了一种隔阂。Mai通过自己的内心独白思考可能的原因，包括自身的视觉障碍、身份和性别，突显了人与人之间因差异而产生的困扰。整个故事呈现了一种对于沟通、理解和克服障碍的渴望和努力。
The Struggle for Connection Amidst Silence and Differences.
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参考范文：
The sound of it twisted my heart. Now I understood something I didn't know be unfriendly Mr. Groll likes Jimmy. And Lien.And Jana.But not me and Chó.…Nor Me anaCho!An idea brightened my mystery.But I should know why Mr.Groll didn't talk to me!Repulsed by confusion, as well as irritatiom,I felt my way along the fence to approach mymeighbour. "Mai! Be careful!”Mr.Groll's dewhile his hand steadied my elbow."You can please solve my mystery, "I stammered.“Is it because I'm blind that you don't like me Or because Iam a girl from a faraway land ”
“It is Chó that scares my words away." he replied." I like you, just as I like Lien, and Jana,”he sounded breathless,maybe because of anxiety or cagermess."But you know, I am just afraid of your dog."he continued.His earnest explanation made everything cometo light.“Come with me.”I told him,"Make acquaintance with Chó."I led him to Chó,and told Mr.Groll how gentle Chó was.Then I took Mr.Groll's hand in mine and guidedit to Cho's head.Hesitantly,Mr.Groll stroked Cho's ears.Friendly Chó thumped her tail. And now that the mystery was solved,our new friendship could begin.
下水作文1
o Paragraph 1:The sound of it twisted my heart.Mr.Groll's silence was a weight hung in the air,heavier than the morning dew on the roses.Cho's tail thumped cheerfuly, oblivious to the tension.I grinned her harmess tighter,my fingers seeking reassurance in the familiar leather straps.The rose-scemted whisners seemed to fade, drowned by the unspoken mystery.I decided to find out the reason,and asked Mr.Groll.“would you please tell me if it was my blindness that kept you silent ”
● Paragraph 2:"It is Chó that scares my words away,"he replied.I turned,startled Mr.Grollstood there, his face softened by vulnerability. His breaths were still uneasy,but hisgaze met mine.“I've never been good with dogs, especially big ones.They intimidate
me.”Understanding dawned,and compassion warmed my heart. It wasn't my blindness or my gender;it was an unspoken fear.A shared moment of understanding passed between us,bridging the gap that silence had created.With mewfound courage.smiled,“Chó's a gentle giant,Mr.Groll.She just wants to be friends.”
下水作文2
Paragraph 1:The sound of it twisted my heart.Mr.Groll's continued silence weighed silence that spoke volumes of unspoken iudgments and imvisible barriers.The roses,of messengers of morning cheer, now seemed to droop under the weight of the unresolved mystery.Cho,sensing my unease,moved with a cautious grace,her steps echoing the hesitancy in my heartThe vibrant hues of the flowers were overshadowed by the grey cloud of unanswered questionslingering in the air."Could you help unravel the mystery for me "I stumbled over my words."Isit because of my blindness that you don't like me,or is it because I'm a girl from a distant land "I asked Mr.Groll.
·Paragraph 2:"It is Chó that scares my words away,"he replied.The confession arrived unexpectedly, shattering the heavy silence.Startled,I turned around to find Mr.Groll standingthere,his face softened by vulnerability. While his breaths remained uneasy,our eyes locked."I've never been skilled with dogs, especially the larger ones.They intimidate me,"he confessed.Understanding washed over me, and compassion embraced my heart.It wasn't about my blindnessor gender;it was an unspoken fear. A moment of shared understanding unfolded,bridging thesilence that had separated us.With a surge of courage,I smiled,"Cho is a gentle giant,Mr.Groll.She just wants to be friends."The air,once heavy with tension, lightened as the sharedacknowledgment opened the door to potential friendship and understanding.
考场作文分析
可以结合学生习作，就内容情节、语言、衔接连贯等方面出现的问题，进行师生、生生活动，提出相应的改进建议。
语料积累
每当邻居保持沉默，我就感到一阵不安和困惑，仿佛心灵深处笼罩着沉闷的阴影，他的每一次静默都像是我们之间无法跨越的鸿沟。
●版本1: Every time my neighbor falls into silence,I feel a wave of unease and confusion,as if a dull shadow envelops the depths of my soul; each instance of his quietude seems like an uncrossable chasm between us.
●版本2:Whenever my neighbor remains silent,an unsettling sense of unease and bewilderment washes over me,as if a somber shadow blankets the depths of my spirit;every moment of his silence feels like an insurmountable gap dividing us.
●版本3:Whenever my neighbor stays quiet,I feel uneasy and puzzled,like a shadow over my thoughts. His silence seems like a gap we can't bridge.
语料积累
内心的迷茫和困惑就像是被一层厚重的迷雾笼罩，让我无法找到头绪，同时感到一种深深的无助和孤独。
●版本1: I feel lost and confused inside,like I'm stuck in a thick fog,unable to find my way, and it brings a deep sense of helplessness and loneliness.
●版本2: My mind is like a foggy haze,making it hard to figure things out, and it leaves me feeling really lost and alone.
●版本3:The inner confusion and bewilderment feel like being envelopedby a thick fog, leaving me unable to find any clarity,accompanied by a profound sense of helplessness and loneliness.

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