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读后续写Ella的厨房讲义
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一
篇完整的短文。
A lady named Ella lived in a small, pretty town surrounded by gentle
hills and big, green forests. Her favorite place in the whole world
was her kitchen. It was like her special art studio, but for making
delicious food. Ella loved cooking, especially for her mom, who really
enjoyed old-fashioned, tasty dishes. Every night, they would sit down
together and enjoy the tasty food that Ella made with lots of care and
love.
一位名叫埃拉的女士住在一个美丽的小镇上，小镇周围是平缓的山丘
和绿色的大森林。她在全世界最喜欢的地方是她的厨房。这就像她特
别的艺术工作室，但为了制作美味的食物。埃拉喜欢烹饪，尤其是她
的妈妈，她非常喜欢老式美味的菜肴。每天晚上，他们都会坐在一起，
享受埃拉精心制作的美味食物。
Ella's mother always said, “Cooking is not just about feeding my
body; it's about feeding my soul." Ella kept these words close to her
heart, and cooking became a spiritual bond between her mother and
her. They shared joyful times, with Ella carefully measuring each
cooking material and making her mom's favorite while her mom told
stories of her own childhood kitchen adventures. On cold evenings,
they would laugh together as they added spices to a hearty stew, the
steam making the kitchen windows foggy and turning it into a warm,
comfortable place.、
埃拉的母亲总是说：“烹饪不仅仅是喂养我的身体；这是关于滋养我的
灵魂。“Ella把这些话记在心里，烹饪成为了她母亲和她之间的一种精
神纽带。他们分享了快乐的时光，Ella仔细地测量每一种烹饪材料，并
制作她母亲的最爱，而她的母亲则讲述了她童年时在厨房里的冒险故
事。在寒冷的夜晚，当他们在丰盛的炖菜中添加香料时，他们会一起
大笑，蒸汽使厨房获胜窗户雾蒙蒙的，把它变成了一个温暖舒适的地
方。
However, this bond was broken when her mother passed away. The
kitchen, once filled with warmth, the smell of spices and the sound of
laughter, turned into a place that just reminded Ella of her mom and
made her very sad. She avoided the recipe books, as they brought
back memories of their cooking sessions - like the time they
accidentally used salt instead of sugar in cookies, but ended up
laughing it off and making it once again together. With her mom
gone, the joy of cooking faded, leaving Ella with a heart heavy with
loss.
然而，当她的母亲去世时，这种联系被打破了。厨房曾经充满了温暖、
香料的味道和笑声，现在变成了一个让埃拉想起母亲、让她非常难过
的地方。她避开了食谱，因为它们让人回想起了他们的烹饪过程——
比如有一次他们不小心在饼干中用了盐而不是糖，但最终却一笑而过，
再次一起制作。妈妈走了，做饭的乐趣也消失了，留下埃拉一颗失落
的心。
Months turned into years, and Ella's interest in cooking faded into a
distant memory. But life had other plans for her. One day, Ella came
across a volunteer group that attended to seniors in her community.
Moved by their dedication, she decided to join them.
几个月变成了几年，埃拉对烹饪的兴趣逐渐消失在遥远的记忆中。但
她的生活另有安排。有一天，埃拉遇到了一个志愿者团体，为她所在
社区的老年人服务。被他们的奉献精神所感动，她决定加入他们。
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
As Ella spent more time with the seniors, she noticed their longing
for home-cooked meals.________
Ella finally found herself on the path to recovery and
rediscovery.________
文本分析：
故事大意——Ella 非常热爱在厨房做出美味的食物，这里是她的天堂。
她和妈妈一边做饭一边回忆小时候的趣事，做饭成为母女俩密切联系
的纽带。然后母亲去世后，一切都变了。她不再想去厨房，甚至躲避
去想厨房里发生的事。有一天，Ella遇到了一个志愿者团体，为她所在
社区的老年人服务，她决定加入他们。
续写情节发展：
第一段--老人们对家的思念寄托在饭上--做饭的快乐再次被唤醒--老人
们回忆过往美食会喜笑颜开--Ella开始重新进入厨房，续写妈妈的传奇。
第二段---Ella 逐渐治愈自己--她的厨房重新充满饭菜的香味，散发出活
力--当她将做好的饭提供给老人，感到内心的平静和满足--升华主题。
参考范文一：
As Ella spent more time with the seniors, she noticed their
longing for home-cooked meals. This sparked a realization within her:
the joy of cooking was not only tied to her memories with her
mother but could also bring happiness to others. The seniors would
light up as they shared stories of their own cherished recipes and the
comfort those dishes brought them. Their enthusiasm slowly began to
light Ella's passion for cooking. She started to see the kitchen not just
as a place of sorrow, but as a space where she could continue her
mother's legacy by sharing love through food.
Ella finally found herself on the path to recovery and rediscovery.
She began experimenting with recipes, combining her mother's old-
fashioned dishes with new flavors and techniques. Soon, her kitchen
was once again filled with the fragrance of spices and the sound of
laughter. Cooking became a way for Ella to honor her mother's
memory and extend the warmth and comfort she had always provided.
As she served her homemade meals to the seniors, Ella felt a sense
of peace and purpose. By connecting with the past through cooking
and reaching out to others, she was able to heal her heart and find
comfort in the simple act of sharing a meal.
参考范文二：
As Ella spent more time with the seniors, she noticed their
longing for home-cooked meals. This sparked a memory of the
happiness she once experienced in her kitchen, cooking for her
beloved mother. Resolute to bring back that joy, Ella decided to start
sharing her cooking skills with the elderly community members. She
began by cooking simple, nutritious meals and organizing gatherings
where everyone could enjoy the comfort of a warm, lovingly prepared
meal.
Ella finally found herself on the path to recovery and rediscovery.
Gradually, her heart began to heal as she witnessed the joy her
cooking brought to others. The once sad memories transformed into
cherished moments of the past. Her kitchen regained its warmth, now
filled with the laughter of the seniors, who shared their own stories
and recipes, creating new bonds and experiences. Through her act of
kindness, not only did Ella reconnect with her love for cooking, but
she also realized that feeding souls was indeed the true essence of her
passion.
参考范文三
As Ella spent more time with the seniors, she noticed their
longing for home-cooked meals and the warmth that came with them.
Their eyes would light up at the mention of certain dishes, and they
often shared stories of their own kitchen memories. It reminded Ella
of the bond she had with her mother and the joy they shared in the
kitchen. Despite her initial hesitation, she found herself drawn to the
idea of cooking again, not just for herself but also for others who
craved the comfort of homemade food.
Ella finally found herself on the path to recovery and rediscovery.
Inspired by the seniors she volunteered with, she decided to slowly
ease back into cooking. Starting with simple recipes, she found solace
in the familiar motions of chopping, stirring, and seasoning. With each
meal she prepared, she felt a sense of connection to her mother and
the joy they once shared. Cooking for others became her way of
honoring her mother's memory while also bringing comfort to those in
need. In the process, Ella discovered that the kitchen, once a place of
sorrow, could once again be filled with love, laughter, and the aroma
of delicious food.

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