2023-2024学年高二下学期期中考试作文复习讲义素材

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2023-2024学年高二下学期期中考试作文复习讲义素材

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主题:Journey across a vast land
Writing an email
Imagine that you are Li Daiyu. Using the map and your note write an email to your parents telling them about your trip.
(text type; tense;person;structure;content;connector;language)
* How do you write an email to your parents
What impressed you most during the journey
What did you see,hear,do and how did you feel
What order would you follow when describing the journey
【范文】
Dear Mom and Dad,
Thank you so much for allowing me to go on this journey! It has been a wonderful trip so far.
We first spent two days in Vancouver where we took a boat to the bay, saw splendid mountains by hiking and visited an island with elegant shops. In the shops, the crafts and antiques were so attractive that I bought some for you. Passing through the Canadian Rockies, we took the train to Lake Louise which was so massive and exceptionally splendid. Taking a coach to Jasper allowed me to see the spectacular mountain peaks and a large number of creatures. Then we took the train to Edmonton, Winnipeg and Ontario and we we had a good view of rolling hills, fantastic landscape and iconic maple trees in different colors. At last, we reached Toronto with excitement.
It has been a great trip, filling us with so many happy memories.
主题:adversity and courage
假设你是一名高中生,你的朋友tom最近经历了学习上的挑战,请你写一封建议信,和他分享逆境和勇气的重要性。
【范文】
Dear Tom,
I am sorry to hear that you are facing challenges in your studies. I want you to know that you are not alone.
Everyone faces challenges in life, and it is how we respond to them that defines us. It is important to remember that adversity can be an opportunity for growth and learning. When we face challenges, we develop resilience and perseverance, which are important qualities for success in life.
I encourage you to stay positive and keep working hard. Remember that every challenge is an opportunity to learn and grow. You can do this!
Best regards, Yours
主题:Healthy lifestyle
假定你校将举办一场题为“如何健康生活”的英语演讲比赛,你参加报名了比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿。
Honorable judges and dear fellow students, good afternoon!
It's a great pleasure for me to stand here and give you a short speech on the topic of How to live healthily .As the saying goes”Health is wealth” To live healthily is very important for all of us. Here is some advice on how to live healthily.
Firstly,you should have a healthy diet. It's necessary to eat enough fresh fruit and vegetables. But don't eat anything too fatty or sweet. Breakfast can provide you with energy, so you mustn't go to work or school without breakfast.Secondly,you should have good living habits. Doing exercise regularly is a good way to keep you fit. Enough sleep is also necessary after a day's work or study.
Follow this advice, and you will live healthily and happily.
Thank you very much for your attention!
主题:environmental protection
近年来,我国大部分地区遭受雾霾侵袭,造成这一现象的主要原因是工厂排出的废气和汽车尾气等,低碳、环保已成为当今时代的主题,从我们身边的小事做起,保护环境。现请以“Let's Do Something to Save Our Environment”为题,写一篇短文。
Let's Do Something to save Our Environment
We all live on the earth. The earth is our home. We have only one earth. We must take care of it. If we harm it, we will have a terrible end. There are three problems in our earth, which are pollution,disaster and illness.
It's our duty to protect our environment. So everyone should do something to save our environment. First, we should save every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water. For example, we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water.Second, we should save energy, such as turning off the lights when we leave, doing more walking, more bicycling and less driving and so on. Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories
.Let's act now to save our environment. If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the earth will become much more beautiful.
读后续写
主题:first aid
“Ada! Milk!” Mama called.
Milk. It was Ada’s turn to get it. Ada sighed and shut her first-aid book. Her head hurt from reading in the dim morning light, but how else was she going to learn
Ada tied the cow close to a tree. Somewhere down the mountain, some volunteer doctors were teaching medical skills to village nurses. Ada heard Betty drive off hours ago. “She should have taken me with her. She thinks I’m too young, but she’s wrong. I am already 16!” Ada thought.
Ada carried the milk back to Mama, then wandered up the road. Roy, a village boy, had gotten a donkey, and some kids had gathered around to see it. Roy was always doing something to get attention. Like now: he was trying to stand on the animal’s bare back.
“No wonder they don’t trust kids with anything important”, Ada thought, sighing. She had just turned away when she heard a thud and a few screams. Roy lay on the ground nearby moaning in pain. The donkey stood several meters away. “Roy!” The kids nearby ran towards him. “Get Betty,” one said. Ada shook her head. “Betty’s gone to the city.” The other kids seemed frozen in place.
Ada ran to where Roy was lying. She dropped to her knees on the dusty road. “Roy! Can you hear me ” Roy moaned in agony. Ada saw that one of his legs was crooked, bent a little sideways between the knee and the ankle. A broken leg!
She remembered what the first-aid book had said about broken legs: if there is no ambulance, straighten the bone before moving the victim. There certainly wouldn’t be any ambulance here. Ada looked back up the road. The other kids were still standing there, watching. “Victor!” Ada called to one of the boys. “Go get Roy’s mama, and find someone with a truck.” She turned to the others. “Give me your shirts. We need something to tie his leg with.”
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Ada then found a strong stick, which she would use to keep his leg straight._
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The next day, Betty came to Ada’s home.
[范文]
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Ada then found a strong stick, which she would use to keep his leg straight. She gently explained what she was going to do then carefully wrapped the shirts around Roy’s leg and the stick. Roy cried out in pain. “I know it hurts,” Ada said softly. “But this will hold it still until you get to the hospital.” When Ada was done, she looked up and saw Roy’s mama watching from a few meters away. Behind her was a neighbor in a pickup truck. When Ada stepped away, Roy’s mama ran over and held Roy’s face in her hands. “Thank you, Ada,” she said. Ada helped them lift Roy into the truck, then they drove down the hillside towards the hospital.
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The next day, Betty came to Ada’s home. “I heard what you did,” Betty said. “You kept your head in an emergency. That’s an important skill.” Ada’s face turned red. “I was afraid ...” Betty shook her head. “It’s OK for a nurse to be afraid, as long as she has a clear head. The volunteer doctors are coming tomorrow with vaccines. We need some more hands. Can you help ” “I’d love to.” Ada replied at once. “Come early, then. There is a lot to learn.” Ada smiled. “I’ll bring my first-aid book.”
主题2:环境保护类
One morning on my way to school, noticed an elderly woman dressed in a yellow vest (马 甲)carrying a garbage bag and one of those rubbish claws (爪形器具)."What's that lady doing " I asked mum. "Vest Lady. She just picks up rubbish around here for fun," mum said. "Why would someone think picking up rubbish looking like a construction worker is fun " I puzzled.
For several years I'd witness this mysterious Vest Lady—rain or shine — on my way to school. I had thought she was crazy for picking up rubbish. Eventually I smiled and waved at her each time I saw her. Later, I moved to high school. The time I saw rubbish here and there I felt really annoyed. Then I'd think, "Why isn't anyone picking up this rubbish People are so inconsiderate I" However, shortly after, I realized picking up the rubbish was not someone ease's problem.
Now I couldn't walk past litter without feeling guilty. I volunteered to clean up rubbish around our school. Strange as it might sound, picking up litter was kind of a thrill for me! In fact, I was so determined that for my 17th birthday I bought myself a rubbish claw, reusable gloves and a reflective safety yellow vest with my own name on it.
During my first attempt in my stylish equipment, met with unfriendly looks from others as if I were a criminal doing community service. One day,I had an epiphany(顿悟):"I'm acting just like Vest Lady!"
But there was too much rubbish around, cigarette ends littered about, cans rolling on the street,pieces of paper hidden in the grass and plastic. alone was too weak J How would I get more volunteers involved in rubbish removal A smart idea flashed into my mind.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Soon I created my website go picking up com.
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More and more people on vests with their own names.
【答案】Soon I created my website go. picking . On the website I launched a rubbish removal campaign. I described my purpose-calling on volunteers to pick up rubbish. I posted pictures of rubbish littered about on the website,which could not only illustrate the severe situation but also show that a large number of volunteers were in great need. Besides, I shared the story of Vest Lady who influenced me so much. Surprisingly, my website gradually became a big hit on the internet.
More and more people put on vests with their own names. Volunteers could be seen picking up rubbish in their spare time. The yellow vests made beautiful scenery in the park or on the street. With our joint efforts, the environment became better and better. What delighted me most was that people's awareness of environmental protection was improved. The rubbish removal campaign was a big success. Thanks to Vest Lady who rooted the sense of environmental protection in my mind, more people became Vest Lady.
【分析】
本文以时间为线索展开,讲述了作者受到“马甲女士”的影响自己也开始穿着反光黄色安全背心捡垃圾,但是作者很快意识到一个人的力量是不够的,于是作者想到创建网站来号召更多的志愿者加入到清除垃圾的行动中来,获得了巨大的成功。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“很快我就创建了自己的网站go. picking 。”可知,第一段可描写作者如何通过网站来号召更多的志愿者加入到清除垃圾的行动中来。
②由第二段首句内容“越来越多的人穿上印有自己名字的背心。”可知,第二段可描写很多志愿者加入清除垃圾的行动,环境得到了很大改善,人们的环保意识也得到了提高。
2.续写线索:
发起运动——号召——成为热门——改善——成功——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①描述:describe/depict②阐释:illustrate/clarify③影响:influence/affect
情绪类①惊讶:surprisingly/amazingly②高兴:delight/please
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I posted pictures of rubbish littered about on the website, which could not only illustrate the severe situation but also show that a large number of volunteers were in great need. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和“not only...but also...”固定句式)
[高分句型2] What delighted me most was that people's awareness of environmental protection was improved. (运用了that引导的表语从句和what引导的主语从句)
主题3:志愿服务
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
I was a volunteer for an organization at the beginning of this year. The organization is aimed at helping children who suffer from cancer. One day, we were asked to raise money for cancer research and programme funding at an event.
Since my friend Lisa was also a volunteer for the organization, I went to the event with her. There were many people at the event. After seeing our poster, some people came to us and talked with us. But few people donated money. It was a bit hot that day. Both Lisa and I got really upset.
Half an hour later, Lisa started complaining, “I don’t think we can raise much money today.”
“Don’t worry. The event lasts for three hours. There is still a lot of time left,” I said, though I also thought poorly of our plan to raise much money that day.
While Lisa and I were talking, a little boy of about eight years old came to us. He stood in front of our poster and started reading.
After a while, he asked, “What is cancer ”
I explained what cancer is. Then I said, “Many people around the world are suffering from cancer. It can be really dangerous. More research is needed to learn about it so that people with it can suffer less. That’s why we’re collecting money for it.”
“Do children suffer from cancer, too ” asked the boy.
“Yes. Many children suffer from cancer. Some of them may die. They need help,” Lisa said and I nodded.
Hearing that, the boy became sad. Then the boy asked, “How much money have you collected ”
Both Lisa and I were embarrassed to tell him that we didn’t raise much money. At last, we said, “Not much.”
The boy looked into our donation container and only saw a few one-dollar and five-dollar bills. The boy said nothing after seeing that and left. Then some girls came to us and we started talking with them. Neither Lisa nor I thought the boy would return. However, about twenty minutes later, the boy did return.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
The boy happily ran to us and asked, “Would you take a donation from children ”
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Paragraph 2:
Both Lisa and I were deeply touched.
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前情概要:本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了今年年初,我是一个组织的志愿者。该组织旨在帮助患有癌症的儿童。有一天,我们在一个活动中被要求为癌症研究和项目筹资。我没有筹到太多钱,一个男孩过来问了很多问题,然后走了。我们都认为男孩不会回来。然而,大约二十分钟后,男孩确实回来了的故事。
情节预测:第一段:由第一段首句内容“男孩高兴地跑过来问我们:“你们愿意接受孩子们的捐赠吗 ””可知,第一段可描写男孩想通过捐赠帮助患癌症的孩子们。
第二段: 由第二段首句内容“丽莎和我都深受感动。”可知,第二段可描写作者和丽莎深受鼓舞,筹集了更多的资金。
续写线索:怀疑——捐赠——感动——鼓舞
例文:
he boy happily ran to us and asked, “Would you take a donation from children ” Lisa and I looked at each other. We couldn’t believe such a little boy would care. Though we didn’t believe it, we said “yes”. The boy put his hand in his pocket and took out some five-dollar bills. He said, “I just asked for them from my mother. I really want to help the children suffering from cancer.”
Both Lisa and I were deeply touched. We thanked the boy, but he left soon. Looking at his back, both Lisa and I were greatly encouraged. We wanted to try harder to raise money. So instead of just standing there, we went to people and told them about our programme. At the end of the day, we raised over three thousand dollars, a lot more than Lisa and I had expected in the beginning.
素材积累:①.取出:take out/extract②.帮助:help/assist③.离开:leave/depart
佳句解析:①I really want to help the children suffering from cancer.(运用了现在分词作后置定语)
②Looking at his back, both Lisa and I were greatly encouraged.((运用了现在分词作状语)

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