2024届高三英语读后续写生活故事类--一次友好令人愉悦的旅程 学案(含答案)

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2024届高三英语读后续写生活故事类--一次友好令人愉悦的旅程 学案(含答案)

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Magic Bus
I was travelling on an overnight bus from Kolhapur to Aurangabad in Maharashtra. This was way back in May 1972, when I was still in college. The bus — an ordinary, nonair-conditioned one — was more than packed; all 55 seats were occupied and there were some 20 people standing in the aisle (过道). The hot day added to the discomfort of the rough, 10-hour journey. Because I was travelling on a student bus pass, I could not claim a reserved seat. I had no option but to stand — quite uncomfortably.
我乘坐通宵巴士从Kolhapur前往马哈拉施特拉邦的奥兰加巴德。这要追溯到1972年5月,当时我还在上大学。这辆公共汽车是一辆普通的、没有空调的公共汽车,车上挤满了人;55个座位都坐满了,过道里站着大约20人(过道). 炎热的一天增加了10个小时艰难旅程的不适感。因为我乘坐的是学生巴士通行证,所以我无法预订座位。我别无选择,只能站着——非常不舒服。
The bus started its journey a little later than scheduled. The passengers seated comfortably by the windows wore happy expressions as they looked at the outside world, the breeze kissing their faces. The people seated by the aisle complained about the standing ones, who had no option but to occasionally lean on the seat corners. The air inside was hot and filled with strange, unpleasant smells. Some enthusiastic travellers had carried small transistor radios with the slim hope that they would be able to listen to some music on the way.
公共汽车比预定时间晚了一点开始行驶。舒适地坐在窗户旁的乘客们看着外面的世界,脸上洋溢着幸福的表情,微风亲吻着他们的脸。坐在过道旁的人抱怨那些站着的人,他们别无选择,只能偶尔靠在座位的角落里。里面的空气很热,充满了奇怪、难闻的气味。一些热情的旅行者携带着小型晶体管收音机,希望他们能在路上听一些音乐。
After around two very long hours, I was beyond exhausted and bored. I kept trying to balance myself, shifting my body weight from one leg to the other to manage the discomfort. After another long hour, I was wet with sweat in the noise and shaky rhythm of the bus. I suddenly sensed a soft hand tapping my elbow (手肘), asking for attention. Turning around, I found a middle-aged man with a kind smile looking up at me. He suddenly stood up and said I could take his seat for some time. I was pleasantly surprised and immediately accepted his offer, my entire body heaving a sigh of relief. The man, whose seat I was in, stood next to me, looking around in amusement. After about 20 minutes, I signalled him to take back his space. A man, who was sitting by the window on the other side of the bus, had observed our exchange.
经过大约两个漫长的小时,我已经筋疲力尽,感到无聊。我一直在努力平衡自己,把体重从一条腿转移到另一条腿,以控制不适。又过了一个漫长的小时,我在公共汽车的噪音和摇晃的节奏中汗流浃背。我突然感觉到一只柔软的手在轻拍我的肘部(手肘), 请求关注。转过身来,我发现一个中年男子,面带和蔼的微笑,抬头看着我。他突然站起来,说我可以在他的座位上坐一会儿。我感到惊喜,立即接受了他的提议,全身松了一口气。我坐在他座位上的那个男人站在我旁边,开心地环顾四周。大约20分钟后,我示意他收回空位。坐在公共汽车另一边窗户边的一个人观察了我们的交流。
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just then, something magical happened.
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The bus reached its destination in the early hours of the morning.
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解 析
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者乘坐一辆通宵大巴从Kolhapur前往Maharashtra的Aurangabad,那是一辆普通的、没有空调的公共汽车,车上挤满了人,55个座位都坐满了,有20多人站在过道上,炎热的天气使10个小时的艰难旅程更加不适,由于作者不能预留座位,只能不舒服地站着。过了大约两个漫长的小时后,作者感到非常疲惫。后来一位中年男子把自己的座位让出来给作者坐,作者又惊又喜,接受了邀请。大约20分钟后,作者示意他坐回自己的座位,坐在汽车另一边靠窗的一个男人看到了作者和那位男士的谈话。
1. 段落续写:
(1)第一段首句内容“就在这时,神奇的事情发生了。”可知,第一段描写坐着的人把座位让给站着的人并且大家愉快地聊天。
(2)第二段首句内容“公共汽车在凌晨到达了目的地。”可知,第二段描写作者到达目的地的感受。
2.续写线索:
自发让座——开始聊天——分享笑话——阳光照进来——下车告别——感悟
对美的认识和感受。在我们周围,在人与人的接触交往中,让我们思考何为美、何为丑。
高 分 作 文
Just then, something magical happened. Our observer spontaneously stood up and offered his seat to another standing man, who had been leaning on the seat corner for quite some time. All of a sudden, we had triggered a chain reaction: This game of seat-sharing spread through the bus like wildfire and, before long, almost all the standees got a chance to be seated. More surprisingly, people even started chatting with each other while exchanging positions, and soon began sharing jokes and humming to the lovely melody played by the radio. Needless to say, the rest of the journey was quite enjoyable.
The bus reached its destination in the early hours of the morning. A burst of first sunshine sent a beam of amber light through the window, lighting up people’s heart. The cool breeze of early morning blew away the fatigue and weariness, refreshing the minds and bodies. Immersed in this relaxing and friendly atmosphere, the groups bid farewell warmly, got off the bus and went their way. As I stood there soaking in the early morning light, I was reminded of an important life lesson — that we can all share what we have, including our burdens, and help our co-passengers in this journey called life.
默写版:
Just then, something magical happened. ____________________________________
______________________我们的观察者自发地站起来,把座位让给另一个站着的人,他已经靠在座位角上很长一段时间了. All of a sudden,____________________
_________________我们引发了连锁反应 : This game of seat-sharing spread through the bus like wildfire and, before long, almost all the standees got a chance to be seated._______________________
_________________________________________________________更令人惊讶的是,人们甚至开始在交换位置的同时互相聊天,很快就开始分享笑话,并随着收音机播放的优美旋律哼唱 .__________________自不必说, the rest of the journey was quite enjoyable.
The bus reached its destination in the early hours of the morning. _______________
_________________________________________________________第一缕阳光透过窗户射出一束琥珀色的光,照亮了人们的心. The cool breeze of early morning blew away the fatigue and weariness, refreshing the minds and bodies.___________
________________________________________________________________沉浸在这种轻松友好的氛围中,一行人热情地告别,下车上路 . As I stood there soaking in the early morning light, _________________________________________
____________________________________________________________我想起了一个重要的人生教训——我们都可以分享我们所拥有的,包括我们的负担,并在这段被称为生命的旅程中帮助我们的同伴.

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