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Unit9
I like music that I can dance to.
Writing Name
Analyze the topic
Writing Topic
一部好的电影可以触动灵魂，给人以精神力量。假如你是李华，你的美国朋友 Mike 想请你谈谈你喜欢的电影。请根据Mike的来信，给他写一封100词左右的回信。格式已给出，不计入总词数。
To:LiHua@
Dear Li Hua,
How are you doing these days Recently, I have watched a movie that makes me think a lot.What kind of movies do you prefer Why do you like this kind of movie Could you share your favorite movie with me Why do you like it and how does it make you feel
Look forward to your reply.
Mile
写作要求：
1.开头以给出，不计入总字数。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
3.不少于100词。
Person：
Tense：
Text：
Details
Reader：
II. What aspects(方面) and sentences structure can we write to introduce a movie
aspects Sentences
III. Make an outline
Structure：
________________________________________________________________________________________
IV. Finish the first draft
Dear Mike,
I’m fine these days.
V. Finish the second draft
Dear Mike,
I’m fine these days.(共11张PPT)
Unit9
I like music that I can dance to.
Writing (3a-3c)
Pre-writing:Activity 1
Writing Topic
To:LiHua@
Dear Li Hua,
How are you doing these days Recently, I have watched a movie that makes me think a lot.What kind of movies do you prefer Why do you like this kind of movie Could you share your favorite movie with me Why do you like it and how does it make you feel
Look forward to your reply.
Mike
一部好的电影可以触动灵魂，给人以精神力量。假如你是李华，你的美国朋友 Mike 想请你谈谈你喜欢的电影。请根据Mike的来信，给他写一封100词左右的回信。格式已给出，不计入总词数。
要求：
1.短文不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息；
2.书写规范，100词左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Pre-writing:Activity 2
Analyze the writing topic
Person
The first /third person
Tense
The simple present tense
Text
An e-mail
Reader
Mike
What aspects(方面) can we write to introduce a movie
Details
1.Introduce your favorite movie
2.100 words
Pre-writing:Activity 3
Favorite movie
3
name/plot
What’s the name of your favorite movie
What is the movie about
1
kind
What kind of movie do you prefer
2
reason
Why do you like this kind of movie
6
recommendation
Why do you think others should watch this movie
4
reason
Why do you like this movie
5
feeling
How does the movie make you feel
What aspects(方面) can we write to introduce a movie
Pre-writing:Activity 3
Favorite movie
3
name/plot
My favorite movie is ...It is about...It is directed by...
1
kind
I prefer ...among all kinds of movies.
2
reason
The reason is that I like movies that/which...
6
recommendation
I think it is worth watching because...
4
reason
I like it best because the charactors/music/dialogs...
5
feeling
When I watch it, it makes me feel...
What sentences can we write to introduce a movie
Pre-writing:Activity 4
Beginning
favorite movie/reasons/contents/feelings
Body
Ending
Structure
favorite kind/reasons
name/plot/reasons/feelings
recommendation
Write a passage in 15 minutes
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已开始计时
时间到
While-Writing
a clear structure:beginning,body,ending.
correct content: (favorite kind/reasons/favorite movie/plot/reasons/feeling/recommendation)
some conjunction words and transitional sentences
some good sentences
no spelling mistakes
a clear and tidy hand writing
no wrong sentences
enough words
Structure
and
content
Grammar and language
Post-writing:Activity 1
Post-writing:Activity 1
Spelling mistakes
Wrong sentences &Punctuation mistakes
Good sentences
Conjunction words
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Check the composition
Post-writing:Activity 2
Work in groups,correct the mistakes and appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation(标点)
6. language(语言)
7. fluency(流畅度)
Post-writing:Activity 3
Dear Mike,
I prefer cartoons among all kind of movies.The reason is that I like to watch movies that can help me forget sadness and make me relaxed.
Of all the cartoons ,I like 30,000 Miles in Chang An best.It is about the lives and friendship of poets such as Li Bai , Gao Shi and others from Gao Shi’s view. At the same time,it also tells the ups and downs of Tang dynasty. I like it very much because there are many poems I like in this movie. When I watched this movie, I felt deeply moved by these wonderful poems which give me confidence.
It is such an amazing experience and journey that I have watched it twice. So if you are a fan of Tang culture, it is worth watching .
Li HuaMarking ladders
Unit9 I like music that I can dance to.
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have showed .my favorite kind and reasons (1 point)
Para_____: I have written the name of my favorite movie/plot/the reason why I like it/feeling (3 points)
Para.____:I have showed recommendation (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language My expressions are right. (3 points)
There are spelling mistakes. (1 point)
I have used some good sentences. (2 point)
I have used some conjunction words and transitional sentences.. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time

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