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When we think of children's drawings, they often strike us as whimsical (异想天开的), playful, and not always the most realistic. A drawing by a young girl in Clearfield, Utah, however, will become a reality through her determination, creativity and the help of her city's Parks & Recreation department.
Eleven-year-old Lucy is fond of drawing. One day, she was drawing in a neighborhood playground and her younger sister was playing with their parents. Suddenly, her sister fell down and cried because of the unreasonable design of the playground. Luckily, her younger sister wasn't injured.
So at that time Lucy was eager to make a plan for designing a new neighborhood playground, hoping it would be safer for her younger sister and others to play on in the future.
With only a piece of paper, a box of crayons, and her imagination and creativity, she drew the design for her dream playground. Only half an hour later, she finished her painting with a brand-new design of the playground. What an amazing design! And her colorful sketches (素描) feature a slide, a rock wall, and a rope climb, which would catch the attention of any people.
After finishing her drawing, she showed her painting to her parents and told them that it would be wonderful if that could come true. Her parents were surprised at her amazing and creative painting with the reasonable design of the neighborhood playground.
“After hearing what you said and seeing your initiative and detail, I was wondering how we can make your dream happen, ” her father said to Lucy.
“A new neighborhood playground for the park right by our house will be built, and our city's Parks & Recreation department is asking for a new design for the playground on the Internet, ” her mother said.
“Wow, wonderful! But how can we show my drawing to the department Can we take a photo and send it by email ” Lucy asked.
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“Yes! Photo, email! I know how to do it, ” her father said with a smile.
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A few days later, there was an email with good news from the department.
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文章大意
通常儿童画作充满奇思妙想且不太写实，但犹他州克利尔菲尔德市一个 11 岁女孩露西的画作却有望成为现实。露西热爱绘画，一天在社区操场画画时，妹妹因操场不合理设计摔倒哭泣，虽未受伤，却让露西萌生设计新操场的想法。她仅用一张纸、一盒蜡笔，凭借想象力和创造力，半小时就完成了梦想操场的设计图，上面有滑梯、攀岩墙和绳索攀爬设施，色彩丰富、设计合理。她把画拿给父母看并表达希望成真的想法，父母对她的创意和细节感到惊讶，母亲还告知市里公园与娱乐部门正在网上征集新操场设计方案。
故事山分析
开端：露西在社区操场画画，妹妹因操场设计不合理摔倒，引发露西设计新操场的想法。
发展：露西凭借想象力和创造力，很快完成梦想操场设计图，展示给父母，父母惊讶并告知市里征集设计方案一事。
高潮：父亲表示知道如何通过拍照、发邮件将设计图提交给相关部门，大家满怀期待等待回应。
结局（待续写）：部门回复邮件带来好消息，露西的设计被采纳，新操场开始建设，露西和家人的反应以及后续故事发展。
伏笔及在续写中的回应
露西的设计图充满创意和细节：在续写中，这成为设计被采纳的关键因素，相关部门对设计图的细节和创意给予高度评价，认可其可行性和趣味性。
父母对露西设计的惊讶与支持：在后续故事中，父母会积极参与到新操场建设的相关事宜中，如陪露西参加与部门的沟通会议，见证梦想成真的过程。
市里公园与娱乐部门征集新操场设计方案：这是故事发展的重要契机，在续写中，部门对露西的设计图做出回应，推动故事走向高潮，即设计被采纳或提出修改意见。
露西对新操场设计的渴望和决心：在得知设计图可能被提交后，露西满心期待，在收到好消息后，她会更加积极地参与到新操场建设的讨论中，如提出更多关于操场设施的想法。
妹妹因操场设计摔倒：新操场建成后，妹妹和其他孩子能在安全有趣的环境中玩耍，与前文摔倒情节形成对比，体现露西设计的意义。
续写要点
第一段：详细描述父亲拍照、发送邮件的过程，以及露西和家人等待回复期间的心情，如焦急、期待等，还可描述露西对设计被采纳的美好憧憬。
第二段：重点描写收到好消息时，露西和家人的反应，如兴奋、欢呼、拥抱等。接着讲述新操场建设过程中露西参与的情况，以及新操场建成后给社区带来的积极变化。
情感线
起初露西因妹妹摔倒而产生设计新操场的决心，完成设计图后满怀期待，提交设计图后焦急等待，收到好消息时极度兴奋，参与新操场建设过程中充满自豪，情感从坚定的决心逐渐转变为成功的喜悦和自豪，不断升华。
故事线
操场意外线：妹妹在操场因不合理设计摔倒，引发露西设计新操场的想法。
设计完成线：露西凭借想象和创造力完成梦想操场设计图。
提交设计线：父亲帮忙拍照、发邮件提交设计图。
等待回复线：露西和家人焦急等待部门回复。
好消息降临线：收到部门采纳设计的好消息。
新操场建设线：新操场开始建设，露西参与其中，建成后给社区带来积极影响。
主旨升华句
A child's imagination and determination can transform a simple idea into a real - world improvement, just as Lucy's design turned a dream playground into a reality.（一个孩子的想象力和决心可以将一个简单的想法转化为现实世界的改善，就像露西的设计将梦想中的操场变成了现实。）
In the face of challenges, a spark of creativity can light the way to positive change, as Lucy's creative design did for the neighborhood playground.（面对挑战时，一丝创造力的火花可以照亮积极改变的道路，就像露西富有创意的设计为社区操场所做的那样。）
When we combine our passion with action, we can achieve remarkable things, as Lucy's passion for a better playground led to its construction.（当我们将热情与行动相结合时，我们可以取得非凡的成就，就像露西对更好操场的热情促成了它的建设。）
A small act of initiative can have a far - reaching impact, just as Lucy's initiative to design a playground brought joy and safety to the community.（一个小小的主动行为可以产生深远的影响，就像露西主动设计操场为社区带来了欢乐和安全。）
The story of Lucy reminds us that every dream, no matter how big or small, has the potential to come true if we have the courage to pursue it.（露西的故事提醒我们，每一个梦想，无论大小，只要我们有勇气去追求，都有可能实现。）
写作示范
示范一
“Yes! Photo, email! I know how to do it, ” her father said with a smile. Immediately, he took out his phone and carefully took several clear pictures of Lucy's drawing from different angles. Lucy watched nervously, her eyes fixed on the phone screen, as if she could see the future of her dream playground through it. After that, her father composed an email, attaching the pictures and briefly explaining Lucy's intention. They sent it out, and then the long wait began. Every day, Lucy would ask her father if there was a reply, and her heart sank a little with each negative answer, but her hope never died.
A few days later, there was an email with good news from the department. When Lucy's father opened the email and read the content, he let out a loud cheer. “Lucy, they love your design! They want to meet you to discuss the details!” Lucy jumped up and down in excitement, her eyes shining with joy. Soon, Lucy and her parents went to the department. In the following months, Lucy actively participated in the construction process, offering more ideas. Finally, the new playground was completed. Children in the neighborhood flocked to it, laughing and playing, and Lucy felt a great sense of pride.
示范二
“Yes! Photo, email! I know how to do it, ” her father said with a smile. He carefully adjusted the lighting to ensure the drawing was clearly captured. Lucy stood beside him, her hands clasped tightly, filled with anticipation. Once the email was sent, the whole family was on tenterhooks. Lucy even had dreams about the playground being built. She imagined children having fun on the slide and climbing the rock wall safely.
A few days later, there was an email with good news from the department. As soon as Lucy saw the subject line, she screamed with excitement. The department not only praised her creativity but also said they would start the construction according to her design. Lucy was invited to the groundbreaking ceremony. During the construction, she visited the site regularly, watching her dream gradually take shape. When the playground was finally open, it became the most popular place in the neighborhood. Lucy's name was remembered by everyone as the one who made this wonderful place possible.
【答案】One possible version:
“Yes! Photo, email! I know how to do it,” her father said with a smile. He took a clear photo of Lucy’s brilliant drawing and helped her craft a concise email to the Parks & Recreation department. Together, they carefully worded the message to convey Lucy’s passion and the practicality of her design. They eagerly sent off the email, hopes high and fingers crossed, sharing Lucy’s vision with the city officials who could make it a reality.
A few days later, there was an email with good news from the department. Lucy and her family gathered around the computer, excitement bubbling in the air. The department praised Lucy’s creativity and thoughtful design. They were thrilled to announce that Lucy’s playground design would serve as the blueprint for the new playground project. Overjoyed, Lucy couldn’t contain her excitement, imagining her younger sister and all the neighborhood children playing safely on the very playground she had dreamt and designed.

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