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Unit 4 History and Traditions
Reading for Writing
learning objectives
To read a descriptive paragraph about Ireland.
To write about a place by describing different senses(感官） and using figures of speech(修辞）-- personification（拟人）.
Lead-in
How would you describe the landscapes in Ireland
beautiful
amazing
fascinating
breathtaking
impressive
charming
stunning
marvelous
beautiful
amazing
beautiful
amazing
fascinating
Emerald Isle
绿宝石岛
How would you describe the scenery in Ireland
What is the text mainly about according to the title and the given picture
Ireland’s beautiful scenery and traditions．
Prediction.
Introductory sentence
Ending sentence
Body(details)
Read for structure
Transitional Sentences
Read for details
What makes the Irish countryside exciting and inspiring
Its beauty and the way it offers something for each of the senses.
“The author uses ‘___________’ to describe the sense of sight/hearing/touch/smell/taste”
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The peaceful landscape(风景/景色) of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
Reading for Details – sentence 4
“绿宝石岛”风光宁静秀美，郡县草木葱茏，青山连绵起伏，牛羊点缀其中，堪称一场名副其实的盛宴。
a true feast for the eyes 视觉的盛宴
rolling green hills 连绵起伏的青山
be dotted with 布满；点缀着
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And down by the sea, the roar(咆哮) of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up(组成) the music of the coast.
Reading for Details – sentence 5
海边波浪咆哮，海鸟鸣叫，奏响了海岸交响乐。
the roar of the ocean waves 海浪的咆哮声
the cries of the seabirds 海鸟的叫声
music of the coast 海岸交响乐
a true feast for the eyes; rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle
Emerald Isle
down by the sea
the roar of the ocean waves, cries of the seabirds
hearing
sight
different scenes
personification
taste
a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew
relax with a glass of wine or a local beer
Read for Sensory Details
a true feast for the eyes; rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle
Emerald Isle
down by the sea
in the mountains
a village pub
the sun on the skin, sweet scent of fresh flowers,
birds’ morning songs
the roar of the ocean waves, cries of the seabirds
wine and local beer, delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew, traditional music and dancing
smell
taste
hearing
sight
touch
personification
personification
different scenes
hearing
Tips: How to describe a place
sight
hearing
smell
taste
touch
Figure of speech -- personification
skills
Sensory description
Bashan Middle School is a/an ____________________school.
charming/fascinating
Read for writing
To be the best Publicity Ambassador of our school
拔中最美宣传大使
Introductory sentence
Ending sentence
Body(details)
Read for structure
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How to make the article more organized
Describe a place
Introduction
Body
Ending
To make the reader eager to read your writing
A striking image
Something surprising
A quote or question
Transitions
Help the reader follow your ideas
Details and examples
Use sensory details.
Rhetoric devices (personification…)
Give examples.
Let the reader know that the passage ends.
Help the reader remember your writing.
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Writing
The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald IsIe” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
In the evening, the peaceful landscape of the campus is a true feast for the eyes, with the clear sky dotted with little stars
Micro-writing
blinking their eyes merrily,
as if they were delighted for the diligent students.
personification
sight
l. Does the writer start with an image, quote, or question
2. Is the description well-organised and easy to read
3. Has the writer included sensory details
4. Does the writer use specific words and give examples
5. Is the ending effective
6. Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes
assessment
Finish your article and then exchange drafts.
Use the checklists to give feedback on each other's draft.
example:
Our campus is so fascinating that it is a feast for the eyes while strolling（漫步） in it. You can feel the gentle breeze（微风） kissing your face, breathe in the scent of the flowers, and be bathed in the golden glow of the sunshine. Surrounded by green trees, the playground witnessed the collective spirit（协作精神）of students. The sounds of reading, cheers and laughter accompanied by the humming of the birds make up the music of youth. In the evening, the clear night sky is dotted with little stars blinking their eyes merrily, as if they were delighted for the diligent students, protecting the dreams of the students silently.
（pun 双关）
假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Adam要来中国旅行，请你写一封信向他推荐一个地方。内容要点如下：
1．推荐一处景点;
2．运用感官描写；
3. 表示欢迎。
可适当增添细节，80词左右。
Assignment
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How to make the article more organized
Describe a place
Introduction
Body
Ending
To make the reader eager to read your writing
A striking image
Something surprising
A quote or question
Transitions
Help the reader follow your ideas
Details and examples
Use sensory details.
Rhetoric devices (personification…)
Give examples.
Let the reader know that the passage ends.
Help the reader remember your writing.
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