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2024-2025学年第二学期七年级英语期中复习专练09 书面表达
解题技巧精讲
一、满分写作核心技巧
1.结构清晰
三段式结构：
开头（观点/主题句）→ 主体（2-3个论点+例子）→ 结尾（总结+升华）。
万能框架：
开头：Nowadays, … / It is widely believed that…
中间：Firstly, … Secondly, … What's more…
结尾：In a word, … / I hope…
2.语言升级
替换低级词汇：
good → excellent/beneficial
important → vital/crucial
like → enjoy/be fond of
多用复合句：
定语从句：This is the book that I borrowed from the library.
状语从句：If we work hard, we will achieve our dreams.
3.内容饱满
举例法：For example, … / Take… as an example.
数据法：According to a survey, 70% of students…
对比法：On the one hand… On the other hand…
4.避免硬伤
时态统一（记叙文用过去时，议论文用一般现在时）。
标点符号正确（句尾用句号，逗号后空格）。
字数达标（80-100词左右，宁多勿少）。
二、高频题型模板
1. 议论文（观点类）
题目：Should students use smartphones
模板：
> 开头：Smartphones have become a hot topic. Some people think…, while others believe…
> 主体：
> - Firstly, smartphones help us study (e.g. search information).
> - However, spending too much time on phones may harm our eyes.
> 结尾：In my opinion, we should use smartphones wisely.
2. 记叙文（故事类）
题目：An Unforgettable Experience
模板：
> 开头：I will never forget the day when…
> 主体：
> - What happened: One sunny afternoon,…
> - Feelings: I felt nervous at first, but…
> 结尾：This experience taught me that…
3. 应用文（书信/邮件）
题目：给笔友Tom写回信，介绍你的周末活动
模板：
> Dear Tom,
> How are you I’m writing to tell you about my last weekend.
> 内容：
> - On Saturday, I went hiking with my family.
> - On Sunday, I finished my homework and watched a movie.
> 结尾：I hope to hear from you soon!
> Yours,
> Li Hua
三、提分细节
开头结尾万能句：
开头：With the development of society…
结尾：Only in this way can we…
过渡词升级：
并列：not only… but also…
转折：however/actually
因果：as a result/therefore
卷面加分：
字迹工整，分段明确（每段空一行）。
用笔规范（黑色签字笔，勿涂改）。
单元话题精练
基础入门训练7篇
1．假设你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友Tony想了解你的家及你的社区。请根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件。
提示：
1. 你家的位置、房子类型、房间布局；
2. 你所在社区的情况(如：基础设施、环境、邻居等)
要求：
1. 包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
3. 80词左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to tell you something about my home and my community.
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I really love my home and my community. What about yours Write to me soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
2．中国传统服装越来越受年轻人的欢迎。假如《学习周报》正在以“Traditional Chinese Clothes”为主题举办征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
1. 介绍你最喜欢的中国传统服装（风格、材质······）；
2. 喜欢的理由；
3. 如何向全世界推广的建议。
In recent years, more and more young people would like to try traditional Chinese clothes. They become a new fashion.
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3．每个人都有自己的梦想家园。根据下列提示，设计你自己梦想的家园。不少于90词，可以适当发挥。
1. What is your dream home like
2. How many rooms are there in your dream home and what are they
3. What things are in it
........
My dream home
I’m glad to share my ideas about my dream home. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．Do you like your own home Do you want a better one What’s your dream home like Please write an article about your dream home.
注意事项：1)短文必须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2)词数：70词左右；
3)短文必须写在答题卷对应的位置上，写在试卷其他部位无效。
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5．Millie的朋友Sandy下周来扬州玩，根据下表提示帮Millie写一封信， 邀请她来扬州玩时住在自己家里。
小区 扬州市中心，靠近学校和购物中心
配套设施 空气清新，鸟语花香。小区有大型超市，人们可以…… 小区有……，人们可以……
邻居 乐于助人，举例说明；
房间 四间卧室，每间带阳台； 两个卫生间，可以…… ……(自拟一点)
感受 ……
要求:
1. 词数100左右；短文中不得出现真实的人名、班级名；
2. 短文应包括表格内所有内容要点，不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。
Dear Sandy,
I’m happy to know that you will visit Yangzhou next week. I’d like to invite you to stay at my home.
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Welcome to Yangzhou! Welcome to my home.
Best wishes!
6．俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日，某英文报正在举行题为“My neighbourhood”的征文活动。假设你是李华，住在阳光社区，请根据以下问题提示要点，完成一篇英文征文稿。
What is your neighbourhood like
What are your neighbours like
How do you feel to live in your neighbourhood
注意事项： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须回答上面问题，并作适当发挥，80词左右；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My neighbourhood
I’m Li Hua. I live in Sunshine Community. ________________
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7．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Emily对中国的社区生活很感兴趣。请你结合思维导图，给她写一封电子邮件，介绍你所在社区的情况。
请按需求选用参考词汇：
Places: Community Centre; Fix-it Club; …
Activities: give away old books; repair broken bicycles; take care of pets; do exercise; …
注意：
1. 词数90左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Emily,
I’m happy to tell you about my community.
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What about your community I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
进阶拓展训练7篇
8．假设你是李明，你的网友Tom对你的家乡无锡很感兴趣，请根据以下提示以“My hometown”为主题，写一封邮件向他介绍你的家乡，包括以下要点：
“通”在无锡 离上海不远，开车去上海2个多小时；
“游”在无锡 以鼋头渚公园(Yuantouzhu Park)闻名；那里绿树环绕，鸟语花香；
“吃”在无锡 可以尝试本地美食——小笼包(steamed dumplings)
“人”在无锡 乐意帮助他人解决各种问题；
“住”在无锡 我家在无锡市东面，沿着马路直走就能看到学校；
你的感想 ……(自拟，至少一句)
注意：
(1)要点清楚，语言流畅；
(2)字数90字左右；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I want to tell you something about my hometown. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All the best,
Li Ming
9．为了激发同学们热爱家乡的情感，学校英语角开展题为”My hometown”的征文活动。假如你是李文，请根据以下表格中的信息提示，用英语写一篇文章参加活动。
概述 现代化城市，空气清新，每天听到鸟语；
位置 我家离市中心不远，乘坐地铁到市中心只要20分钟；
在三楼，有自己的卧室；最爱……，因为……
邻居 ……
评价 ……
注意：
1. 词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
My hometown
I’m Li Wen. I’m glad to tell you something about my hometown.
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10．假设你是Thomas，你的英国笔友Anthony计划来南通玩，他给你发了封电子邮件，想详细了解你的家乡南通。请认真阅读他的邮件，并根据邮件内容回信。
To: Thomas@
From: Anthony2023@
Subject: Your hometown
Dear Thomas, How are you Glad to hear from you. I am thinking about travelling to China during the summer holiday. I plan to travel to your hometown—Nantong. I want to know something about the environment (环境), people and transport (交通) in your hometown. Please tell me something else about your hometown. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Anthony
注意：
1. 回信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数90个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Anthony,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown-Nantong. It is a good place to visit.
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I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Nantong!
Yours,
Thomas
11．假如你是李华，你在南京学习的英国笔友Henry五一假期要来你家乡盐城游玩。现在你想要写一封邀请信，邀请他来参观游玩。邀请信需包含如下内容：
1. What is your hometown like
2. Where is your community
3. What do your neighbours do to help each other
4. What can you do together at your home
5. How can Henry get to your home
注意：
1. 邀请信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；3. 词数80个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Henry,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Yancheng.
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Hope to see you soon in Yancheng.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
12．同学们，“我为家乡代言”主题展览活动即将启动，请根据问题和提示，以My hometown为题，写一篇英文演讲稿，简单介绍宿迁。
1. What is Suqian like (in the north of Jiangsu Province, 8555 square kilometers, trees and flowers/…)
2. What can we do in Suqian (interesting places to visit, Santaishan Forest Park/Luoma Lake…)
3. What do you think of living in Suqian (lucky, a wonderful place/…)
要求：
1. 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文语连贯、通顺。
My hometown
I would like to tell you something about my hometown Suqian.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13．保护和传承中国传统技艺是每个中华儿女的责任，现在得到了越来越多人的重视和关注。最近你校准备举行“你最喜爱的传统技艺”为主题的英语演讲活动。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你最喜爱的传统技艺，并号召大家来保护传统技艺。
My favourite traditional Chinese skill What 介绍一种传统技艺
Why 1.是中国文化的重要部分
2.（请你补充1-2点）
How （请你补充1-2点）
注意：
1.词数：80左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
As we all know, protecting the traditional Chinese skills is very important.
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Let’s work together to protect this traditional skill and keep it alive.
14．为丰富校园生活，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，近期你校校报英语专栏举行了Getting close to traditional Chinese culture征文活动，请根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向此专栏投稿，介绍中国传统手工艺（handicraft）风筝的历史、特征及其文化重要性，并分享你的看法。
Kites
History Mozi, in the Warring States period
Characteristics materials for making kites:… shapes of kites:…
Cultural importance kites: ● a traditional Chinese handicraft ● … kite flying: ● a popular outdoor activity… ● the World Kite Capital: Weifang, Shandong Province…
Your ideas …
要求：(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
(3) 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
能力综合实践6篇
15．请你写一篇文章介绍中国灯笼的特点、用途，表达你对它的喜爱之情。词数80以上。
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16．请根据以下提示，写一篇关于中国民间艺术的短文，不少于 60 词。
提示：
1. 介绍一种你喜欢的中国民间艺术，如剪纸、刺绣、陶瓷等。
2. 描述它的特点和制作过程。
3. 说明你为什么喜欢它。
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17．家是温暖的港湾，是我们成长的摇篮，你的家是什么样子的呢？请以My Home为题写一篇小短文。
要求：
1、词数不少于80个；
2、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3、文中不得使用你的真实姓名，否则以零分计。
4、短文必须写在答卷相应位置上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
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18． 假如你是王林，家住在Happiness Home。本周六是来自英国的交换生Mike的生日。你打算邀请他来你家过生日。请你根据下列提示，用英语给他写一封邮件，介绍一下你的小区环境、邻里关系，并告诉他生日会的安排以及从学校到你家的具体路线。
1. What do you think of the environment of your neighborhood 2. What are your neighbors like （Give at least one example. ） 3. What is your plan for the party 4. How can Mike get to your home according to the map
要求：
1. 层次清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范；
2. 邮件内容必须包括上面提及的要点，可适当发挥；
3. 词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。
Dear Mike,
I am going to have a party at home to celebrate your birthday this Saturday.
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Yours,
Wang Lin
19．假如你是王欣悦，你的英国笔友David想了解你的社区和你的理想家园。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件介绍你的社区和理想家园。
My community My dream home
1. Nice, lots of flowers and trees 2. A supermarket, a library and a park 3. Friendly neighbours，often help each other 4. Have fun with friends in the park 1. A big flat on the top floor 2. Has an area of 160 square metres 3. Favourite place: the balcony 4. Enjoy the view of the city there
1. Lucky to live in this community 2. happy to have a dream home
要求：
1.包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；3.词数：80 词左右。
Dear David,
How are you I’m glad to tell you something about my community and my dream home.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Xinyue
20．你校“英语写作竞赛”即将举行，要求大家积极投稿，以“My Hometown”为题，结合要点，完成作文：
1. 我的家乡无锡是个现代化的城市，位于江苏东南部；
2. 离上海不远，乘火车只要一个小时左右；
3. 每年有很多游客到无锡来参观，春天去公园赏花很尽兴；
4. 在这里可以尝到各种东西方的美食；
5. 我觉得……
要求：1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，语句通顺、语言规范；
2. 第5要点用2句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥；
3. 词数：70词左右。
My Hometown
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答案与解析
基础入门训练7篇
1．假设你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友Tony想了解你的家及你的社区。请根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件。
提示：
1. 你家的位置、房子类型、房间布局；
2. 你所在社区的情况(如：基础设施、环境、邻居等)
要求：
1. 包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
3. 80词左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to tell you something about my home and my community.
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I really love my home and my community. What about yours Write to me soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to tell you something about my home and my community.
I live in a comfortable apartment on the fifth floor of a building in a great community. My apartment has a living room and dining area. Next to it is a modern kitchen. There are two bedrooms. One is my personal space, and the other is a guest room. Besides, there is a tidy bathroom.
The community is wonderful. People can exercise in a fitness center, and there is a small but beautiful garden for relaxing. The environment is clean and quiet, with trees and flowers everywhere. My neighbors are very nice. We often meet in the hallway and have friendly conversations.
I really love my home and my community. What about yours Write to me soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：主要运用一般现在时；
③提示：对自家房屋布局和社区环境、设施以及邻里关系等要点的介绍，通过具体描述展现家与社区的特点，突出喜爱之情。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明写作意图，告知对方写信是为介绍自己的家与社区，让读者明确邮件主旨；
第二步，详细介绍自家情况，先说明居住在社区中某栋楼的五楼公寓，接着描述公寓内布局，包括客厅、餐厅、现代化厨房、两间卧室及整洁的浴室；然后介绍社区情况，提及社区内有健身中心供居民锻炼、美丽小花园可放松身心，环境干净安静且到处有花草树木，还有友善的邻里关系；
第三步，总结强调对家与社区的喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①comfortable舒适的
②modern现代的
③friendly友好的
[高分句型]
People can exercise in a fitness center, and there is a small but beautiful garden for relaxing. (there be句型)
2．中国传统服装越来越受年轻人的欢迎。假如《学习周报》正在以“Traditional Chinese Clothes”为主题举办征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
1. 介绍你最喜欢的中国传统服装（风格、材质······）；
2. 喜欢的理由；
3. 如何向全世界推广的建议。
In recent years, more and more young people would like to try traditional Chinese clothes. They become a new fashion.
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【答案】范文：
In recent years, more and more young people would like to try traditional Chinese clothes. They become a new fashion.
Of all the traditional Chinese clothes, I like hanfu best. They’re usually loose with a belt. They’re made of different materials, like cotton and silk.
Hanfu are very beautiful. They’re suitable for people of all ages. They’re always comfortable to wear. So they’re popular with young people now.
Wearing hanfu is a good way to show our traditional culture to the world. Maybe we can have some hanfu festivals and give some hanfu shows in holidays.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢的中国传统服饰；
第二步，说明自己喜欢的理由；
第三步，提出向全世界推广的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① are made of由……组成
② are suitable for适合……
③ people of all ages各个年龄阶段的人
[高分句型]
①Wearing hanfu is a good way to show our traditional culture to the world.(动名词作主语)
②Maybe we can have some hanfu festivals and give some hanfu shows in holidays.(and并列句)
3．每个人都有自己的梦想家园。根据下列提示，设计你自己梦想的家园。不少于90词，可以适当发挥。
1. What is your dream home like
2. How many rooms are there in your dream home and what are they
3. What things are in it
........
My dream home
I’m glad to share my ideas about my dream home. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
My dream home
I’m glad to share my ideas about my dream home. My dream home is a house with two floors. There are seven rooms in it. On the ground floor, you can see a sofa in the siting room. Beside the siting room is the kitchen. There’s a large fridge and a cupboard in it. There is a large dinner table in the dining room. On the first floor, there is a study and three bedrooms. There is a large bookcase in the study. I have my own bedroom and it has a bathroom in it. In front of my house, there is a nice garden with many flowers. The flowers are very beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示问题介绍自己梦想中的家，可适当增加细节 。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己梦想中的家的样子；
第二步，具体介绍家的样子，包括房间数量和房间里的陈设；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①a house with two floors一个有两层楼的房子
②in front of在……前面
[高分句型]
①There’s a large fridge and a cupboard in it.（there be 句型）
4．Do you like your own home Do you want a better one What’s your dream home like Please write an article about your dream home.
注意事项：1)短文必须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2)词数：70词左右；
3)短文必须写在答题卷对应的位置上，写在试卷其他部位无效。
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【答案】例文
My dream home is far away from big cities. It’s a big three -floor house with a garden, a football field and a swimming pool. The living room is big and bright. After supper, I can chat with my parents and watch TV there. I have my own bedroom on the second floor. It is clean and comfortable. I like the football field best, because I can have fun playing football with my friends at weekends.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇说明文，材料作文，描述你梦想中的家是什么样的；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中介绍梦想中的家的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，叙述梦想中的家的位置；
第二步，具体叙述梦想中的家的样子。
第三步，叙述在家中做的有趣的事情。
[亮点词汇]
Be far away from远离……
a big three-floor house with a garden带花园的三层大房子
chat with与……聊天
like… best最喜欢……
have fun doing sth. 很高兴做某事
[高分句型]
①I like the football field best, because I can have fun playing football with my friends at weekends.（原因状语从句）
5．Millie的朋友Sandy下周来扬州玩，根据下表提示帮Millie写一封信， 邀请她来扬州玩时住在自己家里。
小区 扬州市中心，靠近学校和购物中心
配套设施 空气清新，鸟语花香。小区有大型超市，人们可以…… 小区有……，人们可以……
邻居 乐于助人，举例说明；
房间 四间卧室，每间带阳台； 两个卫生间，可以…… ……(自拟一点)
感受 ……
要求:
1. 词数100左右；短文中不得出现真实的人名、班级名；
2. 短文应包括表格内所有内容要点，不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。
Dear Sandy,
I’m happy to know that you will visit Yangzhou next week. I’d like to invite you to stay at my home.
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Welcome to Yangzhou! Welcome to my home.
Best wishes!
【答案】例文
Dear Sandy,
I’m happy to know that you will visit Yangzhou next week. I’d like to invite you to stay at my home.
Our community is in the center of Yangzhou, near schools and shopping centers. The air is fresh here. I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. There is a big supermarket in the community. People can go there to buy what they like. The community also has a beautiful small garden, people can walk in the rest. Our neighbors are very kind and helpful. Once I came home and forgot my keys, my neighbor called my mother for me. We have four bedrooms. Each bedroom has a balcony. There are two restrooms in my home, so it is very convenient to go to the toilet. Our living room is very big. I can sit on the sofa and watch TV there.
I am happy to have my own room and study. I hope I can see you soon. Then we can read happily together.
Welcome to Yangzhou! Welcome to my home.
Best wishes!
Millie
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并在适当的地方补充和发挥，使用正确的词汇和句型，注意语句的通顺，使得行文连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，以“想邀请你来我家玩并住我家里”引出下文；
第二步，按照要点提示，介绍小区位置，配套设施，邻里关系和自己房间的情况，并在适当的地方补充完整内容，注意行文的连贯和语法的准确；
第三步，结尾介绍自己的感受和看法，表明对朋友到来的期待，并总结文章。
[亮点词汇]
①in the center在中心
②be happy to do sth很开心做某事
③hear sb do sth听见某人做某事
④watch TV看电视
[高分句型]
①So it is very convenient to go to the toilet.（句型it is+adj+to do sth表示“做某事如何”）
②Once I came home and forgot my keys, my neighbor called my mother for me.（once引导的时间状语从句）
6．俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日，某英文报正在举行题为“My neighbourhood”的征文活动。假设你是李华，住在阳光社区，请根据以下问题提示要点，完成一篇英文征文稿。
What is your neighbourhood like
What are your neighbours like
How do you feel to live in your neighbourhood
注意事项： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须回答上面问题，并作适当发挥，80词左右；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My neighbourhood
I’m Li Hua. I live in Sunshine Community. ________________
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【答案】例文
My neighbourhood
I am Li Hua. I live in Sunshine Community. It’s a beautiful and quiet neighbourhood. There’s a beautiful park near here. People always take a walk in it. And there’s a supermarket in our neighbourhood, so it’s very easy for us to do some shopping.
My neighbours are kind and helpful. There are some engineers among them. They can help us repair things like broken bikes and computers. Some of my neighbours are college students. They can help younger students with their homework. They are patient enough to answer questions.
I feel very lucky to live in such a neighbourhood. I hope it will become better in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍社区的状况；
第二步，具体介绍邻居的情况以及邻里间互相帮助；
第三步，最后介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take a walk散步
②help sb with sth帮助某人某事
[高分句型]
①There are some engineers among them. (There be结构)
7．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Emily对中国的社区生活很感兴趣。请你结合思维导图，给她写一封电子邮件，介绍你所在社区的情况。
请按需求选用参考词汇：
Places: Community Centre; Fix-it Club; …
Activities: give away old books; repair broken bicycles; take care of pets; do exercise; …
注意：
1. 词数90左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Emily,
I’m happy to tell you about my community.
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What about your community I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Emily,
I’m happy to tell you about my community. The people here are very friendly and helpful.
There are many places in my community. We have a Community Centre where people can have parties and meetings. There is also a Fix-it Club where people repair broken bicycles.
People often do different things. Some give away old books to those in need. Some take care of pets for others. And many people do exercise to keep fit.
I really love my community. It makes me feel warm and comfortable.
What about your community I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为向朋友介绍自己所在社区的电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：介绍自己所在社区的情况。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头表明很高兴向朋友介绍自己的社区。
第二步，中间详细描述社区的情况，包括友好的居民、社区里的场所（社区中心、修理俱乐部）以及人们常做的事（捐书、照顾宠物、锻炼等）。
第三步，结尾询问朋友社区的情况并期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
①friendly友好的
②helpful有帮助的
③repair修理
④keep fit保持健康
[高分句型]
①There are many places in my community.（There be句型）
②We have a Community Centre where people can have parties and meetings.（定语从句）
进阶拓展训练7篇
8．假设你是李明，你的网友Tom对你的家乡无锡很感兴趣，请根据以下提示以“My hometown”为主题，写一封邮件向他介绍你的家乡，包括以下要点：
“通”在无锡 离上海不远，开车去上海2个多小时；
“游”在无锡 以鼋头渚公园(Yuantouzhu Park)闻名；那里绿树环绕，鸟语花香；
“吃”在无锡 可以尝试本地美食——小笼包(steamed dumplings)
“人”在无锡 乐意帮助他人解决各种问题；
“住”在无锡 我家在无锡市东面，沿着马路直走就能看到学校；
你的感想 ……(自拟，至少一句)
注意：
(1)要点清楚，语言流畅；
(2)字数90字左右；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I want to tell you something about my hometown. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All the best,
Li Ming
【答案】范文
Dear Tom,
I want to tell you something about my hometown.
Wuxi is not far away from Shanghai. It takes about two hours to drive there. Wuxi is famous for the Yuantouzhu park. There are many trees around it. We can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. If you come to Wuxi, you can try local food—steamed dumplings. Besides, people here are ready to help others with all kinds of problems. My home is in the east of Wuxi City. Walk straight along the road and you can see the school.
It’s really a good place to live and I feel happy to live here. I hope you can visit my hometown some day.
All the best,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，确保要点清楚，语言流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍无锡的位置以及环境；
第二步，介绍无锡的本地美食和无锡人的友好；
第三步，最后介绍你在无锡的家以及感想。
[亮点词汇]
①far away from远离
②be famous for因……而著名
③besides此外
[高分句型]
①If you come to Wuxi, you can try local food—steamed dumplings.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②It’s really a good place to live.（不定式作后置定语）
9．为了激发同学们热爱家乡的情感，学校英语角开展题为”My hometown”的征文活动。假如你是李文，请根据以下表格中的信息提示，用英语写一篇文章参加活动。
概述 现代化城市，空气清新，每天听到鸟语；
位置 我家离市中心不远，乘坐地铁到市中心只要20分钟；
在三楼，有自己的卧室；最爱……，因为……
邻居 ……
评价 ……
注意：
1. 词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
My hometown
I’m Li Wen. I’m glad to tell you something about my hometown.
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【答案】例文
My hometown
I’m Li Wen. I’m glad to tell you something about my hometown. My hometown is a modern city, which has a long history. There the air is fresh, and we can hear the birds sing and smell the flowers every day. My home is not far from the city center, and it only takes 20 minutes to get to the city center by subway. On the third floor, I have my own bedroom. My favorite thing to do is reading books because I can learn a lot of knowledge from it. My neighbors are very friendly and helpful. I love my hometown. I hope you can come and visit here one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题：介绍自己的家乡；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从环境、地理位置、邻居等方面展开说明；
第三步，书写结语。评价并表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to do sth乐意做某事
②not far from离……不远
③a lot of许多
[高分句型]
①My hometown is a modern city, which has along history.（定语从句）
②I hope you can come and visit here one day.（宾语从句）
10．假设你是Thomas，你的英国笔友Anthony计划来南通玩，他给你发了封电子邮件，想详细了解你的家乡南通。请认真阅读他的邮件，并根据邮件内容回信。
To: Thomas@
From: Anthony2023@
Subject: Your hometown
Dear Thomas, How are you Glad to hear from you. I am thinking about travelling to China during the summer holiday. I plan to travel to your hometown—Nantong. I want to know something about the environment (环境), people and transport (交通) in your hometown. Please tell me something else about your hometown. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Anthony
注意：
1. 回信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数90个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Anthony,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown-Nantong. It is a good place to visit.
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I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Nantong!
Yours,
Thomas
【答案】例文：
Dear Anthony,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown—Nantong. It is a good place to visit. The air is fresh in Nantong. There are many trees and rivers. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. The people here are kind and helpful. In my community, people often help each other with problems. In the bus, they always take the initiative to give up their seats to others, and they are especially enthusiastic to some outsiders who ask for directions. They always tell them how to get there very carefully. When you come to Nantong, you can go to different parks and eat Chinese food. If you go to different places in Nantong, you can take a bus. There are buses to different places every day. If you come to Nantong, you will definitely like it.
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Nantong!
Yours,
Thomas
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，欢迎对方来南通；
第二步，具体介绍南通的相关情况；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①help each other with problems互相帮助解决问题
②ask for directions问路
③take a bus乘坐公共汽车
[高分句型]
①In the bus, they always take the initiative to give up their seats to others, and they are especially enthusiastic to some outsiders who ask for directions. （并列句）
②I hope my answer is helpful to you.（省略that的宾语从句）
11．假如你是李华，你在南京学习的英国笔友Henry五一假期要来你家乡盐城游玩。现在你想要写一封邀请信，邀请他来参观游玩。邀请信需包含如下内容：
1. What is your hometown like
2. Where is your community
3. What do your neighbours do to help each other
4. What can you do together at your home
5. How can Henry get to your home
注意：
1. 邀请信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；3. 词数80个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Henry,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Yancheng.
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Hope to see you soon in Yancheng.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Henry,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Yancheng. It is a good place to visit. The air is fresh in Yancheng. There are many trees and rivers.
My neighbours are very nice and helpful. They often help me with my homework. When you come, you can live in my flat. I have lots of CDs in my study. We can enjoy listening to music together. And I can teach you Chinese in my home, too.
You can take a taxi or the underground at the airport and get off at Xinjiekou. I will pick you up at Exit 1 there.
Hope to see you soon in Yancheng.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，意思连贯，并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写信的目的是邀请对方来参观游玩；
第二步，介绍盐城的环境、你所住的位置、你的邻居以及你和Henry可以在家做什么、Henry怎么到达你家；
第三步，书写结语，希望能很快在盐城见到对方。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. with sth. 帮助某人某事
②lots of 许多
③get off 下车
④pick sb. up 接某人
[高分句型]
①When you come, you can live in my flat.(when引导时间状语从句)
②You can take a taxi or the underground at the airport and get off at Xinjiekou.(and并列句)
12．同学们，“我为家乡代言”主题展览活动即将启动，请根据问题和提示，以My hometown为题，写一篇英文演讲稿，简单介绍宿迁。
1. What is Suqian like (in the north of Jiangsu Province, 8555 square kilometers, trees and flowers/…)
2. What can we do in Suqian (interesting places to visit, Santaishan Forest Park/Luoma Lake…)
3. What do you think of living in Suqian (lucky, a wonderful place/…)
要求：
1. 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文语连贯、通顺。
My hometown
I would like to tell you something about my hometown Suqian.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My hometown
I would like to tell you something about my hometown Suqian. Situated in the north of Jiangsu Province, Suqian covers an area of 8555 square kilometers, making it a place of vast beauty. There are a lot of green trees and colorful flowers. The people in the city are also very friendly to others.
In Suqian, there are many interesting places to visit, such as Santaishan Forest Park and Luoma Lake. At the same time, people can enjoy local delicious food as well.
It’s lucky for me to live in Suqian. The warm community and the abundance of natural beauty make it a wonderful place to live in. I am proud to represent my hometown and welcome you all to Suqian.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍宿迁的一些相关信息，围绕“地理位置、占地面积、环境和宿迁的人”等展开；
第二步，介绍在宿迁可以做的事情；
第三步，介绍自己居住在宿迁的感受，并欢迎大家来宿迁。
[亮点词汇]
①situated in位于
②be friendly to对……友好
③such as例如
④at the same time同时
⑤as well也
[高分句型]
①There are a lot of green trees and colorful flowers.（There be句型）
13．保护和传承中国传统技艺是每个中华儿女的责任，现在得到了越来越多人的重视和关注。最近你校准备举行“你最喜爱的传统技艺”为主题的英语演讲活动。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你最喜爱的传统技艺，并号召大家来保护传统技艺。
My favourite traditional Chinese skill What 介绍一种传统技艺
Why 1.是中国文化的重要部分
2.（请你补充1-2点）
How （请你补充1-2点）
注意：
1.词数：80左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
As we all know, protecting the traditional Chinese skills is very important.
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Let’s work together to protect this traditional skill and keep it alive.
【答案】例文
As we all know, protecting the traditional Chinese skills is very important. My favourite traditional Chinese skill is paper-cutting. Paper-cutting can be made in different shapes, such as animals, flowers and Chinese characters with good meanings and so on. Paper-cutting is an important part of Chinese culture. People often put them up on the walls. Paper-cutting often appear at festivals or weddings because people think they can bring them happiness and good luck. We should try our best to protect this traditional skill. I think paper-cutting should be taught in schools so that students can learn this skill.
Let’s work together to protect this traditional skill and keep it alive.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，保护中国传统技艺是非常重要的；
第二步，结合表格提示，介绍自己最喜爱的传统技艺，原因，以及如何保护；
第三步，号召大家来保护传统技艺。
[亮点词汇]
①in different shapes形态各异
②put up 张贴
③try our best to do尽力做某事
[高分句型]
①Paper-cutting often appear at festivals or weddings because people think they can bring them happiness and good luck.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I think paper-cutting should be taught in schools so that students can learn this skill.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
14．为丰富校园生活，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，近期你校校报英语专栏举行了Getting close to traditional Chinese culture征文活动，请根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向此专栏投稿，介绍中国传统手工艺（handicraft）风筝的历史、特征及其文化重要性，并分享你的看法。
Kites
History Mozi, in the Warring States period
Characteristics materials for making kites:… shapes of kites:…
Cultural importance kites: ● a traditional Chinese handicraft ● … kite flying: ● a popular outdoor activity… ● the World Kite Capital: Weifang, Shandong Province…
Your ideas …
要求：(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
(3) 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. The kite was invented by a man called Mozi in the Warring States period. He made a bird out of wood. It was the first kite in history. Later, his student Lu Ban used bamboo to make kites. During the Eastern Han Dynasty, with the invention of paper, people began to use paper to make kites. Kites have also begun to take on different shapes, such as airplanes, eagles and so on.
The World Kite Capital is Weifang, Shandong Province. There are many grand kite competitions held there every year. People all over the world want to go there. Flying kites is deeply loved by people. It is a very popular outdoor activity. Every weekend, I can see many people flying kites in the park. They play happily. But the kites we fly now are all bought from stores. Few people make their own kites.
I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down. We should protect traditional Chinese handicrafts.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍风筝的历史情况以及特点；
第二步，介绍风筝的文化特点以及如今风筝的发展情况；
第三步，最后提出自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① with the invention of paper随着纸的发明
② take on呈现
③ all over the world全世界
[高分句型]
① I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down.（宾语从句）
② But the kites we fly now are all bought from stores.（定语从句）
能力综合实践6篇
15．请你写一篇文章介绍中国灯笼的特点、用途，表达你对它的喜爱之情。词数80以上。
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【答案】例文：
Chinese lanterns are an important part of Chinese culture. They have a long history.
Chinese lanterns are usually made of paper or silk. They come in different shapes and sizes. People make lanterns more beautiful by painting on it.
Chinese often use lanterns to decorate houses and streets during festivals, such as the Spring Festival and the Lantern Festival. People also light lanterns to wish for good luck and happiness.
I love Chinese lanterns very much. They are beautiful and carry rich cultural value. I hope more people can learn about and enjoy them.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，灯笼是中国文化中重要的一部分，灯笼具有悠久的历史;
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍中国灯笼的特点、用途;
第三步，书写结语，表达我对灯笼的喜爱之情，希望更多的人了解并喜欢它们。
[亮点词汇]
①come in different shapes and sizes有不同的形状和尺寸
②wish for good luck and happiness祝你好运幸福
[高分句型]
I hope more people can learn about and enjoy them.（that引导的宾语从句）
16．请根据以下提示，写一篇关于中国民间艺术的短文，不少于 60 词。
提示：
1. 介绍一种你喜欢的中国民间艺术，如剪纸、刺绣、陶瓷等。
2. 描述它的特点和制作过程。
3. 说明你为什么喜欢它。
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【答案】例文
I like paper cutting very much. It is a traditional Chinese folk art. Paper cutting has various shapes and patterns. People use scissors to cut the paper into beautiful pictures, such as animals, flowers and characters. The process of making paper cutting is very interesting. First, we need to prepare a piece of paper and scissors. Then, we can start to cut according to our designs. I like paper cutting because it shows the wisdom and creativity of Chinese people.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出自己喜欢的中国民间艺术；
第二步，具体介绍它的特点和制作过程；
第三步，说明喜欢的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②according to根据
[高分句型]
I like paper cutting because it shows the wisdom and creativity of Chinese people.（原因状语从句）
17．家是温暖的港湾，是我们成长的摇篮，你的家是什么样子的呢？请以My Home为题写一篇小短文。
要求：
1、词数不少于80个；
2、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3、文中不得使用你的真实姓名，否则以零分计。
4、短文必须写在答卷相应位置上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
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【答案】
I have a tidy and beautiful home. Although it is not very big, it is cozy and warm. In my home, there are two bedrooms, a living room, a study, a bathroom and a kitchen. The living room is where my family spends most of our time together. My father often watches TV there. My mother often stays in the kitchen. She cooks delicious meals for us. I love the smell of her cooking. And I often study in the study. There are many books in my study. I like reading them very much. My bedroom is my favorite place where I can escape from the world and have some peace and quiet of my own.
This is my home, a safe and comfortable home. I love my home very much.
【详解】【总体分析】
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
提示：考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达, 不要遗漏要点。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等, 清楚连贯地表达自己的思想, 进而完成写作任务。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。引出“My Home”这一话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍家的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达对家的爱。
【亮点词汇】
① cozy and warm舒适温暖
② delicious美味的
③ escape from逃离……
【高分句型】
① Although it is not very big, it is cozy and warm.（although引导让步状语从句）
② My bedroom is my favorite place where I can escape from the world and have some peace and quiet of my own.（where引导定语从句）
18． 假如你是王林，家住在Happiness Home。本周六是来自英国的交换生Mike的生日。你打算邀请他来你家过生日。请你根据下列提示，用英语给他写一封邮件，介绍一下你的小区环境、邻里关系，并告诉他生日会的安排以及从学校到你家的具体路线。
1. What do you think of the environment of your neighborhood 2. What are your neighbors like （Give at least one example. ） 3. What is your plan for the party 4. How can Mike get to your home according to the map
要求：
1. 层次清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范；
2. 邮件内容必须包括上面提及的要点，可适当发挥；
3. 词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。
Dear Mike,
I am going to have a party at home to celebrate your birthday this Saturday.
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Yours,
Wang Lin
【答案】例文：
Dear Mike,
I am going to have a party at home to celebrate your birthday this Saturday.
I live in Happiness Home. It is beautiful and convenient. My neighbors are very friendly. They always help each other. I plan to have a big dinner in the evening. We can play games after dinner.
You can find my home easily. Go out of school and enter Ninghang Road, and go straight along People’s Road. Then go across Huayang Road. You need to turn left at the end of People’s Road and you can find my home. The opposite of my home is the supermarket.
I hope that we can have a good time on Saturday.
Yours,
Wang Lin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态以 “一般现在时” 为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容写电子邮件邀请Mike来自己家里过生日，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，介绍自己所在的社区及邻居并给出生日会的计划；
第三步，介绍从学校到自己家的具体路线；
第四步，表达美好期望。
[亮点词汇]
①go straight along沿着……一直往前走
②at the end of在……尽头
③play games玩游戏
④have a good time玩得开心
[重点句型]
①Go out of school and enter Ninghang Road, and go straight along People’s Road.（祈使句）
②I hope that we can have a good time on Saturday.（that引导的宾语从句）
19．假如你是王欣悦，你的英国笔友David想了解你的社区和你的理想家园。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件介绍你的社区和理想家园。
My community My dream home
1. Nice, lots of flowers and trees 2. A supermarket, a library and a park 3. Friendly neighbour

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