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话题03 素质教育
【话题解读】
现在，中小学生的课业负担越来越重，孩子们的压力也越来越大。除了关注孩子的学习成绩，家长朋友近年来也越来越关注孩子在社会实践方面的参与社会实践是课堂教学的延伸和补充，参加社会生活和社会实践,培养中小学生正确价值观,团队协作意识,人生理想信念,真正做到立德树人，五育融合。
【命题探索】
为了切实落实教育改革要求学生“德智体美劳”全面发展，近几年全国中高考试题都不同程度增加了五育的考查。如“结合自身体会谈论如何培养劳动精神”。分析全国中考真题可知，此话题有以下命题角度： (1)树立劳动观念，进行实践活动。如：云南省卷“Doing Housework Makes me________”；南充“我劳动，我快乐”；重庆A卷“Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School”； 烟台“邀请好友参加劳动实践周活动”； 嘉兴“‘A Helper at Home’主题征文活动”；北部湾经济区以“劳动创造美好生活”为切入点，要求学生以“Learn to do housework”为题投稿；2019湘潭“Help with Some Housework”等；
参加体育运动，倡导健康理念。如：怀化“申请当亚运会的志愿者”；娄底“以‘Sports’为题的征文比赛”；襄阳“谈一谈你对‘中考’体育考试的改革方案的态度和观点”；
(3)渗透美育知识，引导审美情趣。如：衡阳“介绍中国的文化特色”；杭州“接受朋友的邀请去发表关于中国民族音乐的演讲并询问相关事宜”；连云港“邀请外籍教师参加学校举办的‘我是美猴王’在线才艺展示活动”；荆门“向笔友介绍学校的‘戏曲进校园’展演活动”等。
【教材好句积累】
劳动教育 :
做家务 do chores
整理房间 tidy the room
叠衣服 fold the clothes
做饭 cook meals
种树和种菜 plant trees and grow vegetables
做志愿服务工作 do volunteer work
拜访养老院 visit the old people’s home
组织游学 organize the study tour
建立实践俱乐部 set up practice clubs
开设劳动教育课 offer/run a labor education course
学习更多的生活技能和变得更加独立 learn more life skills and become more independent
培养责任感和好习惯 develop a sense of responsibility and good habits
理解劳动的意义 understand the meaning of labor
培养我们的独立性 develop our independence
一些劳动被视为锻炼，以便我们能增强体质。
Some labor is regarded as exercise so that we can build up our bodies.
美育知识：
寻找生活中更多的幸福与美 find more happiness and beauty in life
“双减”背景下的课外活动：课外活动 after-class activities
上培训课 attend training courses
充分利用课外时间 make the best use of time after school 培养兴趣爱好 take up hobbies
增强学生的身心健康 improve students’ physical and mental health
【基础句】
角度1　全面发展
1. To be a better person, I think I should do the following things.[2021遂宁书面表达]
2. We should not be afraid of challenge and try our best to solve the problems in our study and life.[2021遂宁书面表达]
角度2　劳动观念
3. You could help to clean up the city parks.[人教八(下)Unit 2 P9]
4. I think doing chores is not so difficult. I don't mind doing them.
[人教八(下)Unit 3 P22]
5. It's important to learn some basic life skills like cooking, washing clothes and tidying up our rooms.[鲁教九(全)Unit 9 P66]
6. We can do housework in our spare time to show care to our parents.
7. We will develop good habits if we do housework from an early age.
角度3　体育运动
8. I love sports, but I don't play them—I only watch them on TV！[人教七(上)Unit 5 P29]
9. I like ping pong. It's easy for me. [人教七(上)Unit 5 P29]
10. We can do regular exercise to/in order to build up a good body.
[2020荆门书面表达]
11. Nowadays, doing sports is becoming more and more popular.
12. As we all know, sports can keep us healthy, so now we students are encouraged to do sports.
角度4　美育知识
13. I only like funny movies. I just want to laugh and not think too much.[人教九(全)Unit 9 P66]
14. We can also learn more about Chinese traditional culture.
15. Journey to the West is becoming more and more popular all around the world.
16. I really like the project of planting trees, because it's a good way to learn about nature.
【加分句】
角度1　全面发展
1. Learning life skills is necessary for us, because what we depend on is what we learn. [2021德州书面表达]
①使用高级短语：depend on依赖
②使用从句：because引导原因状语从句，其中包含1个主语从句和1个表语从句
角度2　劳动观念
2. Since students live in one house with their parents, they should know that everyone should do their part in keeping it clean and tidy.[人教八(下)Unit 3 P20]
使用从句：that引导的宾语从句
3. Doing chores helps to develop children's independence and teaches them how to look after themselves.[人教八(下)Unit 3 P22]
使用高级表达：动名词作主语
4. It seems that doing some housework such as cooking and cleaning is good for us.
使用高级句式：it seems that句型
角度3　体育运动
5. We play soccer ball at school with our friends, which is relaxing.[人教七(上)Unit 5 P29]
使用从句：which引导的非限制性定语从句
6. The earlier we take part in labor practice, the more good habits we will develop.
使用高级句式：the＋比较级，the ＋比较级
7. Regular exercise can help us keep our weight under control and win self confidence at the same time．[2020衢州词汇应用]
使用高级短语：at the same time与此同时
角度4　美育知识
8. What's more, Beijing Opera is also an important part of Chinese culture.[2021衡阳书面表达]
使用衔接词：What's more而且
9. I like watching documentaries(纪录片) because I can learn a lot about nature, history and real life events from them.
使用从句：because引导的原因状语从句
角度5　德育——志愿者活动
【开头句】
1．This summer vacation I plan to be a volunteer.
2．Last Sunday，my friend and I did some voluntary work near our neighborhood.
3．I'm so excited to know that our school is organizing an activity to help the kids in a school.
4．Last weekend，our class organized a charity walk in order to raise money for children in poor areas.
5．And the most impressive for me is about helping the old，which is organized by our school.
【中间句】
1．I'll help to clean up the city parks.
2．The girl could visit the sick kids in the hospital to cheer them up.
3．The girl could volunteer in an after school study program to teach kids.
4．We need to come up with a plan for the City Park Clean up Day.
5．The people in the neighborhood all like Mr.Li because he always offers help to others.
6．The boy often shares all kinds of his parents' housework，like doing the dishes，sweeping the floor and so on.
7．Mr.White helped a little girl to find her house，so he felt very happy.
8．Volunteering here is a dream that has come true for me.
9．We help them to cook and make the bed，and do some other things that we can do.
10．I can help the kids with their pronunciation.
【结尾句】
1．I'm looking forward to your reply.
2．I hope I could get more opportunities to do such things.
3．I'll be thankful if you give me a chance.
4．I thought it was a meaningful activity.I hope other classes can hold such activities，too.
【佳句精选：】
There are two sides to everything.
It is important for us to do more sports in our free time.
Exercise one hour a day, keep illness away.
Nowadays, more and more students become aware of the importance and necessity of sports.
Some students think that so many kinds of activities may have a bad effort on their study.
Sports help to build our body and make us strength.
It's a good chance to show their talents that can make them popular and famous.
They can make students feel relaxed both mentally and physically.
It's a good way to make their dreams come true.
Students can learn how to cooperation with teammates in the games, and this contributes to the development of teamwork skills.
It is also a good way for students to know each other and can promote friendship between students.
It will be a waste of money for teenagers.
It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident.
So long as we are carefully enough, sports can do us nothing but good .
Music is a necessary part in our daily life, which makes our life colorful and wonderful.
Students are supposed to pay more attention to their study.
Listening to music is a good way for us to build up confidence and overcome difficulties.
As far as we know, it is important for us to keep healthy and have a healthy life.
I hope by doing these, we can be healthier and we can make our life happier.
I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.
【写作精讲优练】
某英语杂志社以"我劳动，我快乐"为主题向中学生开展征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要点∶(1)分享你最难忘的劳动经历;
(2)谈谈你的劳动感受;
(3)表达你的观点并发出倡议。
要求∶1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
4.词数100左右。___________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【第一步 写作思路】
文体：______文。
2.人称：以第____人称为主。
3.时态：描述难忘的劳动经历，主体时态用____________。
普通范文 高分范文
Doing housework is a part of our life. I'd like to tell you one of my experiences of doing housework. Last week, my mother came back late because of busy work. I secretly cooked a special dinner for her before she came back. It didn't work as well as I thought. I forgot to put salt into the dishes. However, my mother finished eating and felt happy, so I felt very satisfied. For me, doing housework is difficult and very tired. But the process made me happy. I've learned a lot from doing housework. Hope you can also do housework to bring happiness to your family and develop your independence． Doing housework is a part of our life. I'd like to tell you one of my experiences of doing house-work. Last week, my mother came back late because of busy work. I secretly cooked a special dinner for her before she came back. It didn't work as well as I thought. I forgot to put salt into the dishes. ①However, my mother finished eating with happy feeling, so I felt very satisfied. ②Although it's difficult and tired for me to do housework, the process made me happy and proud. I've learned a lot from doing housework. ③Hope you can also do housework to bring happiness to your family and develop your independence at the same time.
4.要点：从__________、__________、____________等方面，描述一次做饭的经历及感受，并发出了倡议。
【高分范文——亮点点拨】
①句使用with短语作伴随状语，使句子结构多样，给文章增加亮点；②句使用although引导让步状语从句以及It is ＋adj.＋for sb. to do sth.句式结构，强化了内容的逻辑性；
③句使用介词短语at the same time，使文章表达更高级。
假定你是李华，近日你校开展了以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食”为主题的实践活动。请你结合以下图示，用英语给笔友 John 写一封信，分享活动过程和感受。词数 80 左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear John,
How is everything going ______________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Have you had any experience of this kind
Yours,
Li Hua
第一步 细审题 定要点（五审法：审主题、审人称、审文体、审时态、审要点）
1）审主题：热爱劳动，珍爱粮食
2）审时态：以一般过去时为主
3）审人称：以第一人称为主
4）审文体：应用文
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段 (Beginning)：开门见山，引出话题：自己在田间劳动一日的经历。
中间段 (Body)：详细介绍活动的时间、地点、内容以及自己的感受。
结尾 (Ending)：用疑问句来呼应首段（已给出）。
第三步 扩句子 精加工
首段：引出话题：田间劳动
[一般句] I’m glad to tell you my experience in rice fields.
[高分句] I’m glad to tell you my one-day experience in rice fields./ My one-day experience in rice fields is well worth sharing with you.
中间段：活动的时间、地点、内容及感受
【要点一】 活动时间和地点
[一般句] On June 18, my classmates and I went to the community farm.
[高分句] On June 18, my classmates and I went to the community farm, laughing and jumping. (v.-ing 形式作伴随状语 )
【要点二】 活动内容
[一般句] Some learned to harvest rice. Some helped to carry rice, and others picked ears of rice.
[高分句]1. (while)
【要点三】 活动感受
[一般句] After one-day work, we were tired, but we felt happy. And I have come to realize that we should save food from now on.
[高分句]2. (through/thanks to)
第四步 连句子 成短文
[优秀范文]
Dear John,
How is everything going I’m glad to tell you my one-day experience in rice fields.
On June 18, my classmates and I went to the community farm. When we arrived, we visited the farm and watched videos on farming. Then we worked together with farmers. Some learned to harvest rice. Some helped to carry rice while others picked ears of rice from the fields. Through the activities, I’ve got the pleasure of hard work and learned to value each grain.
Have you had any experience of this kind
Yours,
Li Hua
“立德树人，五育融合”的教育理念深入人心。假如你是李华，在即将毕业的日子里，回首过去的三年时光，从“德，智，体，美，劳”几个方面谈谈自己这三年来的进步，给自己的初中生涯做一个总结。请根据下表提示完成一篇英语短文。
make progress in… 德 爱国爱家，诚实守信，……。
智 努力学习，热爱阅读，……。
体 坚持锻炼，健康饮食，……。
美 善于发现生活中的美好，热爱自然，……。
劳 热爱劳动，掌握生活必备技能，……。
注意事项：
1．从表格中选择三项，其中“劳”必写。表格中的提示只是作为参考，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，适当发挥。
2．词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
参考词汇：劳动教育labor education
How time flies! We’re leaving junior high school and entering senior high school. In the past three years, I have made great progress in many ways. _______________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word, I’m very proud that I can make such great progress in the past three years.
【答案】
How time flies! We’re leaving junior high school and entering senior high school. In the past three years, I have made great progress in many ways.
First of all, I think we must love our country and our family. To be honest is very important, so I can keep my promise all the time. I have been thankful to my parents and friends. Second, I know the importance of knowledge, so I work hard and enjoy reading. In my free time, I read many books because reading can open up a new world to me. Third, labor education is necessary for us to receive, and I have taken an active part in all kinds of labor, such as doing housework and cleaning up the classroom. In this way, I have learnt many necessary life skills.
In a word, I’m very proud that I can make such great progress in the past three years.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示和要求，从“德，智，体，美，劳”几个方面中谈谈自己这三年来的进步，给自己的初中生涯做一个总结。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，表明自己在过去三年里进步很大；
第二步，具体从“德，智，体，美，劳”说明自己的进步；
第三步，总结，自己为这些年的进步感到骄傲并致谢。
[亮点词汇]
①To be honest老实说
②In one’s free time在某人业余时光
③take an active part in积极参加
[高分句型]
To be honest is very important, so I can keep my promise all the time.（不定式作主语）
繁重的课业负担不利于学生的身心健康与全面发展，国家教育部提出“减负”。为树立健康第一的教育理念，你校建议学生每天课后采取适当方式放松自己。假设你是九（1）班的一名学生，最近，你对班上同学课后放松方式进行了调查。请以“Ways to Relax”为题，根据提示信息和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：
1.
2. 你的观点：哪一种（些）放松方式是适当的？为什么？
写作要求：1. 文章必须包括图表中所有内容要点，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；
2. 词数：80词左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
Ways to Relax
I’m a student of Class 1, Grade 9. Recently, I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class. ________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Ways to Relax
I’m a student of Class 1, Grade 9. Recently, I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.
Different students have different ways to relax. Here are the results. Twenty-five percent students often watch TV. Thirty percent students like to play computer games or chat with their classmates on the Internet. Twenty-five percent students enjoy reading different kinds of books while twenty percent students think doing sports is a good way to relax.
In my opinion, taking exercise is the best way to relax because it can rest our brains and eyes. It is good for our mental and physical health.
【详解】[总体分析]
①体裁：本文是一篇说明文，介绍了学生课后的活动；
②时态：本文时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点，适当增加细节，灵活运用恰当的句型，使行文流畅自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明调查的对象和主题。
第二步，详细说明调查的结果和细节。
第三步，发表自己的看法并作总结。
[亮点词汇]
①play computer games 玩电脑游戏
②chat with 和……聊天
③different kinds of 各种各样的
④mental and physical health 身心健康
[高分句型]
①Twenty-five percent students enjoy reading different kinds of books while twenty percent students think doing sports is a good way to relax. （while表示对比、并列；动名词doing sports作主语）
②In my opinion, taking exercise is the best way to relax because it can rest our brains and eyes. （使用固定句型be the best way to do sth.；because引导原因状语从句）
近年来，随着青少年的学习压力越来越大，青少年的身体状况也令人担忧。“双减”政策的出台，减轻了学生的学习压力，确保学生有充足的体育锻炼时间，有利于树立健康第一的教育理念。请根据提示结合自己的经历和经验，以“The importance of exercise”为题，写一篇英语短文。
The importance of exercise
What’s your favorite sport
How often do you do exercise
Why do we need to do exercise
要求：1.应包含思维导图提示中所有要点，可适当进行拓展；
2.词数：100词左右；
3.书写工整规范，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
The importance of exercise
Everyone hopes to live happily in the world. Exercise is important to a happy life._________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The importance of exercise
Everyone hopes to live happily in the world. Exercise is important to a happy life. Physical exercise is indispensable to a happy life. My favourite sport is basketball, as it is very exciting. I play basketball three times a week. There is a famous saying, “Life lies in physical exercise.” There is no doubt that exercise is good for our health. On the one hand, doing exercise helps us keep a healthy lifestyle. A person who takes exercise regularly will keep fit. What’s more, exercise can make us well—behaved and confident. If we usually take exercise with our friends, we will be close to them.
On the other hand, it’s very important for us to learn how to cooperate with each other. Doing exercise can help us develop our sense of teamwork, which is important for our career.
In my opinion, exercise can make our life more colorful. Nothing is more important than it. It’ll certainly help us live longer and more healthily.
【详解】1.题干解析：本文是一篇材料作文，要求写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍体育锻炼的重要性，文中给出的要点需要全部包括在内，标题和文章开头已给出，要注意上下文衔接。
2.写作指导：本文人称主要使用第一人称和第三人称，时态使用一般现在时。文章可以分为三段。第一段介绍锻炼的重要性，第二段介绍自己岁喜欢的运动和运动的频率，最后一段介绍为什么要运动。适当使用短语和句型增加文章亮点，不要出现单词和语法错误。
为了更好地实施劳动教育，深圳市中小学的劳动课程百花齐放，广受学生喜爱。假设你是李华，校学生会宣传部负责人。请根据以下提示给学校的劳动教育英文宣传视频配上解说词。
　　要点提示：
　　1. 说明劳动教育的意义：学习基本生活技能；提升实践能力；…… （请补充一点）；
　　2. 介绍学校开设的劳动课程：烹饪课；屋顶菜园；…… （请补充一点）；
　　3. 总结学生们的收获。
　　要求：
　　1. 80词左右 （开头已给出，不计入总词数内）；
　　2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称；
　　3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯；
　　4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。
　　参考词汇：labour education 劳动教育 practical ability 实践能力
These days, labour education is getting increasingly important. Many schools provide a series of labour education courses for students. By attending labour classes, students can learn some basic life skills.
Their practical ability can also be improved because they are required to put what they have learnt into practice. In addition, they will get a strong sense of achievement after enjoying their own fruits of labour.
What attracts them most is the cooking course which teaches students to cook both common dishes and local specialties (特色菜）. In the rooftop garden, students can grow all kinds of vegetables. Doing housework is part of their labour courses.
All students enjoy themselves in the various labour courses. Some have become more creative, some have learnt new skills and some have made friends with others who has the same hobbies. It is of great significance for the all-round development of teenagers. I'm sure the labour education in our school will be a great success in the near future.
家庭教育片《家有儿女》中，爸爸夏东海为了提高孩子们的劳动积极性，做了一次家务劳动奖励活动。假定你是李华，在今天的英语课上，你们班就“学生是否应该有偿做家务”这一话题进行了热烈讨论。请用英语写一篇短文，总结讨论的情况，并谈谈你的想法。
要求：
1.词数80左右；
2.须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
参考词汇：reward n.奖赏；报酬
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范文与翻译：
As far as I know, some students do housework such as doing the dishes, feeding the pets, and doing the laundry in exchange for some money from their parents. Today, we had a heated discussion in the English class about whether students should be paid for housework.
Some students think they shouldn’t be paid everyday housework because it is their responsibility. Others believe that getting rewards can encourage them to do more housework.
In my opinion, doing housework is a good way to develop our independence and show love to our parents. So we shouldn't get paid for it.
时光总是不停息的走动，大家愉快的三年时光就快要结束了，回想三年这美好的时光，我们一起同甘共苦，可惜天下没有不散的宴席，高中阶段又会是怎样的生活呢，你又想变成什么样的人呢？借此机会给未来一年的自己写一封信吧！
要求：
1）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
2）词数80左右（信封的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear me,
How is everything going _____________________________________________________
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Yours,
Me
【答案】
Dear me,
How is everything going Junior high school is coming to an end. I hope that you will become a better person in the new stage of study. First of all, in terms of study, you should study harder to get into a good university. Secondly, as for physical health, you need to exercise every day and eat healthy food. A good body is the basic condition for learning. Finally, you also need to take part in after-school activities and make more friends. These will make you a better person.
Yours,
Me
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文，为应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：题目要求给未来一年的自己写一封信，谈谈自己在高中应该怎么做。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达美好愿望；
第二步，具体谈谈应该如何做；
第三步，收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①come to an end 结束
②as for 置于
③take part in 参加
[高分句型]
I hope that you will become a better person in the new stage of study.（that引导宾语从句）
作业是学生课外学习的重要手段。新的教育理念赋予了作业新的内涵。随着作业的改革，学生作业的内容和形式逐步丰富多样，变得更加开放、综合，更加多元、创新。但有些人认为这类作业与考试没有太大关系，而且会占用很多时间。请针对以上现象，结合自己的学习经历，写一篇短文。内容包括：
*What’s your opinion on the new kind of homework
*Please tell us one of your own experiences.
*What have you learned from the experience
要求：
1.词数不少于80词；
2.参考词汇仅供参考；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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I think the new kind of homework is very interesting because it can help to check whether we can put what has been taught into practice, and at the same time it improves our ability to think creatively.
We are often asked to do some open-ended homework. I remember once our physics teacher asked us to do a survey in a group and then report the result to the class. We worked in a group of four, surfing the Internet, designing questions, collecting information and taking notes together. Each of us did our job very actively and we all enjoyed doing the homework.
By doing this kind of homework, we not only learn to put the knowledge in books into use but also know the importance of team work. I think new-style homework does us a lot of good.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，题目要求根据所给内容写一篇关于作业与考试无关现象的作文，主要通过结合自己的经历表述自己的观点。
2.写作指导：本文可以按照所给材料分为三部分：第一部分写自己对于这种新作业模式的观点；第二部分主要描述个人的经历；第三部分写自己通过经历学习到的内容。人称主要采用第一人称，时态主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。准确运用时态，内容要充实，句子要通顺。
繁重的课业负担不利于学生的身心健康与全面发展，为树立健康第一的教育理念，你校建议学生每天课后采取适当方式放松自己。假设你是九（1）班的一名学生，最近你对班上同学课后放松方式进行调查。请根据以下表格提供的信息和要求，用英文写一篇短文。
对象 九（1）班
放松方式 1. 看电视（20 人） 2. 玩电脑游戏或上网聊天（25 人） 3. 阅读各种书籍（15 人） 4. 进行体育锻炼（10 人） 5. 没有时间放松（11 人）
你的观点 哪一种（些）放松方式是适当的？为什么？
写作要求∶
1. 文章必须包括表格中所有内容要点， 可适当发挥以使行文连贯；
2. 词数∶80 词左右；（文章的开头已给出, 不计入总词数）
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
参考词汇∶聊天 chat
I’m a student of Class 1, Grade 9. Recently, I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.________________________________________________________
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【答案】
I’m a student of Class 1, Grade 9. Recently, I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.
Different students have different ways to relax after class. Among them, twenty students like watching TV, twenty-five students often play computer games or chat online, fifteen students like reading all kinds of books, ten students often do sports and eleven students don’t have time to relax.
I think reading and doing sports are good for us， because we can improve ourselves by reading and doing sports can keep us healthy.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目要求根据表格所提供的信息介绍一下学生课后所采取的放松方式，并发表自己的观点，可适当发挥让文章更加连贯。
2.写作指导：本文应采用第一人称和第三人称来书写，时态使用一般现在时，注意主谓一致。写作时，可根据表格内容依次介绍学生进行放松的方式，最后发表自己的观点，谈谈哪种方式是好的，以及原因。
“和美”教育一直是我们包河教育的主题。在这一教育理念的影响下，大家都争做文明有礼的”和美”少年。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文谈谈自己的努力方向并向你校英文报投稿。
◇勤学好思；
◇礼貌待人；
◇诚实守信；
◇……
注意：
1. 词数：80—100 词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 文中题目已给出，不计入总词数。
I want to be an excellent student
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【答案】
I want to be an excellent student
I believe everybody wants to be an excellent student, including me.
To achieve the goal, I shall study harder and think more about the questions than ever before. In my daily life, I should be polite to others, not only the teachers but also my parents as well as other people around us, such as the workers at school. Besides, being an excellent student also means being honest as well as keeping promises. What’s more, I shall read more great books to increase the knowledge of the world. Following the rules and protecting the environment are another two important things I should remember.
I hope I can keep my words and be an excellent student.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的要点提示，谈谈为做文明有礼的”和美”少年自己的努力方向，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图——成为优秀的学生；
第二步，具体阐述为了实现该目标应该怎么做；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①including 包括
②achieve the goal实现目标
③think more about考虑更多……
④not only...but also...不仅……而且……
⑤as well as以及
[高分句型]
①To achieve the goal, I shall study harder and think more about the questions than ever before.（动词不定式作目的状语）
② Following the rules and protecting the environment are another two important things I should remember.（动名词短语作主语；省略that的定语从句）
2022年版义务教育体育与健康课程标准提出坚持落实“健康第一”的教育理念，作为一名中学生你认为青少年现阶段存在的身心方面的健康状况如何，你是怎么做的，有什么合理的建议，谈谈你的看法。
要求：1.字数80—100，开头已给出，不计入总字数；
2.内容包括青少年身心方面的健康状况，你的做法及合理化建议；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
As we all know, health is the most important thing.__________________________________
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【答案】
As we all know, health is the most important thing. It is reported that most young people in China are becoming unfit. Without regular exercise, students are becoming weaker. In order to be healthier, I will take the following actions.
First of all, I think it is necessary to have enough sleep. It is suggested that we should sleep for at least 8 hours every day. At the same time, I want to have a healthy diet. I plan to have more fruits and vegetables, and eat less meat. What’s more, I decide to spend more time exercising instead of playing computer games all the time. In addition, I believe it is meaningful to do eye exercises. In this way, I can protect my eyes well.
In a word, I will follow my plan to become healthier.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求介绍青少年现阶段存在的身心方面的健康状况，给出合理的建议，就自己如何做谈谈看法。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一、三人称为主，结合具体语境选择合适的时态。可分为三段式写作：第一段介绍青少年的身心健康状况并发表看法引出建议；第二段介绍具体该怎么做；第三段收尾。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

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