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话题04 学生成长与经历
考情分析
结合全国近年中考真题可知，此话题属于高频话题，在去年中考中，有超过10个地区的中考试题要求学生描述自己的一段经历，如助人经历、海报或短视频制作经历、团队合作经历、学校和家庭活动、旅行经历等。虽然每个地区所要求介绍的经历都不相同，但大体可分为活动经历、物品制作经历和一些不期而遇的突发事件经历，除描述经历外，通常需要表达在这段经历后的感受、收获等。命题维度主要从以下三个方面：
【维度一】：活动经历和感受
【维度二】：制作经历和感受
【维度三】：突发事件经历和感受
教材链接
教材链接 维度一：活动经历和感受 七下 U11 How was your school trip 七下 U12 What did you do last weekend 八上 U1 Where did you go on vacation 八下 U9 Have you ever been to a museum
维度二：制作经历和感受 八上 U8 How do you make a banana milk shake
维度三：突发事件经历和感受 八下 U5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came 九全U12 Life is full of the unexpected.
【真题展示】
（2023·南充）你校英语报以“Where there is a will,there is a way（有志者事竟成）”为题向全校学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.你对该谚语的理解；
2.你生活中的一个事例；
3.你的感悟。
要求：1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数100左右（短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Where There Is a Will,There Is a Way
Have you heard of the saying “Where there is a will,there is a way.” It means ______________________
一、写作思路
写作提纲
【范文展示】
Where There Is a Will,There Is a Way Have you heard of the saying “Where there is a will,there is a way.” It means if you are really determined to do something（决定做某事）,however difficult it might be,you will finally find a way to do it well. Take me for example. Speaking English used to be difficult for me. In Grade 7,I couldn't speak English clearly and my classmates always laughed （嘲笑） at me.With my English teacher's help,I made在……的帮助下 plans to improve it. I read English texts aloud for an hour every morning. I also made a foreign friend online. I talked to her twice a week. She helped me correct the way I spoke English.Day by day（日复一日） my spoken English improved a lot. Last month I won first prize in the English Speech Contest in my school. This experience has taught me that nothing is too difficult as long as（只要） you make the decision to do it,just as the saying goes,“Where there is a will,there is a way.” 第一段：点明主题 用“It means…”解释 “有志者事竟成的”含 义 第二段：自己的经历 ①英语口语差 ②找方法提升口语 ③获得英语口语竞赛 一等奖 第三段：启示
常用短语积累
【维度一：活动经历和感受】
take part in an English
参加英语演讲比赛 speaking competition 赢得第一名 win the first prize
开心地跳起来 jump with joy
尽可能多得和我沟通 communicate with me as much as possible
纠正我的发音 correct my pronunciation取得如此好的成绩 get such good grades
从比赛中获益良多 benefit a lot from the competition
无数有趣的回忆 countless interesting memories对...感到骄傲 be proud of
被选择去做 be chosen to do 努力做某事 make an effort to do
在某人的帮助下 with the help of 感激某人 be thankful to
打开眼界 widen my horizon 丰富我的生活 enrich my life
留些美好的回忆 leave some beautiful memories
理解...的重要性 understand the importance of... 提高我们的沟通技能 improve our communication skills成功的秘诀 the key to success 成功做某事 succeed in doing 一种强烈的自豪感a strong feeling of pride
【维度二：制作经历和感受】
一开始 to start with/ first of all 最后 at last 在那之后 after that 制作一个英语视频 make an English video设计一张海报 design a poster 制定一个计划 make a plan 想出一些主意 come up with some ideas关于...有一个讨论 have a discussion about收集信息 collect information询问某人关于某事 ask sb. about sth. 制作香蕉奶昔 make a banana milk shake 把...倒入... pour... into... 春卷 spring roll 切碎猪肉 cut up pork 把......切成薄片 cut... into thin pieces 把……混合在一起 mix... together 加一些盐和辣椒 add some salt and pepper 在热油里炸 fry... in hot oil 用……覆盖 cover... with... 由不同东西制成 be made of different things 被画上鲜艳的画 be painted with 用剪刀剪红纸 cut the red paper with scissors 手工塑性 shape by hand colorful drawings
【维度三：突发事件经历和感受】
看到一个老人躺在地上 an old man lying one the road大声呼救 shout for help 把...送去医院 take... to the hospital及时被救 be saved in time 下大雨 rain heavily 被雨淋湿 get wet in the rain在回家路上 on the way home 把钥匙落在家 leave keys at home (闹钟)发出响声 go off 错过公交车 miss the bus 不期而遇的事 the unexpected 错失进球 miss sc oring a goal让…失望 let sb. down 肩上有沉重的负担 have a heavy weight on his shoulders 齐心协力 pull together被深深地感动了 be deeply touched
完全被震惊 be completely shocked难以置信地盯着看 stare in disbelief at..
好句积累
【维度一：活动经历和感受】
1.当提起“第一次尝试”这个话题，我永远不会忘记我在七年级时的一段有意义的经历。 (Tip：用 when it comes to...来开启话题)
When it comes to the topic of“My First Try”,I' ll never forget the meaningful experience I had in Grade 7.
2. 在初中时期, 让我印象最深刻的就是参加志愿者活动。 (Tip:用 What impressed me most is to do...描述活动)
During junior high school , what impressed me most is to take part in a volunteering activity.
3.在机器人博物馆，每个人都很激动看到不同形状的机器人。 (Tip：be+adj.+to do 描述活动感受)
In the robot museum, everyone was excited to see robots in different shapes.
4.我们去了历史博物馆，学习到了很多关于这个城市的历史故事。 (Tip：用doing表伴随描述收获)
We went to a history museum, learning about many historical stories about the city.
5.这段经历不仅丰富了打开了我的眼界，而且给我留下了美好的记忆。 (Tip：用 not only，but also 连接两个并列的活动感受)
The experience not only widens my horizon, but also leaves me with beautiful memories.
6.我是多么得惊讶和激动，当我被告知我得到了一等奖。 (Tip：用感叹句描述感受)
How surprised and excited I was When I was told to get the first prize.
7.只有不遗余力地努力，你才能达到目标。(Tip：用Onlyif倒装句描述活动后的收获)
Only if you spare no effort to work hard, can you achieve your goals.
8.我终于意识到为什么我爷爷喜欢喝茶并且收集茶具。 (Tip：用I've realized that+从句描述感想)
I' ve finally realized why my grandpa loves drinking tea and collecting tea sets.
【维度二：制作经历和感受】
1.制作这个海报的目的是为了我家乡这几年的快速发展。 (Tip：用表语从句描述制作原因)
The purpose of making the poster is to show the rapid development of my hometown in recent years.
2. 一开始, 我们有一个热烈的讨论并且制定了一个计划。 (first of all/ to start with)
To start with, we had a heated discussion and made a plan.
3.我们努力地通过不同方式收集信息，并且问我们的长辈他们过去的生活条件。(Tip：用make aneffort to do 描述制作经历)
We made an effort to collect information in different ways and asked our elders about their past living conditions.
【维度三：突发事件经历和感受】
1.当我放学在回家的路上时，突然开始下雨。(Tip：用when引导的时间状语从句描述事件)
When I was on my way home after school, it began to rain heavily.
2.虽然暴风雨把很多东西弄坏了，它让家人和邻居更紧密。(描述突发事件后的结果) (八下U5小阅读)
Although the storm broke many things apart, it brought families and neighbors closer together.
3.我太害怕了以至于在那之后我几乎不能思考。 (Tip：用so… that…描述突发事件后的感受)
I was so scared that I could hardly think clearly after that.
4.幸亏有王先生和乘客的帮助，这个老人及时地被医生所救。(描述突发事件后的结果) (八下U1小阅读)
Thanks to Mr. Wang and the passengers, the man was saved by the doctors in time
【开头句】
1.Last weekend,I got up early and cooked noodles for my parents.
2.Looking back at these past three years,I had a lot of sweet memories.
3.My parents have done so much for me.I am so thankful to them.
4.One thing that happened in the past had a deep influence on me.
5.For me,the most unforgettable experience was taking part in an English conversation test.
【中间句】
1.When my parents got up,they were surprised and praised me with a big smile.
2.From this unforgettable experience,I've also got a deeper understanding
of my parents.
3.It happened between my best friend Lisa and me in early summer when
I was in middle school.
4.It's a warm feeling between Alice and me. This feeling makes me smile all the time.
5.During the three years,Linda always helps me with my English homework. I am very grateful to her.
6.We should not only study hard,but also behave well and help each other.
7.He felt like there was a heavy weight on his shoulders as he walked home alone.（源自九年级全一册Unit 11课文）
8.You can never imagine how difficult the road to success is.（源自九年级全一册Unit 4课文）
9.I was so scared that I could hardly think clearly after that.（源自八年级下册Unit 5课文）
【结尾句】
1.As teenagers,we should take action to help around the house!
2.What I learn from this experience is that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it and try to do it bravely.
3.This experience has taught me that nothing is too difficult as long as you make the decision to do it.
4.Again,I would like to express my gratitude to my friends for all their support!
5.The best way to show my thanks is to be a good student and a useful person.
【谚语积累】
1.Time flies!/How time flies! 时光飞逝!
2.Time is money.一寸光阴一寸金。
3.Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.世上无难事,只要肯攀登。
4.All good things come to an end.天下没有不散的筵席。
高分句型
1.我们学校重视实践技能和创新思维相结合的教学方法。
Our sehool values the teaching method that mixes practical skills with creative thinking. (that 引|导的限制性定语从句:固定搭配mix..with.)
2.我们学校鼓励学生参加课外活动和各种俱乐部。
Our school supports students’ participation in after-school activities and different clubs. (固定搭配
one's participation in 词块：after-school activities)
3,研学为学生提供实践经历,帮助他们将课堂知识与实际应用联系起来。
Study tours provide students with hands - on experiences that help them connect classroom knowledge with practical uses,
(固定搭配provide sb with sth; 词块 hands-on experiences ;that 引导限制性定语从句)
中考真题
(2023·浙江宁波·中考真题)为了弘扬传统文化，你校结合“宁波元素”在今年5月19日(中国旅游日)开展了丰富多彩的文化活动(cultural activities)。假如你是李华，请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。 (指向话题一：活动经历)
注意：
(1)短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3) 词数80—100。
When What I did What I learned Feelings
in the morning visit Ningbo Museum the long history of the city
at noon make Ningbo Tangyuan a symbol of family get-togethers
in the afternoon
Step 1 审好题
1.读题时，在文中圈画出写作内容。
2.四定：定主题 介绍文化活动经历 定体裁 记叙文
定人称 第一人称 定时态 过去时+一般现在时
Step2 列提纲
请根据题目，在以下思维导图中填入关键词。
Step3 分段写作
开篇：介绍活动背景和总体感受
1.介绍活动背景(Tip：介绍时间、地点等活动背景 1句) On May 19, our school organized many traditional cultural activities.
2.介绍活动总体感受(Tip:用I'm+adj. that+句子介绍活动总体感受或收获 1句)I was happy that I learned a lot.
正文：详细介绍活动过程(按时间顺序描述)
Tip：①描述活动过程用过去式；②用时间词连接不同的活动；③描述某一活动时，可增加一些细节，或描述感受、学习收获, 让文本内容更充实; ④描述收获的表达: learn about, I' ve realized that, doing伴随状语等; ⑤描述感受: be+ adj.+ to do, 感叹句等。
1. 上午活动(2-3 句) 增加活动细节：人物 增加活动细节 In the morning, I visited Ningbo Museum with my classmates and enjoyed the beauty of traditional arts.
用 be excited to do 表示感受 Everyone was excited to learn about the long history of the city.
2. 中午活动(2-3 句) 用 learn+句子描述活动后的收获 At noon, we made Ningbo Tangyuan. We learned it was a symbol of family get-togethers.
3. 下午活动(2-3句) 用伴随状语 doing 描述活动收获 In the afternoon, we read many ancient local stories and shared them in the story-telling competition, learning
about the traditional values of our city.
结尾：总结活动带来的收获、感受
Tip: ①描述活动收获时可用一般现在时; ②用 not only, but also 连接两个收获。
1.描述活动收获(1-2句) 用 not only, but also 连接两个收获 These activities have not only helped me have a better understanding of our city, but also left a lasting
influence on my heart and mind.
Step4 连段成篇
请检查以上段落语言是否准确，完成文章写作，可增加词句衔接段落，使文章通顺、具有逻辑性。
My Traditional Cultural Experiences
On May 19, our school organized many traditional cultural activities. I was happy that I learned a lot.
In the morning, I visited Ningbo Museum with my classmates and enjoyed the beauty of traditional arts.Everyone was excited to learn about the long history of the city. At noon, we made Ningbo Tangyuan. We learned it was a symbol of family get-togethers. In the afternoon, we read many ancient local stories and shared them in the story-telling competition, learning about the traditional values of our city.
These activities have not only helped me have a better understanding of our city, but also left a lasting influence on my heart and mind.
考点预测
为了让同学们学会在心情不好时调节自己的情绪，培养勇于面对挫折的积极态度，学校阳七心理协会最近针对如何调节改善自己的情绪做了一项调查。下图是相关的统计结果。
How to improve your feelings when you are
假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.选出你经常采用的一种方式，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种方式给你的生活带来了什么积极影响。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Recently, a survey has been done among 1,000 students in our school about how to approve their feelings when they’re down. Here are the results.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Recently, a survey has been done among 1,000 students in our school about how to approve their feelings when they’re down. Here are the results. It’s obvious that 35 percent of the students think it’s a good way to talk with others, while 22 percent say they will feel better after having a good rest. In addition, 27 percent of them are going to play sports. And the others choose to eat delicious food.
As for me, I prefer to talk with my friends, parents or teachers when I’m down. Last month, I failed the English exam. I like English best and I’m good at English all the time. I felt down and got back home late that day. After I arrived home, I decided to tell my parents what happened and how I felt. Then my parents talked with me and helped me deal with the problem. I felt much happier finally. Sharing feelings with them not only makes us get closer but also makes us have a stronger relationship.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求以How to improve your feelings when you are为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明图表内容；
第二步，结合自己的经历介绍自己用的一种方式，并谈谈给自己带来了什么积极影响。
[亮点词汇]
①talk with others与别人交流
②choose to do选择去做某事
③all the time一直
④deal with the problem处理问题
[高分句型]
①As for me, I prefer to talk with my friends, parents or teachers when I’m down.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Sharing feelings with them not only makes us get closer but also makes us have a stronger relationship.（并列结构）
在现实生活中，很多事情充满了未知和不确定性，或是一件想不到的惊喜，亦或是一个预料不到的教训。新华中学网站（https/www.）发布了以“Life is full of unexpected!”为主题的英语分享交流活动，请你结合具体事例与同学们分享你在这方面的体会，用英语写一篇短文。
内容提示：
（1）What unexpected things did you meet
（2）How did you deal with it
（3）What did you think of it
要求：
（1）语句通顺连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）100词左右；
（3）文章不得出现真实学校、班级与姓名。
Life is full of unexpected
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【答案】例文
Life is full of unexpected
Last weekend, I decided to visit my aunt. I realized that I had left my mobile phone at home when I got to the train station. It was not a good start, was it Then I checked the time table and found I had made a big mistake. My train had already left five minutes ago. I was so worried that I decided to ask the police for help. Suddenly, a policeman saw me stand there helplessly and asked me what had happened. I told him that I missed my train. To my surprise, he told me that the train didn’t leave because it broke down. It would leave in ten minutes. I had enough time to catch it.
Life is really full of the unexpected.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你遇到的意想不到的事；
第二步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do决定做某事
②check the time tablec查看时间表
③make a big mistake犯了一个大错
④ask sb for help向某人寻求帮助
⑤break down坏了，抛锚
[高分句型]
①I realized that I had left my mobile phone at home when I got to the train station. (时间状语从句；宾语从句)
②I was so worried that I didn’t know what to do. (结果状语从句)
③To my surprise, he told me that the train didn’t leave because it broke down. (宾语从句；原因状语从句)
团队协作是21世纪人才必备能力之一。信任、配合、包容、沟通、责任、倾听是团队协作中重要的品质。你校校刊英语专栏以“团队协作”为话题发起征文，请你讲述自己团队协作的经历，分享其中令你最受益的品质及你的感悟，以供他人借鉴和学习。
写作要求：1.文中须包含上图提示的信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数100 字左右。
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【答案】例文：
Working together is important for teenagers.
Last term, Liz, Anne and I entered a science competition. Our task was to create a poster board with information about spaceships. After discussion, each of us got a job. Liz and Anne went to the library to look for more information about spaceships. I searched for the pictures we needed on the Internet. The next day, we organized the information and decided what we wanted to put on the board. After that, we spent three days making the poster board. Finally, we won second prize.
When working as a team, I learned how to work well with my partners. I listened to them carefully and I respectfully and confidently expressed my ideas. My communication skills have improved a lot.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时态”。
③提示：写作时根据图示介绍自己的团队协作经历，分享从中受益的品质及自己的感悟。行文注意语句通顺、意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，明确团队协作非常重要。
第二步，介绍自己的团队协作经历。
第三步，分享通过团队协作受益的品质及自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①look for寻找
②search for搜寻
③on the Internet在网上
④spend time (in) doing sth.花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
①Our task was to create a poster board with information about spaceships.（动词不定式作表语）
②I searched for the pictures we needed on the Internet.（定语从句）
③The next day, we organized the information and decided what we wanted to put on the board.（what引导的宾语从句）
艰难困苦，玉汝于成。每个人的成长都是种蜕变的过程，从幼稚走向成熟，从逆境走向成功。“精感石没羽，岂云惮险艰”，初中以来你有过逆势前行、克服困难的经历吗？请以”How to get over difficulty”为题写一篇英语短文，讲述你的一次经历和感悟。
内容提示：
1. What was your difficulty
2. How did you get over the difficulty
3. What have you learned from it
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数60-80；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to get over difficulty
No one can lead a life without difficulty. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
How to get over difficulty
No one can lead a life without difficulty. But how can we get over difficulty Here is one of my experiences.
I was weak in English in Grade 7, which troubled me a lot. Then I decided to learn English well. From then on, I got up early to memorize new words and useful sentences. Besides, I did many exercises. Indeed, it was not easy to catch up with my classmates, but I kept going and never gave up. At last, my hard work paid off, and I made great progress. Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind on it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主。
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“讲述自己克服困难的经历”并适当补充，使文章内容充实，行文应使用第一人称。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍自己有一段经历要介绍。
第二步，介绍如何克服这个困难。
第三步，分享这次经历带给自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①get over克服
②from then on从那时起
[高分句型]
①I was weak in English in Grade 7, which troubled me a lot.（定语从句）
②I got up early to memorize new words and useful sentences.（动词不定式做目的状语）
Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发帖求助，假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的生活经历，用英语跟帖回复。
注意：
1. 不要出现考生本人信息；
2. 80—100词。
Teens Around the World
Subject: Help
Hello! I have a problem. I joined a guitar club last term, and I liked it very much. I spent much time on it. But this term, I found I failed some exams. Now I don’t know how to deal with the problem. Should I give up playing the guitar Please give me some advice. Tina, America
Dear Tina,
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Li Hua, China
【答案】Dear Tina,
I’m sorry to hear that you are in trouble. In my opinion, you needn’t give up playing the guitar. But as a student, schoolwork is also important. You should manage your time well. Here I want to give you some advice. First, make a list of study plan and follow it. Second, play the guitar only on weekends. Third, make good use of your free time. For example, you can spend less time watching TV every night and spend more time studying. I believe you will do better in your next exam.
Li Hua, China
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据原帖，提出自己的观点；
第二步，给出自己的建议；
第三步，表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①give up doing sth.放弃做某事
②want to do sth.想去做某事
③make good use of好好利用
④do better in在某方面做得更好
[高分句型]
①I’m sorry to hear that you are in trouble.（that引导的宾语从句）
②For example, you can spend less time watching TV every night and spend more time studying.（spend time…in doing sth.花费时间做某事）
③I believe you will do better in your next exam.（省略that的宾语从句）
某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，讲述你通过勤奋，获得成功的经历，并谈谈你的感受。
提示问题：
What did you achieve by working hard
What did you do to achieve it
How did you feel about it
注意事项：1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；2.词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总次数）；3.文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Diligence is a must for us to realize our dreams.______________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
Diligence is a must for us to realize our dreams. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech competition last year.
It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not confident about my oral English and I was too shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the competition and got a prize. It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主。
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“通过勤奋，获得成功的经历”并适当补充，使文章内容充实，行文应使用第一人称。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，说明勤奋的重要性。
第二步，具体介绍自己的一次通过勤奋获得成功的经历。
第三步，收尾，说明这次经历带给自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in public当众
②prepare for准备
[高分句型]
①It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not confident about my oral English and I was too shy to speak in public.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it.（不定式作目的状语）
功成不必在我，功成必定有我。假设你是李华。你校英文报刊正在开展以“人人参与，共创美好(Be an Active Participant)”为主题的征文活动。请你用英文写一篇文章投稿，分享一次你积极参与家庭、学校或社会生活的经历，并谈谈你从中学到了什么。
提示词语：offer, take part in, organize, skill, meaningful
提示问题：● What did you do as an active participant
● What have you learnt from the experience
Be an Active Participant
Being an active participant is important in our life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
Be an Active Participant
Being an active participant is important in our life. Now let me share my experience with you.
Last year, I offered to design our class bulletin board. After gathering some ideas from my classmates, I came up with a design that would be both eye-catching and informative. Then, I asked my classmates for help to find the necessary materials and worked hard to bring the design to life. At last, I actively collected feedback from my classmates to make sure the bulletin board met everyone’s expectation.
I have gained a great sense of achievement from this experience. By taking an active part, not only did I make our classroom more beautiful, but also strengthened the bond with my classmates. This achievement has inspired me to help the class, the family, and the community in a meaningful way.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所列问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍做一个积极的参与者的重要性，引出话题：分享你的经历；
第二步，陈述作为做一个积极的参与者你所做的事情；
第三步，表达收获与感想。
［亮点词汇］
① meet one’s expectation 达到某人的期望
② gain a sense of achievement 获得成就感
［高分句型］
① After gathering some ideas from my classmates, I came up with a design that would be both eye-catching and informative. (that引导的定语从句)
② By taking an active part, not only did I make our classroom more beautiful, but also strengthened the bond with my classmates. (not only…but also…引导的并列句、倒装句)
奋斗的道路上不会一帆风顺，我们每个人在生活和学习上都会遇到这样那样的困难。你遇到困难时是怎样解决的呢？请以“How to Get Over Difficulty”为题写一篇英语短文。
提示：
1. What difficulty did you meet
2. How did you get over it
3. Your feeling.
注意：
1. 短文必须包括提示中的三个要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数80 个左右。
How to Get Over Difficulty
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How to Get Over Difficulty
In our daily life we often meet different kinds of difficulties. But how can we get over them Here is one of my experiences.
When I was in Grade 7, I didn’t do well in my lessons first. Exams always brought me endless sadness. As a result, I was afraid of studying and I became very lonely. I turned to my teachers for help. They gave me some useful advice. They told me not to give up because nothing is impossible for a willing heart. I was moved and worked harder than before. Finally, I succeeded.
Now I understand that I should learn to get over difficulty by myself with confidence and hard work.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所列三个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍生活中有各种困难，如何克服呢？从而引出话题；
第二步，陈述自己遇到的困难并介绍自己如何克服这一困难的；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
［亮点词汇］
① as a result 结果是
② give up 放弃
［高分句型］
① When I was in Grade 7, I didn’t do well in my lessons first. (when引导时间状语从句)
② They told me not to give up because nothing is impossible for a willing heart. (because引导原因状语从句)
有首歌唱得好，“团结就是力量”，而且团队合作的力量是无穷尽的，团队合作是21世纪人才必备的基本技能，其关键品质是信任、配合、包容、沟通、责任、倾听等。本月你校举办以团结协作为主题的征文比赛，请你讲述自己曾经参与的团队活动经历，分享其中令你最受益的一种或几种品质以及你的感悟，总结经验，在今后的团队活动中加以运用。
要求：
1. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
Teamwork is an basic skill for the talents of the 21st century. Trust, cooperation, tolerance, communication, responsibility, and active listening are good qualities in team.
Last month, our teacher asked us to make a book report on a book called Treasure Island. Our team members decided to work together to do the task. I like reading novels and always have a better understanding of the characters, so I offered to pick out the exciting parts of the novel. My friend Amy searched for some information about the writer while other members read some reviews online. We also asked our teacher for advice. Through the teamwork, the report got great success. We were all very happy.
In my experience of teamwork, I have learned the value of trust. So I think it’s very important to work together. It allows us to complete a task more efficiently.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍团队合作的关键品质；
第二步，具体阐述最难忘的一次团队合作经历；
第三步，书写结语，总结这次经历中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①offer to do主动提供做某事
②search for搜索
③ask sb for advice向某人寻求建议
[高分句型]
①I like reading novels and always have a better understanding of the characters, so I offered to pick out the exciting parts of the novel.（so连接并列句）
②So I think it’s very important to work together.（省略that的定语从句）

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