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2025届中考英语二轮复习高频考点突破：考点十七 书面表达
一、答题技巧
应用文
书信：明确写信目的，开头介绍背景意图，正文详述事项，结尾强调目的或表期待回复。
通知：含标题、通知对象、正文、发布单位和日期。标题醒目，对象明确，正文清晰简洁说明关键信息，语言简洁明了，注意信息完整准确，合理安排内容顺序。
材料作文
提供文字、图片或图表等材料，要求学生根据材料内容进行写作。
提取材料信息：观察所给图画/图表的内容，如：人物、事件、标题、坐标轴、图例等，明确类型和主题。
写作结构：可采用 “总——分——总” 结构。开头介绍主题和主要内容，中间描述、分析数据/内容/现象，结尾总结内容得出结论或看法。
注意时态。
话题作文
话题理解：准确理解核心含义，确定体裁和写作方向，多角度分析构思。
内容组织：围绕话题联想拓展，用事例、细节、论据支持观点，合理安排结构。
个性表达：在符合主题前提下展现创新思维和个性。
二、写作流程
审题定调
抓取信息：圈出人物、事件、时间、地点、要求等关键信息。
判断体裁时态：依题目情境要求确定体裁和时态，不同体裁特点不同，时态依内容和时间背景选择。
列提纲
规划框架：根据体裁和题目要求规划结构框架。
罗列要点：细化题目要点并罗列。
写作
开篇吸睛：可用引用、提问、设悬念、讲故事等方式开篇。
中间充实：按提纲展开，用丰富词汇、多样句式和具体事例描述论证，注重细节。
结尾有力：总结概括、强调观点，或提建议、展望未来、表期望。
检查
纠正错误：检查语法和词汇错误，包括主谓不一致、时态、词性、拼写、用词、搭配等错误。
优化表达：审视语句通顺连贯度，替换平淡词汇，将简单句升级为复杂句，提升文章品质。
二、往年考点分布情况
命题作文：多以校园生活、家庭生活、社会热点、个人经历与感受等话题为主。此类作文通常给出明确的写作要点和要求，考查学生对给定信息的组织和表达能力。
半命题作文：常给出部分题目，让学生补充完整后写作。此类作文在一定框架内给予学生发挥空间，既考查学生对主题的理解和拓展，又考查语言运用能力。
材料作文：提供文字、图片或图表等材料，要求学生根据材料内容进行写作。如给出几幅关于人们日常交通出行方式的图片，让学生描述不同出行方式的优缺点，并发表自己对选择出行方式的观点；或者给出一段关于某一社会现象的文字材料，要求学生分析原因并提出解决办法。考查学生对材料信息的提取、归纳和书面表达能力。
三、考查方向
语言表达准确性：重点考查学生对词汇拼写、语法规则的掌握程度，确保所写句子在词汇和语法上正确无误。无论是简单句还是复合句，主谓一致、时态运用、词性搭配等都要符合英语表达习惯。
内容完整性与逻辑性：根据题目要求，完整涵盖所有要点，并使文章内容条理清晰、逻辑连贯。各段落之间过渡自然，观点阐述有理有据。
语言丰富度与灵活性：运用多样化的词汇和句式，避免表达单一。
思维能力与创新意识：在给定主题下，考查思维拓展能力和创新意识。能否从独特角度思考问题，提出新颖观点，并通过合理的内容组织进行有效表达。
书写与规范意识：重视书写的规范性和美观度，以及对标点符号等细节的正确处理。整洁、规范的书写能提升文章整体印象分，而标点符号的正确使用有助于准确传达文意，避免歧义。
习题：
一、
一封来自宇航员陈冬的回信让陈曼琳下定决心按照心中的梦想及信中的建议继续努力。成长路上，你曾经遇见过很多人，如一位师长，一个朋友等；你也曾经历过很多事，如一次比赛，一项活动等；你也有自己喜欢的东西，如一首歌，一本书；这些人、事物或多或少的对你产生影响，让你发生一些变化，这些变化往往会有助于你的成长。请以“________ made me a difference”为题写一篇英语短文,
以下问题供你参考：
According to an experience of your own, talk about:
1. Which person or thing touched you
2. How did you feel and what did you gain (收获)
3. …
注意：
1. 观点明确，语意连贯，层次清楚，书写规范。
2. 表达中不得提及真实姓名和校名等相关信息。
3. 100词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
___________ made me a difference
In our life, our family or friends, even some strangers, as well as we’ve gone through in our study or daily life, may make us a difference.
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二、
假设你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学生摄影展(International Junior School Student Photography Show) 。请给你的英国朋友 Peter写封信, 请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1. 主题: 环境保护;
2. 展览时间;
3. 投稿邮箱：photoshop@
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称.。
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三、
安静的居住环境有助于提升人们的生活质量，促进身心健康。为了给大家创设一个更好的居住氛围，请你以社区志愿者的身份，结合下面图示信息，根据写作要求，用英语写一封倡议信，向社区报刊的英文栏目投稿。
要求：
1）文中须包含下图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3）词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：residents居民，noise-proof windows隔音玻璃
Dear residents,
To create a quiet living environment for everyone, I would like to share some suggestions here.
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Let’s join hands to build a better living place for all of us.
Best regards,
A Volunteer
四、
随着“汉语热”遍及全世界，越来越多的国外学生选择中国城市作为游学的目的地。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Dave准备来到你的城市游学，并写电子邮件向你了解当地的生活方式，请你结合以下要点给他写一封回信。
要点：
1．见面礼仪；
2．做客礼仪；
3．餐桌礼仪；
4．……
注意：
1．短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．词数80～100 （开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
Dear Dave,
I'm glad to hear that you will have a study tour here. Way of life here is quite different from yours.
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I'm looking forward to seeing you here!
Yours,
Li Hua
五、
阳光中学九年级的学生进行了一次主题为“我的业余时间我做主”的问卷调查。假如你是学校学生会主席王松，请结合下面所给的图表1和图表2，将问卷调查的结果向全体学生汇报，并简要谈一谈作为一名中学生，该如何正确看待不同的娱乐类型以及如何培养自己良好的审美情操。
Types of entertainment 类型 占比 理由
Music 26% 使人放松；帮助睡眠；……
Books 44% 增长知识；思想活跃；……
Films 10% 铭记历史；感受生活；……
TV programmes 20% 开阔视野；激发创新；……
图表1 图表2
要求：
1. 结合图表内容，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包含表格中所有相关信息，并有适当发挥；
3. 词数100字左右(作文所给词汇不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：增长 increase
Hello, everybody! I’m Wang Song. I’m in Year 9 at Sunshine Middle School. Last week, we performed a survey. Now let me tell you something about it.
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六、
“孝亲敬长”是中华民族的传统美德，家中老人尤其需要陪伴与关爱。假如你是李华，你的班级将于周日上午组织一次关于 “Care For The Elderly” 的主题实践活动。请根据下图图示信息，给你的笔友Jack写一封英文邮件，向他介绍这次活动。
Purpose: to show love to the elderly
Time: 8:30—11:30, this Sunday
Place: Xinhua Nursing Home
Activities Reasons
spend time with the elderly bring them happiness
read ...for teach them something new make them feel loved
… …
注意：
（1）邮件必须包括上图的所有信息，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数80左右；邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m writing to introduce our class activity next Sunday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
答案以及解析
一、
An experience made me a difference
In our life, our family or friends, even some strangers, as well as what we’ve gone through in our study or daily life, may make us a difference.
Last weekend, I decided to do some housework after I finished my homework. First, I tidied up my room carefully. Then I cleaned up the living room and kept everything in order. One hour later, I managed to cook some noodles for a light supper. To tell you the truth, I was very tired after doing all that. But I felt really proud and satisfied when my parents praised me with big smiles on their faces.
The experience made me a difference. It has helped me realize that it is my duty to share housework. By doing housework, I can not only develop my living skills but also get a sense of achievement.
二、
Dear Peter,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to invite you to submit your photos for our upcoming International Junior School Student Photography Show. The theme of the exhibition is environmental protection, which is a very important issue nowadays.
The exhibition will be held from November 15th to November 20th. If you are interested, please send your photos to photoshop@ by November 10th.
I believe your work will be a great addition to our show. Thank you for considering this opportunity, and I look forward to seeing your photos!
Best regards,
Li Hua
三、
Dear residents,
To create a quiet living environment for everyone, I would like to share some suggestions here.
Firstly, installing noise-proof windows can significantly reduce external noise, making our homes more peaceful. Secondly, we should be mindful of the volume of our music and TV, especially during late hours, to avoid disturbing our neighbors. Additionally, volunteering in community activities can help foster a sense of unity and cooperation among residents. Lastly, establishing and adhering to community rules regarding noise levels will ensure a harmonious living environment for all.
Let’s join hands to build a better living place for all of us.
Best regards,
A Volunteer
四、
Dear Dave,
I'm glad to hear that you will have a study tour here. Way of life here may be different from yours.
Firstly, when meeting people for the first time, just wear a smile and shake hands with them. Secondly, if you are invited to a Chinese family, remember to arrive a bit earlier. And you can bring a small gift for them. Thirdly, Chinese usually use chopsticks when having meals, but don't point at others with them. And you'd better wait until all the family members are seated. In addition, look to the left before going across roads, because here drivers drive on the right side.
There's no need to worry about the differences. When in Rome, do as the Romans do.
I'm looking forward to seeing you here!
Yours,
Li Hua
五、
How to Face Grade Nine
We have been here in Grade Nine, one of the most important years for us students, for over eight months. Some of us feel good, while some do not. How should we face this year
First of all, be confident. We should believe nothing is impossible. Don’t lose heart, or you can achieve nothing. Second, be hard-working. If we work hard enough, we are sure to make progress. We should also learn to be careful because a miss is as good as a mile. Carelessness leads to low marks. Third, we should plan our time well. And it’s important to keep a balance between work and play. Finally, we should know how to deal with our stress. When having worries, remember to share them with others or turn to your teachers or your parents for help. Keeping your worries to yourself can make them worse.
Face the year wisely. It is you who shape your life and future!
六、
Dear Jack,
I’m writing to introduce our class activity next Sunday.
In China, it is necessary to show our love and care to the elderly. This Sunday, from 8:30 to 11:30, our class is organizing a “Care For The Elderly” event at Xinhua Nursing Home to bring the elderly warmth and care. We’ll start by spending the whole morning with them. Then, we will read a lot for the elderly who may have poor eyesights, bringing them more happiness and knowledge. Additionally, we also plan to teach them how to use new skills, such as shopping online and chatting on Wetchat.
I do believe this will be an unforgettable and meaningful experience in our life.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

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