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2025年中考英语高分提升之最新题速递
专题06 书面表达15篇（浙江中考真题+中考模拟）
一、书面表达
1．（2024·浙江） 假如你是李华，你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件, 向她推荐一所合适的学校。
注意：（1）邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数80左右；邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Candy,
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon.
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Li Hua
2．（2025·萧山模拟） 假设你是李华，你的外国笔友 David 给你写了一封邮件，在信中他谈到了美国人对"家" 的理解，请你根据邮件给他回一封约 80 词的信。
Dear Li Hua I hope you're doing well! Last weekend, my family had a big reunion at my grandparents' house. We shared stories and enjoyed a homemade meal. It made me realize that, for many Americans, home is about love, support, and staying connected. I know family is also very important in China. What does "home" mean to Chinese people How do you view family and its role in daily life I'd love to hear your thoughts on this. Also, is there any moment or experience in your life that really made you understand the importance of family Looking forward to your reply! Best, David
注意：（1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Thanks for your email!
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Best,
Li Hua
3．（2025九下·杭州模拟） 假设你是李华，为营造更好的校园英语氛围，你班决定开展"Create Our Outdoor Classroom"项目式学习(COOC Project)。经过分组讨论，你们形成了PlanA与Plan B两个实施方案（见下表）。请你选择其中一个方案，用英语写一篇短文，代表小组在英语拓展课上就你们所选方案的内容和优势进行汇报。
注意：（1）短文必须包含表中你所选方案的所有信息，并适当发挥。（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。（3）词数：80~100，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates, I'm very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is
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That's all. Thank you!
4．（2025九下·浙江模拟）"孝亲敬长"是中华民族的传统美德，家中老人尤其需要陪伴与关爱。假如你是李华，你的班级将于周日上午组织一次关于"Care For The Elderly"的主题实践活动。请根据下图图示信息，给你的笔友Jack写一封英文邮件，向他介绍这次活动。
Purpose:to show love to the elderly
Time:8:30—11:30,this Sunday
Place: Xinhua Nursing Home
Activities Reasons
spend time with theelderly bring them happiness
read ...for teach them something new make them feel loved
… …
注意：（1）邮件必须包括上图的所有信息，并适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；（3）词数80左右；邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I'm writing to introduce our class activity next Sunday
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2025九下·洞头） 假如你是李华，英国交换生Amy即将来你校体验特色课程。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向她推荐一个合适的课程。
Traditional Chinese culture is amazing. I love to work with others.
Chinese Kungfu Course on the playground in groups learn the history and do kungfu Chinese Cooking Course in the cooking room in groups cook Chinese food and share it
注意：
1.邮件需包含所选课程的至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3.词数80左右；邮件的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Amy,
I am happy to know that you are coming to experience the special courses in my school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2025·洞头模拟）假如你是李华，英国交换生Amy即将来你校体验特色课程。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向她推荐一个合适的课程。
Traditional Chinese culture is amazing. I love to work with others.
Chinese Kungfu Course on the playground in groups learn the history and do kungfu Chinese Cooking Course in the cooking room in groups cook Chinese food and share it
注意：
1.邮件需包含所选课程的至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3.词数80左右；邮件的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Amy,
I am happy to know that you are coming to experience the special courses in my school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．（2025·洞头模拟）假如你是李华。你的外国好友Jack将来温州游玩，以下是他的需求和安排。请你根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，谈谈你对他旅行地点的看法并补充旅行计划。
注意：
(1)内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
(3)词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I'm happy to know that you are coming to Wenzhou soon.
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Yours,
Li Hua
8． 请阅读Linda从意大利发来的电子邮件，并根据提示和要求，以李华的名义回复。
Dear Li Hua, My name's Linda and I'm going to be at your school for the exchange visit next month. I'm really excited about it! But I 'm also a little worried about the rules at your school. Could you please tell me something about it What do you think about it I know that China is famous for tea both in the past and now. I really want to know something about it. Could you please tell me something about it For example, how is it produced Why do Chinese people like tea Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Linda
School rules arrive on time wear school uniform keep the campus(校园）clean . . .
tea be known as pick by hand sent for processing pack and send to different places . . .
要求：（1）回信必须包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥。（2）词数100-120，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I'm glad to hear that you will come to my school.
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Hope this can help you. And I'm looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
9．（2024·柯桥模拟） 假设你是李华，下周你将参加学校的科技文化交流周活动，你将向来访的英国中学生介绍一个你的最新发明。
要求：（1）80词左右；（2）介绍中不能出现你的真实信息；（3）表格中的省略号部分须补充信息。
What's the invention …
What's made of / from …
What it can do …
What's its meaning to students …
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．10.（2025九下·金华模拟） 在前面的回答问题当中，我们了解了黄旭华先生。为了核潜艇事业，他隐姓埋名，将自己的青春和热血都奉献给了国家的核潜艇研发事业。作为初中生，我们也要做德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。在你的周围，一定也有符合新时代要求的榜样。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
Who do you appreciate (欣赏)
What is he/she like
Why do you appreciate him or her
What have you learned from him/ her
要求：（1）文中不得出现人名、校名等真实信息: （2）80词左右，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
In our lively society, there's a person who shines brightly and deeply inspires me.
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Yours,
Li Hua
11．（2024·瓯海模拟）请根据以下信息，写一篇 60-80 词的短文介绍你的好朋友 Kitty。注意内容连贯，不要逐条翻译。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
1. Kitty 今年 13 岁，中等身高，黑色长直发；
2. 家离学校很近，早上步行上学，约需8分钟，从不迟到；
3. 放学后练习一小时钢琴，以后想成为一名钢琴家；
4. 最喜欢的动物是大象，觉得大象很聪明友好，人们应该保护动物们的家园；
5. 适当自由发挥。
参考词汇：中等的 adj. medium 钢琴家 n.pianist 保护 v.protect
I have a good friend. Her name is Kitty.
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注意：（1）词数60—80字左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）（2）适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。（3）文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
姓名 张磊
年龄 14
外貌 中等身高，黑色短发，戴眼镜……
爱好 踢足球，听音乐，看书……
性格 安静的，友好的，经常在学习方面帮助同学。
最喜欢的科目 ……
上周六的活动 ……
Dear Scott,
This is my friend Zhang Lei.
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答案解析部分
1．Dear Candy,
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I know you love traditional Chinese art and food. I think my school is perfect for you.
It is in the beautiful countryside. The local food here is really fresh and delicious. I believe you'll enjoy it. Last year, we build a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! Also, our school has traditional are classes, and you can learn paper cut-ting. Chinese painting and so on. I'm sure you'll love my school.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Candy,
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon. As you love sports and Chinese food, I think my cousin's school is a good choice.
It is in the city center with many restaurants nearby. You'll find it easy to try different local foods there. In her school ，there are some special hand-made food classes. You can learn to make food by yourself. I'm sure you'll be interested in them. What's more, the ping-pong team in her school is great. As a ping-pong lover， you can't miss it!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写一封邮件，向暑期将来中国游学的英国好友Candy推荐一所合适的学校。这是一封推荐信，需要考生根据所给的Candy的兴趣爱好进行推荐，并说明推荐理由。本文说明的是目前的情况，应以一般现在时为主。 对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：范例一中的： I know you love traditional Chinese art and food. 运用了宾语从句；I think my school is perfect for you. 运用了宾语从句； I believe you'll enjoy it. 运用了宾语从句； Last year, we build a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there!运用了因果并列句； Also, our school has traditional are classes, and you can learn paper cutting，Chinese painting and so on. 运用了并列句； I'm sure you'll love my school. 运用了宾语从句。
范例二中的： As you love sports and Chinese food, I think my cousin's school is a good choice. 运用了原因状语从句，宾语从句； You'll find it easy to try different local foods there. 运用了it作形式宾语； In her school ，there are some special hand-made food classes. 运用了there be句式； I'm sure you'll be interested in them. 运用了宾语从句。
2．One possible version:
Dear David,
Thanks for your email! Family is also very important in China. We believe in supporting each other and respecting the elderly and loving the young. During the Spring Festival, our family gathers for a big meal to celebrate and honor our ancestors.
One experience that helped me understand family's importance was when my whole family came together for the Spring Festival last year. We shared stories and memories, which made me realize how much we depend on each other for love and support.
I hope this gives you a better idea of Chinese family values!
Best,
Li Hua
这是一篇材料作文。按照所给的提示内容给你的外国笔友David回一封信。写作中要回答所给邮件的所有问题，"家"对中国人来说意味着什么、你如何看待家庭及其在日常生活中的作用、以及有没有任何时刻或经历让你真正理解了家庭的重要性。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称主要是第一人称复数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如believe in supporting each other；helped me understand family's importance；depend on each other等以及句型结构，如During the Spring Festival, our family gathers for a big meal to celebrate and honor our ancestors.We shared stories and memories, which made me realize how much we depend on each other for love and support.等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
3．One possible version:
Dear classmates,
I'm very proud to share our plan with you today. The plan we choose is A. Building an English Garden.
First, we'll plant flowers and decorate the garden with English signs and poems. Students can read and relax here. Second, we'll hold weekly English corners for conversations and storytelling. Third, we'll set up a notice board to share creative works like posters and essays.
This plan combines nature with learning, making English fun and accessible. It also encourages teamwork and creativity. We hope everyone will love our English Garden!
That's all. Thank you!
这是一篇针对学校活动方案选择进行阐述的作文，整体要围绕所选方案展开，清晰地说明方案内容、实施步骤以及该方案的优势，以说服同学们认可该方案。
这是一篇不错的作文。内容详实，结构清晰明了。第一步（First）：先说明要种花，再用英语标识和诗歌装饰花园，强调学生能在此阅读和放松，营造出一种自然与英语学习相结合的氛围，为后续活动开展奠定基础。第二步（Second）：指出定期举办英语角进行对话和讲故事活动，为学生提供了一个锻炼英语口语、培养英语表达能力和交流能力的平台。第三步（Third）：说明 设立布告栏分享像海报和文章等创意作品，有助于激发学生的创造力和展示他们的学习成果，同时也能丰富英语花园的文化内涵。通过阐述计划的优势，既提到将自然与学习结合，使英语学习变得有趣且容易接近，又强调了对团队合作和创造力的鼓励，从多个角度突出了计划的价值和意义。
4．One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I'm writing to introduce our class activity next Sunday.
In China, it is necessary to show our love and care to the elderly. This Sunday, from 8:30 to 11:30, our class is organizing a"Care For The Elderly" event at Xinhua Nursing Home to bring the elderly warmth and care. We' ll start by spending the whole morning with them. Then, we will read a lot for the elderly who may have poor eyesights, bringing them more happiness and knowledge. Additionally, we also plan to teach them how to use new skills, such as shopping online and chatting on Wetchat.
I do believe this will be an unforgettable and meaningful experience in our life.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
这是一篇应用文，为一封邮件，以李华的身份给朋友Jack写一封信，要求写出表格和图片所给出信息，需要写出目的，事件发生的时间，地点，进行的活动以及原因。人称为第一人称，事件发生在将来，所以时态要用一般将来时。
写作时注意文章内容需要包含提示的所有要点，可以结合实际谈论一下自己的认识，充实作文，注意单词拼写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意链接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。文章中可能用到的词汇：organize组织；aim目的；respect尊重；meaningful有意义的。
5．One possible version:
Dear Amy,
I am happy to know that you are coming to experience the special courses in my school. Since you are fascinated by traditional Chinese culture and enjoy working with others, I would like to recommend the Chinese Cooking Course to you.
In this course, you will have the opportunity to learn about Chinese cuisine in the cooking room, where you can cook delicious Chinese food under the guidance of experienced teachers. Moreover, you will learn the history behind each dish, which will deepen your understanding of Chinese culture. Working in groups will also allow you to interact with other students and share your cooking experiences.
I believe you will enjoy this course and have a wonderful time learning about Chinese food and culture.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
本题是一篇英文邮件，要求考生以李华的名义，向即将来你校体验特色课程的英国交换生Amy推荐一个合适的课程，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）中国功夫课程；2）中国烹饪课程。写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力，需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇个固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如： Since you are fascinated by traditional Chinese culture and enjoy working with others, I would like to recommend the Chinese Cooking Course to you运用了since引导的原因状语从句；In this course, you will have the opportunity to learn about Chinese cuisine in the cooking room, where you can cook delicious Chinese food under the guidance of experienced teachers运用了where引导的限制性定语从句；Moreover, you will learn the history behind each dish, which will deepen your understanding of Chinese culture运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；Working in groups will also allow you to interact with other students and share your cooking experiences运用了V-ing短语充当的主语。
6．例文
Dear Amy,
I am happy to know that you are coming to experience the special courses in my school. Since you are fascinated by traditional Chinese culture and enjoy working with others, I would like to recommend the Chinese Cooking Course to you.
In this course, you will have the opportunity to learn about Chinese cuisine in the cooking room, where you can cook delicious Chinese food under the guidance of experienced teachers. Moreover, you will learn the history behind each dish, which will deepen your understanding of Chinese culture. Working in groups will also allow you to interact with other students and share your cooking experiences.
I believe you will enjoy this course and have a wonderful time learning about Chinese food and culture.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
7．例文
Dear Jack,
I'm happy to know that you are coming to Wenzhou soon.
Your plan is great. Yongjia College is a wonderful place to experience traditional Chinese culture with its ancient buildings and beautiful scenery. Wutian Old Street will let you taste local snacks and feel the local lifestyle.
For transportation, taking a local bus is a good choice. It's cheap and you can see the city along the way. Also, I suggest you visit Nanxi River. It's famous for its clear water and strange rocks, which is another highlight of Wenzhou's natural beauty.
I'm looking forward to meeting you.
Yours,
Li Hua
8．One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I'm glad to hear that you will come to my school. As a junior high school student, it is important to obey school rules. We should arrive on time and wear the school uniform properly. During class, we must listen attentively and not talk loudly. We should also keep the campus clean and respect our teachers and classmates. I believe that following these rules helps create a positive learning environment for everyone.
As for tea,it is known as one of the most popular drinks in China.Usually， tea plants are grown on the sides of mountains：When the leaves are ready， they are picked by hand and then are sent for processing. After that， the tea is packed and sent to many different places. Chinese people like tea because it's not only good for our health， but also can be given as a gift to our relatives and friends.Tea is an important part of traditional Chinese culture. Maybe you can have a chance to enjoy the wonderful tea.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
LiHu
这是一篇应用文作文，要求写封信给交换生Linda，解答她对即将到访的学校规则、茶文化等方面的疑问。写作步骤：开头简短地表达收到Linda邮件的喜悦，并欢迎她的到来；主体介绍学校的规则，包括准时到校、穿校服、保持校园清洁等，详细解释中国的茶文化，包括茶叶的采摘方式（如手工采摘）、加工过程、包装和分发等。同时，阐述中国人喜欢喝茶的原因，可能涉及文化、历史、健康等方面。结尾表达希望这些信息能帮助Linda，并再次期待她的到来。写作时态主要使用一般现在时来描述一般性的规则和情况，用到一般将来时描述Linda即将到来的交流访问。写作要确保回复中包含了邮件中提到的所有信息点，不要遗漏。同时，在表达上，要尽量清晰、准确，避免使用过于复杂或生僻的词汇和句型。
这是一篇材料作文。文章结构清晰，条理分明；内容全面、丰富，中心思想是欢迎Linda的到来，并解答她对学校规则和茶文化的疑问，语言准确，表达清晰，易于理解，没有语法错误，是篇优秀的作文。写得较好的句子或内容：1.I believe that following these rules helps create a positive learning environment for everyone.（that引导的宾语从句）2.Chinese people like tea because it's not only good for our health， but also can be given as a gift to our relatives and friends.（not only…but also…固定句式）3.Tea is an important part of traditional Chinese culture.（主系表）
9．例文：
Hello everyone! I'm Li Hua, and I'm really excited to introduce my latest invention. It's a cool smart study lamp that's made for students.
The lamp is mainly made of high-quality plastic, which is both durable and lightweight, along with some advanced electronic components. This lamp has an amazing feature. It can change its brightness by itself according to the light around us. This helps keep our eyes safe from too strong or too weak light. Also, it has a timer and a reminder in it. The timer helps us use our study time well, and the reminder makes us pay attention to our schoolwork.
For students like us, this lamp is more than just a lighting device. It greatly contributes to protecting our eyesight and improving our study efficiency. I sincerely hope you'll find it as useful as I do.
Thank you for your attention.
10．One possible version:
In our lively society, there's a person who shines brightly and deeply inspires me. He is my neighbor, a hard-working and kind person. He always helps others and never gives up, even when facing challenges. I appreciate him because he shows me how to stay positive and work hard. He is someone who always encourages me to do my best. Because of his dedication, I have learned the importance of perseverance. He is a true role model, and I hope to be like him in the future.
这是一篇记叙文与议论文相结合的文章。首先明确文章的主题，即"我欣赏的榜样"，然后确定要描述的具体榜样人物。文章可以分为开头、主体和结尾三个部分。开头简要介绍榜样人物；主体部分详细描述榜样的外貌、性格、行为等特征，阐述欣赏的原因，以及从榜样身上学到的东西；结尾部分总结全文，强调榜样的影响。文章可以使用一般现在时和一般过去时和第三人称来描述榜样。要注意语言的准确性和流畅性，避免语法和拼写错误，并进行必要的修改和润色，使文章更加完美。
考查材料作文。文章采用了典型的记叙文结构，开篇点题，中间展开叙述，结尾总结升华。内容充实，紧扣主题，通过具体事例展现了榜样的优秀品质和对"我"的积极影响。从榜样的身份、性格特点、行为表现以及"我"的感悟等多个方面进行了描述，使人物形象鲜明、立体。写得较好的句子： In our lively society, there's a person who shines brightly and deeply inspires me. He is my neighbor, a hard-working and kind person." I appreciate him because he shows me how to stay positive and work hard. Because of his dedication, I have learned the importance of perseverance." He is a true role model, and I hope to be like him in the future." 综上所述，这篇范文结构清晰、内容充实、中心思想明确，语言生动流畅，是一篇优秀的范文。
11．I have a good friend. Her name is Kitty.
Kitty is 13 years old. She is of medium height and has long straight black hair. Her home is near the school. So she often walks to school in the morning. It takes her about eight minutes to get to school. She is never late for school and she studies very hard. She is friendly to her classmates and often helps them. She likes playing the piano. She practices playing the piano for an hour after school every day. She wants to be a great pianist in the future. She likes elephants best. Because she thinks they are smart and friendly to people. She hopes people should protect the homes of animals.
这是一篇材料作文。要求写一篇短文，介绍你的好朋友Kitty。写作过程中注意包含题目给出的要点，可适当补充相关的内容，注意时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称单数，时态、语态、人称和语气等方面要保持一致性，行文要符合英文的表达习惯，注意语句通顺和上下文的连贯。
这篇短文很好地介绍了Kitty的各个方面，包括她的年龄、外貌、上学方式、兴趣爱好以及她对动物的看法，内容丰富且连贯。内容上首先提及了Kitty的年龄、身高和头发特征，使读者对她有了初步的印象；接着描述了Kitty的家离学校很近，因此她选择步行上学，且从不迟到，这展现了她的自律和勤奋；通过描述Kitty放学后练习钢琴，并表达了未来想成为钢琴家的愿望，突出了她对音乐的热爱和追求；最后，文章提到了Kitty最喜欢的动物是大象，并表达了她对大象聪明友好的看法，以及她希望人们保护动物家园的愿望，这体现了她的善良和环保意识。语言上使用了简单句和复合句，使得句子结构既清晰又富有变化。例如，She is of medium height and has long straight black hair. 和 She hopes people should protect the homes of animals.分别使用了并列句和宾语从句，增加了句子的复杂度；使用了多种词汇来描述Kitty，如medium height，long straight black hair，friendly to her classmates，play the piano，be a pianist，smart and friendly等，这些词汇的准确使用使得文章更加生动和具体。短文在结构上也做到了清晰有序，易于读者理解和接受。
12．Dear Scott,
This is my friend Zhang Lei. He is 14 years old. He is of medium build with short black hair. He has big eyes and wears glasses. He likes playing football, listening to music, reading books and keeping pets. He is quiet and friendly. He often helps his classmates with their studies. His favorite subjects are English and math. He went to the English club last Saturday. He likes English club very much, because he can communicate with his classmates in English. I'm sure you will be good friends.
Li Hua
考查提纲作文和应用文作文。要求根据下表信息， 用英文写封邮件，将同学张磊介绍给英国笔友Scott ，要求包括提示中的所有内容，并可适当增加内容，合理使用连接词，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的连接要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯，本文主要使用第三人称单数，一般现在时。
考查提纲作文和应用文作文 ，内容切题，语法正确，时态运用灵活，准确，一些固定短语，如 of medium build 中等身高， listen to 听， very much 非常，等等，及句型结构，如 He has big eyes and wears glasses. （and连接并列谓语）He likes English club very much, because he can communicate with his classmates in English.（because引导原因状语从句）， I'm sure you will be good friends. （省略that的宾语从句）等等的运用较为得体，使得文章更加流畅，自然。

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