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2025届高考英语写作特辑
第一期
一、题型概述
书面表达是历年高考的必考点。近几年新高考对书面表达的考查以应用文为主，不仅考查学生词汇和语法的运用能力，也考查学生的总体分析能力、观察能力、逻辑思维能力、篇章结构的组织能力和表达能力等。
二、评分标准
1. 第五档（很好）（13~15分）：完全完成了试题规定的任务。
（1）覆盖所有内容要点，表达清楚、合理；
（2）应用了较多复杂、高级的语法结构和词汇；
（3）语法结构或词汇方面使用准确，即使有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；表现了较强的语言运用能力；
（4）自然流畅地使用了语句间的连接成分使全文结构紧凑。
整体而言，完全达到了预期的写作目的。
2. 第四档（好）（10~12分）：完全完成了试题规定的任务。
（1）基本覆盖所有内容要点，表达比较清楚、合理；
（2）应用的复杂高级的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求；
（3）语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致；
（4）应用了语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
整体而言，达到了预期的写作目的。
3. 第三档（适当）（7~9分）：基本完成了试题规定的任务。
（1）虽漏掉一些要点内容，但覆盖所有主要内容，尚能表达出作文要求；
（2）应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，句子结构有一定的变化；
（3）有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解；
（4）能应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
4. 第二档（较差）（4~6分）：未适当完成试题规定的任务。
（1）漏掉或未描述清楚一些内容要点，有些内容与主题无关；
（2）应用的语法结构单调，词汇项目有限；
（3）有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；
（4）较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
5. 第一档（差）（1~3分）：未完成试题规定的任务。
（1）明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，偏离主题；
（2）语法结构非常单调，词汇项目非常有限；
（3）较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解，词不达意；
（4）缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
信息未能传达给读者。
6. 0分
（1）未作答；
（2）所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判；
（3）所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
注意：评分标准解读
（1）覆盖所有内容要点
评分标准中对考生所要求的“覆盖所有内容要点”，就是要求考生在写作时要认真审题，确保要点“全而不漏”，要点全面是作文得高分的必要条件。
（2）应用了较多的词汇
这里所说的“应用了较多的词汇”，是指词汇使用的多样性，如词性的多样性、高级词汇的使用、同义词与反义词的使用、短语的使用等。
（3）应用了较多的语法结构
“较多的语法结构” 就是指句式结构的多样性。毋庸置疑，单调的句式和结构、长度相近的句子会使文章呆板单调，缺乏生气和活力，而灵活多变的句式则使行文丰富多彩、生动、自然、流畅。感叹句、倒装句、复合结构、强调句型、定语从句、非谓语动词短语等语法结构的正确使用，可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映出作者的语言运用能力。
（4）上下文的连贯性
评分标准指出， 书面表达应该注意“上下文的连贯性”，并能“有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑”。此处所说的连贯性，是指段与段、句与句之间以一种明晰的、合乎逻辑的顺序组织与安排，做到在文意与结构上层次分明、条理清楚、连贯流畅。
三、知识积累
（一）基本句型
1. 主语+谓语（不及物动词）
My brother is studying.
我弟弟正在学习。
2. 主语+系动词+表语
My English is much better than before. I feel very happy. I am very grateful for your help.
我的英语比以前好多了。我感到非常高兴。我非常感谢你的帮助。
3. 主语+谓语+宾语
Tom met a difficult problem. I found a way and helped him.
汤姆遇到了一个难题。我找到一个方法并帮助了他。
4. 主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语
Mr. Smith has taught us English for 3 years. Yesterday was his 50th birthday. Every one of us bought him a present and I even told him an interesting story.
史密斯先生教我们英语已经三年了。昨天是他50岁生日。我们每个人都给他买了一个礼物，我甚至给他讲了一个有趣的故事。
5. 主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语
The old man had a lovely daughter. He named her Lily. He made her very happy every day and wanted her to become an artist.
这个老人有一个可爱的女儿。他叫她莉莉。每天他都让她很高兴并且想让她成为一名艺术家。
6. 主语+谓语（不及物动词）+状语
I work in a computer firm. Every day I get up early in the morning. After breakfast, I go to work by bike.
我在一家电脑公司工作。每天早上我都早早起床。早饭后，我骑自行车去上班。
7. 主语+谓语+宾语+状语
I took an English exam yesterday. I had prepared for it for two weeks. Before I turned in the paper, I checked it carefully.
昨天我参加了一场英语考试。我为此准备了两周的时间。在上交试卷之前，我仔细地检查了一下。
8. There be 句型
There are four teaching buildings, a library and a gym in our school. There are 36 classes in total, and there are 50 students on average in each class.
我们学校有四栋教学楼、一个图书馆、一个体育馆。有36个教学班，平均每个班有50名学生。
（二）连接过渡
连接词与过渡词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的基本手段。在句与句、段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接（过渡）性词语是非常必要的。写作中常用的过渡性词语归纳如下：
1. 表起始关系的过渡性词语
first of all，to begin/start with，firstly，nowadays，currently，recently，generally (speaking)，these days，with the development of，as far as I know，according to，above all，in one's opinion，by the way，when it comes to…，as sb. know
First of all, let me ask you something.
首先，让我问你一件事。
As far as I know, the tickets are given away free.
据我所知，这些票是免费发放的。
2. 表平行、对等或选择关系的过渡性词语
and，both...and..，as well (as)，neither...nor...，or，either...or...，not only...but also...，not...but...，on the one hand…on the other hand...，for one thing... for another (thing)...
They can neither read nor write.
他们不会读，也不会写。
The outcome depends on conditions as well as how events unfold.
结果取决于条件，还取决于事件的进展。
3. 表递进关系的过渡性词语
what's more，moreover，furthermore，additionally，in addition，also，besides，still，what's worse，to make things/matters worse，worse still，even worse
Worse still, most of these foods are loaded with fat, salt, and chemicals.
更糟糕的是，这些食品中的大多数富含脂肪、盐和化学成分。
The young find everything so simple. The young, moreover, see it as their duty to be happy and do their best to be so.
年轻人觉得每件事都那么简单。而且，他们把幸福视为自己的责任，并努力去实现幸福。
4. 表转折或让步关系的过渡性词语
(al) though，but，while，yet，however，nevertheless，otherwise，despite，instead，on the contrary，in spite of，regardless of，even if/though
It isn't hot; on the contrary, it's cold.
天并不热。正相反，它（天气）很冷。
There is little chance that we will succeed in changing the law. Nevertheless, it is important that we try.
我们几乎没有可能改变法律。不过，重要的是我们努力争取。
5. 表解释说明或列举的过渡性词语
for example，for instance，such as，that is，as follows，namely，in other words，and so on，believe it or not，to tell the truth，to be honest，in this/that case，in particular，particularly，specially
The reasons are as follows.
理由如下。
They are concerned to do the right thing—to dress properly, for instance.
他们认为做正确的事很重要——比如说，穿着得体。
6. 表因果关系的过渡性词语
because，as，since，for this reason，on account of，thanks to，for the sake of，due to，owing to，as a result，thus，so，therefore，accordingly，consequently，as a consequence (of)
She gave up smoking for the sake of her health.
为了身体健康，她戒了烟。
She retired early on account of/because of/owing to/as a result of ill health.
她由于身体不好而提早退休。
7. 表观点的过渡性词语
in one's opinion/view，from one's point of view，as far as sb. be concerned，as for…，personally
As for us, we are fortunate.
对我们来说，我们是幸运的。
Personally, I prefer the second option.
就我个人而言，我倾向第二种选择。
8. 表总结的过渡性词语
in short/brief/conclusion, in a word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general
To sum up, there are three main ways of tackling the problem.
概括起来说，这一问题主要有三种解决办法。
On the whole, I'm in favour of the idea.
总的来说，我赞成这个想法。
9. 表时间的过渡性词语
开始：at first，at the beginning of，in the beginning，next，shortly after，the next moment
最终：at last，at length，finally，eventually，in the end
同时：at the same time，in the meantime，meanwhile
过去：at that time，before，by that time，earlier，formerly，in the past
现在：at present，presently，right now，nowadays，up to now
Afterwards, we picnicked on the riverbank.
之后，我们在河岸上野餐。
Eventually our flight left five hours late.
我们的班机最终晚了五个小时起飞。
My first novel was rejected by six publishers. In the meantime I had written a play.
我的第一部小说遭到六家出版商的拒绝。其间我又完成了一部戏剧。
10. 表空间的过渡性词语
before，behind，below，beneath，between，beyond，nearby，under，above，over，on the right/left，in (the) front of，in the middle of，at the back of，at the bottom of，opposite to，next to，on one side，on the other side，at the foot/end of
The correct answers can be found at the bottom of page 8.
正确答案在第8页末尾。
He entered by the door opposite to that opening into the garden.
他是从对着通向花园的那个口的门进来的。
四、题型分类
（一）邀请信
1. 常用句型
（1）表明目的
I'm very pleased/ more than delighted to invite you to join in _________ to be held from _________ to _________ in _________.
我很高兴邀请你参加从……到……（时间）在……（地点）举办的……（活动）。
I am sincerely inviting you to participate in _________ on behalf of _________.
我代表……真挚地邀请您参加……。
It is my pleasure/ a great honor for me to invite you to participate in/ attend _________.
能邀请您参加……是我莫大的荣幸。
We would very much like you, our close friend, to at lend the celebration and share our joy.
我们非常希望邀请你——我们的密友，参加庆典，共享欢乐。
（2）活动安排
Here are arrangements for this activity. / The following are arrangements for this activity. / Arrangements for this activity are as follows.
活动安排如下。
To begin with, we will _________. Besides, there will be varieties of activities such as _________, which will _________.
首先，我们将……。此外，将会有很多活动，例如……，这将……。
This will be followed by _________. At around ten, we will hold a small party, at which _________.
随后会有……。十点左右我们会举行一个小型派对，派对上……。
The activity is scheduled to last approximately _________, from _________ to _________.
活动预计持续约……，从……到……（时间）。
（3）盼望回复
Would you please drop me a line to let me know whether you can come to _________
请写信告知我你是否能来……，好吗？
An early/ favorable/ timely reply will be highly appreciated.
我会非常感谢你早日/肯定/及时答复。
If you are interested, please let me know and I'll send you more relevant/ detailed information.
如果你感兴趣，请告诉我，我将给你发送更多相关/具体信息。
Hopefully, you will accept our invitation. My family and I would feel much honored if you could come.
希望你能接受我们的邀请。如果你能来，我和我的家人将会感到非常荣幸。
We would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.
如果你能在方便时尽早确认参加，我们将不胜感激。
I sincerely hope you can accept our invitation/ join us and I have the confidence that _________.
我真诚地希望你能接受我们的邀请/加入我们，我有信心……。
2. 参考模板
Dear _________,
I'm _________, in charge of _________（自我介绍）. I'm very pleased/ more than delighted to invite you to join in _________（活动）to be held from _________（开始时间） to _________（结束时间）in _________（地点）. The following are arrangements for this activity.
Focus on _________, this activity _________（活动目的）.
To begin with, we will _________. Besides, there will be varieties of activities such as _________, which will _________（活动安排）.
We would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
_________
（二）感谢信
1. 常用句型
（1）表明目的
With the deepest gratitude, I'm writing to you to express my sincere thanks for your kindness when I was traveling in _________.
我怀着最深的感激给您写信，真诚感谢我在……旅行时您对我的关怀。
I would like to express my appreciation for your timely assistance and support.
我想对你的及时帮助和支持表示感谢。
Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to _________.
非常感谢你为帮助我们……所做的一切。
I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude/ thanks for your help with my _________ all these years.
我写信是为了对你这么多年来对我的……上的帮助表示衷心的感谢。
I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks in this letter for your help with my _________ all these years.
我想在这封信中表达我衷心的感谢，感谢你这么多年来对我……的帮助。
（2）描述帮助行为
There's no denying that it is difficult for me to _________ without your help.
不可否认，对我来说，没有你的帮助，……是非常困难的。
Thanks for your generous/ selfless help, without which I wouldn't have made such unbelievable progress and ranked first in the recent English-speaking contest.
感谢您慷慨/无私的帮助，没有您的帮助我不会取得如此惊人的进步，并在最近的英语演讲比赛中获得第一名。
During my travel in _________, you showed me around _________ and I had a great time there. Thanks for your considerate and enthusiastic treatment.
在我去……旅行的时候，你带我参观了……，我在那里玩得很开心。谢谢你周到、热情的招待。
Without your timely assistance in _________, I would (not) have been _________.
没有你在……方面的及时帮助，我（不）会……。
If it had not been for your timely assistance in _________, I fear that _________ / I couldn't have _________.
如果不是你在……方面的及时帮助，我恐怕/我不会……。
（3）再次表示感谢
My gratitude is beyond description/ words.
感激之情，无以言表。
Again, I would like to express my thanks to you. / Thanks again for your help.
我想再次向你表示感谢。/再次感谢你的帮助。
It is very kind of you to do this for me, and l appreciate it more than I can say.
你为我做这件事真是太好了，我无法用言语来表达我的感激。
I deeply appreciate your help and I hope to have the opportunity to reward your kindness.
我非常感谢你的帮助，并且我希望有机会报答你的好意。
I deeply appreciate your help and I hope to have the opportunity to reward your kindness.
我非常感谢你的帮助，并且我希望有机会报答你的好意。
Please accept my sincere thanks and best wishes.
请接受我诚挚的谢意和最美好的祝愿。
2. 参考模板
Dear _________,
I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude/thanks for your help with my _________（表明目的）. I even can't find words to express my appreciation for you have done so much for me.
There's no denying that it is difficult for me to _________ without your help. First, _________. Then your help of _________ also _________. Additionally, _________.（描述帮助行为）
Had it not been for your assistance, _________. I deeply appreciate your help and I hope to have the opportunity to reward your kindness.（再次感谢）
Yours,
_________
（三）建议信
1. 常用句型
（1）表明目的
Learning that you _________, I would like to give you the following suggestions.
了解到你……，我想给你以下建议。
Knowing that you _________, I would like to give you the following suggestions.
得知你……，我想给你以下建议。
You've asked me for advice with regard to _________, so I'm writing to put forward some helpful proposals.
你向我征求关于……的建议，我认为以下建议有帮助。
I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble in doing _________ at the moment. Here are some tips for you.
得知你此刻……遇到麻烦，我深感遗憾。这些是给你的建议。
I have received your letter saying that _________. It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on _________.
我已收你的来信，得知……。我很高兴能在……方面给你一些建议。
I'm delighted to learn that you're particularly keen on _________. Here are some practical advice to help you _________.
我很高兴了解到你特别喜欢……。这里有些实用的建议可以帮助你……。
（2）提出建议
When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that _________. For one thing, _________. For another, _________. What's more, _________.
遇到这种情况，我建议……。一方面，……。另一方面，……。此外，……。
The following are my suggestions. / My suggestions are as follows. Firstly, _________. Secondly, _________. Finally, _________.
我的建议如下。首先，……。其次，……。最后，……。
In my opinion, / From my point of view, _________ is a perfect approach to achieving _________. Additionally, it's strongly advisable that _________. Last but not least, it would also be a wise choice if you could _________.
在我看来，……是一个实现……的完美方式。此外，我强烈建议……。最后但同样重要的是，如果你能……，这也是一个明智的选择。
Only in this way can you _________. / You may/ might as well do _________.
只有这样你才能……。/ 你不妨……。
I think it would be more beneficial if you could _________.
我认为如果你能……会更有益。
It is your _________ that will make a difference.
你做……会有所不同。
（3）表达祝愿或期待
I hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions helpful/ useful/ practical. / I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.
我希望这些建议对你来说有帮助/有用/可行。/ 我希望我的建议对你有益。
Personally, it would be beneficial if you stick to _________.
就个人而言，如果你坚持……，会有益处的。
Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you. I'm sure you can solve your problem before long.
希望这些建议对你有很大的帮助。我相信你不久就能解决你的问题。
I will be more than glad to see your improvement in this regard.
看到你在这方面的进步，我将会很高兴。
2. 参考模板
Dear _________,
I have received your letter saying that _________. It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on _________（表明目的）.
From my point of view, _________ is a perfect approach to achieving _________（建议一）. Additionally, it's strongly advisable that _________（建议二）. Last but not least, it would also be a wise choice if you could _________（建议三）.
Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you. I'm sure you can solve your problem before long.
Yours,
_________
1. 假定你是校英语话剧社负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她担任话剧比赛评委。内容包括：
1. 比赛简介；
2. 评委工作。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Caroline,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2. 假定你是李华，即将结束在新西兰的学习，在这段学习期间，你的老师Mr. Smith对你的帮助很大。请用英文给他写一封邮件，感谢他对你的帮助。内容包括：
1. 感谢帮助；
2. 学习收获；
3. 期待保持联系。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
3. 假定你是李华，你的外国好友Tom想学一门中国传统艺术，发邮件向你征求意见。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐一门中国传统艺术并简述理由；
2. 提出相关的学习建议；
3. 你的祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4. 假定你是李华。你的英国交换生朋友Chris对中国少数民族(ethnic minorities)服饰非常感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件，邀请他一同参观中国少数民族服饰展。内容包括：
1. 时间地点；
2. 参观内容；
3. 发出邀请。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5. 假定你是李华，去年你的外教Mr. Brown给你推荐了一些英文原著小说来帮助你提高英语水平。请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 阐述你的收获；
3. 希望得到更多推荐。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Brown,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6. 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jeff来信说他痴迷于刷短视频，对学习失去了兴趣，很苦恼。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 肯定短视频在某些方面的好处；
2. 你的建议；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jeff,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案以及解析
1. 答案：
Dear Caroline,
I'm Li Hua, head of English Drama Club in our school. I'm writing to invite you to be a judge of an English drama competition.
The competition is scheduled in the lecture hall from 7 p. m. to 9 p. m. next Friday. Varieties of dramas adapted from English classics are expected to be shown. The judges will give scores based on the competitors' pronunciation, emotion and performance on the spot. Meanwhile, we hope you could share with us your professional comments on oral English, which will definitely benefit us a lot.
I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2. 答案：
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm writing to express my deepest gratitude for the immense help and guidance you have provided me.
Thanks to your guidance, I have gained a solid understanding of the subjects we studied together. The knowledge and skills I have acquired during this period will undoubtedly benefit me in my future endeavors. I feel much more confident about applying what I have learned in practical situations.
Although my studies in New Zealand are concluding, I am eager to maintain contact with you. Your insights and advice will continue to be invaluable as I navigate the next stages of my life.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
3. 答案：
Dear Tom,
Knowing that you have a great passion for learning a traditional Chinese art, I'm overjoyed to recommend that you explore Chinese calligraphy.
As we know, Chinese calligraphy is more than a form of visual art, which integrates beauty and strength with technique perfectly. Exposure to it is an effective approach to cultivating your patience and deepening your insight into Chinese traditional culture. To learn it well, it's essential to get all the stationery needed ready and then imitate the strokes of noted calligraphers attentively. Furthermore, enrolling in an online course is a sensible option to study it systematically.
Hopefully, you will find joy and make steady progress in this journey of learning Chinese calligraphy. Best regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
4. 答案：
Dear Chris,
Knowing that you're keen on the costumes of the ethnic minorities of China, I'm writing to invite you to visit an exhibition of ethnic costumes.
The exhibition will be held from March 15 to April 15 in the Provincial Museum, where various ethnic costumes will be on display, each of them featuring the characteristics of a nationality. While admiring the costumes, you'll have a better understanding of the customs, culture as well as the history of different nationalities living in our country.
I'm sure that you will have fun at the exhibition. I'm expecting your arrival!
Yours,
Li Hua
5. 答案：
Dear Mr. Brown,
How are you doing I am writing to appreciate your recommendation of the English novels.
With brief and practical languages, the novels you recommended benefit me significantly. To begin with, I have harvested a larger collection of vocabulary after finishing reading them, which has helped me a lot in my English writing. What's more, the novels broaden my horizons with the authors' new viewpoints, involving me in a new world that I never knew before.
Again, I would like to express my gratitude. I would appreciate it if you could recommend more excellent English reading. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
6. 答案：
Dear Jeff,
I'm sorry to hear that you are addicted to short videos and lack interest in learning. I'm writing to offer you some suggestions.
Short videos do have some benefits. We can release pressure, share good times, cherish memories, etc. However, in my opinion, firstly, you should strike a balance between leisure activities and learning. Only on the premise of self-consciousness can we benefit from modern technologies rather than being slaves of such new technologies. You should focus on study, and don't waste your time on distractions. Secondly, you can join your friends in playing various sports activities, such as running, cycling or playing basketball, etc.
I hope my suggestions will be of some help for you. I believe you can make it.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

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